2. The "reading" and "feeling" of the article are closely related. Examples of actions are touching at the beginning and have real feelings.
Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, and it is interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people. The ending is clear and meaningful.
This composition is novel in material, wonderful in conception and lively in language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
5. According to the sequence of events, the article describes the events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it is very enjoyable from beginning to end.
6. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.
7. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
8. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and well written.
9. Can reasonably imagine, embody meaningful philosophy, write fluently and concisely, and give full play to imagination. This is a good composition.
10, the full text has many wonderful sentences, which adds some literary interest to the article.
1 1, this article may not be particularly attractive in the plot, but it is still a successful work. First of all, it depicts the image of the role well. Second, the language is vivid and rich, and the atmosphere of life is strong, which plays a very good role in expressing ideas.
12, the full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
13, Juanxiu's handwriting is so clear and neat that it can't help but give people a refreshing feeling, which the teacher should really learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
14, this article has chosen a brand-new angle, and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world through various things, there are always some laws that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
15. Your article is as simple and open-minded as you are. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term training. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching and good articles in the future study process.
16, Wen Neng Yan Sheng I think this article is a reflection of your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
Wen neng yi Qing 17. You should not take writing as your own burden, but record your mental journey with positive and delicate brushstrokes.
18, caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. Through the article "Accident", we can see that your heart is not only full of innocence and books, schools, but also full of concern for society. This article is full of twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.
19, the language is appropriate and romantic, and the fluent context shows the image of the confidant "bookworm" and the emotional distinction between "I" and "confidant" is smart and elegant.
20. We seem to have heard a lot about the topic of fragility of life, which can disappear in an instant. If you walk in the field, walk in the forest, step on fallen leaves and look up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life. Life needs to care for each other. This is the theme of your chapter.
Excellent composition evaluation 2 1, "When you give your" masterpiece "-a beautiful painting to the teacher for appreciation, the teacher is really proud of you. Your mother must be as excited as the teacher! It took you a lot of effort to create this painting, didn't it? I tell you, studying is like painting. As long as we are willing to work hard, we will gain more. "
2. "You compare the' long rope' in tug-of-war to' children who can't make up their minds', which is so apt! Although the competition failed, your composition was a success! It would be better if the end of the composition turned my disappointment into several short revelations!
What a lovely child you are! How good you are at understanding the feelings in life. Although you are a little timid about writing, you have grasped the true meaning of writing-I am writing about my feelings. As long as you write your true feelings, the teacher must like you very much.
You are a smart and sensitive child. You once had a happy family and you loved your family. But don't you love when something unpleasant happens in your family? Call your family harmony and happiness with your intelligence and your love!
5. What a beautiful autumn you wrote! From your composition, the teacher saw the high blue sky, golden rice fields, flying geese in the south and falling yellow leaves, all of which made me feel the beauty and magic of autumn. How I want to say to autumn: autumn! Turning decay into magical autumn, how beautiful your students' compositions are!
6. When the teacher opens your composition book, you can always hear a burst of crying. It turned out to be punctuation marks, because you paid too little attention to them. Think about it, the teacher despises your composition just as you despise punctuation. Don't you cry?
7. Your composition can describe the autumn fields in detail, which shows that you are an observant child. But what a beautiful season autumn is. Autumn is a harvest season, and autumn is a colorful season. The teacher really hopes to feel that beautiful and poetic autumn in your article!
8. Through psychological description and action description, the author shows his nervousness and fear in detail.
9. Cut appropriately. The pen and ink are concentrated and meticulous. The language is concise and general. The theme is positive, the beginning is concise, the end is powerful, and suspense is used well to make the plot twists and turns attractive.
10 Wu Regret, a theorist of modern opera in China, once said, "Everyone has his own scene, which is volatilized from himself. The sorrow is greater than the death of the heart. The crown of Zhang San is beyond the reach of Li Bian. " Therefore, when writing a composition, we must pay attention to what character we are writing, what kind of character we want to turn ourselves into, how to get into the role from the identity, gender, age and personality of that character, and we must not use our student accent to set others' words. Horace, an ancient Roman poet, said, "You have to laugh before others can laugh. Similarly, you have to cry yourself to cause a crying reaction in other people's faces. " Please think carefully when writing a composition, and let the characters enter the role.
1 1. The title of this composition is well established and the content is true and specific. In particular, the description of characters, whether sensory description, psychological description or action description, is in line with the age characteristics of characters and the specific situation at that time. In addition, the first few environmental descriptions are not idle, but pave the way for the development of the plot. Pointing out the theme at the end is a warning to young readers.
12, this article is about true feelings. Very full and specific, in addition, the use of narrative and lyrical writing can arouse readers' feelings and make people cry.
13 ... fresh and lively, cheerful and clear, and the childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have vitality.
14. The article presents …
15, the article is concise and the language is plain and simple.
The 3 1, … of excellent composition evaluation is practical and contains simple and profound philosophy, which is refreshing and exciting.
This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
3. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
4. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
5. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
6. The article is detailed, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.
7. Close-ups are unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read. This article can read fresh and interesting language and descriptions … between the lines, it is full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece.
8. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article, and it is also the content of this article ... richer and more vivid.
9. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, which is worth learning.
10, the full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
1 1, the full text is easy to understand and interesting.
12, the full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting.
13, pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this paper.
14, the article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.
15, the article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.
Excellent composition evaluation 4 1, the feeling is too strong, not like feeling, but posing and acting by yourself.
2. Emotion lacks depth, and it fails to convey feelings through scenes and to generate feelings from events. Although feelings are hidden in words, they fail to dig deep.
3. Psychological depiction is not vivid and concrete enough to effectively express the thoughts, attitudes, likes and dislikes of the characters.
4. Things repeatedly emphasize the author's point of view from different angles and aspects, and the reasoning is thorough and clear-cut.
5. Quoting classic examples of famous sayings is more convincing and can express the author's point of view more powerfully.
6. Strong arguments, thorough and reasonable analysis and strong philosophy.
7. Rich examples, appropriate materials and detailed descriptions are more convincing.
8. The logical reasoning ability is weak, and the evidence is not conclusive enough.
9. Failure to tell the truth, to tell the truth, to create a true personality and to express a unique individual.
10, sentences are fluent, sentences are fluent, words are beautiful, narrative images are vivid and vivid, and language expression ability is strong.
1 1, the language is concise, concise, concise and forceful, and a few words can convey the spirit of the characters.
12, the language is fluent, detailed and vivid; The meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, with profound implications. After reading it, it is like a lingering fragrance after drinking.
13, the language is lively and humorous, which makes people laugh.
14, the language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent.
15, the language is not fluent enough, and the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling.
16, the sentence is verbose, the words don't convey the meaning, only the details are not omitted, and the words are redundant.
17, the language is too brief and looks like an outline narrative, but it fails to get an outline.
18, the meaning of the text is incomplete, the narrative is boring, dry and lifeless.
19, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.
This article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.
Excellent composition evaluation is 5 1, and the plot development is relatively flat, lacking certain ups and downs.
2. The plot changes are unremarkable and lack of new ideas.
3, the plot is straightforward, there is no suspense, and it seems to be a running account.
The process is very detailed, but the ending is short and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.
5. The concept is unreasonable and the content is full of loopholes, which cannot reflect the truth of life.
6, the plot ups and downs, the conversion is too fast, not coherent enough.
7. The metaphor is vivid, the ontology is similar to the metaphor, and the interest and persuasiveness of the article are greatly enhanced.
8. Properly use the method of comparison and comparison to prove the center of the article through the disparity and difference between things.
9. Taking advantage of parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.
10. Using personification skillfully, the images in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, thoughts and feelings, and reflect the spiritual course of the hero in the text from the side.
1 1, the selection of materials is too popular, unrepresentative, old themes and old ideas, and inconspicuous.
12. Although the events with certain narrative value were selected, the hidden truth of the events could not be deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and excavation.
13, the selection of materials is bland, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and it is difficult to deeply reflect the authenticity of life.
14, failed to reflect the truth through small things, and the expression of "seeing the big with small things" was not skilled enough.
15, lack of multi-angle description of the characters, only narrow themes are selected, which show the characteristics of a certain aspect of the characters unilaterally.
16, able to choose typical themes in life, and the events are more representative.
17, the material selection is novel and unique, not mediocre, and it is refreshing to sweep away pedantry and vulgarity.
18, although it describes ordinary things, but the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is in-depth, highlighting the essence of the incident.
19, although the incident is small, it reflects a deeper truth and has certain universality.
20。 Multi-angle material selection fully reflects the character characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full.
Excellent composition evaluation is 6 1, with vivid and rich language and strong readability.
At the beginning, the ability to attract readers was extraordinary.
3. Touching people with true feelings at the beginning.
4. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text.
5. The selected articles in the novel aroused the readers' desire to continue reading.
6. At the end of the article, it says ... concise but full of flavor.
7. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
8. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off. The article is reasonable in imagination, natural and vivid in narration, compact in structure and natural and coherent.
9. The center of the language is concise, the concept is clear, and the text is distinct.
10, it is really commendable to write the inner activities of the characters very vividly and leave a deep impression on people. The article has a clear head and tail nursing center and a complete structure.