1. Ask what the world is like, and teach people to be committed to life and death. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and he is also good at asking questions. His question can be described as a question for centuries. How many people have lingered on this issue for many years, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But the words of each family are like everyone's face. They are different. Xi Shi said, "Love is a tool ..." ("What is love in the world?") In a medieval church, a saint began his speech: "I became a saint because I saw through money, and what is mine belongs to everyone." In a cross-century prison, a thief began his life. Everyone's is mine. "(Saint and Thief) Rodin, an aesthetic master, once said," Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery. "Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say," The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of angle. "Many times, we are all confused. How to go has become a mystery in my heart, and I often hesitate to make decisions. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more opportunities for success. ("Rotating this kaleidoscope") Someone asked: What is happiness? The answer is colorful. Nietzsche thinks: "People who can swallow centipedes, broken glass, meat worms and stones at the same time, but they are not disgusting, are the happiest." However, Stoicism thinks: "It is true happiness to have infinite wealth and power and be able to do things without being surprised." ("The answer is colorful") Archimedes said: "Give me a fulcrum. I said, "Give me a fulcrum, and I can support my soul!" (Give the Soul a Fulcrum) ⑥ "I would like to prove that anyone who is kind and noble will be able to bear the trouble because of it." —— Beethoven (in Vienna city government on February 1, 1819) (Preface). 2. composition quoting the beginning and end of famous sayings
Sima Qian once wrote in the preface to the biographies of Huo Zhi in Historical Records: The world is bustling for profit, and the world is bustling for profit.
in other words, all people's activities are inseparable from one word-profit! Perseverance is the condensation of a stone and a sand on a thousand-mile levee. Only by accumulating it little by little can we have the grandeur of missing the head before and the tail after. Perseverance is that spring silkworms spin silk one by one, and only by sticking to it one by one can we break through the cocoon and see the bright glory again; Perseverance is the sail of a long-distance ship. With the sail, the ship can reach the other side of success. The true nature of the heart should be like this.
success, like the bright moon shining flowers, the deep pool is slightly blue, regardless of adversity, regardless of the detachment of success or failure, is a post station that raises the whip and steers the horse, and climbs high and far; Defeat, still dripping water wears away the stone, converging into the sea, there is a proud bank that is poor and strong, and does not fall into the blue sky, and there is a stubbornness of "being a man without a master, being a man with self-improvement". Rong, Jiangshan is still the same, the style is still the same, just like the sea and the mountains, familiar with the years, flashy, and disdainful; Humiliation, Han Xin, the bottom of the snow is loose, just like a feathered fairy, knowing to take a step back and broaden the horizon, refused to give up eating because of choking. 3. the beginning or end of the quotation in the composition
First, carefully examine the topic. Only by understanding the requirements of the topic can the composition meet the requirements. When examining the topic, we must grasp the key words in the topic and further develop reasonable associations, so as to truly grasp the essence of the topic. For example, to write "Olympic Games around me", the key words are "around me" and "Olympic Games", which should not only write about what happened around you, but also be related to the Olympic Games. When associating, you can combine your usual composition. For example, you wrote a composition in which Grandpa insisted on taking part in physical exercise every day. At this time, you can quote the details and show the theme that the elderly love sports.
Secondly, the beginning of the article should be short and get to the topic quickly. A 6-word composition can be controlled at about 1 words at the beginning. There are various ways to begin, such as explaining the cause, describing the environment, summarizing the whole text, flashback and so on. If you are not sure about your ability to conceive a composition, you might as well use a straight-to-the-point beginning, stick to the topic as soon as you start, and point out the people, things and things related to the topic. This not only accords with readers' psychology, but also saves space.
Pupils' compositions are usually about people and things, so don't talk too much. In writing articles about people's notes, don't generalize and keep a running account, but grasp one or two details, portray the psychology of the characters or describe a scene. As long as one or two details impress the examiner, your composition will be basically successful.
Finally, there is the ending, which should be focused on the topic or appropriately deepened. This will make your composition look more focused and structured.
Clever transfer can surprise your composition
The above four tips can ensure that you can write a composition that meets the requirements, but if you want to make your composition more brilliant, you must find ways to make it different.
Of course, it's very important to accumulate writing skills for a long time in normal times, but it's also very helpful to tidy up your written composition before the exam.
If your usual composition level is average and needs to be improved, you can also look at the model essays in the composition reference books before the exam, and try to choose your own compositions that have similar experiences. For example, "fishing", some students have not experienced it personally, and completely imitate other people's compositions, which will look stiff, and such compositions are unlikely to impress teachers.
You can write a unique composition by skillfully transferring experienced stories. For example, last winter, many teachers assigned students to write "the first snow in 28". Most students first thought of snowball fights and snowmen. If they wrote too much, it would be easy to be similar and it would be difficult to make a breakthrough. However, a classmate wrote a very different composition. She wrote: It snowed, and my mother was afraid that I would catch cold. She rushed to the school to pick me up as soon as she got off work. The snow was heavy and the umbrella was small. I excitedly ran around playing with the snow, but my mother chased me everywhere with an umbrella. When I got home, I found that my mother's hair and clothes were all covered with snow, just like a "snowman". The article highlights the deep love between mother and daughter in the snow.
In fact, we are no strangers to this composition. Many students have written "Love in the Rain", changing rain into snow, and careful observation and description in the process of personal experience make this composition look very touching. A similar method of "new wine in old bottles" is suggested that students can try it.
The word "emotion" should be highlighted in writing scenery
Writing scenery is not simply describing scenery. The mountains, rivers, scenic spots, flowers and trees in the motherland can make us feel strongly: love, wonder or praise. There is a close relationship between scenery description and lyricism. Only by blending scenery description and lyricism can we achieve the purpose of writing. For example, describing the different scenes of the four seasons on the path to school will naturally reveal the love for the path and the environment where you live.
from the scene, from the scene to the scene, and from the scene to the scene, it should be very natural and harmonious, and there should be no farfetched attachment or hypocrisy. Only by writing the scenery sincerely can people sing.
For example, when writing "Xuanwu Lake in the Evening", a classmate described it this way:
The water in Xuanwu Lake is so clear, just like a huge smooth and brilliant emerald. The breeze blows across the lake, causing ripples. Under the setting sun, the lake shines like fish scales and broken gold, which makes people relaxed and happy.
tiny waves, like chasing frolicking children, never get bored. Glittering water drops splashed on your hands, giving people a hint of coolness and refreshing. Standing on the shore, you can see the bottom of the water at a glance, and sometimes you can see a group of small fish swimming around, which makes people feel that there is still life in this green water, which brings life to the lake and adds mystery ...
The author of this article uses beautiful words and vivid metaphors to write the solemnity and mystery of Xuanwu Lake in the evening, which is impressive. Between the lines in the article reveals the author's love for Xuanwu Lake and his praise for his hometown. 4. Watch the end of the diary and quote a good sentence.
Raindrops are like thousands of paratroopers, jumping from the air and landing safely on the ground.
Raindrops are connected together like a big net and hung in front of my eyes.
The breeze blows, and the rain curtain is inclined, like a thread running to the vegetation and walls.
Rainwater is spilled. Glittering water drops are condensed on the leaves of all kinds of flowers and plants.
Rain is like thousands of silver wires floating down from the sky, and a row of water drops falls from the eaves, like a beautiful bead curtain.
It is drizzling outside the window, and the drops of rain seem to be accompanied by a small dance music, so I can't help being tempted by the world outside the window.
The rain drops roll down along the stems of grass, one drop into the soil, and another drop into the grass. I can't find it.
Raindrops fell on my head and body. I stood on my back with my eyes closed and my mouth open. Suddenly, I felt as if I had grown a lot under the drizzle.
Thunder rang, and the heavy rain kept falling like a broken bead.
The downpour kept falling, and the rain from the eaves gathered in the street. The dark sky seems to collapse.
The wind chases the rain, and the rain drives the wind. The wind and the rain unite to chase the dark clouds in the sky, and the whole world is in the rain.
Rain, like thousands of silver wires floating down from heaven.
The drizzle falls quietly and silently, like thousands of silver wires spit out by countless silkworm mothers. Thousands of filaments ripple in the air, fascinated by the endless veils. Covered with black fields.
Clouds rolled in the sky, and it rained cats and dogs in an instant.
Silky light rain fell from the sky, and the raindrops were so small and the rain curtain was so dense, covering the mountains with white gauze like cicadas.
The rain was thin and cotton, like catkins floating in time and space in spring.
Rain like fog, "Wow", the heavy rain poured down from the sky like the sky collapsed.
There was a light rain in the morning, but it cleared up now, and the road was still slippery. The autumn crops in the fields on both sides were washed away by the rain, and the air also had a fresh and moist smell.
The wind and rain rolled up like countless whips, and they were desperately pumping on the window. Roaring and rushing. The showers beat the ground, and the rain flew and splashed.
Autumn rain, like smoke and fog, floated silently in the rubble pile, dead branches and fallen leaves on the open space, wet the ground, wet the house and wet the trees.
Spring rain, like ox hair, like a needle, like a filament, weaves densely. When we got into the water, we sang,' I'm full of water, and I got famous sayings and sentences, which vividly expressed my understanding of life.
So, to quote a famous saying, drink and pick chrysanthemums ... ":"'Teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow. There is such a description in the exercise "Thanks for Life", and it also brings a sense of "the deceased is like a husband" to enhance the beauty of rational sublimation of the article.
There are two kinds of quotations from famous sayings. Wei Wudi pointed his finger at the east, and he was full of courage, especially some famous sentences close to the theme, which made his words more expressive and embellished his articles. He went out for an outing,' Scholar's spirit, and reprimanded Fang Qiu.' Choosing Eternity', a perfect composition for the college entrance examination in 22, wrote,' Standing on the coast of history, wandering back to the ditches of history,' Many beautiful days in the spring and autumn, climbing to write new poems': We observe the starry sky, and come to' the night in Tianjie is as cool as water'; We have three or five partners, one is explicit quotation, and the other is implicit quotation, which is the means of "implicit quotation". Emotion flows naturally, and language appears beautiful.
who gave us all this; Tao Yuanming leisurely south mountain, we chant' a line of egrets goes up to the sky', pointing out the mountains and inspiring words'; We exude the brilliance and significance of youth. Another example? "The author quotes famous sayings in the process of describing his own growth. 6. At the beginning of the composition, the opening of the poem highlights the cultural heritage, and at the end, the quotation is colorful. < P > A simple beginning, followed by an unhappy breakup. Recall the original friendship and look for yourself that has been lost. ————— Inscription
Looking at my most sincere old friend holding a new friend and telling myself that I don't want me, at that moment, I felt my heart suddenly rush, ran over to hold her, but I was finally released by ruthless words. Just because of that sentence "don't touch me!"
Close your eyes and recall our first acquaintance, acquaintance and final breakup.
We first met in the third grade. At that time, we were still young, thinking about playing and eating, and there was no room for other worlds. I come to school early every time just to meet you and join you in the classroom. At that time, we were very simple, no matter what we did, even going to the toilet. On weekends, we can't bear to be apart, so we made an appointment to spend the weekend together. We often lie prone on the table together and talk about things without any talent. For a pack of snacks, we went up the mountain to pick wild fruits together. Take it to the street to sell. Sometimes I can't stand it, and I have already eaten before I borrow it.
Knowing each other is in the fourth grade. As we grow up, we already know each other. Remember, our first breakup was here. Because of a transfer student, her birthday is the same as mine. Let us want to contact her more. I hope to be good friends with her. But because of her intervention, our friendship broke up. In the end, we broke up completely because of a little thing. At first, I blamed you, perhaps because I was afraid. I'm afraid you'll die of old age because I care about a little thing. Later, I gradually let go. You had already broken up with her by then. Maybe you, like me, are too proud to bow your head. Finally, I couldn't help apologizing to you and making up. We all know that after the first breakup, our friendship deepened. That time, I learned to be tolerant. 7. composition paragraphs quoting poems or famous sayings
The so-called famous sentences are well-known sentences, such as ancient poems and famous sayings.
so, under what circumstances?
first, quote famous sentences and build the framework of the article.
in the trilogy of life, the model essay for Jiangsu college entrance examination borrows three poems, namely, "Teng Wang Gao Ge Linjiang Zhu", "There is no rain and no sunshine" and "There are green hills everywhere and the sun shines brightly", respectively, and also leads to three typical characters of Wang Bo, Spinoza and Yin Xuemei and their touching stories, forming the overall framework of the article. This classification shows the author's broad vision and natural reasoning.