But junior high school students really have no stories! Young and inexperienced, I have been running around home and school since I was a child. Where are so many touching stories to tell?
As a result-everyone started all kinds of melodramatic, artificial, embarrassing and elegant artistic creation. ...
Everything my mother said was simple, but thought-provoking!
"One stitch and one thread, be careful." -Down-to-earth, keep improving.
"Put the oil first, then put the vegetables." -Do things in a planned way, and things will get out of order without rules.
Mother always likes to eat chaff and leave the delicious food to us.
I always see my mother hiding from leftovers or putting meat in our bowl, full of love.
To tell the truth, mothers born after 90 and 2000 are not so miserable. ...
Every time I go to the hospital with a high fever, God always likes a heavy rain or heavy snow. ...
My father or mother must have carried me to the hospital anxiously, carrying an umbrella behind my back. They must have tried their best to lean on my side until they were soaked and unconscious. It must be gentle and peaceful to watch me wake up Some even said, "My illness has recovered, but my mother has fallen ..."
UH huh?
I quarreled with my mother and ran away from home. My mother is anxious to find me everywhere. I went home with a sense of guilt. My mother was happy to see me and said to me, "Son, my mother is wrong. My mother understands you."
In fact, "How dare you come back? Just hit you? "
I will personally cook a "Manchu-Chinese banquet" for my tired parents who come home from work.
Actually, I can only make instant noodles. line ...
Inadvertently seeing my mother's crow's feet, a trace of silver hair and rough palms can make me sad for a long time.
Mom is old, and I should grow up!
Mom washes clothes and washes dishes every day, and pays too much for this family!
Mom: You are more sensible!
Dad either takes me to climb the mountain or ride a bike, so he must take the opportunity to educate me about "persistence" and "independence".
Climbing the mountain must be very tiring. Dad won't hug you, he'll just mock you in front of you. Riding a bike is to hold it and let it walk quietly. ...
Dad: have I done such a wicked thing?
The school teacher broke his heart for his classmates.
Always inadvertently see the teacher correcting a lot of homework late at night.
I always overhear the teacher worrying about a naughty classmate.
This classmate who has such a good relationship with the teacher must be the class representative!
The school security uncles and aunts got up the earliest and went to bed the latest in the boarding house, selfless and unknown.
Pay tribute to uncle security, aunt accommodation, aunt rice and uncle sweeping the floor!
You gave me more small and shining examples of my composition. ...
There are always some mistakes in the exam, but fortunately the students help in time.
Although a classmate looks ordinary, his enthusiasm deeply touched me. Human beauty must be spiritual beauty!
The ideological and moral articles "Grass in the crevice" and "Earthworms that can't die if they are broken into two parts" are my eternal light of hope.
I often meet an honest little brother who stays where he is when he finds something, and an old man who scavenges in golden sentences.
Although I am picking up garbage, I am actually very reasonable.
The beggar's brother talks to you every day. Are you a "Skeleton Wonder, a once-in-a-century martial arts wizard"?
Doing a good deed is bound to be entangled again and again, and then morality has the upper hand and moves forward bravely.
It must be "proud" and "shy" to be found. Maybe you just turned off a tap, but your inner drama is extremely rich.
If I can correct my mistakes, I must realize more than three truths and make up my mind to correct them.
I understand everything, but ...
Choosing novel themes is the magic weapon to win the composition. The melodramatic and outdated theme can only make the teacher shake his head and smile. If you are going to write, it will rain after school, and mother will send an umbrella to express your maternal love. When doing homework at night, my mother brings a cup of hot milk, which also shows maternal love; My father had a car accident, and my mother remarried and wrote about her strength; Because of misunderstanding, the boat of friendship turned over. When I went to apologize, people were moved and wrote down precious friendship. When writing about learning to ride a bike, you must write that your father let go at the back and fell down; When you are sick, you must write that your father ran to the hospital in the rain and there is no need to have a car at home; The inspiration for writing must be to write about snails climbing the wall, butterflies with broken wings trying to fly, the tenacity of grass in the corner destroyed by wind and rain, and so on. These are all selected by reciting the composition, lacking originality, not to mention profundity, and the composition will not get high marks. Such a theme is even more ridiculous, and it is completely self-deception. This kind of content is unrealistic and melodramatic, and you want to laugh when you look at it. Advocate pragmatic and novel themes, which can be new in form, new in content and renovated in old content, or pursue "takenism" and take the advantages of others for our use. Junior high school students turn a deaf ear to what's going on in the world and concentrate on preparing for the exam. With limited knowledge and little life experience, it is not easy to write novels in the small circle of life and study. But if you master the method and find a good starting point, you can still write innovative works. For example, it can be refurbished in content. Watch The Tortoise and Rabbit Race. For the first time, the rabbit became proud and fell asleep, and the tortoise won. Transformation: In the second game, the rabbit didn't dare to be careless and left the turtle far away. Near the finish line, the rabbit came back, let the tortoise climb on himself, the rabbit trotted all the way, and the rabbit and the tortoise reached the finish line together-win-win! It embodies the rabbit's indifferent personality to fame and fortune and the spirit of cooperation and mutual assistance to create a harmonious society. How novel! How delicious!
First, melodramatic low-level material: false, big and empty
(1) Specific analysis: false
There is no emotional foundation from reality: for example, beggars' poems transcend the world.
(2) Specific analysis: Big
There is no real feeling: shouting slogans in praise: such as the idea of large festivals.
(3) Specific analysis: empty
There is no detailed description of specific events: for example, the whole article is telling stories abruptly, describing the picture feeling of detailed description.
Second, perceptual middle-level materials: old, identical and cold.
(1) Specific analysis: Old
They are all old materials: for example, giving up your seat on the bus, parents going to the hospital in the rain when they are sick, encouragement from teachers or mothers when exams are not satisfactory, and so on.
(2) Specific analysis: the same
They are all the same materials: especially after composition counseling, if there are examples to share, several articles written in the composition are all guiding materials.
(3) Specific analysis: cold
All materials are labeled: the average student thinks that as long as they are labeled in the first and second paragraphs, they will meet the test requirements, which is the most indifferent understanding of composition creation.
Third, melodramatic high-level materials: poetry, history, books.
(1) Specific analysis: poetry
A large number of poems are piled up in the creation to show literary talent. In fact, they may not be able to impress people, but they are hypocritical.
(2) Specific analysis: history
Replacing real people, stories and experiences around them with stories of historical figures belongs to a set of works lacking "true self".
(3) Specific analysis: book
In creation, the story of the characters in the book is selected to replace the life track of "true self", with only shallow thinking and lack of emotional life support.
10 years ago, I taught the graduating class, and there was a student in the class. He writes a composition in every mock exam in Grade Three, and I really admire him. He can describe his family situation as almost miserable, but his learning experience is very inspiring. I was tricked into giving him the highest score in his composition every time. Every time I thought his composition was a representation of true feelings, every time I worked hard for such a little boy with such a big family pressure and achieved excellent results. The child later went to a university in the northeast with excellent results.
Only later did I know that I had been cheated. What is even more ridiculous is that I am in the same village as this child, but I know very little about their family.
He said that his mother has chronic diseases all the year round and needs to drink medicine to maintain a normal life. But later I learned that his mother was not much older than me. And healthy, young and middle-aged women in the village all dance square dance, and their mothers are activists. In his composition, he said that his father was a laid-off worker for many years and had no formal occupation. There is a shabby house at home, which my grandparents gave me when my parents got married. In fact, their family has a large quadrangle that has just been renovated. It is said that it cost nearly 300 thousand. And his father earned at least 654.38 million yuan a year by his skill of winding the motor.
After learning the truth, I felt ashamed that I was moved by reading his composition that year. Why are all the students I train so duplicitous, being a man and writing? He can write about the miserable situation of his well-off family and use it repeatedly in his composition materials, constantly defrauding the teacher's sympathy. By the way, because of his excellent grades, the school also applied for poor students for him.
In primary school, the final exam, composition topic-my ideal, I wrote like this: I want to be an angel, play every day, no need to study. What a real ideal, but this composition got a low score.
My mother helped me analyze the reasons. The reason for the low score is that the central idea is not positive enough. Your ideal can be to be an angel, but after being an angel, you have to help people in need. A person might as well be happy.
Therefore, in junior high school, my composition has always been clear-cut and noble in character. Is how to be melodramatic.
At any time, the composition should have emotion, and emotion is the life of the composition. But writing needs emotion, so don't be melodramatic. This is a taboo in writing.
As for junior high school composition, to what extent can it be melodramatic? I can only say that I can have more emotions, and I can't even be a little melodramatic. Because melodrama is not true feelings, but a kind of affectation, giving people a false emotional feeling, so to put an end to melodrama in the composition, the author needs to put more emotion into it to make the language more touching and more vital.
Yes, many of our current students not only lack beautiful vision, but also lack the conscious ability to discover and perceive emotions. They always feel that the composition has no feelings, because the composition itself can't impress themselves, how can it impress others? Therefore, when writing, students must mobilize their emotional world, be grateful for everything with a grateful heart, constantly enrich their emotions, experience and feel everything in the world with their heart, and actively integrate their emotions into society and their own lives. Everything in the world has feelings, depending on whether we have keen ability to capture and express emotions!
Where words are needed, the sentimental side is words. Especially in the exam, express your true feelings as much as possible, and the reviewers will never feel that students have too much feelings in their compositions. Therefore, grasping emotions will lay a good foundation for composition! Experience, feel and practice!
Hello, here is my answer.
First of all, I personally don't like your question. Different people have different views on the understanding of the word "melodramatic". For example, when chatting with friends, you may encounter the word "melodramatic". For example, if your friend doesn't use a certain brand of products, you may say "melodramatic", so I personally think the word "melodramatic" is very sensitive and has limited application scope.
Let me talk about writing a composition. It must be stipulated by the teacher at school. Students should write a composition of comprehensive materials in a certain format according to the requirements of the exam, so students usually pay too much attention to form and structure and ignore the polishing of content. The content of the composition is the most critical. I compare writing to cooking, and the content is like "ingredients and accessories". Those so-called formal structures are just the order in which ingredients are added. Students should pay special attention to this point to avoid boring slogans in their compositions. To know what topic to write, your composition must be rich in content. When I say "rich", I don't mean to emphasize flowery rhetoric.
So how do middle school students write excellent compositions?
First of all, we should pay attention to the usual reading development. Students live on campus and lack social experience. Experience mainly comes from books, school tutors and parents' words and deeds. However, the influence of school and family environment is limited, and richer content comes from excellent literary works. Students not only enrich extracurricular reading, but also increase their knowledge and experience. You have a deeper understanding of life. The article is persuasive, organized, logical, convincing, moving and arousing * * *.
Contact reality and discover the beauty around you. Many students will quote ancient famous sayings or celebrity cases when writing their compositions. Personally, I don't object to this, but I always feel that it seems a bit rigid. Literature is higher than life and comes from life. A day is not a simple repetition of boredom and mediocrity. As long as students understand carefully, something touching will happen every day. Coupled with the developed network, students have a lot of information. Don't borrow poems, famous sayings and aphorisms, biographies of celebrities, etc. It doesn't work well on the street every time. They are too ordinary, too drifting.
Grasp the connotation of the article and highlight the theme. Writing in exams is different from keeping a diary. You can keep a diary anywhere you want. There is a time limit for writing a composition. Through the refining and processing of materials, there is bound to be sublimation of ideological and spiritual connotation, which is the soul of the article. Accurately and clearly expressing the connotation of travel articles is the basic requirement of excellent exam compositions.
There are many other methods, such as theme, novelty and modernity of the article. At the same time, we should remind students. The use of rhetoric must match the genre format of your article. For example, when you write an argumentative essay, you use a lot of metaphors, which is inappropriate because metaphors are hard to convince. Students need to observe, think, experience, summarize and practice more. I believe that before long, you will form your own composition style, and your articles will be refreshing and unforgettable.
The most common thing in our class is to write about the death of family members.
Even the teacher used to make fun of him. Most students write about the death of their family members in a more emotional way. In the online class, the teacher said that the truest feelings in the composition would be realized by the teacher, so most teachers would know that it was false.
This person knows * * *, so I won't say much.
But I didn't like this phenomenon before, and now I feel a little relieved.
It may be too strict for us to read junior high school students' compositions with our adult thinking and more great literary thinking.
Even the college entrance examination composition is melodramatic, right?
But we all know that this is the rule of the game. Maybe we were too melodramatic when we were young.
When we were young, we wore red scarves. Isn't it a sense of pride?
The mood at that time was real, not melodramatic. Although we all have this kind of emotion in a certain cultural and educational environment.
Then let experience teach us to be less melodramatic. When you are a pupil, you might as well think about something about pupils.
I don't think it's a sentimental problem, but it has something to do with your usual accumulation. If you usually pay attention to the accumulation of materials and read more compositions, at least you won't have nothing to write when writing.
In fact, writing means writing more, reading more and accumulating more. Don't wait for the teacher to assign homework before you start writing. Usually, you should write more by yourself, show it to the teacher and help you revise it. This will greatly improve your writing ability.
So don't say that you can't write something you haven't experienced, make it up, you know.
Usually pay attention to accumulate more materials, which can be used directly when writing.
Don't be so obsessed with what is not, you can't write it. After you finish writing the article, no one will verify the authenticity of what you wrote on the spot, understand!