1. The beginning must be eye-catching and concise. You can use fixed sentence patterns (such as parallelism and personification), quote famous sayings, compare with others (if some people think so ... some people think so ... but I think so ...), come straight to the point and quote short stories. ...
2. The total score structure is divided into three types: parallel type, contrast type and progressive type. (Take strong as an example) A juxtaposition: There are four kinds: (1) Strong is **(2) Strong can be **(3) We are strong because **(4) Strong requires ** B contrast: positive first, then negative. Say what's good about being strong first, then make a transition in the middle (but ...), then say what's bad about not being strong, and finally sum up the C-level progress (more flattering, with words to write and profound thoughts): what is strong-why should I be strong-what should I do if I want to be strong-what's the significance for real life?
3. Finally, make yourself very literary, quote famous sentences and sigh a few words.
2. Write a 500-word scene composition according to the total score structure and chronological order. As the saying goes, "Five Mountains don't look at the mountains when they return, and Huangshan doesn't look at the mountains when they return." In the summer vacation, my mother and I went to the famous Huangshan Mountain with the group. There are four wonders in Huangshan Mountain: strange pines, strange rocks, sea of clouds and hot springs. The tour guide told us that it is not too late to soak in the hot springs, and the sea of clouds depends on chance. We mainly look at strange pines and rocks.
On the second day of coming to Huangshan Scenic Area, we will officially climb Huangshan Mountain. We got up early, took our cameras and came to the foot of Huangshan Mountain. Because there were many people during the National Day holiday, we finally took the Yuping cableway for more than three hours. I looked down from the ropeway. There are cliffs everywhere, and the peaks stand upright, which is very spectacular under the embellishment of pine trees. I quickly took out my camera and photographed it. After getting off the ropeway, we first boarded the welcome pine with the tour guide. The welcoming pine grows from a big stone and has a tough posture. Although it grew up in a difficult environment, it is still beautiful, strange and lush.
After welcoming pine to replenish our strength, we started our journey over mountains and mountains. Along the way, you can see many grotesque stones, some of which are like the nose of a huge elephant; Some are like the crown on the emperor's head; Some are like pig noses. They either stand on the peak, climb on the hillside, or accompany with pine trees, forming a series of natural mountains and rivers. Soon, we climbed the first peak-Lotus Peak. In Lianhuafeng's shop, I saw the gold medal. My mother promised me that she would reward me with a gold medal when I climbed to the top of Guangming.
Then, we came to the long-awaited scene. From a distance, it looks like a slender gap has been cut between two big mountains, and only one person is allowed to pass through. I was a little nervous at first, but when I climbed the first-class ladder, it was much easier than it looked, and it was not so dangerous. When we reached the end of sight, there was a big stone overhead, which seemed to be hanging in the air and was about to fall. Climb to the top of the sky and you will come to Aoyu Peak. There is a boulder on the Aoyu Peak, which looks like a big fish, hence the name. Then we crossed Yanggong Mountain and went to Guangmingding.
On the way to climb the top, my feet are sore and my waist hurts. I'm sweating and panting. My mother encouraged me to "be bitter, think about the Red Army's 25,000; Tired or not, think about revolutionary veterans. "I finally climbed to the top of the light, at an altitude of 1860 meters. I'm so happy. My mother immediately bought me a glittering gold medal with my name and date engraved on it. This gold medal is not only memorable, but also our persistence and sweat. Looking down from the top of the mountain, it is really "other mountains look short in the sky." ",there is a big China weather station. After a short rest at the top of the mountain, we began to go down the mountain. On the way, we also saw the flying stone in the distance, which is the stone at the beginning of A Dream of Red Mansions.
3. Write a composition according to the overall structure and time sequence of the scene. Looking back, I was standing on the balcony, the sun was shining on my face, and the wind was still cold outside the window.
Suddenly, I forgot the cactus I put outside the window.
Look at it, although it is in the cold wind, it is still strong. The green palm leaves have slightly replaced some soil, and each needle is still so sharp.
This is a cactus that my father gave me. He said it would be especially beautiful when flowers bloom. I don't believe it. Isn't it a flowering cactus? Dad smiled, so he must be able to drive.
In spring, he won't open, in summer, he still won't open, in autumn, he still won't open, and in winter, he may open.
Although the flowers didn't bloom, there were two small palm pages on his big palm page, although I vaguely felt his strength in the cold wind.
I opened the window and brought it in. Oh, honey. I was stung by him and it hurt. Seeing that he seems harmless, it makes me feel a lot that he can give me such a blow.
Looking at him outside the window, I feel much calmer. Maybe my father just wants me to grow up like a cactus, even if there are only two small pages all year round. At the same time, fine acupuncture is as important as being a man.
Thanks to the cactus with ulterior motives. . Ha ha.
You can change it at will. . I can't make it up. . hahaha. .
4. Write a composition (about 500 words) with the total score after the rain.
The rain poured down and moistened the earth. Quietly, the rain stopped and the earth showed great vitality.
A rainbow spans the sky like a colorful bridge. The clouds floated slowly and leisurely. The sun opened the white barrier and suddenly jumped out. The warm sunshine shines on the earth.
Birds dust off the water droplets on their feathers and fly into the air, or fly to the wire to sing, just like the notes in the staff, the songs are crisp and melodious, very beautiful.
There are sparkling pearls on the grass, reflecting the sun and dazzling. When it falls, it will make a "tick-tock" sound, as if playing a cheerful music.
The beetle musician swaggered out of the cave for a concert. He stood in the center of the stage, singing loudly, flapping his wings with rapt attention, and dancing with beetles and butterflies.
Kobanawa grass also intoxicated. Xiaohua smiled and danced excitedly, and the grass kept swaying.
After the rain, how full of vitality, full of vitality!
Going to the seaside for the first time
There are many firsts in a person's life that will be unforgettable and treasured in our hearts.
When I first went to the seaside, I was fascinated by the sea. "Wow-wow", the waves beat against the rocks and splashed crystal water. The waves rushed to the shore, stroking the soft beach and reluctantly returned. Draw a silver edge on the beach and inlay shells. . The sea breeze is blowing slowly, and I am greedily enjoying the charming sea.
I can't wait to get on the inflatable boat, row to the sea and let it float on the sea. I plopped into the water and sat on the swimming ring to play with the water. When you are tired from swimming, you lie on the beach and enjoy the sunshine and beautiful scenery.
After a while, I was full of energy again, building sand castles, picking up shells and opening canals. I made a big love with my feet and used shells as decorations. I lay in love and became the scenery of the beach. I also run on the waves, shuttling between water and sand, feeling how beautiful the world is. I was intoxicated by the sea. I love its magnificent broad mind and charming scenery.
This will be the crystal spray in my heart.
Music Tour The night sky in summer is dotted with stars, and the music fountain in the square in the area is particularly charming. At 20 o'clock sharp, the performance began, the music sounded, the water splashed everywhere, and the beautiful melody changed: sometimes like a blooming flower, the petals stretched everywhere; Sometimes it is like a crystal clear and lifelike water butterfly, flapping its wings and flying around the pool; Sometimes it is like a crystal clear barrier, which makes people intoxicated in the haze. . A piece of music is coming to an end, accompanied by colorful lights, full of poetry and painting. The most spectacular scene-"Two Dragons Playing Column" was presented to us. I saw a water column rising into the sky, and two water columns bent to both sides, like two dragons. Isn't this "Erlong Opera Column"? The onlookers exclaimed in surprise with a surprised expression on their faces. They were all stunned and intoxicated by this wonderful sight. After the wonderful scene, a disaster fell from the "sky"-the "downpour" was coming, which beat us everywhere. People fled everywhere. I was trapped in the crowd and couldn't get away. I personally experienced the taste of "downpour", all over my body. Some people who get wet will twist their clothes and hair, "very busy"; Some boys simply take off their clothes, wring them out, and throw them on, regardless of anything. . Everyone was immersed in a happy atmosphere, and laughter echoed throughout the square. This beautiful midsummer night, this charming music fountain!
Shy spring, like a shy girl, comes quietly. With a gentle wave of her hand, the earth is full of spring and vitality. You see, the earth is recovering, singing and dancing, and hibernating animals sleep late to welcome this beautiful world. The grass sticks its head out of the soil and looks forward to this brand-new world; Willows comb their hair by the stream, and the warm wind blows "flying"; Bamboo shoots are not afraid of difficulties and keep drilling upwards. . The sky in spring is particularly blue, birds are flying happily, and clouds are changing quietly; The stream is exceptionally clear, and even if the road ahead is difficult, he will go forward bravely; The air is particularly fresh, with the smell of rain, which makes people intoxicated in this vibrant picture. The continuous spring rain moistens everything. After the rain, the flowers are blooming with crystal dew, making them more beautiful, ah! Beautiful spring! After the rain, the Beatles "strutted" out of the nest, flapped their wings and stood on the grass with rapt attention, singing loudly, with a mellow voice and beautiful melody, like a spiritual spring flowing out, which was pleasing to the ear. Spring is so subtle, shy and charming, which makes people daydream and irresistible. .
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5. Composition: Write a plant (according to the overall structure of the total score) and write 500 words after observation. It's best to write about fairies. On my balcony, there is a very humble cactus. The cactus's body is like a piece of jade and a cute little hedgehog. It is covered with thorns like steel needles. Don't underestimate these thorns. This is the weapon it uses to defend itself and fight back! I was stabbed by it, and my mother was stabbed by it, which was very painful. My mother tried to throw it away many times, but I refused because I have special feelings for it. I love cactus. Spring is coming, everything is reviving, and a small cactus appears on the cactus "mother", which looks so tender and delicate, as if a gust of wind can blow it away. And its "mother" always blocks the cold wind with her own body, while the little cactus always climbs up. Finally, with the encouragement of Grandpa Chun Lei and the help of Sister Chun Yu, the cactus overcame many difficulties and grew up. In late spring and early summer, cactus grows buds. Strangely, the cactus blooms in "order", and always two flowers bloom together, like a pair of twin sisters and a bow tied on the little girl's head. Cactus has white flowers. Like a beautiful fairy wearing a white dress, dancing gracefully on the jade stage, emitting intoxicating fragrance from the dress. Autumn, the harvest season, cactus grows up, and its use is more! You can cut into pieces and soak them in cool and delicious tea to quench your thirst. You can also eat it. It is rich in nutrition and can be used as a bonsai ... it is really endless, but the most surprising thing is that it can be boiled into a potion to cure diseases. People love gorgeous peony, peony, autumn chrysanthemum and sweet-scented osmanthus in various ways ... but I only love cactus, not only because of its appearance, but also because of it.
Guazhu Lake is quiet at night. Under the cover of night, Guazhu Lake has a unique scenery.
On the calm lake, several boats are paddling around, and the emergency lights at the bow and stern are shining like bright pearls floating on the water. As night falls, strolling on the newly-built Golden Lock Bridge-the walking path around the lake, a burst of breeze mixed with the smell of the lake makes people relaxed and happy.
Although the lake is calm, the shore is very lively. There are many people in the West Coast Park.
Along the way, there were groups of people dancing fitness dance in cheerful music, and everyone's dance was different and dazzling. Amusement projects are definitely essential, including trampoline, shooting gun, self-driving boat and so on.
The West Coast Park has the most people shooting. A young man picked up a gun, squinted at the rake and hit the center with a bang, followed by three shots of bang, bang and bang, which was admirable. Suddenly I smelled the melodious music from the North Shore Park.
It turns out that the famous musical fountain in Ke Qiao has begun. At first, a water column was uneven and slowly sprayed to a height of more than ten meters, like a dragon at sea.
After a while, it turned into a big green ball, shining. Accompanied by the passionate Russian famous song "Jihad", the ball suddenly bloomed, and a series of winding water columns appeared in the middle, as if the fairy descended to the world and sprinkled beautiful flowers with colorful colors.
The best is yet to come! I saw that the water column went straight into the sky and turned into a water curtain, and a water curtain movie was released under the illumination of the light. With the end of the water curtain film of Guazhu Lake, people walked in twos and threes towards the tree-lined path of East Coast Park, and the lush camphor trees on both sides exuded pleasant fragrance, making the night of Guazhu Lake even more intoxicating.
7. The total composition of landscape writing is divided into 500 words ~ ~ ~ Writing landscapes with natural scenery has charming colors everywhere: the first breeze is a delicate season; The first ray of sunshine is the summer when fish jump and lotus flowers bloom, which is a refreshing season; The first piece of golden spread out, is the harvest autumn, this is a lonely season; The first snowflake floated down. It was a cold and depressing winter and a warm season. Naturally, I dress up my world beautifully.
When the spring rain is raining, it always touches my heart and brings me into the world of smoke, fog and sand. That drizzle, like dew, makes me feel the vitality of life. They let me get rid of the shackles of people, let go of my mood, rush in the void, and chase in loneliness.
When the Xia Feng blows gently, the green comes to my face. The mountains are as green as blue, and the water is as clear as a mirror. Wandering among them, you will feel the infinite charm of nature. In my spare time, I like to sit on the windowsill, open the window, let the afterglow of the sunset shine on my face, and let the cool Xia Feng blow selflessly. No matter how much resentment and melancholy I have in my heart, I can let it blow away, leaving only the blue sky in my heart and letting my thoughts fly. At this time, I can't help shouting in my heart: How wonderful life is!
When the autumn moon sweeps across the earth, I always like to lie in bed, turn on the CD player and listen to a cheerful piece of music. Although the autumn rain outside the window and the night sky hung low, my heart was not infected with any sadness.
When the winter snow falls slowly, the lights inside and outside the house are intertwined with falling snowflakes, like a fluttering note, like a beautiful picture, which makes people think. After a while, the children will cheer, make snowmen and have snowball fights. When I think of my childhood, I feel a sense of joy. If it comes to Christmas, this snowflake will become the best gift from nature. Looking at the snow outside the window, with the illusion of expectation, the dream will accompany you until dawn.
Nature is like a gorgeous rainbow, and life is like a cup of rich and delicious coffee. Nature is like a melodious and euphemistic piece of music, and life is like a blue sea. No matter whether life is sour, sweet, bitter or salty, a look at the beautiful nature will make my life full of interest.
Savoring nature carefully, I find everything is so colorful; After carefully understanding life, I found that the world turned out to be so beautiful.
Comments: Nature is fair to everyone. We also like bright sunshine and fresh air. We enjoy the same green vegetation and the same blue sky. However, having fun in it does not mean that you can express it, and you may not be able to gain something. This is the difference between people. After careful observation and profound understanding, the author painted colorful pictures of the four seasons with neat and beautiful sentences, especially the use of parallelism sentences, which showed the young author's extraordinary writing skills.
My hometown is very beautiful. There is a bamboo forest in my hometown. When I was a child, I often went to play in the bamboo forest, and my grandfather always accompanied me. However, I know my grandfather likes bamboo very much. On that day, the sky was blue and birds were flying freely in the air. How happy I am. In my sophomore year, I held my grandfather's hand and jumped around like a bird. Came to the bamboo forest. The air in the bamboo forest is refreshing. A gust of wind blew and the bamboo swayed. The sound is wonderful. Looking around, it is green, which makes people feel very comfortable. Grandpa kept looking at bamboo and lost his mind. I waved my hand in front of him. Grandpa gently pushed my hand away and smiled. I laughed too. I know how deep grandpa and bamboo are. Grandpa took me to the window and let me enjoy bamboo with him. It's still raining, and it keeps hitting the bamboo, making it stagger. I smiled when I saw that bamboo was so clumsy, but I held back when I saw grandpa's serious appearance. After a while, I felt bored and asked my grandfather, "Grandpa, why do you like bamboo so much?" Grandpa was silent for a while, and then said to me, "Don't think that bamboo is so pitiful when it is hit by rain. In fact, it is tenacious. You see, the reason why bamboo grows so green and so tall is because it has experienced many difficulties. It is not afraid of hardship, cold, and will not give in despite the wind and rain. It is still so strong and alive ... I don't understand, but I have some feelings for bamboo. The rain has stopped, and bamboo is still so beautiful. Grandpa picked a bamboo and gave it to me. It is still in my room, and I have kept it well. Now, when I take out that bamboo, I always look at it with rapt attention. I finally understand what grandpa said? Be strong in the face of difficulties, don't be afraid of them.