It happened on the day when a star wrote a happy story in the summer vacation. The weather is fine, and the sun has a lovely smiling face. Grandma took my sister and me to the park. Grandma also bought toys to blow bubbles for each of us. I said to my sister, "Let's play a game! See who blows more bubbles and blows big! " Sister readily agreed.
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At the beginning of the game, we raised the straw and blew bubbles. I blew gently and blew out many bubbles. Some of them fly into the blue sky, and some hover over my head. Cute and naughty bubbles are colorful.
Colors, some like colored balloons, some like red cherries, and some like strings of purple grapes. My sister saw my bubble fly into the blue sky smoothly. She was anxious and blew hard, but they still didn't blow it out. As soon as she saw it,
* * * Sitting on the ground crying and saying, "Brother, please teach me!" Seeing her pathetic appearance, I said, "All right, all right, I'll teach you! Dip the straw in water first, and then blow gently. Remember not to use force.
Oh! "My sister did it again according to my method, and sure enough, she blew out a lot of big bubbles, just like a big ball. In this way, we played happily again, as if forgetting the game and the tension of the game. We just ...
Have fun.
One day, 300 words of a happy event faded, and my grandmother and I went home. On that road, there was the sound of cars passing by, the sound of passers-by talking on the phone, and of course, the sound of my sister and I chasing each other. Although the noise is very loud, it still makes me unforgettable.
This bubble looks ordinary, but it contains a kind of unspeakable happiness in my heart! …
2. I found out how to write a composition at the beginning (Shunde Teaching and Research Office). Jia Baoyu made a very insightful remark when commenting on the Grand View Garden: all beauty must be "natural and interesting."
The excellent college entrance examination composition of millions of candidates in China cannot be separated from a "reason" and a "fun". The college entrance examination magazine collected and sorted out the excellent compositions of the college entrance examination in recent years, and found that there are many remarkable places, but they are all interesting.
Just reading the beginning and end of these articles is enough to make us feel gratified and encouraged. Let's classify them and dedicate them to you. Maybe you can learn from them.
First, the most taboo to read the opening is to give people the feeling of digression with a pen. It directly tells the marking teacher that the author has not carefully judged the meaning of the question, and the composition score will be greatly reduced. Please look at the beginning of several compositions in the 2004 Guangdong College Entrance Examination.
Example 1 "remembered by language and communication": "Look at the flowers blooming and falling, the clouds are rolling and the clouds are comfortable. The bright sunshine in early spring reveals the breath of summer; The lush green clothes in midsummer indicate the harvest in autumn; The fruit of autumn shows the bleak winter.
The four seasons cycle, autumn comes and winter comes, and everything in nature is wonderful. How can we expect the hope of early spring without the baptism of severe winter? Our human society is also like nature. Without the connection between language and common lifestyle, how can we connect the world into a whole and build a bridge of communication? "The metaphor at the beginning is improper, and the previous metaphor part is not well paved in similarities.
Why do you say that? Language and communication are the relationship between premise and result, but where is the relationship between "green dress" and "bumper harvest", "fruit" and "bleak"? In particular, the rhetorical question "How can we hope for early spring without the baptism of severe winter" has nothing to do with the topic. Example 2 "Spiritual interaction": "Trees never laugh at the weakness of grass, which, though weak, adds green to the grassland; Peony never laughs at the simplicity of wild flowers. Although wild flowers are simple, they bring infinite vitality to the earth.
Trees and grass, peony and wildflowers can coexist harmoniously because they have a common language, communicate with each other and interact with each other. "At the beginning, I was close to the topic and found no similarities, which seemed far-fetched.
Example 3 "Language and Communication": "Language is a grass, and communication is a shade; Language is white clouds, communication is floating clouds. Language is a flower, and communication is an ocean of flowers. " This beginning regards "language" and "communication" as the relationship between individuals and the whole, and fails to understand the relationship between them.
All the above three situations use metaphors to increase literary talent, which is also the usual writing method of many candidates. If the examinee does not have an accurate grasp of the topic, he will take a wrong turn at the beginning, which will seriously affect his score.
The following examples illustrate the function of language more accurately and vividly. Example 4 "Communication begins with language": "Language is a bridge, connecting this shore and the other shore; Language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; Language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth.
Only when the language is expressed accurately can communication be successful. If the language is wrong, it may have unpredictable consequences.
So how can we express the language accurately and promote the success of communication? Therefore, whether the opening is well written or not, the core issue is still in the exam; When judging the meaning of a question, seek accuracy first, and then seek image. Many methods are introduced at the beginning.
1, quote the famous saying (1) ask how the world is and teach people to commit themselves to life and death. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he.
His question can be said to have been asked for a long time Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price.
But every family's words are as different as everyone's face. Shi said, "Love is a tool.
..... "("What is love in the world ") 2 In a medieval church, a saint began his speech:" I became a saint because I saw through money, and what I have belongs to everyone. "Long years, a flick of a finger.
In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine." Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. "
Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. " Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success.
("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format 1 Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice. (A Letter to Confucius) The hateful standard answer: I am really outraged to see you.
Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you. The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat.
You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened. The following are your three major crimes: ... ("A Letter to the Standard Answer") 3. Borrowing Zhang Hui's novel style (1) "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time."
At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past. And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world.
The Juyi Hall in the Water Margin is now brightly lit and full of people. One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling.
What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently. It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin.
That's why all heroes gather here to argue.
3. Write your own composition. At the beginning, I wrote myself, a fourth-grade female student.
Tall and thin people, short sports heads, big eyes, high nose and small mouth, in grandma's words, are relatively resistant to opening. According to my mother, my hair has always felt like velvet since I was born. Until 1 grade went to primary school next semester, my hair was almost waist-length.
But because I always bother to wash my hair, I finally left my long braid in the barber shop forever in the hot summer. I like to wear all kinds of beautiful headdresses and clips when I braid my hair. Until now, when I see them again, I still miss braiding.
I study well in my class and am recognized as a study committee member. Listen carefully in class and answer questions actively. I finish every homework carefully.
I write beautifully with a pen, which is the result of my hard work since I was a child. I began to learn to write with a pencil when I was 3 years old. Can I be a little proud? Checking everyone's homework every day is my first task when I come to school.
I will record in my notebook which students have not finished writing and which students have written irregularly. None of my classmates wants to fuck my "little black book".
I am careful, because I hope to be a good helper for teachers. I like singing. I wish I could sing like an oriole. I like painting, and I will carefully observe and describe every painting. I hope everything can be vividly painted in my pen.
I will try my best to understand what I like and then write it down. My mother said that it would gradually cultivate a good writing foundation. Let me tell you another secret. I also like Beijing Opera, which is the quintessence of our country.
Influenced by my family since I was a child, I like to watch beautiful Peking Opera characters on TV. I am amazed at the indescribable mysterious faces, and I am deeply attracted by the charming singing every time. I also learned many stories about Romance of the Three Kingdoms, Yang Jiajiang, Water Margin and Shajiabang. By watching Beijing opera, I enriched my extracurricular knowledge, made me interested in reading related books, and also helped my homework a lot, so I decided to stick to this hobby to the end! I don't do well in sports. Every time I go to physical education class, I secretly complain.
Sometimes sports meet the standards, and some male students will laugh at them. Although I only know that they are joking with me and have no malice, I still feel like a sword stabbing in my heart, which makes me feel very painful.
I envy students who are good at physical education. I envy them for easily passing all kinds of physical education exams. The teacher said that now we are required to develop in an all-round way, and good health is the foundation of our success, so I am determined to exercise more, believing that "good things grind more" and make small progress every day, and eventually I will succeed! This is me, a quiet little girl; This is me, an innocent and lively fourth-grade pupil.
How to write a composition about my secret is stipulated at the beginning: I have a secret, I have a secret, and I have been hiding it in my heart. Today, I finally got up the courage to tell you quietly. It was when I was in the second grade, and once my teacher asked us to write a composition of about 200 words. Back home, staring blankly at the composition book, I can't remember. Suddenly, I thought of a brilliant idea-copying. So I rummaged through the composition books, one after another. It really pays off. I finally found an article that met the teacher's requirements and copied it anxiously. I thought while copying: I hope the teacher doesn't know that this composition has been copied. I hope students haven't read this article. I hope ... the next day, I handed in my composition book. The teacher came in with a corrected composition book and said, "The students have made great efforts to write this composition, and it is well written. Some of them are very good, I will read them to you. " My heart is pounding. After the teacher finished reading an article, a classmate said, "Teacher, I saw this composition in a book and he copied it." student After a while, the teacher really read my composition. "Teacher" said a classmate. I was particularly anxious. "Stop it!" Stop it! "Teacher, I have to pee." The classmate went on to say that my heart would fall at the mention of my throat. Then the teacher went on reading other compositions. The class ended in a long wait. I thought to myself: maybe this time it was God's warning, and God told me to be honest. Since then, I have never copied other people's articles. I told you this long-hidden secret. I didn't know you had it. .
5. How to write the first name of your composition: Guo (to be renamed soon)
Gender: Female
Hobbies: reading, surfing the Internet, chatting and making friends.
Ideal: get into a good university, study with peace of mind, and want to study abroad if possible! I hope to be a writer after reading the book! Still a scientist!
Wonderful talk about childhood
When I was a child, I was quiet and didn't like to talk. Sometimes I go to my relatives' house to play, and adults are talking about things. Although I didn't understand it, I still sat beside it stupidly.
I was still sitting when they finished talking. They talked with relish for two hours. Well, they found me, and that relative kept praising me: "How nice of her!" " But I don't know why. I just don't feel lonely. Other partners always like to play, while I always stay at home, watch TV and read books. I haven't said a few words all day, so in the eyes of others, I am a withdrawn person, without the playful nature of ordinary children!
Maybe it's a disease. I had a little heart disease when I was a child, and my resistance was less than one third of that of ordinary children. A few days later, I caught a cold, had a fever, and was often sick, which made me reluctant to laugh. Although I can't remember how many times I was sick when I was a child, I know that I am the most familiar person among the nurses and aunts in the hospital, and I have seen them more often than my parents. When I was a child, I was surprised. I don't cry every time I get sick and get an injection. I may cry. Maybe it is a habit! After my illness, I gradually became self-reliant, and I gradually realized how important it is to overcome my illness! From then on, I gradually became strong!
When I went to primary school, I got in touch with more classmates. I became cheerful unconsciously, and the conversation with my classmates was also very pleasant. I don't know when I laughed so really. I changed and became a normal child!
How enviable I am in the first grade of primary school. My grades are good and my teachers appreciate me. In the eyes of my classmates, I am a good student, and my family also praises me. My happiness comes from grade one!
Now, I am an adult, but I don't want to grow up occasionally, because after these years, I gradually understand that the world is not as real and dreamy as described in cartoons! On the contrary, hypocrisy is the true face of this world!
Now, like many girls, they love beauty, dress themselves up and have a little narcissism. I like singing alone in the room, dressing up as a princess and dancing secretly in the room. I like …
Now, I am a girl, although I don't say beautiful, at least I won't scare people to death! The important thing is that I have distinguished between good and evil, and be wary of bad people!
Now, I understand a lot of things, that is maturity!
Now I have changed a lot, and I have an idea about the future, which means I have grown up! Should I be happy?
6. How to write a composition at the beginning? First of all, cut to the chase and get straight to the point.
Narrative written mainly by characters can directly explain the characters or directly enter the theme by describing the dialogues and actions of portraits; Narrative narrative can point out the time, place and related background of the event from the beginning. For example:
1. Her name is Wang Qianqian. I am the monitor of grade two. Although we have been apart for more than a year, the anecdote of the monitor is still vivid and unforgettable. ("With such a good monitor")
Teacher Tang is ill. At the end of the party, the students all sat in their seats sadly. The classroom is as silent as stagnant water. (True Love)
Second, write landscapes and render the atmosphere.
The beginning begins with writing the scenery, rendering the atmosphere, setting off the characters and unfolding the story. For example:
1, in the blooming season, the fragrance is everywhere, but I have no intention to watch it, because at this time I lost my classmate and friend-Qiang ("classmate")
2. The morning sun came out and the lake clothed it; The new moon has come up, with the stars as companions; Spring blossoms, green leaves set it off; Birds sing, crickets play the piano for them ... Everything in the world tells us the story of love. (Forever Love)
On a summer night, it was deep. Occasionally, I hear frogs in the water and cicadas in the trees, and the breeze blows, bringing coolness. I meditated and couldn't sleep for a long time. When I was a freshman, it happened that my first novel was published in the newspaper. At that time, I was so happy that I even forgot everything. I was so excited that I wasted my time. It was not until tonight that I realized that I seemed to be missing something. (Love, Invisible)
Third, lyrical discussion, determine the tone.
Use a few short comments and appropriate lyricism to start the article, or infect readers, or point out the main idea and lead to the following. For example:
1, the summer vacation is finally over. Like a long-awaited bird, I suddenly rushed out of the "birdcage" and flew to my grandmother's house in the country to relax my muscles and breathe fresh air. I decided to learn roller skating this summer vacation. ("I can do it")
Grandpa is my favorite relative. I spent my childhood with my grandfather. Grandpa took my hand and taught me to walk; It was my grandfather who taught me a lot since I was a child. I regard my grandfather as a crutch for my childhood growth. ("I Love Grandpa")
Fourth, set up suspense and lead to the following.
Setting suspense at the beginning can catch the reader's heart at once, stimulate people's thinking and produce fascinating results. For example, 1, the wall clock is walking leisurely and rhythmically, and it's almost 4 o'clock. Why doesn't mom come back? ("worried")
2. What will my tomorrow be like? I often ask myself this question when I am running around in my life at two o'clock and one line, when I am struggling in the boundless ocean of problems. (Facing Tomorrow)
V quoting poems and highlighting the center
Starting with poetic quips and famous sayings can not only stimulate readers' imagination and interest, but also improve the taste of the article; It can not only reveal the main content, but also highlight people and things. For example, "man, his greatest enemy is himself." As long as you believe you can do it, you are the winner. " This is my favorite sentence. Every time I see it and the report card that is no longer clear before bed, the dreamlike past comes to my mind. ("The Past")