"A good beginning is half the battle." So is writing.
An excellent composition should not only attract, infect and impress readers in conception, conception and language, but also not underestimate the art of opening. Just like a colorful drama performance, we pay great attention to debut, and we must firmly grasp the hearts of the audience so that they can't stop and admire. Especially the composition in the examination room, if you can make a special opening, give the marking teacher a refreshing feeling and arouse the enthusiasm of the teacher to mark the paper, it will often make your composition score rise by one grade because of this opening. Here, the author sorts out ten ideas for the students to refer to when writing the composition of Xiaoshengchu.
First, cut to the chase and get to the point.
That is, point out the topic at the beginning of the first paragraph of the article, or point out the topic, or point to the center, so that the article is concise, vivid and straightforward. For example, Zhu Ziqing's documentary prose "The Back" begins like this: "I haven't seen my father for more than two years, and the most unforgettable thing is his back." To be blunt: "I" miss my father, and the most difficult thing to forget is his back, which embodies the deep and sincere love between father and son. The full text is shrouded in a strong emotional atmosphere. For example, Zhu De's Memories of My Mother, Lu Xun's From Baicaoyuan to Santan Yinyue, and Wei Wei's My Teacher.
Second, cleverly set suspense and play hard to get.
This is what we usually call suspense. "Say what you want, don't say it", cleverly paving the way and setting suspense can attract readers to eagerly open the mystery, so it can be fascinating. For example, the essay "The Life and Death of the Ever-victorious General" begins like this: "Who is this ever-victorious general? Don't be busy, listen to me slowly ... "The beginning is novel, interesting and very appetizing. Then it naturally leads to the fame and tragic death of the following "ever-victorious general" and realizes the truth that "everything should be cautious and everything should not be impetuous" It's worth learning. For example, the words "repeatedly entrust" and "strange" at the beginning of the text of "Jujube Stone" make people feel that it is incredible to care so much about a jujube stone. We must get to the bottom of it and see what it is.
Third, the quotation of the poem is clever, vivid and smooth.
Some poems, famous sayings, proverbs, etc. There are both qualitative beauty and philosophy, and proper quotation can add a lot of color to the article, which makes people shine at the moment and rejuvenate. Beautiful poetry with beautiful language can make the article full of poetry and painting. For example, at the beginning of the practice of "Spring is like Poetry", "I left gently, just as I came gently." This is a famous sentence in Xu Zhimo's Farewell to Cambridge. The light footsteps naturally lead to poetic spring. Famous sayings containing philosophy can make an article look heavy and lofty. For example, at the beginning of the exercise "Imagination of Youth", "A philosopher said: There is one thing in the world. When you have it, you may ignore it, but once you lose it, you will find its value. " Then he naturally expounded the topic of "youth", expressing the extraordinary thoughts and feelings of cherishing youth and making it shine, which can arouse readers' * * *.
Fourth, lay out the scenery and render the atmosphere.
The scenery is made by heart, "All scenery is sentimental". Accurate description of the scenery can set off the thoughts and feelings of the characters, set off their personality characteristics, promote the development of the plot, make the article express emotions in the scenery, and deeply touch the hearts of readers. For example, the article "Seven Matches" describes the gloomy, desolate and silent grassland after the storm at the beginning, showing the hardships of the Red Army's Long March, showing the strong will and perseverance of the Red Army soldiers, and creating a tragic atmosphere for the heroic spirit of the unknown soldiers. Another example is the exercise "Beauty, wake me up", which tells the story of an injured little girl from sadness and irritability to strength. The article begins like this: "As autumn deepens, the leaves of plane trees fall and swirl sadly in the air. The sky is gray and the air is cold. Occasionally, a sparrow flies by, and there are also helpless cries ... "I tried my best to render a kind of sadness, reflecting the loneliness and sadness of the protagonist after his misfortune.
Fifth, dare to make sense.
Telling the whole story in a steady tone is neither mysterious nor abrupt, which can make readers feel kind and quiet. This technique is often used to describe stories with obvious plots, such as short stories, fables and fairy tales. , natural and graceful. Readers will naturally follow the author's ideas to feel and think. For example, in Mo Bosang's My Uncle Yule, a moral explanation is made from the location of the story and the family background of the Phillip family, and their poor family background is described, which initially reveals their vanity personality characteristics. In this way, the story of expecting Yule-praising Yule-meeting Yule-hiding in Yule is logical and intriguing. Another example is the text "The Last Lesson", "The Emperor's New Clothes" and "Pangu Begins the World".