Good method - Talking about the optimal solution of methodology - Talking about how to get a good method
This topic may seem small, but in fact if it is written in a big way, it is not only feasible, but also Very innovative.
For example: "One country, two systems", this is a good approach
Zhuge Liang's empty city plan, this is a good approach. . .
But we need to further point out the authenticity of a good approach - starting from reality and respecting objective laws is a good approach. Only in this way can we rise from the cognitive level to the theoretical level.
Don’t use long examples, use parallelism. A small clause is an example.
It is necessary to gradually transition from small matters in life to major matters concerning the national economy and people's livelihood, showing a student's mind and making the teacher's eyes shine.
This is information for reference only. I wish you success! ! !
Techniques and methods for creating high-scoring essays
Trick 1: Draft a beautiful and unique title
1. Create a title by quoting or imitating /p>
Quoting means directly or indirectly using famous lines from ancient and modern poetry, classic lyrics, advertising slogans, common sayings, and popular slangs as the title of an article. Imitation is to appropriately adapt the above words and then create the title of the article. The characteristic of this type of title is that it is both literary and realistic. Can arouse the screams of most people: For example: the 2004 Gansu College Entrance Examination essay "Do What You Don't Want to Do." "Don't Do It to Others" is quoted from "The Analects", the Shandong College Entrance Examination full score essay "Only because I am in this mountain" is quoted from Su Shi's "On the West Forest Wall", and the Shanghai College Entrance Examination excellent essay "Busy, Busy, What Can I Do" and Jiangsu College Entrance Examination Excellent The composition "King Xiang, what is the king's nairuo" is imitated from Xiang Yu's "Yu Xi, Yu Xi, what is Nairuo".
2. The title contains allusions or literary and historical figures
Although some titles do not quote famous quotes, they contain some allusions or stories. Such titles are full of profound cultural significance. It has a strong appeal and sense of suspense, and can inspire readers to make rich associations and multiple guesses about the content of the article. For example, the title of the 2004 Shandong College Entrance Examination essay "The Hate of Guan Yu" that scored full marks makes people wonder what the Hate of Guan Yu is: Is it the hatred of Huarong Dao for capturing and releasing Cao Cao? I hate that Adou failed to live up to his expectations, but I also hate that he did not listen to his advisers and fell into Lu Meng's plan. The title of the Fujian College Entrance Examination essay "Xue Baochai's soul died in the Grand View Garden" can also bring rich associations to people: When did Xue Baochai's soul die in the Grand View Garden? Why did Xue Baochai die in the Grand View Garden? What caused Xue Baojiao to die in the Grand View Garden?
3. The title is in the form of a couplet
Some composition titles are in the form of a couplet. Including positive pairs, opposing pairs, and flowing pairs, these titles are composed of two short sentences and have a strong literary flavor. Moreover, the sentence structure is neat, easy to read and remember, and can attract people's attention. For example, the titles of the 2004 Henan College Entrance Examination excellent composition "The Gone Kite, the Distant Dream" and the Jiangsu College Entrance Examination full-scoring composition "Forever Green and Forever China" will Two completely different things are linked together and have a metaphorical quality that makes people associate.
4. Express expressions through punctuation marks
Punctuation marks themselves have no meaning, but they have their own specific uses. Therefore, once the punctuation marks are combined or specially combined with The combination of words will produce a strong instructiveness, which can strengthen the author's emotions and highlight the key points of the article. Show the author's attitude. For example, the 2004 Guangdong College Entrance Examination full-score essay ""Love" Is Hard to Say" imitated the song title "Love You is Hard to Say", but the author added quotation marks to the word love, which means that this love is different from what is sung in the song. Love has different contents.
5. Prepare the title in a humorous or bizarre way
Humorous and bizarre titles can give people a sense of freshness and novelty. They can easily stand out among a large number of ordinary titles and make the title more interesting. A knowing smile creates a profound impression on people. In Wang Meng’s words. It's a shame he figured it out. For example, the 2004 Chongqing College Entrance Examination full-score essay "I am a "mouse" that wants to die". Seeing this kind of anthropomorphic and unconventional title can't help but make people laugh. The outstanding essay "Say Good Night at Dawn" in the Gansu College Entrance Examination is uncharacteristically different: It is obvious that you should say good morning at dawn, but how to say good night? Titles like this can give people a strong sense of novelty, humor and suspense.
6. Highlight the key points of the article through the juxtaposition of words
This type of title is different from the couplet format in that it is not a juxtaposition of two short sentences. It is the juxtaposition of two or more words (or concepts). The juxtaposition of these words can not only make the title unique, but also make it easy
to arrange the structure of the article, highlight the key points of the article, and avoid digressing from the topic. Generally, parallel words are separated by spacers, commas or spaces. open. For example, the essay "Poet? Bright Moon? Yellow Flower", which scored full marks in the Chongqing College Entrance Examination, wrote about two poets, Su Shi and Li Qingpeng respectively. It highlights the similarities and differences between their lives and poetic styles.
Trick 2: Design a wonderful inscription
1. When writing an inscription, you must pay attention to three aspects
The content of the inscription must be consistent with the theme, mood and even style of the article. Consistent and able to integrate with the article. If the contrast is large or even contradictory, it will make readers feel awkward or difficult to understand.
The inscription should be short rather than long, and the number of words should generally be controlled within a hundred words. If the K is too long, it will make people feel anticlimactic or overwhelming. Therefore, the text of the title must be concise, and the essence of the article can be expressed in a few words.
The inscription is not to embellish the introduction as you wish, but must be inspired by feelings and useful. A good inscription is generative, that is, through the inscription, it can generate the author's emotions and attitudes, trigger character stories, and establish the basic mood and color of the article.
2. The writing method or type of the inscription
1. Completely quote famous quotes
Quoting famous quotes can enhance the philosophy, credibility and persuasiveness of the article. For example, the 2004 Yunnan College Entrance Examination excellent essay "The Flowers Bloomed" quoted Rabindranath Tagore's famous line as the title: "Only by going through hellish trials can one develop the power to create heaven; only by bleeding fingers can one sing the swansong of the world." "This title is very consistent with the topic of college entrance examination, encountering setbacks and magnifying pain", so it can add to the argumentative power of the article.
That is, when writing. .Do not quote or imitate famous quotes, but create a completely independent composition. It is similar to a short composition. It can be written with greater freedom, and can be discussed, expressed, or described or explained. For example, the 2004 Hainan College Entrance Examination essay "The Left Hand?" The inscription of "Right Hand" is: "A reed is not happy; when she is happy. It's because she started thinking. "This inscription is the author's creation. It uses personification to highlight the correlation between happiness and thinking. Through the analysis of "We are happy: our happiness is the flexible left hand; we think: our way of thinking is the buried right hand" , and closely combine the inscription with the title, topic and theme
3. Combining quotation with creation
Sometimes, you need to find a suitable one directly from the memory bank. It is difficult to use book aphorisms as inscriptions. Parts of them are often slightly consistent, but overall they are quite different from the content of the article, or even completely opposite. To create an inscription independently in a short period of time will not affect the students' language proficiency and response. The speed requirements are also very high, but if you combine the two, that is, find a sentence that is slightly similar to the content of the article from the language memory bank, and then make it fully adapt to the expression needs of the article through your own transformation and processing, then , there will be less embarrassment in the dilemma. For example, the title of the 2004 Jiangsu College Entrance Examination essay "Painting": "There is such a small world, which is the stage; there is such a big stage, which is called the world. "This inscription combines what is known as the "small world of the stage" and the "big stage of the world". Then it adds its own language to connect, thus forming an inscription with its own style, and this inscription highlights the character's broad heart. The world is completely consistent with the content of the article
Trick three: Carry out stylistic innovation carefully
1. Poetry
The first is that the whole text is in poetry, generally. They are all written as modern poems. For example, the 2004 Fujian College Entrance Examination essay "God is Fair":
I once complained about the yellow cloth shoes on the soles of my feet and the inability to step out of the vitality of youth. Until I discovered that Hawking Guya's wheelchair/embedded with deep historical traces/I once cursed/the dark birthmark on the face/cannot reflect/the beautiful face/until I saw/the dark black man/showing a sweet and beautiful smile/Hawking is Unfortunately/when he was in his prime/he could only shake one finger/black people are pitiful/the development of capitalism/Zhengya wrote/their history of blood and tears/I think/God is fair/be a door When it closes/there will be another door that opens/just like/Huo Quan’s (A Brief History of Time)/just like/the mineral deposits all over Africa/when they lose part/there will be more opportunities to follow/so/I believe / God is fair / One day / I will also discover / In fact / The birthmark on the face / is the mother’s caress / The cloth shoes on the soles / are for / being down to earth / I believe / God is fair.
The second is to use poetry as part of the article to add poetic beauty to the article. In addition to modern poetry, ancient poetry can also be used. For example, the 2004 Fujian College Entrance Examination essay "Xue Baochai's Soul Breaks in the Grand View Garden" not only quotes Li Qingzhao's poem. The poem is the inscription. He also quoted some verses from "A Dream of Red Mansions" in "The Burial of Flowers". Finally, the author imitated ancient poems and wrote: "Everyone in the world is too smooth, but they don't know how many ups and downs their life experience has. When the fragrant soul is broken and passed away, I only blame the dynasty. Too decadent." This makes the whole text more antique and very consistent with what is written.
The third type is that the article does not use poetic style or quote poetry, but is expressed in poetic language, mostly using short sentences, and the jump is large. This situation is most common among excellent college entrance examination essays, and it is also the most worthy of promotion. For example, there is a paragraph from the 2004 Jiangxi College Entrance Examination Excellent Essay "Listen to the Call of the Heart":
Yes, listen to the call of the heart. Don't let your eyes and limbs be clouded by hearsay, and don't exaggerate the spirit of "skepticism." No matter whether you are dealing with people or things, never rely solely on old accounts, leaving the balance of your soul always empty! A little more scrutiny and evaluation in the sublation, and the weight of the truth in the choice.
Mozi would cry loudly, thinking that he was lost on the wrong road, because he did not have the light of the soul to guide him; Mencius's domineering attitude of "in today's world, who else but me" is the expression of personality under the thought of "doing my duty without giving in". When you are not familiar with the situation, asking more people is like "going into the mountains to ask for woodcutters and into the water to ask for fishermen", which is a good way to find a shortcut; but when integrity and conscience require you to do this or that, you should move forward bravely and never avoid it. Give in!
2. Epistolary style
The epistolary style can shorten the distance between the author and the reader, and is easy to stir up emotions and express oneself. Moreover, the epistolary style is very flexible. In addition to the basic format of the letter, the main part can be discussed, narrated, described, or explained. There are two main uses of epistolary style. One is a dialogue with the deceased, which is a form of simulated epistolary style. The purpose is not to send a letter, but to express oneself; the other is to write to relatives and friends in real life or Letters from classmates, this is what we usually call standard letters. For example, the outstanding essay "A Letter to Zhang Ailingqi" in the Shaanxi College Entrance Examination in 2004 used a letter to communicate with the late talented writer Zhang Ailing to express his emotional attitude.
3. Dialogue style
The dialogue form is easier to grasp, but it is more difficult to write well. Therefore, not many excellent college entrance examination compositions use dialogue method, and the whole article is based on dialogue. Form constructors are even rarer. However, judging from the several existing articles that use conversational style, they appear to be very brilliant. For example, the 2004 Jiangsu College Entrance Examination full-score essay "Xi'an and Nanjing - Dialogue between Mountains and Waters" briefly introduced the geographical locations, historical figures, etc. of Xi'an and Nanjing, and then used the dialogue between the Qinling Mountains and the Yangtze River to form the main body of the article. The dialogue was full of philosophy and poetry, with both historical and cultural accumulation and prospects for the future. It seems particularly heavy. Here are two excerpts:
Tai Ling said: "Everything in the world comes from the clouds, and the sea will also become a mulberry. Look at the prosperous Tang Dynasty, when the immortals borrowed large pieces of articles to wipe out the prosperous times for Chang'an. Elegance. The gems of Persia make me colorful; the scriptures of Tianzhu make me shine; and the peonies of Luoyang make me charming. Who said that there is no gorgeous youth in the mountains?"
Yang Jiang nodded and said: "Brother Tai's words make sense. I think back then, when the civilization of the Central Plains was prosperous, the land of Jingchu had not shed its barbaric coat and was still a wasteland. How could it be as agile and elegant as it is today? The land of Jinling is probably still a deserted city! At that time, I was still just flowing day and night heartlessly, maybe there was an undercurrent of earth-shaking changes!"
IV. Instructions p>
Instructions are different from expository texts in traditional stylistic classifications. They are written in the form of modern common product instructions, and the content has nothing to do with material products. It just uses the form of instructions to express the author's views on society and life. Just an opinion. It can be said that it uses the jacket of the instruction manual to cover the body of analysis, discussion or description. In 2004, the most successful explanatory essay for the College Entrance Examination was "Making Coffee" written by a Henan candidate. This article is mainly written through analogies, that is, it not only includes the general brewing methods of coffee, but also links each brewing method with life, which is strange and vivid. Here is an excerpt from one of the paragraphs:
What next? If you leave ground coffee sitting unused in a cup, you will never have coffee to drink. Boiling hot water is needed to turn the coffee powder into liquid so that the sweetness of the coffee can be released. This boiling hot water is like the ups and downs or changes in life. Don't avoid it. Only by accepting it and letting it change your life can your life be elevated to a new level. What comes out of your coffee cup will be the sweetness of humanity.
5. Fable or fairy tale style
Writing in fable or fairy tale style actually uses personification throughout the text, so it is vivid and readable. However, traditional fables are all about one incident and one discussion, which are relatively short and not completely suitable for college entrance examination compositions. Fairy tales use rich imagination, fantasy and exaggeration to shape images and reflect life, and provide ideological education to children; although its length and plot can meet the needs of college entrance examination composition, the real fairy tale language should meet the needs of children to accept it. This is not The average middle school student can grasp it. Therefore, what we see in college entrance examination compositions are often not standard fables or fairy tales, but after certain transformations, we can regard them as allegorical or fairy tale-like compositions. For example, the outstanding essay "My Self-narration" in the Jiangsu College Entrance Examination in 2004 was narrated by a dog. It depicts the image of a hypocritical, treacherous and greedy Director Zhang, which is highly ironic. It is more complex than ordinary fables, and more adult than ordinary fairy tales. The following is an excerpt from the last paragraph of the article:
Finally, I would like to remind everyone that as a person, you must be like our Director Zhang, and give people the feeling of calmness and honesty of the mountains. In this way, even if the changes in the four seasons are different, Color and no one will give you any trouble. Woof... woof... bye.
6. Network style
There are many strange and weird stylistic formats on the Internet, which we collectively call network style. Most of them are original, but blind use can easily lead to the appearance of different compositions, so special caution is required. An important principle that must be followed is to allow readers to understand.
The 2004 Jiangxi College Entrance Examination Excellent Essay "Burn "Opinions" into a CD" was assembled into a text using the form of Internet search. The full text was searched three times. The "keywords" each time were actually the topics that the author wanted to elaborate on. "Search results" are the author's brief comments, and "related links" are the author's examples. The marking teacher believes that "the content of this article is not outstanding, but its form is outstanding."
Trick 4: Make clever use of teaching materials
1. Interpret the text
Reinterpret certain contents, concepts, and themes in the text to make it more effective New connotation, new development. For example, the outstanding essay "The Mourner" in the 2004 National College Entrance Examination Examination. "The Happy One" is a reinterpretation of "What kind of sad person and happy person are these" in Mr. Lu Xun's article "In Memory of Liu Hezhenjun". Here are two excerpts from the paragraphs:
However, are they "happy people"? Are they really happy? I often ask in my heart. According to the way of thinking of mediocre people, Liu Hezhen was dismissed by the school. How can you be happy if you are fired? How can you be happy if you are suppressed by those in power!
So, I had to change my way of thinking and think like a warrior! Liu Hezhen and others are indeed "happy people", Because they are the holders of faith.
2. Expand the text
Through imagination and association, expand some details in the text, so as to make the text story more substantial, richer and more vivid. For example, the 2004 Jiangsu College Entrance Examination essay "What's wrong with King Xiang?" imaginatively describes certain sentences in "Wujiang Commits Suicide" to make the images of Yu Ji and King Xiang fuller.
3. Fill in the gaps
According to the logic of the text, fill in the content that is not in the text but may happen. It is similar to expanding the text in that it supplements the text through imaginative means and bold assumptions; the difference is that it often creates something out of nothing, that is, no similar plot can be found in the text. The method of filling in the gaps is actually to treat the places with large jumps in the text as imaginative spaces for composition writing. For example, in the 2004 Jiangsu College Entrance Examination essay "The Peacock Flies Southeast> A New Biography", which scored full marks in the Jiangsu College Entrance Examination, the author boldly transformed the original work according to the requirements of the essay's title, making something new out of nothing, and creating something new out of nothing. The beauty of the essay lies in its "seemingly but not", but the difficulty lies in its "seemingly not but" ".
4. Newly compiled stories
Similar to filling in the gaps, that is, through rich imagination and association, content not found in the text (mainly events and time, but The characters are often consistent) and are written vividly and lifelike. The difference is that the new story is imaginative throughout, borrowing the body of the text and filling it with new flesh and blood, which is quite original. For example, "The Demon's Tribulation of Fire", the outstanding composition in the 2004 National College Entrance Examination, borrowed people and stories from "The Biography of Qu Yuan" to describe the struggle between Zhang Yi, Zheng Xiu and Qu Yuan in a thrilling way, and to portray the twists and turns of the psychological activities of the King of Chu.
5. Story Solitaire
Based on the text in the textbook, expand your imagination, start from the end of the text, and create a brand new story. Story solitaire is one of the writing forms that best reflects students' imagination and creativity. For example, the outstanding essay "Peach Blossom Spring Festival - The Tragedy of Not Listening to the Wise Men" in the Jiangxi College Entrance Examination in 2004 tells the story of a fisherman who was tempted by a high price and sold the Peach Blossom Spring to a TV station, which led to the over-exploitation of the Peach Blossom Spring and ultimately brought a devastating blow to the locals. , in line with the theme of environmental protection. Although the article is full of exaggerations, it is generally logical.
6. New opinions on old things
Mainly appears in argumentative essays, that is, the author does not blindly agree with certain opinions, evaluations, emotions and attitudes in the text, but makes his own analysis and value judgments. For example, the 2004 Jiangsu College Entrance Examination Excellent Essay "The Drunkard's Thoughts Are Not Between the Mountains and Rivers" is a review of Daiyu and Baochai in "A Dream of Red Mansions". The author's comments are different from common commentaries. They not only stick to the topic, but also highlight his own unique opinions. They are novel and vivid and can arouse the readers' interest. Here is an excerpt from one of them:
Baochai is not like that. Regardless of the role she plays in "Bao Dai"'s love affair, just look at her behavior: kindness but strength. She treats everyone equally, treats everyone equally, and laughs off any verbal offence. This requires a mind as broad as the sea and a mind as gentle and flexible as water. Being able to do this as a human being can be regarded as a state - having the stability of mountains and the flexibility of water.
7. Describe the author
Every time a new text is given by the teacher, the teacher must give a brief or detailed introduction to the author of the text. Some even require students to understand the author's life story themselves. . But unfortunately, most students do not make use of these materials, and many composition resources are wasted. In fact, whether they are Chinese or foreign, most writers themselves are thick books. In their lives, they have had many legendary stories. Organizing and deepening these stories will become a good article. For example, the 2004 Jiangsu College Entrance Examination Excellent Essay "Shen Congwen Walking Through Landscapes" uses simple and plain writing to explain the two complementary aspects of Mr. Shen Congwen's character - agility and calmness, highlighting the nurturing and development of Mr. Shen Congwen's character by the mountains and rivers of western Hunan. Cultivation and isomorphism.
There is no specific story in the article, but the simple narration is enough to make people see a man of good temperament and a writer full of charming personality.
Trick five: Pay attention to life experience
1. Write your own study life
Study life is not boring, the key is that it is too hot to learn. On the contrary, it leads to feeling numb. Therefore, students often like to imagine wildly and are unwilling to delve deeply into their own lives. In fact, as long as students can look at their study and life from different perspectives, they can write good articles. For example, the excellent essay "I'm Happy, You're Happy" in the 2004 National College Entrance Examination is based on the real life of middle school students. Through different views on happiness, it reveals the distortion of the teacher-student relationship caused by exam-oriented education and how a middle school student should Find the right balance between the teacher's requirements and your own abilities, so as to achieve the goal of "I am happy and you are happy".
2. Write about your own growth experience
Every student has many interesting, ugly, happy and sad things that happened during his or her growth. Write them out one by one. It can be combined into a vivid article. For example, the excellent essay "To suffer a loss is to take advantage" in the 2004 National College Entrance Examination is based on the grandmother's sentence "To suffer a loss is to take advantage" as a clue. It describes three things that suffered a loss in the process of growing up, and compared and discussed it, clarifying one's own thinking, and Come to the conclusion that "as long as you change your way of thinking slightly, you will win happiness and joy." The whole text is combined with narrative and discussion, and has a strong sense of real life.
3. Write about the people and things around you
Although some lives do not belong to middle school students, they happen around them every day. If students can summarize and refine the people and things around them, they can also write excellent works. For example, "Painting", the outstanding essay in the Jiangsu College Entrance Examination in 2004, tells the story of the mayor's wife. In order to prevent her husband from being tempted, she made up a white lie, which is awe-inspiring. Although what the author writes may not necessarily be real people and things, the content he writes conforms to the logic of life and has a basis in life. Therefore, it also has a strong sense of reality in life.
4. Situational narrative and lyrical writing
Refers to candidates writing about what they saw, heard and felt before or during the exam. This kind of article has improvisational characteristics, is the most life-like, and can easily impress the markers. However, due to time constraints, it is difficult to grasp and innovate such articles. For example, in the 2004 Jiangsu College Entrance Examination excellent essay "The Last Forty-Five Minutes", the author seizes the inner activities of the last forty-five minutes of the exam to develop the full text, which is very clever, especially the author's repeated use of time words: "There are still forty-five minutes left." "Five points" and "only forty-five minutes left" create a sense of tension and urgency, which is very consistent with the atmosphere of the college entrance examination and strengthens the authenticity of the article.
5. Portraying parental affection
Parental affection is an eternal theme in middle school students’ writing. It is also an important part of composition teaching and the main way to cultivate students' love emotions. Of course, writing about parental love should not only be limited to praising parents' selfless dedication, but should also include the generation gap between two generations and the efforts made by others to resolve the generation gap. Such articles can be the cry of the soul or the narration of a story. It can also be an evaluation of behavior or a discussion of opinions. For example, the 2004 Chongqing College Entrance Examination Completion Composition "Flying Without Wings" adopts the fairy tale style and selects moths, chickens, and swans as the main subjects of the statement. They examine themselves and their images in the face of the expectations of "friends", "mother", and "father" respectively. It clearly clarifies the relationship between T's "self-understanding and others' expectations". Vivid, lifelike, thought-provoking, and thought-provoking.
6. Reflect the real sense of life through humor
Humor is a psychological need of people and the "spice" of life. With humor, life will be more like life. All works that can truly be called humorous must be closely related to life. If they are far away from life, it will be difficult to have humorous elements. Therefore, if the compositions of middle school students can win the knowing smile of the examiners, then half of the success will be achieved. For example, the 2004 Chongqing College Entrance Examination full-scoring essay "I am a "mouse" that wants to die" uses the self-narration of a mouse to satirize people's confusion of right and wrong, treating abnormality as normal numb mentality and bad social customs, and has the humorous style of O. Henry. .
7. Writing life stories
Middle school students need to write the truth, but the so-called "truth" is not a natural copy of life, but a re-creation based on life. Students can not only make up life stories according to their needs, but can even write some "allusions" or speak for others, and compile some "aphorisms". This is not deliberate fraud, but a trick to deal with exam writing. According to Yang Wanye's "Chengzhai Poetry Talk" and Lu You's "Laoxue'an Notes". Su Shi took part in the imperial examination, and the question was "On the Perfection of Honesty in Punishments and Rewards." This was an extremely boring test question. In order to effectively demonstrate this orthodox point of view, Su Shi made up a piece of historical material. "Gao Tao said 'kill three', Yao said 'forgiveness three', so that even the learned examiner Ouyang Xiu didn't know the origin of it. He had to ask Su Shi for advice on the origin of this phrase after he was named on the gold list. Unexpectedly, Su Shishi frankly said: "Why do you need a source? Take it for granted!" In response, Ouyang Xiu did not secretly complain that he was deceived, but instead "appreciated his heroic spirit" and said, "This person is good at reading and using books."
"But Japanese articles will be unique in the world." Since everyone like Su Shi can compile his own historical materials during the exam, why can't middle school students compile some stories, allusions and even aphorisms?