1. Read the following materials and write as required.

You can't change your appearance, but you can smile. You can't control the weather, but you can change your mood.

You can't predict tomorrow, but you can grasp today. You can't decide the length of life, but you can broaden it.

What does this passage inspire you? What kind of association can it trigger for you? Please determine the center according to one sentence or several sentences in the material and write an article of not less than 500 words.

(2002 Jiangsu Nanjing senior high school entrance examination composition topic)

2. There are beautiful natural scenery and rich human landscape here; There is warmth and care here, friendship and trust here, and hard work and enterprising here; Our life and surroundings are full of sunshine, rain and dew, family friendship, cooperation and competition.

Please choose one or several aspects according to the content provided by the prompt and write your own composition.

(Composition for Changsha Senior High School Entrance Examination in 2003)

3. Read the following materials and write an article as required.

When the young eagle grows big enough, the mother eagle throws out all the soft bedding in the nest, so that the young eagle is pricked by the branches and has to climb to the edge of the nest. At this time, the mother eagle drove them down from the nest. When these young eagles start to fall to the bottom of the valley, they will flap their wings desperately to stop themselves from falling further. Finally, their lives were saved, because they mastered the most basic skill that an eagle must have-flying!

(Composition Topic of Hebei College Entrance Examination in 2004)

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1, Excellent Composition of Senior High School Entrance Examination in Changsha, Hunan Province in 2003

In the storm, I hurt the wrong person.

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Some people say that people begin to overdraw their mothers' lives as soon as they are born. But I was born to get back at my father. I will never forget his divorce from his mother. At the trial, I finally chose my father, and I want to make him sad for life. Not long after, my father got married again, which deepened my hatred for him.

Although my stepmother always tries to please me, I have never smiled at him once. My father is often angry with me. At this time, my heart will always ignite a terrible joy. A few years later, they had a child of their own, but he was just a sick seedling and had to be sent to the hospital every three days. I often wake up in the middle of the night to see my father driving my brother to the hospital and my stepmother crying in front of the door. I became a numb audience without any worries.

That day, I received a notice from a key middle school, which was my greatest wish except for revenge for my father for more than ten years. When I got home, I threw the notice on the table. "I was admitted to a key middle school. I'm going to report tomorrow, and I'll pay 3 thousand first! " "My father took the notice and raised his eyes a little, but immediately regained his weight. I know that in recent years, my brother's illness has almost spent all his savings at home. But I won't give up anyway, I can only watch my father get up slowly and pace back and forth. Finally, he made up his mind to go to his stepmother and said, "Xiao Wei's illness needs to be cured and Mencius' book needs to be read." "There are only three thousand left at home. The doctor said that Xiao Wei could have an operation at any moment. This money can't be used "Stepmother cried." But we can't miss the future! "Speaking of which, my father rushed out of the house. Looking at all this, I feel a little sad.

The next day, the hospital came to inform us that my brother might not be able to come, so we should be mentally prepared. At that moment, I was shocked for the first time. That day, I took a look at my brother with a ashamed heart. It was the first and last look after leaving.

The night before I went to a key middle school, my father called me into his room and said earnestly, "MengMeng, in fact, I am not your biological father. At first, he abandoned your mother and daughter. I married your mother to protect her reputation. We agreed not to divorce until you grew up. I didn't expect you to choose to follow me ... "

It's like a bolt from the blue. How can I believe that my father, who has been taking revenge, is actually my greatest benefactor, a person who has nothing to do with me but has raised me for more than ten years in vain ... Looking at my aging father in front of me, my hatred has become vulnerable. I threw myself into my father's arms and cried loudly, "Dad, I'm sorry!" " My father patted me and said, "A father will never blame his children!" " "

It turns out that I have lived in vain for more than ten years. Only today can I truly find myself.

The masterpiece discusses victory: "There is warmth and care here; Our life and surroundings are full of sunshine, rain and dew, family friendship, cooperation and competition. " This article makes readers more deeply aware of this. The author narrates a family life story around the material center, putting the emotional conflict of two generations in contradiction, and effectively revealing the theme to be expressed. It is difficult to write the true father's love and affection directly, but the author of this paper conveys this kind of emotional contradiction with comparative and misunderstood brushwork, which is particularly profound and makes people feel worried. Bai Juyi said that "people who touch people's hearts don't care about their feelings first", so it can be said that the greatest advantage of this paper is to talk about their true feelings and tell them their true feelings.

2.2004 Excellent Composition of Hebei Senior High School Entrance Examination

Love with "pain"

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I am a child in the countryside. As long as I can remember, my father told me many times that the countryside is bitter and the children in the countryside should be strong. For more than ten years, I have been growing up in a "painful" love.

When I graduated from primary school, the god of luck came to me. Because of my excellent grades, I was admitted to a private middle school in the county for free.

I remember on the first day of school, my father rode a bicycle that accompanied him for more than 20 years and carried bedding for me. I trotted behind with my big bag on my back. Along the way, the father and the daughter didn't say a word. I know, dad is still in a hurry to go to work. He said that ten dollars would be deducted for absenteeism for half a day.

There are as many people coming to the new school as going to the market: cars, vans and motorcycles are parked at the school gate. Dad leaned his broken bike against a small tree, unlocked it and walked into the crowd with his bedroll. I followed my father closely for fear of getting separated from him. I was surrounded by adults, small people, and it took me a lot of effort to squeeze in. Dad helped me find the dormitory and chose a bed by the window. Dad says it's sunny here, it's not wet, and it's warm in winter. As for other comforts, I didn't say a word. I put down my bedroll and turned away. "Dad," I shouted, and Dad turned around. "What's the matter?" I looked at my father silently. Father gave a wry smile, turned around and left again. I held back my tears and made my own bed. Watching other parents help their children clean up their bedding and things, my tears came down, but I wiped them off at once. Dad said that children in rural areas need to be strong.

From now on, every school holiday, I will go home by myself, sometimes by car, sometimes on foot. When I get home, I make a fire to cook and clean my room, and then I wait for my parents and my brother to come back while reading. This is a habit I have developed for many years and has never changed.

Time flies, and it is three years in a blink of an eye. The mid-term exam is coming today, and I got up at five in the morning. My mother didn't come back from work in the factory last night, and my father went to work early. I cooked my own meal and went to the examination room by car after dinner. Just as I was about to enter the examination room, a familiar figure suddenly appeared in my field of vision. Unexpectedly, it was dad, riding a broken bike. Suddenly, my tears swirled in my eyes. "Dad, why are you here? You haven't done more than ten dollars a day! " "No matter how busy the farm work is, my daughter will go to the exam alone. I don't trust. Get in there. The exam will be held soon. Dad is waiting for you outside. "

Writing here, I can't help crying. Dad, don't worry, I will do well in the exam, because you are waiting for me outside, and you have entrusted that sentence to me for many years. ...

The author of this paper grasps the center revealed by the materials: parents' seemingly "cruel" love for their children's healthy growth. Only by truly understanding this kind of love can we write this composition well, otherwise it will be easy to flow above the general parental care. Looking at the full text, there are three main highlights of this paper: First, the center is properly expressed with an appropriate title, which is vivid, powerful and thoughtful. Secondly, the author transforms fatherly love into the understanding of cultivating his own strength, making the theme concrete and reasonable, which is conducive to the writing of the article. Thirdly, the touching story is expressed in narrative language full of true feelings, getting rid of too gorgeous and untrue rhetoric and revealing a natural sincerity.

Read the following text and write as required. (60 points)

In an abandoned garden. The beautiful swimming pool has dried up to the bottom. Beautiful flowers and trees withered. The rose is dead, and the nightingale hasn't come for a long time. Except crickets groaning in the grass, only poisonous weeds and thorny thorns are growing.

One day, suddenly several people came to the garden. When they saw such a bleak situation in this beautiful garden, their faces showed admiration and regret, and they almost cried. One man sighed, "Are we going to make it desolate?" The others stood up resolutely and replied, "No, never! We should all try to put it in order. " So they discussed how to transform this overgrown garden.

One person said, "We should cut down weeds and thorns before planting flowers and trees."

Another person said, "Otherwise. You should bring flowers and trees first, and then cut off weeds and thorns, because-"

Another person said, "I agree with Mr. A. If weeds and thorns are not removed first, good trees and flowers will never be planted." Because-"

Others said, "Otherwise. What you said is wrong. I agree with Mr. B because-"

They gave many reasons, argued with each other and cited many examples to prove their words. From breakfast to noon, every household began to smoke, but did not stop; Even because of disagreement, they swore at each other ... and were scuffled.

The deserted garden is still deserted.

You need to have a comprehensive understanding of the material, but you can choose a side and an angle to conceive the composition. Independently determine ideas, questions and titles; Don't deviate from the meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.

Example 1

Actions speak louder than words.

When I gently opened the Historical Records, the rotation of historical rings stood out in front of my eyes. The life of emperors and princes always shines with endless light, but my vague "theory on paper" is always forgotten, and the hazy story of "killing by day and sleeping soundly" can never arouse anyone's thinking.

"I think it's an armchair strategist. I don't know if it should be done." Hundreds of years ago, the great poet Lu You realized this truth. Actions speak louder than words. Everyone's success is not spoken, let alone written on paper. Ambition is not important. What matters is how you express them. To act, to fight for this goal. Su Shi once said that those who achieved great things in ancient times were not only outstanding talents, but also those who persevered and did not draw their swords. So, how can you succeed without hard work? If you don't take action, how can you improve your ambition? What's the use of empty talk, full of blood and a piece of paper?

Xunzi once sighed with emotion: "Although the Tao is close, it can't be done, and although things are small, it can't be done." How can the wisdom of ancestors not work in their own lives? It's better to retreat and form a net. Although the fish is beautiful and moving, it will never yield anything if you look at it for nothing. Although the dream is brilliant, it is impossible to publicize your success with big words. Today's symbol Buffett's daughter was very arrogant when she was a child. At a banquet, my daughter boasted to her father that she would be a great writer in the future, adding luster to her father. Father Buffett did not appreciate his daughter's ambition happily, but asked her, "Can you name some works you have read and appreciate them?" When her daughter faltered, Buffett flew into a rage and shouted, "Leave the table and go back to your bedroom to reflect on yourself. Remember, don't dream of being anything when you have nothing to do. " A large part of Buffett's success lies in his courage to do what he often does, instead of wasting time bragging about his successful experience with anyone. He said: "If you want to succeed, you must keep silent, act immediately and stick to it." Didn't Buffett's success tell us that facts speak louder than words?

Loud and unreasonable, high waves are harmless. Just like the sentence in the Book of Rites, we must pay attention to our words and deeds and explain the facts with actions. Liu Xie of the Northern and Southern Dynasties once said, "It takes a thousand songs to know your bosom friend, and a thousand swords to know your instrument." Living in the modern material society is no longer an era of "poor debate", but an era of "endless debate". Persuade a person, even a society, to do what you want to say with actions, and look down on everything like Buffett.

Actions speak louder than words, everything moves in action, society develops in action, and life is brilliant in action.

Example 2

Facts speak louder than words.

Krylov said: "Reality is this shore, ideal is the other shore, and action is a bridge on the river across the rushing river."

Facing the torrent of life, it seems that everyone will be fearless and shout out a few earth-shattering rhetoric, but few people really dare to set foot on the torrent. Just like a few people in the garden, facing the barren and depressed garden, they will talk about it in succession, and Kan Kan will talk about it. As a result, I talked about a train and achieved nothing.

The person who talks the most is not necessarily the person who does the most. No matter how loud the thunder is, if the raindrops are too small, it is just a bluff. Doing is the truest thing, and actions speak louder than words.

Less empty talk, more work, hard work and action are the embodiment of a person's quality and accomplishment. Hua said: "Old trees are easy to empty and old people are easy to untie. In a scientific way, we should empty them and untie them. I am willing to stick to it all my life. " In fact, it is not only the way of science, but also the way of being a man. Doing things in a down-to-earth manner and being cautious and serious about others reflect a person's fighting spirit and realistic attitude.

The father of hybrid rice, in the face of great reputation, still maintains a down-to-earth work style, walking among the ridges and immersed in the waves of rice. His spirit of hard work is admirable. Ji, an ancient writer, devoted himself to research and personally inspected, never saying much. His rigorous style is popular all over the world and admirable.

Only by working hard and putting it into action can the ideal sail muster strength and the ship of life sail to the other side of success. No matter how well a person speaks and how touching he speaks, if he doesn't prove everything through actions and achieve his goal through hard work, he will eventually achieve nothing.

Balzac, who was determined to finish what Napoleon did not finish with his sword, continued to write, worked hard, realized his dream with his actions and harvested the fruits of success. Imprisoned Italian violinist nicolo? Paganini, who insisted on sports for ten years, made a legendary life with his actions. Throughout the world, successful people are down-to-earth, work hard and achieve their glory with actions. And those empty talkers who just talk and don't do it are lost in the dust storm of history and forgotten by people.

In today's society, we students can only achieve the fruits of success if we have pragmatic qualities and study hard. Only when our national leaders can speak and do better can they truly benefit the people and contribute to society. Only through action and hard work can our society prosper and make continuous progress.

The ancients said: "I think about it every day, so it is better to learn it in an instant." Now I say, "A whole day is better than an instant." Friends, let's act, abandon those great principles and create a better future with our actions. Because actions speak louder than words.

Comments: The opening of this article is obvious, and the concise introduction and appropriate metaphor throw out a clear and accurate point of view. Then several aspects are discussed layer by layer, which are well-founded and thorough. The language is concise, and he is good at using rhetorical devices such as metaphor, parallelism and quotation to make the article swaying and colorful.

Example 3

Actions speak louder than words.

The eagle chose to fly hard, and the harvest was the extraordinary flight of the clouds; Cicada chose the complacency of knowing and reaped the mediocrity of living in the branches.

Zhong Yong had a sharp edge when he was young. Have you ever thought that no one will see it in the future? When Zhao Kuo chickened out and boasted, did it ever occur to him that he was physically and mentally exhausted in wartime? When Masu swore an oath in the army account, did he ever think about the tears when he fled?

So words and deeds put the cart before the horse again and again, and the historical curve was frozen.

In fact, the dialectic of words and deeds is like the relationship between water and bucket: air is like words and deeds like water, and only when there is more and more water in the bucket will the bucket become heavier and heavier. Zhong Yong, Zhao Kuo and Masu, which one is not a "barrel" with good quality? Unfortunately, buckets without water, like cars that can't run, are useless in terms of historical reality. If you really want to say anything valuable, you can only put it in the history museum for future generations to learn from.

So some people say: Silence is golden. So Mr. Lu Xun also said: "If you don't break out in silence, you will perish in silence." However, in my opinion, silence and silence are qualitatively different.

Not all silence is golden, and not all silence will die. Under the same silence, there are two completely different worlds.

When the British naval gun of 1840 opened the door of China, when Qishan and others exclaimed that the naval gun was unstoppable, people of insight in China chose silence. However, this silence is not submission, but silence containing "doing". Of course, only such silence can breed an outbreak.

Then it leads to another kind of silence-complete silence, which indicates the silence of extinction.

So the function of "line" is obvious. Even silence, if it contains signs of "doing", will point to success.

Of course, actions speak louder than words, not putting words in useless places. If success is a sailboat sailing on the sea, then words are the wind. The wind can not only help the ship break the waves, but also set off huge waves to devour hope. If success is a field full of wheat seedlings, words are rain. Rain can not only nourish the earth, but also cause flooding. Therefore, "doing" is important, but "doing" without the guidance of "words" will be a bigger lie.

When the eagle chooses to fly in the extraordinary clouds, it will put in efforts, because actions speak louder than words; When cicadas choose smug pride, they are doomed to mediocrity, because facts speak louder than words. So ... do you choose eagle or cicada?

[opinion]:

The characteristics of a good article are nothing more than accurate structure, proper selection of materials and wonderful language. This article gives people a sense of competence and freshness in structure. A set of comparisons at the beginning of the article shows that "actions speak louder than words"-the eagle makes efforts and chooses actions, so the eagle hits the sky directly; Cicada hush all day, choose words and actions, so cicada lives in mediocrity. Then, from two aspects of people and things, Zhong Yong, Zhao Kuo and Ma Su are selected to illustrate that silence may be golden. Then, the author takes the Opium War as an example to question and point out that "the silence of complete silence indicates the silence of extinction". Then, the author further clarified that "doing is important, but doing without written guidance will be a bigger lie." At the end of the article, the author once again reiterated the central argument that "actions speak louder than words" with examples of eagles and cicadas. The article is coordinated from beginning to end in one go. The combination of whole and scattered language is catchy to read.

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On a university campus, a college student wanted to leave a note for his roommate and tell her where the key was, but he couldn't write the word "key" and asked other students. I asked several classmates, but no one could write, so I had to use "key" instead. Express your views and opinions on this matter.

With your eyes half open and half closed, your expression is dim, and you can neither see excessive enthusiasm nor world-weary indifference. Floating clouds and jade bases, wild dogs and white clouds, no matter how turbulent, can not disturb their eyes at all, can not shake their inner peace This is the Buddha. Whether Christ or Buddha, they can keep a quiet world, and they will half close their eyes to this world. I heard the story of a philosopher: democritus was a famous philosopher in ancient Greece. He was blind in his later years. Someone asked him: Why did you do this? The philosopher calmly replied: In order to see more clearly! The Italian painter Amadei Modigliani is very similar to the ancient Greek philosopher democritus. In this painter's portraits, many adults show only one eye. The painter's explanation is: "This is because I observe the world around me with one eye and see myself with the other." We all have eyes on our foreheads and can't see our true colors clearly. This is a "blind spot" that people are born with, and everyone has a "blind spot" that they cannot see clearly. God has prepared two cloth bags for everyone to hang on our shoulders, one on our chest and the other on our back. The front cloth bag has its own advantages, while the back cloth bag has its own disadvantages. As a result, everyone saw their own advantages and the shortcomings of others as soon as they opened their eyes. So everyone thinks he is the best person in the world, and others are the most stupid people, so he always blames others and praises himself. Each of us is blinded by these eyes. "Those who know others are wise, and those who know themselves are clear." A really smart person must have self-knowledge. What is self-knowledge? Confucius said, "Knowing is knowing, not knowing is not knowing, but knowing (wisdom)." Ceng Zi, a student of Confucius, also emphasized introspection: "I save three times a day." All saints have self-knowledge, just because they always pay attention to themselves. Philosophers have said that people who have no ability to reflect cannot be called people in the true sense. People who have no ability to reflect are self-righteous, have no sense of shame, and have only animal-like desires. Look after yourself, you can see your wild heart and infinite greed, understand who you really are, and understand what you can and can't do in this world. If you look at yourself, you can see people's true feelings and others. Because what you think is what others think, what you want is what others want, and what you suffer is what others suffer, so put yourself in others' shoes, which is the "forgiveness" advocated by Confucianism. Only when people see themselves clearly and others clearly can they understand that life is alive and what they should do, and then they can gain inner freedom and peace. Only by doing and thinking can we "feel and stop at the ceremony." The greatest enemy in life is yourself. Only by carefully examining yourself can you become an enlightened person. We are not buddhas. We don't have the same vision as Buddha, and we don't have to imitate philosophers and painters, but we can gain a little self-knowledge like saints. Emperor Taizong left us a famous saying: "With copper as a mirror, you can be well dressed; Taking history as a mirror, we can know the rise and fall; Take people as a mirror, you can know the gains and losses. "Since we don't have eyes, we don't have eyes on the back of our head, so let's find a mirror and see our truth. In ancient times, there was a Qi man named Zou Ji who thought he was handsome and was praised by his wives and concubines. When he met the really handsome Gong, he found that he was not perfect. As a result, he found his own blind spot, and concluded that the world had been deceived too much, especially the supreme king of Qi, so he advised the king of Qi to become the most self-aware person in history. As long as we are good at learning from it, we can still go deep into our inner world and let ourselves camp in our hearts without being confused or pretentious.