The score of college entrance examination composition consists of "basic level" and "development level". One of the "development level" is called "literary talent", which requires: "The sentence is meaningful." "A meaningful sentence" means that the thought of the sentence should be profound and dignified, and the sentence should contain profound philosophy, historical reflection or a sense of humor. Most of the "famous sentences" come from the summary of practical experience, which is the crystallization of thought and wisdom, shining with inspiration and poetic light, and emitting charm beyond time and space. Including poems, proverbs, couplets, proverbs, aphorisms and so on.
It can be seen that the clever and flexible use of famous sentences will strengthen the credibility and persuasiveness of the composition, which will undoubtedly be of great benefit to the development grade. This wonderful use is mainly reflected in the following four aspects:
First, skillfully borrow ancient poems to raise topics.
The quality of the composition topic directly affects the artistic charm of the whole article, and it is necessary to show the candidates' first style. Clever use of ancient poetry as the title, or even directly use the original title of ancient poetry as the title, will reveal the author's wisdom and connotation, greatly attract the attention of marking teachers, thus laying the foundation for high scores in composition. Of course, any way to plan a title must take the content of the article as the first requirement.
For example, the perfect composition of Hubei college entrance examination "Where the petals flow like tears" and the excellent composition of Sichuan college entrance examination "Only Being in this Mountain" are clever use of ancient poetry sentences; However, the title of the perfect composition "Diaoqu Fuyuan" in Gansu college entrance examination directly followed that of Jia Yi in the Western Han Dynasty, and the title of the excellent composition in the national college entrance examination in 2003 directly quoted the title of Zhou Dunyi's Ailian Theory. These topics add a lot of color to the composition.
Second, the quotation of the deduction of ancient poetry.
The opening paragraph of Hubei college entrance examination perfect score composition "Where petals flow like tears" is: "China poets have a cloud:' Where petals flow like tears, lonely birds sing their grief." "In fact, this poem is about the truth that" the scene moves with emotion "to show that the understanding of things has a lot to do with one's feelings. The quotation here not only takes care of the topic, but also leads to the theme, killing two birds with one stone, which is wonderful. In the third paragraph, when writing about Li Qingzhao's stable life, she quoted "returning to the boat late, fighting for the ferry, fighting for the ferry, and starting a beach of gulls and herons". When writing about her suffering from war and displacement and her husband's hatred, she also quoted "I can't move many worries", which can be said to accurately confirm the theme. In the fifth paragraph, in order to prove that "the countless beautiful poems of countless poets in China have endowed the moon with immortal life", Wang Wei's poem "Moonlight in the pine forest, crystal stone in the stream", Li Bai's poem "Oh, let a man with spirit take risks where he likes, don't point his golden cup at the moon!" Quoting Su Shi's poem "When will there be a bright moon, ask for wine from heaven" is close to the center. The sixth paragraph quotes Mao Zedong's "If there is love in the sky, it will grow old, and there will be vicissitudes in the world", which can be described as a wonderful pen, and "all changes" are inseparable from the topic.
Third, use the overall structure of ancient poetry.
Sichuan college entrance examination excellent composition "Only fate is in this mountain", quoted "this door last year today, peach blossoms set each other off. I don't know where people's faces have gone, but peach blossoms are still smiling in the spring breeze. In the third paragraph, I used "it rained suddenly last night, and I fell asleep and didn't consume all the residual wine." I tried to ask someone to roll up the curtains, but begonia is still green, fat, red and thin. " The fifth paragraph and the seventh paragraph are skillfully used together: "When telling a story, someone said,' In August, the wind roared. But he is not limited to describing the facts. There are thousands of spacious buildings in Ande, which greatly protect all the smiling faces of the poor in the world, and the storm is like a calm mountain.' This reflects the author's wisdom and broad mind, which is undoubtedly a deeper understanding of things. It takes emotion to acquire such knowledge, so why not read it? ""'the water of a river does not return, the waves are exhausted, and the eternal romantic figures; To the west of the old base, humanity is the Red Cliff of Zhou Lang in the Three Kingdoms. "This is how admirable. I'll wash my hands and recognize the former dynasty before the iron is sold. If Dongfeng doesn't cooperate with Zhou Lang, Tongque will lock Er Qiao in spring. How calm and thoughtful this is. When Mr. Dongpo visited Chibi again,' Gai must observe it from its changers, then heaven and earth can't observe it in a blink of an eye, and then things are infinite to me.' And put ideas into the field of philosophy. At the end of the article, "for the sake of cognition, even if you don't know the true face of Lushan Mountain, what's the harm?" "pen. Looking at the full text, more than half of the quotations are quoted, but the quotations are appropriate and ingenious.
Fourth, use ancient poetry to narrate and express emotion.
Tune Qufu Garden, the perfect composition of Gansu college entrance examination, was written in the form of Ouyang Xiu's Biography of Lingguan and Jia Yi's Tune Qufu Garden. In the first paragraph of the essay "Love Lotus Theory" written by the National College Entrance Examination in 2003, "I like lotus, its faint fragrance, its pale pink, its graceful appearance, its delicate lotus, its watery tenderness …" indirectly quotes and uses Zhou Dunyi's "Love Lotus Theory", and the full text shows the feelings and qualities of lotus. These accurate and ingenious applications or imitations add irrefutable persuasiveness to the full score of the article.
Training of literary thinking and expression ability
First, classification, association and clever metaphor
1, natural class.
We want to express the topic that "life is full of beauty, and beauty is colorful", so we can use this metaphor:
Beauty is a few pieces of residual snow wandering in the cold winter.
Beauty is a few clouds walking in the blue sky.
Beauty is a touch of sunset jumping on the lake.
Beauty is a few birdsongs echoing in the dense forest.
In training, we can first determine a good angle, and then use an appropriate guide sentence to gradually increase the difficulty and improve the requirements, which will certainly receive good results.
2. Poetry.
Ancient poems as bright as stars are the treasure house of our traditional culture. Take "life" and "optimism" as examples:
(1) Quote ancient poems.
Life is Gong Zizhen's persistence in "falling red is not heartless, but turning into spring mud to protect flowers".
Life is Wen Tianxiang's lofty spirit of "Who will never die since ancient times, and keep the heart of Dan in the history books".
Life is Su Dongpo's detachment and open-mindedness. Who says that there is no shortage of life, and the running water in front of the door can still flow westward?
Life is Du Fu's helplessness and sadness that "all tears fall and lonely birds sing sad songs".
(2) The use of ancient poetry.
Optimism is a line of egrets, soaring into the sky.
Optimism is 10,000 white sails beside a sunken ship.
Optimism is the lush grass fluttering in the wind on Nautilus Island.
Optimism is something that turns into spring mud to protect flowers.
3. Humanities.
If we can inject cultural connotation and humanistic spirit into metaphor, it will naturally be more literary. For example:
(1) Celebrity+Event.
Fate is the sigh of Xiang Yu when he committed suicide in Wujiang River.
Fate is a series of painful inquiries left by Qu Yuan on the Miluo River.
Fate is Beethoven's tragic symphony when he was deaf in both ears.
Fate is a brilliant chapter written by ostrovsky after he lost his sight.
(2) celebrities+famous sayings+famous virtues.
The backbone is the constancy of Mencius' "wealth can't be immoral, poverty can't be moved".
The backbone is Li Bai's "Ah, how can I solemnly bow and scrape to those high officials whose sincere faces will never be seen?"
The backbone is Yu Qian's perseverance. "I am not afraid of death, but I want to stay on earth."
The backbone is Ye Ting's awe-inspiring "How can a human body climb out of a dog hole".
Second, flowers and leaves should be matched skillfully.
As the saying goes, "red flowers line green leaves." By analogy, some central sentences in the article are like red flowers, and one is a bit monotonous. If you can arrange a few (green leaves) from other angles, it will have charm and elegance.
1, picking leaves and looking for flowers-bedding type.
Flowers have pushed open the door of spring.
The shade pushed open the summer door.
Autumn fruit pushes the door open.
In winter, the snow pushed the door open.
Sincerely push open the door of friendship.
2, holding flowers and lifting leaves-traction type.
Life is beautiful because of pursuit-central sentence
If there is no pursuit of leaves-life traction sentence
It's like there are no peaks on the earth.
It's like mountains and rivers without waterfalls.
Just like there are no waves in the river.
Third, criss-crossing and ingenious arrangement.
1, layer by layer depth method (vertical).
A tolerant friend must be like a brother.
A tolerant family must be happy.
A tolerant nation must be strong and lasting.
A tolerant world must be peaceful and beautiful.
In this way, through progressive layers, the semantics are deepened, which is not only layered, but also powerful and can better express thoughts and feelings.
2. Similar juxtaposition method (horizontal type).
Youth is a breeze.
Youth is warm and bright sunshine.
Youth is a fragrant and intoxicating petal
Youth is crystal dew.
3. Heterogeneous crossover method (interleaving).
Honesty is the happiness of honest people.
The improvement of rank and rank is the happiness of politicians.
Prosperous business is the happiness of businessmen.
Spring planting and autumn harvest are farmers' happiness.
This example is different from the same kind of juxtaposition, and the angle of each parallelism sentence is different. It is a heterogeneous hybridization technology, which is flexible, diverse and meaningful.