Since you babbled, who has dedicated his life to you? Who is proud of every small step you take? Who persuaded and invested you just to get better grades? Who shares your joys and sorrows? Who always helps you selflessly in life and study ... there will be many people in your life, and their influence on you is far-reaching and lasting. Please choose the most important person in your life and write a composition on the topic "It's good to have you".

Second, the teaching process

1 What is the analysis topic "It's good to have you all my life"? What does "you" mean when you see this composition topic-how do parents, relatives, teachers, classmates and friends count as "good"-bring you happiness, move you to spend unforgettable time with you or teach you some truth, which will benefit you a lot. ...

2. How to write?

1) Choose some famous sayings to let them know the importance of real material selection. (1) "Touching people doesn't care about feelings first"-Bai Juyi (2) "As long as your feelings are a little unreal, readers will finish reading them at once. So be true to yourself and write your true feelings. " -Bing Xin (3) Love stories need not be carved. -Shen Deqian (4) Truth is the life feeling of literary works, and it is the flesh and blood of literary works.

2) Show the characters through details, mainly through courseware demonstration, and show some good articles and essays.

First, choose the short story "When God Created Mother" to make students feel more intuitively what details can be used to write the character "Mother". The short story "When God Created Mothers" The kind God has been working overtime to create mothers. ..... "Can she think?" "Of course," God said, "she will argue and discuss compromises ..."

Second, re-emphasize the importance of seeing the truth with small things, and let students know how celebrities make their feelings real and moving with famous articles through small things in daily life.

In one place, I squatted down to carry my mother, and my wife squatted down to carry my son. Although my mother is tall and thin, she is not born heavy. Although her son is fat, he is young and naturally light. But my wife and I walk slowly, steadily and carefully, as if what I carry and what she carries add up to the whole world. -Mo Huaiqi's "Walking"

I said, "Dad, you go." ..... His back was mixed with the crowds coming and going, and I couldn't find it, so I came in and sat down. My tears are coming again. -Zhu Ziqing's "Back"

Thirdly, taking a small poem as the material, it shows that some details in a mother's daily life are enough to show her love for her children.

Motherly love is the warm embrace when a baby cries, the patient instruction when babbling, the warm hot tea when staying up late to prepare for the exam, the sob when traveling, the tears of excitement when getting grades, the bloodshot eyes when being sick in bed, the bitter persuasion when being addicted to bad habits, and the pain of the wound when walking on thin ice and repeatedly teaching.

Fourth, a good period of appreciation.

Fatherly love is on the left, maternal love is on the right, on both sides of our life path. If a mother's love is a slowly flowing river that nourishes our hearts, then a father's love is like a cornerstone, bearing the weight of a child's life, but he grows old unconsciously. If maternal love is gentle and paternal love is cold, dignified, hidden, impatient and delicate, you can't walk into the hinterland of the mountains. paternal love

We used to talk about the wine that Cao Cao cooked as a child and the heroes in the world. We once recited Li Bai. Looking up, I found it was homesickness in the moonlight. We once recited Zhou Dunyi's "Love Lotus" and made a gentleman's ambition. We used to learn from Mao Zedong and praise romantic figures ... Now these are all treasured in your and my youth poetry books like maple leaves. friendship

Quoting famous sayings in writing can add a lot of color to the article. List the famous sayings about the theme of this composition.

One of the peculiar functions of friendship is that if you tell your happiness to a friend, you will get two happiness, and if you tell your sadness to a friend, you will get one sadness. bacon

Be a man, be a son all your life and a father all your life. The first half of my life is the shadow of my father, and the second half is the shadow of my son. -Jia Pingwa

The kindness of the master is more important than the parents. -Jin Gehong, "Diligence"

Motherly love is often a trivial effort in her life, without too much grandeur, just like a trickle, spreading throughout the whole family. No one realizes how important it is, but everyone is learning bit by bit.

4 Use rhetorical devices

Write a figurative sentence of fatherly love.

Father's love is a towering mountain, which can accommodate all sufferings and hold up the sky of children. Father's love is a ray of sunshine, which makes your heart warm like spring even in cold winter. Father's love is a river that makes our desolate hearts flourish. Father's love is a clear spring, which makes your feelings pure even if they are covered with the dust of years.

Write a sentence that is a metaphor for maternal love.

Mother sipped a cup of Longjing tiredly. When you are weak, you only need a few mouthfuls to refresh yourself.

My mother is a troubled pianist. When you are depressed, elegant melody floats in front of you. Mother is a breeze in frustration. When you are frightened and sad, I will wipe away your anxious sweat and tidy up your messy thoughts.

Mother is a crutch in trouble. When you fall, it helps you find your center of gravity and support a hopeful vilen.

Second, summary

How to make the composition more vivid, expressive and infectious?

1, the personal experience of the painter 2, grasping the oriental light point from the details

3. Quote 4. Use rhetorical devices

It's good to have you

It's good to have you. I'm not lonely when I'm lonely.

It's good to have you, and I don't hesitate when I get lost.

It's good to have you. I won't give up when I want to lose.

I)

When is the Moon Mid-Autumn Festival again? The moon is still that moon, but it is a bit lonely in our eyes. This is my first Mid-Autumn Festival in a foreign land. I am a stranger in a foreign land. I finally feel the taste of this poem every holiday.

Late at night, I lay quietly in bed, and my mind kept flashing with scenes of the Mid-Autumn Festival. I can't help choking when I think about it.

Don't think so much, we must learn to be independent when we are away, and our relatives are not around, but at least we students are around. A soft voice suddenly echoed in the darkness. It's you in the bed next door. You didn't sleep. After talking to me for a long time, the pimple in your heart seems to have opened.

The moon is no longer lonely this night, because there are stars with it. ......

2)

Math xxx, physics xxx ... I can hardly believe my eyes when I look at the scores of all subjects written in the manuscript. Looking back on the past few months, I have been studying hard. I went to the classroom first in the morning and last in the evening, but why didn't my grades go up? I beat my chest in annoyance, thinking that maybe I really am not suitable for school. My heart suddenly darkened and I couldn't help burying my head in my arms.

Don't be discouraged, a monthly exam means nothing. A comfortable voice reminded me in my ear. I looked up and saw your caring smile. You said earnestly: it doesn't matter if you didn't do well in the exam this time. Come back next time, as long as you learn, you will definitely make progress.