If I were a reader, I certainly don't want to see those vulgar birthday kisses. What other men deserve to see how sad and desperate men and women are when they are making out (mainly because they don't like embellished descriptions), and they don't like a savage woman suddenly bullying a female pig, and then the male pig hero saves the beauty, and there are men who give gifts and the male pig is jealous and then k each other. There are also two people sitting in a special place watching the stars and the moon set off fireworks and saying that they love you on this rare birthday night. They think it's a special day to give their lives or something. .................................................................................................................................'s deliberately magnified "sadness" can not earn tears, but will make people feel disgusted. Similarly, the same is true of deliberately magnified "happiness". I want to see all emotions expressed in words taken for granted. Don't like melodramatic, don't like melodramatic.

However, this is only my personal opinion, and how to write it depends on the author. Good luck!