The beginning of the composition:

1. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It uses the description of the environment to set off the character's mood, which is very artistic.

2. The beginning is concise and to the point

3. The beginning of the article is novel and has the effect of preempting others. So that readers can have an impression of the characters as soon as they meet them.

4. The beginning of the article is engaging and attracts readers. ...the combination of points and aspects makes the article vivid, specific and appropriately detailed.

5. The language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is highly readable.

6. The beginning is extraordinary and attracts readers

7. The beginning is touching and has real feelings.

8. The explanation at the beginning of the article is very clear, which plays the role of leading the whole article.

9. The article’s selection of materials is novel and arouses readers’ desire to read on.

Composition process:

1. With full passion, it describes...

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2. The key points are highlighted, the details are appropriate, and the content is specific.

3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.

4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and makes people feel warm when reading it.

5. ... told us in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which is endlessly memorable.

6. The narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent.

7. When describing scenery, the language is concise and accurate, and the associations are vivid and emotional, and the scenes are naturally integrated.

8. By enriching the character’s language and actions, you can bring out the character’s ideological quality.

9. The article is both narrative and lyrical.

10. Make full use of the writing method of combining movement and static, supplemented by metaphors, personification and other techniques

11. The young author observes carefully and narrates in an orderly manner

12. The use of some exquisite words virtually adds a lot of interest to the article.

13. The article is elegant, smooth and coherent, especially the characters’ language is humorous

14. The imagination of the article is reasonable and reasonable.

15. Through vivid and vivid language The description makes the readers feel as if they are in a dream.

16. The article has clear clues, prominent themes, and closely revolves around...

17. The detailed description is quite original. Very knowledgeable.

18. Carefully and delicately describe the characters’ language, expression, movements, etc. This is a major feature of this article.

19. The description is delicate, the flavor of life is strong, and the words and sentences are accurate and expressive.

20. The language is accurate, clear and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.

21. The examples are described vividly and concretely, and the words and deeds of the characters are consistent with their respective identities.

22. The article comes from life, so although the language is not very beautiful, it is real and interesting, and the writing is emotional and reasonable

23. The article writes... in detail

24. The language is lively and interesting.

25. Use a lot of spoken language in daily life to make the article more natural and friendly.

End of the composition:

1. The ending just points out the center, the language is simple but profound and thought-provoking.

2. Switch on and off with feelings and end with feelings. This will make the article coherent and coherent, and at the same time make the theme of the article loop back and forth, making it highly contagious.

3. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

4. The implicit ending of the article not only highlights the topic, but also is thought-provoking.

5. Concentrate on expressing emotions at the end, which not only reflects the beginning but also summarizes the whole text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.

6. The vivid depiction of details can effectively reveal the inner world of the characters. This is the success of this article.

7. The article ends with..., it is concise and concise, but its meaning is endless.

8. The sentence that reveals the central point at the end of the article is truly a pen of clarity. The summary is short and powerful.

9. The ending is full of expectations and enthusiasm. The words have been finished, but the meaning is still unfinished.

10. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read, and can't bear to put it down.

11. Although it is a small matter, the author describes it vividly and vividly. The indispensable point-of-view at the end better highlights the theme of the article.

12. Although the story is ordinary, the emotions are sincere, abundant and touching.

13. The ending of the article is unconventional and gives people a feeling of reluctance.

14. The ending ends with..., which is implicit, meaningful and meaningful.

Overall comments:

1. The article is complex but not messy, and can be detailed and focused.

2. The article renders the atmosphere of... fully and appropriately, and depicts the key points of the article in a delicate and vivid manner.

3. ... is realistic and contains simple and profound philosophy. It is inspiring and exciting to read.

4. This article is full of passion, and you can feel the author's love for... from between the lines. The full text is clear in level and the sentences are fluent.

5. The case description is vivid, specific, interesting, and consistent with the previous metaphor... Finally, the author uses a few words to express his emotions towards..., which is touching.

6. The article is coherent and forms a complete image.

7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can capture the main characteristics of things, the length is short and concise, and it is worth reading.

8. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

9. The article is detailed, well-organized, and the content is vivid and concrete. It is an excellent article.

10. The close-ups are unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and fun, and makes you feel cordial when reading it.

11. The article can use fresh and interesting language to describe... The words between the lines are full of the true childishness of childhood, and the laughter is endless. It can be regarded as a masterpiece.

12. Appropriate detail and the coexistence of reality and reality are the two major features of this article. The content is richer and more vivid.

13. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and tactful, simple but not vulgar. It is worth reading.

14. The language of the full text is vivid and accurate, and the plot is exciting and tortuous. It seems to bring readers into a happy paradise, making people smile.

15. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

16. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.

17. Pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination. This is the success of this article.

18. The article blends emotions into the scene, expresses emotions while depicting the scene, and is good at using metaphors to make the article vivid and concrete

19. The article has novel content, reasonable structure, smooth and coherent , naturally accessible.

20. This article is based on real life, the material is appropriate, very innovative, the paragraphs are clear, the transition is natural, full of interest, and highly readable.

21. The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work.

22. Although the language in this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, rich in emotion and true, and it is enjoyable to read.

23. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author has a very deep and thorough understanding of the original text. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people excited and excited when reading it.

24. This composition uses novel materials, wonderful ideas, and vivid language. The fresh breath of life and children's interest are revealed between the lines.

25. The article describes the events of... in the order of their development. The language is relatively fluent, the levels are clear, and it seems enjoyable from beginning to end.

26. The full text has a lively rhythm, fresh language, and is always full of humor and fun. It is endless fun to read.

27. The full text is narrated in a concentrated manner, with no branches or branches, simple and smooth language, and sincere and touching feelings.

28. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, making it full of wit and fun. It is hard to put down after reading it.

29. The author has a clever conception and is good at selecting points to expand on. His writing is full of ups and downs and is thought-provoking.

30. There are many noteworthy sentences in the whole text, which adds some literary interest to the article

Complete collection of primary school composition correction comments

A. The book is beautiful , clean and tidy, just like the streets of a small seaside town, there is no trace of dirt... The regular handwriting is so comfortable to read... Your handwriting is as beautiful as the printed one... I am ashamed that my handwriting is not as good as yours. It looks good...

B. It's casual, but the words look like they were picked out by a cat... The words are not in the middle of the grid, of course they don't look pleasing to the eye... Your handwriting is swaying here and there, is it too windy today? That's why you shaved it like this... I don't believe that your handwriting is not good and it will always be so sloppy... Write carefully and patiently, and you will write better than me...

Content

A. Such rich content is almost as good as what a writer would write... Your essays are flesh-and-blood, and it is a real pleasure to read... Your essays are specific in content, and I enjoyed reading them very much... You must love to read documents, that’s why you wrote so many words...

B. Dry content is like boiled water, without any taste. Add more beautiful words and sentences to make it taste better...not as good as Liu Weiwei Don't you feel a little embarrassed because of the large number of words (or the names of other poor students)... Your composition is like the mouth of a 90-year-old woman, dry and hollow, and her speech is leaky...

Statements

A. Smooth and vivid sentences, like the Lushan waterfall, flowing down, very smooth...The metaphor is very appropriate, showing that you have always been observant and careful...How did you come up with such a clever personification...Rhetorical questions are used in How appropriate here... This exclamation expresses your true feelings at that time... The quotation of ancient poems is just right. I will also use the poems I have learned in my compositions in the future... The postscript is so wonderful that it makes me laugh. It hurts...

B. The composition is lumpy and uncomfortable to read. It's like walking on a bumpy road in the countryside. It's easy to fall if you're not careful... The sentence seems to have been cut off by someone and is incomplete... ...Read it carefully after you have written it, and you will find the inconsistencies... Don't be afraid of trouble, good articles are all made by revising... You can't always rely on others to revise it for you, you must learn to revise every sentence yourself...

Hierarchy

A. The subsections are clearly divided...the subsections are divided appropriately...a subsection tells one layer of meaning, and the paragraphs are clear...

B. The hierarchy is confusing. One section contains so much content that I feel out of breath while reading it... The sub-sections are too few, are you reluctant to divide them into more sections... How many more sub-sections can be divided into the middle section... The first and second sub-sections should not be divided, To merge...this section is not related to the content of the above section...

Details

A. Highlight the key points...The key parts are written in detail, good...what happened Everything is described clearly... Each scenic spot is described in the order of the tour, and the key points are described...

B. Section X is too wordy... I can't understand the composition. What is the key point... What is not the key point should be written simply...

Title

A. The topic is fresh, like spring bamboo shoots, tender and crisp... The topic is very interesting , people can’t help but want to read on... Tell me, where did you come up with such a wonderful title... The title is punctuated (ellipses, question marks, exclamation points, dashes), which is different... I like your interesting The title...

B. The title is the same, and people won’t be interested in reading your composition... Everyone will have such a title, it’s too common... The content seems to be inconsistent with the title. ... Use your brain to find a more suitable title... I think it would be more appropriate to call the title "..."...

Punctuation

A. Punctuation should be done neatly. , I see that you are a serious person... You use punctuation very accurately...

B. No matter how exciting the content is, if the punctuation is careless and random, no one will be willing to read your composition... You have lost a lot of punctuation. , you want me to read it non-stop, suffocate me to death... The punctuation is not good... there are too many punctuations, making the reading jump and jump, like a lame walking.

Road... I hope you will mark every punctuation carefully... You should put a period after finishing the meaning of a sentence... The ellipsis occupies two spaces and cannot be marked in one...

Words of encouragement

This article is better than the previous one, keep up the good work... The more specific and vivid the content is, the more likely you are to become a member of the composition group... Read more, observe carefully and think diligently, and your essay will soon be published in newspapers and periodicals Published... Ding Yishan and Lou Wei are not child prodigies. If they can do it, I believe you can do it too, and you will perform better than them... They are all taught by Teacher Qin, are you still worried that your writing level will not improve...

I insist on reading the documents every night, and this is how I mastered a lot of good words... Nothing is difficult in the world, only for those who are willing... Now the number of words you have studied is much more than before. This is because you write a diary seriously. As a result...don't you want to be an essay star? Develop a pair of "thieves' eyes"...last time your composition was read aloud in class, I would like to express my congratulations to you. Try to write better next time, okay? ...

Don't always worry that you are stupider than others, as long as you do what Teacher Qin asks, your dreams will come true sooner or later... The reason why you can't write anything is because you have put in too little sweat... ...Borrow the diaries and essays of your classmates in the composition group and read them more, they are guaranteed to be of great help to you...

Inspiration never likes to visit lazy people... Be diligent and diligent, and when your name appears in When you read in the newspaper, you will feel that it is worth the hardship...

Complete collection of primary school composition comments

1. The language of the article is very fluent, and it also expresses the teacher's feelings.

2. You are the teacher’s bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and pick a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.

3． Sorry, the teacher didn't understand this paragraph. Are you willing to explain it to the teacher? Thank you.

4. Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. The teacher wants to learn from you. If the material selection of the article is more novel, it will definitely complement the writing. what you think?

5. marvelous! Your article reproduces the straightforwardness and straightforwardness of Northeastern people, making readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing is contagious and contagious. Work hard and create greater glories!

6. Your article is like a slow flowing stream, elegant and smooth. The writing is beautiful, the emotions are sincere and delicate, and it has a personal style. I hope you will continue to pick up the waves of life on your writing journey and make your style more perfect!

7． The writing is sharp, the sources are plentiful, and the foundation is profound. Although the analysis of social issues is still somewhat absolute, the article is still touching with its warmth and frankness. If you work harder to study and think about history books and social commentary, I believe your articles will become more mature and more readable!

8． It is a kind of wisdom in itself for a young man who is not deeply involved in the world to approach a complex society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is casual, seeming to lead readers to wander in the wilderness of the soul. The shortcoming is that the discussion is slightly lacking in edge. You know, the quintessential argument can play a finishing touch and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will become better!

9． The writing style of this article is beautiful and fresh, and it is full of certain philosophy. The article writes that "I" was walking by the sea. The sea not only gave "me" the enjoyment of beauty, but also caused "me" to think and think. It can be said that the sea gave me the space to swim, and "I" breathed life into the sea. , making Dahai a "person" with noble personality power. After reading this article, I feel beautiful and thought-provoking. .

10． Apart from class and after class, school life seems dull and boring, but this article is good at finding the extraordinary from the ordinary, and shows it with gusto: nervous mornings, fighting noon, tired evenings, each time period has selected interesting life stories. The lens is tinted. The fresh and lively language vividly demonstrates the positive spiritual outlook of contemporary middle school students.

11． This article is of high ideological and artistic quality, and makes people think about it for a long time after reading it.

The concept is ingenious and uses contrasting techniques to deepen the theme; the plot is also quite original, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is simple and unpretentious, and the line drawing technique is used. The author's love and hate are included in the narrative, allowing readers to experience and think deeply.

12． The introduction of the father in the article is comprehensive: from appearance to heart, from work to life; the introduction of the father is also focused: the emphasis is on writing about the father's feelings. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father. Work harder and don’t let down your father’s expectations!

13． You can associate snow with the pursuit of life, starting from the details of life, and your innovative spirit is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who said that "plain water" is not the best drink?

14. The quotations of several common sayings throughout the text are just right, using nostalgia as a clue. This reflects your ideology.

15. Your article is very creative - using the form of geometric proof questions to complete the idea. The full text is very literary!

16. The author's ability to control "Xing San Shen Ju" is very strong. The whole article is written in one go, and the writing is like flowing water, giving people a bright and comfortable feeling!

17． As a casual comment, your article is written with quick thinking and rich ideas. The richness of life experience and the delicacy of thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will continue your efforts and form your own landscape in your future writing!

18. You are a very independent and knowledgeable student, and I fully agree with your views. However, if the structure of the writing was more compact, it would be the icing on the cake.

19． This article chooses a brand new angle, allowing your thoughts to run freely here. This is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that through the chaos of worldly affairs, there are always some principles that we can grasp when dealing with the world, so that your thoughts will be deeper, and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".

20. Such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can't help but give people a refreshing feeling. Teachers should really learn from you. Let us promote each other in future Chinese learning, okay? twenty one. Articles are like people, your articles are as simple and open-minded as you are. Your composition skills are very good, which is also the result of your long-term practice. I hope that in the future learning process, you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching and good articles.

22． Writing can speak louder than words, and I think articles are a reflection of your soul. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere to move forward, the crown of success will belong to you.

23. Wen Neng is happy. You should not regard writing an essay as a burden to yourself, but should record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate writing style.

24． It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. As a human being, failure is inevitable, but having the courage to face failure is even more valuable. I believe that gold will always shine. I hope you adjust your mentality as soon as possible and you will find that the sky is bluer.

25． It’s really like “writing like a god”. It seems that you must have read a lot of literature. Such rich content shows your literary skills. It's just that if the materials are adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more exciting. The data comes from the official document writing model website

26. After reading your article, it feels like a stream is flowing in front of me, pure and lovely. I hope you can maintain this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.

27. Composition is like being a human being. It can be seen from your life experience that you are a positive and motivated young man. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really valuable. 28. What a pleasure it is to read your article. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh ideas of your article.

As the saying goes, "When you climb a mountain, you will be full of love in the mountains, and when you look at the sea, your thoughts will overflow in the sea." You are a thoughtful person in life, and you have moved others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.

29． Your elegant and refined handwriting reveals your intelligence and wisdom. Keeping steady and down-to-earth is the direction of your future writing efforts.

30. Careful conception and profound thinking show that you are constantly growing in the world of writing. The road to writing in the future is still long. I hope you can think hard and continue to innovate.

31. Although writing is not something you like very much, you take every step like a snail, insist on writing, and never stop writing. Your spirit is truly admirable, and you will definitely carve out a world of your own with your personality.

32． Although you can live happily in your own world, the development of society has become globalized, so you should invest in collective life with a new attitude and adapt to the development of society.

33. There are always many fantastic stories written in the life of a young man; there are always many magical yearnings in the hearts of young people. This short article is like a small boat full of dreams, carrying the author's innocence, dreams, yearning and just beginning to mature, heading for the distance.

34． Caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. It can be seen from this article "Accident" that in your heart, you not only hold innocence, books and school, but also endless concerns about society. This article has twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.

35. The language is appropriate and romantic, and the context is smooth, highlighting the image of a confidant as a "bookworm" and the feelings of "knowing" and "self" between "self" and "confidant". It is smart and elegant.

36． We seem to have heard a lot about the fragility of life, and it can disappear in an instant. If you are in a field, walking in a forest, stepping on fallen leaves, and looking up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life, and life needs to care for each other. This is exactly the theme of your "Fragmented Chapter"!