1, the theme is clear. If you want to write a good essay, you can choose a point or a face, or write it from other angles, from the perspective of individuals, from the perspective of the whole organization, from the perspective of the third person, and from the perspective of narrative and prose.
2. The logic is clear. The logic of the article should be clear. It's best to quote a famous quote at the beginning and then introduce the content. The content can be divided into several paragraphs, the subtitle of each paragraph should be prominent, and the highlights should reflect the theme of the topic.
3. if it is accurate. The words used in the article should be accurate, not misspelled, not short of words, and not irrelevant to the topic.
Model essay on "Magic Dental Hospital"
I have a toothache. My father said he would take me to the dentist. I was so scared that I cried and refused to leave. So my father helped me borrow a book called Magic Dental Hospital from the library. After reading it, I know the importance of timely treatment of teeth.
The book says that once a tooth is damaged, different treatments can be taken according to the actual degree of tooth decay. If it's just early tooth decay, you only need to observe it regularly, eat scientifically, brush your teeth correctly and maintain oral hygiene. If the teeth have a certain degree of dental caries, they need to be filled. If the tooth defect is relatively large, braces can also be added to the teeth after filling the teeth.
After reading this book, I understand that once there is a tooth problem, I need to go to the hospital as soon as possible. The sooner I treat it, the simpler the treatment will be. If not treated in time, the teeth will get worse and worse, and may even need to be pulled out. I plucked up my courage and decided to go to the hospital with my father to have my teeth filled. I also decided to protect my teeth with what I learned in books in the future.