Living leisurely here, few neighbors come, and the overgrown path leads to the wilderness. Birds are freely perched in the trees by the pool, and monks are knocking at the door.
Walking across this bridge, you can see the charming scenery of Ye Yuan, and the feet of clouds seem to be moving on the floating rocks. I will leave here for a while, but I will come back and retire with my friends on the appointed date.
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The monk knocked on the door of the moon. At that time, Jia Dao pushed and knocked, but couldn't make up his mind. When he met Han Yu, Han Yu knocked at the door. This is also the source of "scrutiny" once.
Bitter song
Tang Author: Lu Yanrang
There is nothing difficult in poetry if you don't talk about things.
Sing a song and break a few stems.
Looking for a day should be boring, and searching the sea is also dry.
Different articles are easy for the author.
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This poem is described as a poem that has been repeatedly scrutinized.
2. The poems repeatedly revised by the article are allusions of the ancients:
1, "Dengguazhou" Wang Anshi
Jingkou and Guazhou are just separated by a water, and Zhongshan has only a few heavy green mountains.
The gentle spring breeze turns green again, but, moon in the sky, when can you take me home?
Among them, the word "green" is carefully selected and very expressive. Hong Mai's Rong Zhai Xu (Volume 8) said, "Wu Jun's literati hid their grass. Chu Yun: "Jiang Nanan again". Circle the word' to', note' bad', change it to' over', and change it to' in' after the circle. Change the rotation to Full. If it is ten words, it is designated as' green'. The author thinks that the words "Yao", "Yao", "Yao" and "Yao" are not ideal, and only the word "green" is the most alert.
This is because the first four words only describe the invisible spring breeze from the flowing wind itself, and they still appear abstract and lack personality; The word "green" opens up a new layer. Considering the wonderful effect after the spring breeze blows, the invisible spring breeze is transformed into a clear visual image-the spring breeze blows, the grass grows, and thousands of miles cross the river, making it a new green. This shows the spirit of the spring breeze, and this poetry is much deeper.
2. "In the former deep Xue Cun, some branches blossomed last night." Zheng Gu changed the word "several branches blossom" in the poem "Early Plum" by monk Miracle to "one branch blossom", so Miracle worshipped Zheng Gu as a "lyricist".
3. According to the Notes on Old Learning in the Study by Sheng Ruzi in the Yuan Dynasty, Zhang Juxuan wrote a poem, "The water is flowing at night, and the trees are blooming, where is spring?" Yuan Yishan believes that since "a tree" has been pointed out, it cannot be said that "where" is doubtful, and a plum tree is by no means early, so he changed "a tree" to "when".
Poems about revising articles repeatedly:
In the Yuan Dynasty's Collection of Tibetan Springs, one of Liu's Poems on Sirangshan wrote: "Qingyun likes not to do it, so he won't rest. Until the snow disappears, the spring water flows from the east. " The author describes the process of refining words in poetry creation with vivid verses, and the poet's good mood after refining the most appropriate words.
The poet Du Fu said: "There are many beautiful sentences about human nature, and the words are not surprising."
Jia Dao, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, was famous for his bitter songs, and became a much-told story in the literary world because of his exclamation that "two words win in three years, and two tears in one song".
3. Regarding the revision of the poems in the composition, the composition should be revised repeatedly, describing the famous sentences or 1 that have been revised repeatedly, and the article has taken pains to revise and scrutinize the good sentences repeatedly.
Wang Anshi's sentence "Spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan" is quoted in the classic. When writing the sentence "Spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan", a word "green" was repeatedly scrutinized and revised, from "to", "blowing", "passing", "coming" and "staying" until it was satisfied with the word "green", so it is a famous sentence that has been passed down to the present.
2. If you want to be born when you write, you will take the initiative to grind it. Deliberate poetry is good for practice, especially parallel language. Lou focuses on "Jiang Cixi's kindness".
If you want to write like the wind, you must hone it every day. Deliberate thinking makes the poem lean and the couple handsome and neat.
3. "Ten years of study, five additions and deletions", "Every word is like blood, and ten years of hard work is extraordinary"-Cao Xueqin.
Cao Xueqin was born in Nanjing and lived a rich life as a teenager. At the age of thirteen, the year after the Cao family was copied, the family moved back to Beijing, and their wealth dropped sharply. Since then, Cao Xueqin has lived a hard life. It's extraordinary that you have worked hard for ten years. This masterpiece exhausted his life's hard work, but before the book was finished, he fell ill because of the sudden death of his beloved son, and "died in tears", not yet 50 years old.
4. Throughout the ages, whatever is well written has probably been revised. -He Qifang
The moral is to tell us that constant revision is the ladder of our progress.
5, don't rush to write, don't hate to modify, but rewrite the same thing ten times, twenty times. -lev tolstoy
This story tells us not to rush for success, but to be calm, step by step and strive for perfection.
4. The poem that I revised repeatedly during my stay in Guazhou is: Spring breeze is green, and Jiang Nanan is green. When will the bright moon shine on me? (Wang Anshi's "Boating in Guazhou")
The clever use of the word "green" in the poem has been widely praised since ancient times. According to the records of Hong Mai in the Southern Song Dynasty (Volume 8 of Rong Zhai Essays), Wang Anshi used more than ten words, such as "Zhi", "Zhi" and "Zhi", before finally choosing the word "Qing". So, what's good about this word? It turns out that the word "green" is an adjective expressing color. When used in poetry, it becomes a verb with a sense of color and movement, giving people a visual aesthetic feeling.
Rhetorically, this is a kind of telepathy, also called synaesthesia. Generally, the wind can only be distinguished by hearing and feeling, but in spring, the wind is pleasant, stable, not cold on the face, and silent on the ears. Now it is described as "green", which turns the hearing and feeling that are not easy to convey into vision, that is, it shows the arrival of spring breeze and the change from spring breeze to Jiangnan water town, giving people a strong vitality and prosperity.
5. What is the explanation in the poem that the article needs to be revised repeatedly: Spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan, when will the bright moon shine on me?
The original sentence is: Spring breeze comes to Jiang Nanan again, when will the bright moon shine on me?
He repeatedly recited and thought along the way, and always felt that the word "to" in the third sentence was too mediocre and not appropriate enough. Later, it was changed to "country". I have seen it several times, but it is not good. Changed to the word "Jin"-"Spring breeze has entered Jiang Nanan again", hey, what does it look like? Not good! He said to himself, and then changed the word "people"-"Spring breeze filled the south bank of the river again". Alas, the more he changed, the more outrageous he became. The poet abandoned the word "person" and ran for more than ten miles. He thought and thought, changed and changed, but he couldn't find a suitable word. Finally, he suddenly thought of the green mountains, green waters and green plants he saw on the boat ... Isn't green a symbol of spring in the south of the Yangtze River? Why not use a "green" word? So the poet chanted loudly:
"Spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan"-what a green word!
Wang Anshi decided to use the word "green" instead of "to", "to", "to" and "to".