What is the purpose of review?

No matter what kind of composition you write, it depends on the author's thoughts, emotions and language. The essay in the examination room is written according to the requirements of the question writer, so you must first understand the intention of the question writer: what do you want me to do? This is to review the question.

Example 1: Read the following materials and compose according to the requirements.

A child from the countryside followed me into the hotel for the first time, and we sat in the lobby. He tilted his head and stared in the direction of the elevator. After a while, he quietly told me that the door was so strange. Someone entered just now, but when he opened it again, someone had changed! Where was the original person? He lowered his voice, and there was a kind of nervousness in his puzzled expression.

Nowadays, people have nothing or do not want to be curious about anything anymore. Surprising, exciting, angry, and unexpected things seem to have happened before, and most people are not surprised and are well aware of them. As for this child, his eyes were wide open and his face was full of surprise. Later, of course he learned the function of the elevator, and he rode up and down this strange iron house. I envy this child, a confused person who questions with wide eyes and then suddenly realizes. The happiness derived from this is so simple and simple.

Please write an article based on the above materials, contact real life, and combine your own thinking.

Requirements: 1. Draft your own questions and opinions. ② Make sure the style is clear and cannot be written as poetry. ③No less than 800 words. ④ Plagiarism or duplication is not allowed.

Requirements for the first trial: How many articles does *** have? What are the content, style, word count, and any taboos?

Intent for the second trial: Does the person making the proposition have a position? What is the underlying thought? How to find positions and thoughts?

First, summarize the relationship between the materials: the child's transformation from doubt to understanding, the child's exploration and my emotion.

Second, find key phrases in the materials: doubt, curiosity, confusion, questioning, sudden enlightenment, and simple happiness.

Third, we must summarize a writing keyword: curiosity.

Fourth, you must form a sentence based on keywords, or expansion, or paraphrase. This sentence is the idea of ??the composition and the central argument of the article. If you write it accordingly, you will generally not go off topic.

Reference idea 1: Exploring the unknown is a kind of happiness; Reference idea 2: Let us stay curious about the world.

Exercise: Read the following text and compose according to the requirements.

On April 11, 1946, Einstein wrote in a letter to his friend Dr. Otto Ulisberger: "I believe that the reason why people's ethics and morals have declined to this extent today is It's so outrageous, mainly because of the mechanization and dehumanization of life - a catastrophic by-product of the development of scientific and technological thinking. I can't think of a way to deal with this catastrophic evil of humanity. The inhabited planet cools faster."

What do you think after reading the above paragraph? Write an article to explain your point of view.

Requirements: 1. Draft your own questions and opinions. ② Make sure the style is clear and cannot be written as poetry. ③No less than 800 words. ④ Plagiarism or duplication is not allowed.

How many requirements are there for the first trial? Content, style, word count, taboos?

For the purpose of the second trial, does the proposer have a position? What is the implicit idea? How to find it? Positions and thoughts?

First look at the relationship: science and technology and ethics;

Second look at key phrases: moral decay, mechanization and dehumanization of life, by-products of science and technology, sin , disaster; moral decay is a by-product of science and technology.

Third, we must summarize a writing keyword: science, technology and moral humanity. This is the topic scope of the composition.

Fourth, form a sentence: such as "Science and technology lead to moral decay and human indifference." This is the purpose of writing.

2. The types of materials are different. What should be reviewed when reviewing the questions? Are there any different concerns?

From the perspective of the types of materials, there are metaphorical/extended types. (The material is like a metaphor, and the truth contained in the material is what needs to be elucidated by you). There are situational type/thesis type (the material is an objectively existing social phenomenon that requires you to discuss, evaluate and analyze the matter), and there is the topic type/propositional type (the material provides a core topic or a title). Judging from the presentation of the materials, there are stories, fables, famous poems, comics, etc. What should be reviewed when reviewing the topic? Are there any different concerns? Still need to focus on the two words "relationship" and "key" , clarify the various relationships in the material as a whole, infer the central meaning of the material from the relationships, and then start with key sentences to understand the intention of the proposition writer.

Example 2 (topic type)

Read the following materials and write an article of no less than 800 words as required.

Some people see what has happened and ask: "Why is this happening?"

But I dream about things that have never happened, and then ask: "Why can't this be like this?" ”——Bernard Shaw

Topic review questions:

First, clarify the relationship-someone asks the reason based on the facts that happened, I dream about the unknown and imagine the future. Where does the proposer stand? He loves to ask questions in everything.

Second, we must grasp the key - the dream, why is this, why can't it be like this?

Third, we must summarize the key words of writing-about the dream

Fourth, we must form A sentence - for example "We should not only explore reality, but also dream about the future." (paraphrased)

Example 3 (situational/argument type)

Read the following text and base it on Essay required.

There was a man who started from scratch and became a millionaire. He is generous and enthusiastic about charity.

One day, he learned that there were three poor families whose lives were unsustainable. He sympathized with the plight of these families and decided to donate to them.

The family was very grateful and happily accepted his help.

The family accepted the offer hesitantly, but stated that they would repay it.

The family thanked him for his kindness, but thought it was a kind of charity and refused.

Requirements: 1. Choose your own angle, determine your concept, and draft your own title. There is no limit to the style of writing. ②Do not deviate from the content and meaning of the material. ③No less than 800 words. ④ No copying or plagiarism is allowed.

Grasp the key - donation, gratitude, hesitation, rejection

Write keywords - about charity

Form sentences - such as "Plowing charity, don't worry about it" "Others' opinions." (paraphrased)

Example 4 (metaphorical)

Based on the following materials, choose an angle, write a topic of your own, and write an article of no less than 800 words. (Don’t write it in poetry).

People tend to abandon the glimmer of light that flashes in their hearts, just because it is their own thing. But in the works of genius, people recognize the glimmer of light that they have abandoned.

Metaphorical review questions:

Clarify the relationship - people give up their own "glimmer" and discover the "glimmer" of genius' works

Seize the key - Glimmer, abandonment, recognition

Writing keywords - about "glimmer" (beautiful hearts, emotions, thoughts...)

Form sentences - for example, "Please cherish My own "glimmer". "(paraphrased)

Example 5 (topic type, proposition type)

Read the following text and compose according to the requirements.

Since ancient times, there has been a saying in China of "learning to understand". The "learning" here is usually understood as learning from a teacher.

Han Yu said: "People are not born knowing, how can they be free from confusion? If you are confused and do not follow the teacher, it is confusion, and you will never understand it." With the development of society, the ways for us to acquire knowledge, master skills or understand principles Increasingly diverse. Please combine your thoughts and experiences, fill in a word in the horizontal line in "know it", form a title, and write an article.

Requirements: 1. The title cannot be "Learn to Know"; 2. There is no restriction on the style of writing except poetry; 3. No less than 800 words; 4. No plagiarism or copying is allowed.

Topic-type and proposition-type review questions:

Clarify the relationship - Han Yu learned from his teacher, and the ways we learn are becoming increasingly diverse.

Seize the key - the ways to acquire knowledge, master skills or understand principles are becoming increasingly diverse.

Keywords for writing - knowing by learning? knowing by doing?

Forming sentences - such as "knowing by learning to knowing by doing" (expansion)