There are many landscapes in the world, and each landscape has its own unique beauty, which needs our heart to discover. Whether it is natural beauty or artificial beauty, or other scenery. It is all the scenery around us.
In spring, butterfly dance. I can't forget the trip to Tianmu Lake that day. I strolled along the drizzly Tianmu Lake with my friends, looking at the beautiful scenery of water and sky in the distance and thinking about "the tapestry of thousands of willows hanging green silk". The whole person was infected by this kind of poetry, and could not help but whisper, "Fish comes out in the drizzle, and the swallow leans in the breeze", and there is an impulse to go boating on the lake to the sky. By my side, my friend's shallow smile, coupled with the intoxicating lakes and mountains, makes me feel extremely comfortable and satisfied at this moment, and I can't say how carefree I am.
In summer, cicadas sing. Summer in the south is sultry and humid, which makes people feel weak and sleepy. But summer also has a lot of fun. Go for a walk in the early morning of midsummer, and watch the flowers and plants with crystal dew reveal colorful colors under the refraction of the morning light; Help mother wash clothes after breakfast, not with her hands, but with her feet. Step back and forth in cold water with your feet, and the drowsiness in the morning will be eliminated immediately; Hiding in an air-conditioned room on a hot afternoon, eating ice cream made my teeth tremble, but I was reluctant to waste it. On a cool summer night, I watched the stars with my family and squinted intently at the stars until my sight gradually blurred.
Autumn leaves. The scenery in autumn always makes people feel a little bleak and desolate. Faded away the liveliness and excitement of summer, autumn looks like a tired child who needs a good rest. The autumn sunset gives people a decadent aesthetic feeling. The setting sun is like blood, setting off the whole sky like a painter's oil painting, which is too beautiful to be true.
In winter, the first snow. In fact, it seldom snows here in winter, but as long as it snows, we children are particularly excited. Even those who always stay at home this winter will be armed to the teeth and have snowball fights with their companions outside. The pure white world is silent. But because of our lively children, we have added a touching color to the earth after the snow. The originally slightly gloomy sky seems to feel our happiness, showing a warm and bright smile.
There are many beautiful scenery around us, whether it is spring, summer, autumn and winter, as long as you pay attention to observation, you will definitely find the scenery around you.
2. Start with three good compositions describing the environment in the form of scenery (not less than 80 words). Spring is a season full of imagination. Not as hot as summer, but the temperature is suitable; Unlike autumn, everything is green and full of vitality, full of green. Unlike the heavy snow in winter, the breeze bursts. I like the reverie of spring, and I prefer the story of spring. Grass has such a touching story. Spring has come. After many painful struggles, it broke through the ground, ushered in the first day of sunshine and rain, and took the first breath of fresh air. It smiles and swings freely in the breeze. It is free and easy, and the green leaves are dotted with the earth. Rain or wind. It does its best to send the most beautiful wishes and laughter to spring. The strength of the grass is touching, and its spirit of not being afraid of difficulties is inspiring. Throughout the ages, how many poets, poets and writers have praised the grass. Although its life is short, it is devoted to spring without hesitation. Well done! There is such a touching story on the hillside: with the ringing of the spring bell, everything on the hillside has revived as if it had been touched, and the original lifelessness has become vibrant. They all stretched themselves, washed the dust off their faces, coated them with smooth oil, and all of them were radiant. They also occupied every corner of the hillside like grabbing land, and the grass and flowers complemented each other; Butterfly bees work together; Tall trees and low trees are pitching. These beautiful scenes are in harmony with other scenery and really have a special taste. This river has such a beautiful story: with the continuous restoration of the scenery around the river, it also wants to show its most beautiful side. It is tinkling, and its voice is much brighter than before. In the bright sunshine, sparkling, as if wearing a flash suit, dazzling. This river is very clear. River! I didn't realize you were really unique. There are many stories about spring. As long as you pay attention to the bits and pieces around you, you will find them vivid, mysterious and beautiful, which will bring you full of shock and wonder. They all exude a noble temperament and are pleasing to the eye! Spring, the mysterious season.
3. The environment at the beginning of the environmental description is the "soil" of the character's life and the basis for the formation and development of the character.
Su Xun once said: "The scenery that is difficult to write is in front of us, and there is infinite meaning in it." Indeed, a successful environmental description can not only render the atmosphere, but also make people feel the life breath of the whole era and environment, and feel the thoughts and emotions in the author's heart. Specifically, there are several ways to write articles in new colors. First, a series of descriptions, unfolding the plot of the story In the article, the use of scenery descriptions many times can not only make the plot more real and attractive, but also naturally unfold the plot.
Scenery description appeared three times in an essay entitled "Concern". At the beginning, it is described as follows: "The drizzle is like a thread that is constantly being torn and cut, and my troubles are like this continuous rain, which has no end."
The middle went on to say, "Look around, bamboo forests are more beautiful in the rain, and clusters of green leaves are greener and brighter after being washed by rain." At the end, the author wrote the scenery again: "I just stood in the rain and watched my father and daughter disappear into the boundless rain and fog."
Suddenly, a heat flow quietly passed through my heart. ""It's still raining, but the rain has become my mother's hand, stroking me and running. "
The same rain, but with three different emotional words, the plot is natural. The article written in this way is clear-cut and full of emotion.
Second, the scene description reveals the feelings of the characters, and naturally penetrates the inner "feelings" into the external objects, which is that "feelings are accumulated in the heart and originated from the scenery". In writing, only when there is affection and scenery, and there is scenery and scenery, can the scenery be merged into water. The so-called "sadness is sorrow, joy is joy" is the truth.
Lu Xun's novel "Hometown" begins with a gloomy and cold winter atmosphere, and the desolate and lifeless rural scenery appropriately sets off his sad mood. Sun Li's article "Lotus Lake" begins with a poetic description of the night, only to reveal the quiet and happy mood of aquatic sister-in-law. Due to the proper use of scenery description, there are elegant tastes of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely", and there are also sorrows of "where the petals have shed tears and where the lonely birds sing their sorrows".
A student wrote a description in The Story on the Grass. The author didn't directly write the growing yearning in his heart, only said, "After a rain, the grass turned green again and again, and suddenly the green grass looked like the eldest son, turning it into a thick carpet. I feel that it is not grass that grows, but the yearning that can't stop. " This kind of sentence is implicit and affectionate, which is different from the general description of scenery.
3. Contrastive description deeply describes the theme environment, and can also reflect the different feelings of the characters at different times and under different circumstances through the scenery. Du Fu's "The stinking road of Zhumen wine freezes people to death" has always been told by people, because there is a strong and sharp contrast between the two.
In the article "The Trouble of Grade Three", the author first met "Feng" on a sunny spring day. The article wrote: "This is a very good spring day with the sun. Soft breeze, warm sunshine and new green branches all make people feel energetic. The vast field is like a light green carpet, which is endless. " For various reasons, the author had to be different from the "maple leaf" later. At this time, the author used a landscape description. However, it is not the beauty of spring, but the depression and loneliness of autumn.
Through different scenes in the Spring and Autumn Period, the article vividly describes the great changes of the characters' mood and profoundly reveals the theme of the article. Fourthly, the description of dreams reflects the expectation of characters. In the article, you can also use the writing method of "setting virtual reality", that is, setting off the real society with illusory scenery and reflecting the inner feelings or expectations of the characters.
For example, in Yang Shuo's article Haicheng, he first spent a lot of pen and ink on the illusory mirage, trying to write its charm. Then write down the real sea city you saw when you were looking for it-the thriving Changshan Islands.
At this time, the author lamented, "The Changshan Islands we saw are even better than a mirage." The more beautiful and magical the illusory mirage is, the more vibrant the city will be in the process of socialist construction.
Yang Wanli, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, wrote such a poem: "Spring flowers, autumn, winter, snow and ice, don't listen to Chen Yan, just listen to the sky (the meaning of nature)." Indeed, environmental description can't write scenery for the sake of scenery, let alone "the scenery is not enough". We should learn to let the scenery speak, so as to "add icing on the cake" to our articles.
4. The environment at the beginning of the environmental description is the "soil" of the character's life and the basis for the formation and development of the character. Su Xun once said: "The scenery that is difficult to write is in front of us, and there is infinite meaning in it." Indeed, a successful environmental description can not only render the atmosphere, but also make people feel the life breath of the whole era and environment, and feel the thoughts and emotions in the author's heart. Specifically, there are several ways to write articles in new colors.
First, a series of descriptions unfold the plot of the story.
In the article, the repeated use of scenery description can not only make the plot more real and attractive, but also unfold the plot naturally. Scenery description appeared three times in an essay entitled "Concern". The beginning is described like this:
"The drizzle is like a continuous line, and my troubles are like this continuous rain, which has no end."
The middle went on to say:
"Looking around, bamboo forests are more beautiful in the rain, and clusters of green leaves are greener and brighter after being washed by rain."
At the end, the author wrote about the scenery:
"I just stood in the rain and watched my father and daughter disappear in the fog. Suddenly there was a heat flow in my heart. " "The rain is still falling, but the rain has become my mother's hand, stroking me and running."
The same rain, but with three different emotional words, the plot is natural. The article written in this way is clear-cut and full of emotion.
Second, the scene description reveals the emotions of the characters.
Infiltrating the internal "emotion" into the external things naturally is the "emotion is contained in the inside and originated from the scenery" in writing. Only when there is emotion in the scenery and there is scenery can the scenery be merged into water. The so-called "sadness is sorrow, joy is joy" is the truth. Lu Xun's novel "Hometown" begins with a gloomy and cold winter atmosphere, and the desolate and lifeless rural scenery appropriately sets off his sad mood. Sun Li's article "Lotus Lake" begins with a poetic description of the night, only to reveal the quiet and happy mood of aquatic sister-in-law. Due to the proper use of scenery description, there are elegant tastes of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely", and there are also sorrows of "where the petals have shed tears and where the lonely birds sing their sorrows". A student in the story on the grass has such a description, the author does not directly write the inner yearning, but only says:
"After a rain, the grass is greener, and the green grass suddenly looks like a large piece of the eldest son, turning this piece of grass into a thick carpet. I think it's not grass that breeds, but thoughts that can't stop. "
This kind of sentence is implicit and affectionate, which is different from the general description of scenery.
Third, the comparative description sets off a profound theme.
Environmental description can also reflect the different feelings of characters in different times and situations through scenery. Du Fu's "The stinking road of Zhumen wine freezes people to death" has always been told by people, because there is a strong and sharp contrast between the two. In the article "The Trouble of Grade Three", the author and "Feng" first met on a sunny spring day, and wrote:
"For the sun, this is a particularly good spring. Soft breeze, warm sunshine, and the new green blooming on the branches all make people feel a kind of vitality. The vast field is like a light green carpet, which is endless. "
For various reasons, the author had to be different from the "maple leaf" later. At this time, the author used a landscape description. However, it is not the beauty of spring, but the depression and loneliness of autumn. Through different scenes in the Spring and Autumn Period, the article vividly describes the great changes of the characters' mood and profoundly reveals the theme of the article.
Fourthly, the description of dreams reflects the expectation of characters.
In the article, you can also use the writing method of "virtual to real", that is, setting off the real society with illusory scenery and reflecting the inner feelings or expectations of the characters. For example, in Yang Shuo's article Haicheng, he first spent a lot of pen and ink on the illusory mirage, trying to write its charm. Then write down the real sea city you saw when you were looking for it-the thriving Changshan Islands. At this time, the author lamented, "The Changshan Islands we saw are even better than a mirage." The more beautiful and magical the illusory mirage is, the more vibrant the city will be in the process of socialist construction.
Yang Wanli, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, wrote such a poem: "Spring flowers, autumn, winter, snow and ice, don't listen to Chen Yan, just listen to the sky (the meaning of nature)." Indeed, environmental description can't write scenery for the sake of scenery, let alone "the scenery is not enough". We should learn to let the scenery speak, so as to "add icing on the cake" to our articles.
5. The composition of "landscape" begins with environmental description and ends with environmental description.
Far away, the stone path is oblique, and there are people in the depths of white clouds, which is a quiet scenery; Tree-lined villages and pale blue in remote mountainous areas are a simple pastoral scenery; The desert is lonely and straight, and the long river sets the yen, which is a magnificent frontier scene ... After enjoying one natural scenery after another, my heart is budding, and my budding thoughts begin to drift away, to places that have never been before and are uninhabited. The scenery in the distance tells me that the scenery in Hanshan in the distance is beautiful, and the spring return at the foot is beautiful, but don't forget that the scenery here is the most beautiful.
Although the mountain is silent, it is not. Mountains have the majesty and charm of mountains. Shan showed the magnificence of his scenery to the world with his stalwart body. It is dwarfed to write the beautiful scenery of other mountains with the heroic spirit of Mount Tai. Use its blood.
All the beautiful scenery is in front of us, plum, orchid, bamboo and chrysanthemum. Don't forget that you are a landscape. Numerous ancient literati and poets are interpreting this truth.
In the desolate North Sea, a flock of snow-white sheep bleated behind them. A messenger waving a sheep whip built a loyal landscape painting. Ren Hu's whip was held high. He devoted his whole life to painting artists. It has become the most beautiful scenery in China for 5,000 years.
The mountains and rivers are broken and the wind is floating, and life experiences are ups and downs. The magnificence of the sea has created the beautiful scenery of "lotus leaves connecting the sky". Dante has a saying: Go your own way and let others talk! The scenery here is very unique.
The wind blows low, and the grassland of cattle and sheep is endless. But don't kill our own scenery yourself. As shabby as grassland overload. We should use our hands to build our own scenery and beautify our home.
For example, Tao Yuanming, who is not familiar with worldly customs, created "Picking Chrysanthemums under the Hedgehog" and leisurely saw the idyllic beauty of Nanshan.
For example, Wang Wei's heroic spirit painted the majestic beauty of "the desert is lonely and straight, and the long river sets the yen".
For example, Li Suli's dedication has built a sacred landscape of "serving the people".
Such as Fei's space leap, it has put a bright halo on the beautiful starry sky of the motherland and added new scenery to the land of China.
I want to raise my ideal sail, love on the left, love on the right, hold up the balance with my life, and build the scenery with my hands. The scenery you cast is the most beautiful.
Wandering again and again, no longer shouting.
No more hesitation, no more hesitation.
Listen to the sound of water and feel the beautiful scenery
That mountain has a quiet majesty. During the day, tourists come in an endless stream, and messy footsteps and laughter come from time to time at the foot of the mountain. At this time, the majesty of the mountain has also become amiable and approachable. When the sunset glides over the shoulder of the mountain, people who have played for a whole day still sit together and light a warm bonfire with great interest. At this time, the songs sung by the stream were faintly audible, and I was attracted to leave.
What a beautiful scenery. I sat on a piece of bluestone polished by gentle water by the stream, letting the gentle voice of the stream moisten my heart, and the softness and delicacy echoed in my heart. The water swept the green velvety moss on grotesque rocks of different sizes.
Quietly, the moonlight melts into the stream, as if everything in the universe is listening to this wonderful sound and feeling this beautiful scenery. My thoughts drift slowly with the current. An unprecedented sadness and beauty are seeping into my breath with the traces of years. In the flashing silver waves, I suddenly forgot what kind of sound the stream made, but enjoyed a feeling of devotion. The stream flows through my heart, and I have understood it in our subtle feelings.
In such a wonderful scenery, the moon is drunk, the mountain is drunk, the water is drunk, and people are drunk. I looked at the clear water, and my heart was occupied by a mysterious emotion. I wonder if all the complexity and fatigue can go with the stream at this moment to listen to and respond to the natural sounds on the other side.
If the sea is a big occasion for Confucianism to enter the WTO in order to rule the country and level the world and pursue success, then the beauty of this stream and this mountain is the work of Taoism, "Being born but not doing things". I am not a saint, and I can't understand its profundity and mystery, but I realize that all the noise and splendor will surely end in a kind of harmony and tranquility.
A chill passed by and I put my hand in my pocket. At this time, the moon has risen into the air. I think I will come here again to listen to the sound of water and feel the beautiful scenery in my hurried life journey, so that I can blend into the harmony of nature unconsciously, whisper to the waves and stand beside the sunset.
The moon is drunk, the mountain is drunk, the water is drunk, the scenery is drunk, and people are drunk. Just drunk for the beautiful scenery, people feel a lot of beautiful scenery.
Listen to the sound of water and feel the beautiful scenery.
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6. The composition should be at the beginning and end of the environmental description. If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells".
The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important.
It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.
Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized.
Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme.
3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions. 1, natural beam.
No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination.
The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law". As long as you are rich, you can play freely and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development.
There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here. 2. Echo from beginning to end.
The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail.
For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool." Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once."
Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style. This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point".
For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are." At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties.
-Remember the spinning wheel. "4. Famous aphorisms.
Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings".
At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere." 5. Lyric discussion.
Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing.
There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency. For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid."
Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of "Missing Mother", which is a typical lyric ending. The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable.
The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow. The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits".
At the beginning of the composition (Shunde Teaching and Research Section), Jia Baoyu made a very insightful remark when commenting on the Grand View Garden: all beauty must be "natural and interesting". The excellent college entrance examination composition of millions of candidates in China cannot be separated from a "reason" and a "fun".
The college entrance examination magazine collected and sorted out the excellent compositions of the college entrance examination in recent years, and found that there are many remarkable places, but they are all interesting. Just reading the beginning and end of these articles is enough to make us feel gratified and encouraged.
Let's classify them and dedicate them to you. Maybe you can learn from them. First, the most taboo to read the opening is to give people the feeling of digression with a pen. It directly tells the marking teacher that the author has not carefully judged the meaning of the question, and the composition score will be greatly reduced.
Please look at the beginning of several compositions in the 2004 Guangdong College Entrance Examination. Example 1 "remembered by language and communication": "Look at the flowers blooming and falling, the clouds are rolling and the clouds are comfortable.
The bright sunshine in early spring reveals the breath of summer; The lush green clothes in midsummer indicate the harvest in autumn; The fruit of autumn shows the bleak winter. The four seasons cycle, autumn comes and winter comes, and everything in nature is wonderful.
How can we expect the hope of early spring without the baptism of severe winter? Our human society is just like nature. What can we do without language connection and the same way of life?