When the ancients talked about the ending, they often took the "leopard tail" as the standard, which meant that the brushwork of the ending should be concise, bright and clean, just like the leopard tail sweeping, loud and powerful, giving readers room to chew and remember. Please look at the full-text ending skills of the recent senior high school entrance examination.
Tip 1: echo from beginning to end and highlight the main idea
(1) It is said that the ship of life can't live without an ideal sail. It is said that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
At the end of the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail. The ideal of life is for the ideal life. (Selected from the full text of "Flower Season with Dreams" in Huzhou and Jingzhou senior high school entrance examinations)
Tips: Echo from beginning to end is one of the most practical methods in examination room writing. Generally, the author puts forward the center of the article at the beginning, and then emphasizes it again at the end, taking care of the beginning, so as to make the center of the article stand out clearly. You see, in the above example, the little author used the way of echoing from beginning to end, and highlighted the theme of the article with beautiful poetic language-the happiest time in an ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
(1) has a kind of brilliance that hangs over the spiritual home of the Chinese nation; There is a flame that dances on the Olympic Mountain of the national soul; There is a kind of flame that warms the distant feelings of civilization, and that is friendliness!
(End) We can't lose confidence in fighting ugliness because of repeated injuries, because we need to protect our spiritual fire-friendliness! (selected from the full text of "Fire of Guardian Spirit" in Henan senior high school entrance examination)
Tips: This is the beginning and end of an argumentative essay in the examination room. Compared with the previous example, this example is concise and vivid. Put forward an argument at the beginning and get to the point quickly. The ending is repeated, echoing the beginning and strengthening the argument.
Tip 2: Speak from the heart and appeal for the sake of appeal.
Let's all take action to bring love to others, to those children who are out of school, to those lonely old people … to everyone around us. When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness. I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world. (From the full text of "Bringing Love to Others" in Jingzhou, Hubei Province)
2 1 century, we are the spring of the motherland. We are not our parents, but our enthusiasm is our character. We don't need to abide by those rules and regulations, break the old rules and regulations, let the fire of passion in our hearts burn more fiercely, string our laughter and love together, and let the whole world be shrouded in love. Laugh as much as you want, cry hysterically if you want, don't suppress yourself, don't let that old concept bind you, don't change yourself casually, please remember my famous saying: "I am me, give me a little sunshine, and it will be so brilliant." (Selected from the full text of "Give a little sunshine so brilliant" in the senior high school entrance examination in Fujian Province)
Tips: The composition in the examination room pays attention to sincere feelings, and it is necessary to write your own call for truth, goodness and beauty, and lash out at the false and ugly. This kind of emotion is not limited to oneself, but also can be a sincere call at the end of the article, calling on everyone to pursue truth, goodness and beauty together and lash out at the false, evil and ugly together. The above little author sincerely calls, and every word is heartfelt, which shows his yearning for a better future. In the second paragraph, the little author spoke enthusiastically, with full personality and undisguised expression. He issued a sincere call to all his peers, effectively highlighting the theme and giving readers a strong spiritual shock.
Tip 3: Ask questions skillfully and introduce deep thinking.
Natural color, natural fragrance, natural taste and natural beauty all come from nature. Nature is great. It's amazing. It is so close to life, so tight. Tasting nature is not the same as tasting life.
Tips: A good article, carefully chosen, has endless implications, should be philosophical and enlightening. Just like enjoying a beautiful piece of music, although the music is over, the lingering sound leaves endless charm. You see, in the above paragraph, the author skillfully asks questions at the end, which makes readers think and deepens the meaning of the article. It embodies the profundity and uniqueness of the author's thinking.
Different words have different influences, different angles have different horizons, different ha ha mirrors have different images, different moods have different actions, different flowers have different scents and shapes, and different evaluations make children have different fates. Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold? (selected from the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in Hubei Province, "I in the Haha Mirror")
Tips: At the end of this paragraph, I would like to express my views on the teacher's comments. First of all, I use the form of parallelism to explain that every student has his own personality, and teachers don't have to erase students' personality. Finally, it ends with a question to inspire people to think and deepen the connotation of the article.
Tip 4: Quote good sentences and be colorful.
"Wild incense is fragrant, beautiful wood is cloudy, wind and frost are noble and clean, and the water comes out." In the past 15 years, life taught me to give up! For my ideal, for more people to learn, I must give up! (Selected from the full text of Guangzhou senior high school entrance examination "Thinking from the sky")
Thinking of this, I remembered a famous saying: "There are many books around me. If you find them, you will certainly learn a lot ... "(selected from the full text of" Reading People Around You "in Shaanxi Senior High School Entrance Examination)
The song of tomorrow says, "Tomorrow follows tomorrow, and tomorrow follows tomorrow. I waited for tomorrow, and everything was in vain ... "I hope everyone can seize today and create a better tomorrow. (From the full text of "Creating a Better Tomorrow" in Neijiang, Sichuan)
Zola said: "Life is only two and a half minutes, one minute to smile, one minute to sigh, one minute to love …" In my opinion, when I was intoxicated with admiring my mother's dress, that minute's smile was not forced. After that minute of sigh, it is no longer a sigh, but a transfer of love. My mother integrated her love for life, life and relatives into her daily life.
Tips: There are many famous sayings in ancient and modern China and abroad. At the end of the composition, if you can quote skillfully, it will definitely add a lot of color to the article. Here are a few examples, quoting poems and famous sayings respectively, which not only increases literary talent, but also deepens the artistic conception of the article. The effect is very good, and students should learn from it. In addition, the range of quotations can be wider, such as proverbs, proverbs, popular lyrics and so on.
Tip 5: lyrical discussion, extraordinary momentum
In fact, peace is that simple. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, and an all-inclusive heart are enough to relax the tight face and let the smile bloom gently on people's faces. That smile is like a cloud wandering in the sky, lightly dotted with the blue sky, fresh and natural.
Spring is like the sea, and youth is like flowers. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and struggle. May everyone in the world let their youth bloom as fragrant as flowers! (selected from the perfect composition "In the Mood for Love" in Jilin Province)
Tips: These two paragraphs are from the heart, out of emotion, using parallelism and figurative rhetoric to express their true feelings with beautiful words, coupled with appropriate comments, the end of the article is extraordinary and powerful.
Tip 6: Set off the scenery and combine the scenes.
The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was melted by the sunset. The sun gradually disappeared in the distance and disappeared in the sunset glow. There is no distance between the two. (selected from the full text of Guangzhou senior high school entrance examination "Reading in the Rain")
Tips: The characteristics at the end of this paragraph are very prominent, and the role of scene contrast is also obvious. Through the description of the scenery after the rain, the author implies the disappearance of the emotional gap between the two generations and the organic combination of emotion and scene. Implicit and meaningful. The aftertaste is endless.
At this moment, a ray of sunshine enters the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded little tree bathing it. Oh, on the road of growth, although things are unpredictable, the sunshine is good after all! I think. (Selected from the full text of "Growing in the Sun" in the senior high school entrance examination in Xiantao City, Hubei Province)
Tips: This ending highlights the role of sunshine, combining sunshine with growth, implying that although the road to growth is bumpy, it is full of sunshine and expresses an optimistic mood. It not only takes care of the main idea, but also shows deep feelings.