At the age of sixteen, I have walked out of my childhood naivety; The season of sixteen is a dream season; My sixteen-year-old sky has beautiful dreams and growing pains.
"One day, I will ride the wind and waves, sail straight up and cross the deep sea", a beautiful ideal is calling me. Shakespeare said: "Books are the nourishment of all mankind. Life without books is just like the earth without sunshine; " Wisdom without books is like a bird without wings. "I understand the importance of books to society and life. I love reading, and it is knowledge that gives me endless motivation to fly my dreams. However, I still long for a free and lively study life without the pressure of entering a higher school, rather than a study life submerged in the sea of questions all day. I am bittersweet and lead a unique sixteen-year-old life.
"I am a junior high school student, still playing computer games. I really don't understand! " My mother's nagging came from my ear again. I had to turn off the computer reluctantly to separate me from happiness. I also know that you can't be addicted to playing computer, but you can't keep me away from the computer just because I am in grade three. I like playing computer games and listening to songs online, which is just a relaxation in my intense study and life. However, my lovely computer was banned by my mother. Break up for a while, my poor computer! I am distressed and helpless, and I will continue to live my sixteen-year-old life.
Sixteen-year-old sky is pure, the dream of mature life is colorful, let go of the tender throat and shout loudly, let go of carefree true feelings and childlike innocence; Let the tender face write the truth all over the sky, let the naive thoughts turn into clouds, let the magnificence of the clouds float into the distance, and let the distant hope come as soon as possible.
Sixteen-year-old sky should have our happiness, but it is more distress and helplessness. Nevertheless, my dream is still brilliant. Wandering and loneliness have taught me to be strong: even if I feel hurt, I will never cry.
Facing the sky, I shouted: Give me wings, I want to fly!
Full marks and highlights
From the beginning, this article deeply attracted readers with poetic language, which made people feel light and poetic. The following closely revolves around the organizational material "My sixteen-year-old sky has beautiful dreams and growing pains": I like reading, but I am submerged in the sea of questions; I want to play computer, but my mother tries to stop me. Wrote the distress and helplessness of sixteen years old. It is in this distress and helplessness that the author has matured and strengthened. The author is not complaining blindly, but a teenage boy's firm cry for the ideal "Give me wings, I want to fly", which shows the enthusiasm and vitality of youth.
The color in my eyes
Although there are various colors in my eyes, they are all gorgeous. They make up my colorful life.
I like green. When I see green, I will think of my paradise. My paradise is the vegetable field in my backyard. The field is covered with green spinach and rape ... There are mulberry trees and locust trees with dense shade on the ground. Every holiday, I chase and fight with my neighbor's children. Whenever troubles come, I go for a walk in the vegetable field and have a heart-to-heart talk with those vegetables. At this time, the green everywhere is like handfuls of huge green umbrellas, covering the hot summer sun and blocking the cold winter wind ... If you ask me what happiness is, the mood at this time is the best answer.
I like red. When I see red, I think of my red house. Once upon a time, the floor was rattled by me; Once upon a time, I sat on the threshold and recited 300 Tang poems, and frogs and crickets joined in. Once upon a time, there was a cheerful song in the house ... Looking at the sacred red in my mind, I understood what happiness was. ...
I like white. As soon as I see white, I think of delicious white soybean milk. Early in the morning, grandma invited me to drink soy milk made by her own hands. My neighbor and I sat in a row, enjoying the faint smell of soybean milk. Through the rising and spreading heat, I saw grandma's eyes narrowed into a crack and her weather-beaten face, drinking soybean milk that was sweet to my heart. I seem to understand what happiness is. ...
Now I have a soft spot for white. When I was in the ninth grade, I abandoned everything and began to pursue my ideals without distractions. So it became pure and concise, and white has remained in my heart ever since.
Each of us is surrounded by different colors, which are intertwined to form a seemingly simple but colorful world. Through the colors in my eyes, I see that life is so colorful and beautiful!
Motivation comes from wonderful extracurricular books?
Lonely childhood, there is no imaginary blue sky, white clouds, blue sea, no dreamy green grass, pebbles and small fish, but that beautiful and magical extracurricular book makes my life better. ?
My motivation to learn Chinese comes from my father, specifically from a story of my father. I remember the first story my father told me was "Once upon a time there was a mountain ..." I listened to it with relish at first, and listened to it several times before I discovered the mystery. I asked my father to tell other stories. My father didn't speak. He mysteriously went to the elegant bookcase and said, read, there are endless stories in the book. This is the motivation of my initial study.
With doubt and curiosity, I opened the beautifully illustrated fairy tale book in the bookcase. At first, I saw the lovely Snow White and the dwarf, the beautiful mermaid and the funny clown in the book. In a few days, my naive innocence was completely conquered. I smelled the bread like a hungry person, as if there was a magical power that pushed me into that wonderful world. Later, I walked into the magnificent palace, and I swam in the dreamy underwater world and boundless space. Everything in the book is so novel and wonderful.
After entering middle school, exquisite books have become an indispensable friend in my life and a very important spiritual motivation in my study and life. In a thoughtful text, I understood Yu's melancholy; In the tortuous plot, I understand Zhang ailing's pain; In the poetic picture, I understand the freshness of Chi Li. There, I met Shi Tiesheng, who gave me the strength of life. The new green revealed in the declining altar not only aroused his hope of survival, but also gave me confidence and belief. There, I met David Beckham galloping on the court. His tenacious struggle not only helped him to hold up a blue sky of his own, but also taught me to struggle, so that I was no longer a person who dreamed of glowing. ?
A wonderful extra-curricular book made me taste different from the classroom. They raised a new sun in my heart, which urged me to forge ahead and promote my progress. Thank you. Oh, lovely extracurricular books! With you, my life will always be full of motivation and passion. ?
Comments: The writing angle of this article is incisive. Extra-curricular books bring motivation to themselves, so literati poets, classic poems, traditional classical novels, exquisite fairy tales and so on. Can enter the article. But how do extracurricular books bring motivation? Please look at the second and third paragraphs of the article. The author tells a short story of childhood and the happiness brought by a large number of pen and ink bookcases. Finally, he locked in the sentence "there is a magical power to push me into that wonderful world", which is wonderful. The fourth paragraph also wrote the harvest of extracurricular books, but the writing is not the same. The article discusses while narrating, and the language is quite powerful. This article was finally rated as a perfect composition.
Listen to the singing of running water
The sky is crying, and the water drops on the ground gather happily, so there is me-running water. Close your eyes and listen quietly. Do you hear the sound of running water singing? ...
I sang all the way across the plain. I don't envy the towering mountains, nor the quiet lakes and mountains, because I have a flowing life. I don't look up at the powerful wings of the eagle, nor lament the speed of the cheetah, because I know I am small, but I am not small. Look! Peach blossoms on the shore comb themselves with a smile in the clear water; Liu Yang, nourished by me, rolled up his sleeves and flew; The fish in my body are playing happily. Life is red because of me. On the endless plain, I sang loudly, watching the rolling clouds in the sky and watching the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court.
Faced with the obstacles of high mountains, I don't feel sad, nor do I complain about the injustice of fate. On the contrary, I smile and play a passionate movement, and there will always be ups and downs in life. Listen! It was Qu Yuan who sang loudly and wrote Li Sao, which is immortal. "There is no one in life since ancient times, so we should manage our own history." Wen Tianxiang sang his indomitable spirit beside the long river of history. Li Bai abandoned fame and fortune, and his ambition of "breaking the waves and making and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea" was engraved in the long river of history. Those dangerous mountains can only block my way forward, but they can't stop my progress. I was not discouraged or disappointed. I won towards the distant all the way. ...
"The fallen petal is intentional, but the flowing water is ruthless", and the fallen petal whispers in my ear. I said, "Please follow my path, and you will understand that running water is not heartless, but takes you to a wider world. The meteor that crossed in the night sky was only a moment, but it crossed the fiery atmosphere, burned its own life, and gave it selflessly to the earth, so it built eternity. " Don't believe it, I smiled happily and continued to flow forward.
In the distance, I heard the choppy call of the sea. I sang loudly and said to the fallen flower, "Look! I took you to heaven. " I packed my bags and threw myself bravely into the arms of the sea. Falling flowers can't help but sigh: "A flowing water that sings because of life has merged into an ocean of life!
Comments: listening to the song of running water, we heard it; Life is bright red because of running water, small but not small; Despite the barrier of mountains, the running water still smiles and rises and falls, singing all the way; The water is flowing away, not heartless, just to find the paradise of life. The little author heard philosophy and truth from the sound of running water, and his opinions were wise and original. What is more commendable is the atmosphere conceived in this paper. Based on the careful observation of the spirit of flowing water, the little author wrote it with a pen, quoting classics, and it was logical. Articles are always filled with high-spirited enthusiasm and have a strong appeal.
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"A year's plan lies in spring, and a day's plan lies in the morning" and "A good beginning is half the battle". These famous aphorisms tell us the importance of beginning to success.
There is a saying in the relativistic butterfly effect: "A small change in the initial quantity of the system may lead to a huge error in the calculation results ... A butterfly flapping its wings in South America will cause a storm in the Pacific Ocean."
A good or bad beginning of everything often indicates its success. This is an invisible arrangement and a necessity.
September, 2004 1, the third day of school starts, some people may think that there is still one year before the senior high school entrance examination, but in fact, the senior high school entrance examination has quietly filled with smoke. ...
In the third grade, there is no noise and impetuousness, no anxiety and slapstick; There is only a quiet, a nervous, a busy, a full. Young hearts throb in learning.
I put down my basketball, brushed away a wisp of dust from my textbooks and my mind, plunged into the ocean of knowledge, indulged in the world of learning, and started my dream search, starting my young dream with my young heart.
Laziness in class is replaced by energy, noise after class is replaced by profound books, and pop music in the ear is replaced by pure English pronunciation.
The excellent results of the first monthly exam affirmed the beginning of my third year, which made me seem to see the hope of the senior high school entrance examination-not far away.
The senior high school entrance examination came quietly without knowing it. It is so sacred and mysterious. Perhaps the result of the senior high school entrance examination has already been decided, which depends on the beginning of the third grade. Some people may think that the senior high school entrance examination is the end of junior high school. But I think the senior high school entrance examination is another beginning of life. Our beliefs do not change because of the senior high school entrance examination, our studies do not stop because of the senior high school entrance examination, and our lives do not change because of the senior high school entrance examination.
The senior high school entrance examination is just a beginning for us, a new beginning, and it can also be said to be a post station; Wan Li's new journey is just around the corner. Only by grasping the beginning and setting goals can our future be full of hope.
Looking back, I am filled with emotion; Looking into the distance, there is a long way to go. Starting one by one is the call of success and the implication of hope. Grasp the beginning, full of hope, you will certainly find your own sky on the road to success!
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This is an excellent composition in the examination room. According to the tips of the examination questions, the author accurately and profoundly grasps the meaning of the questions, takes "Junior Three Life" as a clue, cuts out and sorts out the article materials, focusing on narration and embellishing discussion. The full text is integral and inseparable. The lyric at the end of the article just deepened the theme of the article: "A beginning is the call of success and the implication of hope. Grasp the beginning and be full of hope, and you will definitely find your own sky on the road to success! " Improve the understanding of "beginning". The language of the article also has many remarkable points, such as quotation, comparison, metaphor, parallelism and other rhetorical devices embellished and interspersed in the article, giving people a pleasing aesthetic feeling.