[Excellent Exercise 1]

"Seeking Solidity and Avoiding Impetuousness"

Fu Huaming, Class 302, Class 05, Sanxia High School, Yichang City, Hubei Province

Philosophy Wittgenstein said: "I walk close to the ground, not dance in the clouds." When walking on the ground, it is often as calm as a mountain in the wind and rain, which is the steady wind; when dancing in the clouds, one often falls with a bruised face and swollen nose, which is impetuous. Qi. It can be seen from the famous sayings of philosophers that no matter what we do, we must be practical and avoid impetuousness.

Only when a person has a style of pursuing practicality and avoiding impetuousness can he succeed in learning and gain something.

During the Three Kingdoms period, Guan Ning and Hua Xin were studying at the same table. Guan Ning could study calmly and calmly without being disturbed by the outside world, while Hua Xin was very impetuous. A dignitary passed by in a luxurious sedan. Guan Ning ignored him and continued to concentrate on his work, but Hua Xin looked envious and immediately ran out to take a look. Guan Ning then sat down and broke off all relations with him. In the end, Guan Ning became a highly respected scholar, while Hua Xin was academically incompetent.

An army will be invincible and invincible if it has a style of seeking practicality and avoiding impetuousness.

In the early years, Cao Cao led the army to defeat Zhang Xiu. After the victory, Cao Cao's army was so proud that everyone from the commander to the soldiers seemed very impetuous. As a result, during the second expedition against Zhang Xiu, he lost his troops and generals and was completely defeated. On the other hand, Zhang Xiu was able to steadily accumulate strength and plan after the failure, so he finally won the battle. Cao Cao and Zhang Xiu, one win and one loss, aren't they the best explanation of the importance of seeking stability and avoiding impetuousness?

A country can develop steadily and become prosperous and strong only if it has a style of seeking practicality and avoiding impetuousness.

In the early days of the founding of the People's Republic of China, the land of China was in dire straits waiting to be revitalized. Many people hope to achieve success overnight and are eager for quick success, so they have unrealistic goal slogans such as "catch up with Britain in three years, surpass the United States in five years, and achieve communism in twelve years"; then there are radical policies such as large-scale deforestation and large-scale steel smelting. The scene; thus there was such an absurd "fruit" as "a carrot weighs a thousand catties, and two donkeys cannot pull it". As a result, the impetuous "Great Leap Forward" movement not only failed to make a Great Leap Forward, but instead caused the Chinese economy to move toward a "Great Regression."

Whether it is an individual, a collective, or a country, only by staying grounded and avoiding impetuousness can we go further. Every time we marvel at the wonders of mirages, have we ever thought that this castle in the air was actually built brick by brick by human hands in another place?

In today's society, impetuousness is prevalent, and being able to "dance on the clouds" has become a goal that everyone is striving for. So there are people who spend money to publish papers, people who mortgage their houses to speculate in stocks, people who destroy the environment in exchange for GDP data... and so on, and so on. As everyone knows, the more impetuous you are, the farther away you are from success - if you don't see it, those who seek false fame will become a scandal and joke, those who seek wealth through gambling will lose their fortune, and those who are eager for quick success and quick benefits will be severely punished by nature.

The down-to-earth wind is like the pines and cypresses on the mountain top, which cannot be blown by the wind and are not shocked by thunder; the impetuous spirit is like the weeds on the wall, which will wither when the wind comes and fall when the rain comes.

Friends, dancing in the clouds may be graceful, but it is easy to fall; walking close to the ground may be dull, but stable. Why don't we seek to be practical, avoid impetuousness, and follow our own path in life?

[Comments]

The author agrees with the philosopher's point of view and discusses the importance and necessity of seeking steadiness and avoiding impetuousness from three perspectives: individual, collective and national, which is in line with the meaning of the question. . It lists both positive and negative examples from ancient and modern times to discuss, with detailed materials and substantial content. Being able to explain it in relation to current problems enhances the pertinence and effectiveness of the article.

The expression of "total score, total parallel" has a complete and clear structure, clear contrast between positive and negative, appropriate metaphor, and elegant, accurate and smooth language.

[Excellent Exercise 2]

"Climb to the High Place"

Xiang Bangyu, Class 05, Class 302, Sanxia High School, Yichang City, Hubei Province

"I walk close to the ground and do not dance on the clouds." This is a famous saying of the philosopher Wittgenstein. It seems to be telling people that only by placing themselves low can they be stable.

However, I think it is very inappropriate to dare not climb to high places for fear of losing my footing and falling. If everyone has the idea that "as high as one climbs, one must fall heavy", how can individuals progress and how can society develop?

In terms of thought, people should try to reach as high as possible.

Some people say: "People should have profound thoughts, otherwise they will become a hopeless dry well." Yes, if people cannot ascend to the high ground of thought, what a terrible situation it will be! No matter how big the family fortune is given to him, he will fail miserably. Liu Chan, the Queen of Shu, was such a person. He did not let his thoughts reach high places, so he had no ambitions, lacked independent opinions, spoke hastily, and unclear rewards and punishments, which ultimately ruined the country Liu Bei had built. Only when people think about problems from a higher ideological level can they think about them thoroughly and see further and more accurately than others.

In terms of realm, people should try their best to reach as high a place as possible.

Wang Anshi climbed to Feilai Peak and wrote "Don't be afraid of the floating clouds covering your eyes, just because you are at the highest level". Du Fu wrote on the top of Mount Tai "When you are at the top, you can see all the mountains at a glance" , these all reflect the poet's transcendent realm. Only when people have a higher realm can they have Su Xun's calmness of "not being afraid when Mount Tai collapses in front of him", Tao Qian's detachment of "picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence and leisurely seeing the Nanshan Mountains", and Li Bai's "born The pride of "I will be useful, and I will come back after all the money I have spent" will give Tan Sitong the awe-inspiring righteousness of "die well and happily."

In terms of status, people should try to reach as high a place as possible.

Napoleon said: "A soldier who does not want to be a general is not a good soldier." Yes, in social life, everyone should pursue a higher status. Just think, a lieutenant Eisenhower will never play the role of a commander-in-chief Eisenhower. If a person is only willing to be a person at the bottom of society, then he can only play the role of an ordinary person. If a person wants to achieve great things, he must ascend to a more important position.

A female teacher once told her students: I have dreamed of becoming a great man since I was a child. When I grew up, I found that this was impossible; so, I dreamed of becoming a great man again. But now I am married and my husband is an ordinary clerk; so, I continue to dream of becoming a teacher of a great man. Maybe in the future, this dream may not come true. But I still felt gratified and enriched, and there was a burst of applause in the classroom. With courage and strength, strive to pursue a certain height in the world. It doesn't matter whether you are the highest, because when you push towards the end, your soul has reached a tall and straight height!

A person with thoughts, realm, and ambition will become an excellent person and a person who can "feel gratified and wealthy", so we should allow ourselves to reach high places. Tolstoy said: "I would like to stand on high ground, because there I can hear the voice of God." My friend, what about you?

[Comments]

The author understands "walking close to the ground" as "putting yourself low to be steady", and associates "not dancing in the clouds" with social life Some of them "have the mentality of not daring to climb high places because they are afraid of losing their footing and falling." Taking this as a starting point, they rebounded Pipa and argued with each other from three aspects to explain the reasons for climbing high places. Their insights were original, novel, and relevant to the topic. meaning.

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