One winter vacation, my mother took me to Xiaogan to visit my grandmother. When I arrived at my grandmother's house, it was just dinner time. I thought grandma would bring me a bowl of rice wine and a few pieces of sesame candy to "welcome me", and the "little greedy bug" in her stomach could not wait.
But what I never expected was that grandma brought some big cakes. I asked my grandmother, "Why did you eat pie today?" Grandma said, "Eat, eat, this cake is delicious!" " "I am anxious:" The pie is not delicious, I ate too much at home! Grandma smiled and said, "This is no ordinary pie. It is called' Thousand People's Cake'. " "Dry cake?" I don't understand, "what is a thousand-person cake? How come I've never heard of it, and ... and this pie is very ordinary! What dry bread? " Before grandma could speak, I tugged at grandma's clothes and said, "I don't want to eat dry cakes, I want to eat sesame candy, and I want to drink rice wine!" " Good grandma, good grandma ... "
Grandma immediately became serious after hearing what I said: "Song, do you know why it is called' dry cake'?" I thought to myself: I don't know, and I don't want to know, hum! Grandma is so stingy! Grandma went on to say, "Because it was made by dry hands. First, the farmer's uncle grows wheat. In autumn, who asked the farmer's uncle to cut wheat with a sickle? " Then take it to the mill and grind it into flour. The machine that grinds wheat into flour needs someone to make it, and the material for making the machine-iron needs someone to burn it, and the ironing tools need someone to make it, which is not the point; After the flour is ground, some people pack the flour and need to make big sacks, and then some people carry the flour to the market for sale; The cake seller bought it again. After buying it, it was full of water. Water is filtered by waterworks workers, and the machine is man-made. After completion, the inspector will check and accept, and the pipeline will be installed by the plumber. In addition, there are many processes. This cake embodies the efforts of many people! "
After listening to grandma's words, I think this cake is a veritable "dry cake".
Look at mom, she is eating "dried cake" with relish. I really want to take a bite! "Grandma, give me a cake for a thousand people." I cried, have a taste, wow! The "Thousand People Cake" is really delicious. Fragrant and crisp, crisp and fragrant! I really regret not having it earlier. I really enjoyed this meal!
A cup of tea, a book, a pen, a toy and a dress. Come to think of it, there are countless teas for thousands of people in the world. "thousands of books" is countless; There are countless "thousands of pens", as well as "thousands of toys" and "thousands of clothes", so we should cherish them!
2. Write with a pen.
Senior three | 800 words | others
Writer is a tool for writing and drawing, and it is the first explanation in modern Chinese dictionaries. If we want to say that human history is handed down by any record, it is undoubtedly a pen.
Before the invention of the pen, people used hands as pens, replaced paper with earth, and began to draw bars on it, or draw the first bird and the first tree. Until one day, the ancestors found that there were too many facts to record, such as dates, places, major events, the composition of dinner ... so the pen was invented.
When it comes to writing, the writing brush that has puzzled China people for thousands of years is bound to do its part. One side is fine ink, and the other side is wolf hair. Which is less, an ancient scholar? A brush left a thick cocoon between the fingers of countless ancient people. Some people practiced calligraphy and dried up several tanks of water under the house. Some people soaked a pond with ink, and some people saved five big scorpions with poor handwriting. Yan Zhenqing is heavy and solemn, Wang Xizhi's pen is a dragon snake, and Zheng Banqiao's is an official script. How can a writing brush have such great charm? After thousands of years of ups and downs, the writing brush is no longer a thing, but the sustenance of the soul, the sustenance of the spirit and the symbol of cultural figures.
Until modern times, pen appeared, and contradictions also appeared. People improve their study, absorb new knowledge, new culture and new things, and brush their hands enthusiastically at the same time. The collision takes time as the propulsion body and becomes more and more intense. Finally, the brush failed. So there was the Revolution of 1911, the vernacular of Hu Shizhi, and a small gold-plated pen. Cultural fighters are lost in confusion and hesitation. Are they going forward or staying? Innovation, innovation, when will it be new? Later generations were cruel and tilted the pen, but the pen in their hands became different from before. A bitter war without smoke is not over, and there is no end in sight.
China people follow the golden mean, while foreigners like to use thin quill pens. But can the West, with a history of only a hundred years, compare with the glorious chapter of China for five thousand years? From the small side of this pen, we can see why. Perhaps because I am feudal, I have always despised the manners and manners of foreigners. After all, 5000 years doesn't mean you get up lightly. It's too far from the point. This topic is too heavy for me to move.
Stroke, answer, style, hook, strength, diameter, order, style, pen, pen war, pen debt, pen goes long and snake, so many derivatives, how long will it take to see through its soul?
Some people say that in this era of mouse and keyboard, pens will gradually move away from people's vision. I don't believe it, just wait with that white paper.
There are countless sorrows and endless vicissitudes at the bottom of the pen. Close the title page and suck it.
3. Summary of composition writing methods, I hope it will be helpful to you within 1000 words:
First, careful observation is the golden key to improve the writing level. The article is the product of objective things reflected in the author's mind. To reflect the object, you don't have to observe the objective things carefully. Only by careful observation can we find broken jade from the mineral deposits of life phenomena and grab the shining treasure from the mixed sediment. If you don't master "observation", the golden key to open the door, the "iron gate limit" of the composition will definitely be impossible. Second, reading more and reading widely is the premise to improve the writing level. To write a good article, you must read more books. "Reading is like a million volumes, and writing is like a god." "I am familiar with three Tang poems, I can't write poems and I can't sing." Mr. Lu Xun also advocates reading more books. "You must pick many flowers like bees, so that you can brew honey. If you bite in one place, your income will be limited and boring. " We emphasize that we should not only read more, but also read selectively, and even more, understand the structural skills and language characteristics of the articles we read, and master the composition from them, so as to be more profound and diverse. Third, choosing materials skillfully and carefully is an accelerator to improve the writing level. The requirement of material selection is novelty. The so-called novelty means that the batch should choose something that ordinary people have never touched, or turn a blind eye to it with profound meaning. Once the author writes in a book, it will make people think deeply about exciting materials. The angle of material selection should be small, we should see the big picture from the small place and write the materials in everyone's eyes instead of what everyone wrote. To this end, we must compare, analyze and synthesize various materials in our minds, remove the rough and extract the fine, and transform and process them. Only in this way can the materials be novel. And this kind of positive thinking and repeated deliberation is very helpful to improve the level of composition. Fourth, practicing writing often is the key to improve the writing level. Want to enter the door of composition, make continuous progress, and more importantly, practice more. As the saying goes, "it is better to write one than to read ten articles." This tells the truth that writing practice produces true knowledge. After learning an article, we understand the structural methods and writing characteristics of the article, so we must learn to use these knowledge and methods to practice and make it our writing ability. In fact, we can all practice writing after learning the first text. However, fragment practice is a good way to practice writing, which takes a short time and achieves the purpose of practicing writing. Keeping a diary is also an effective way to practice writing. Keep a diary every day, and then the Russian foundation will be solid. Fifth, diligent revision and repeated revision are the catalysts to improve the writing level. Revision is an essential step in composition and an effective measure to improve the quality of composition. The predecessors said well, "the article is never tired of changing." "The article has changed." Cao Xueqin wrote a dream of red mansions, read it for ten years, added and deleted it five times, and Tolstoy's War and Peace was revised seven times. Mr. Lu Xun advocated that "it is not a pity to read it at least twice after deciding and try to delete unnecessary words, sentences and paragraphs." It can be seen that article revision generally refers to the process from the first draft to the final draft. When repairing, we should do five things: whether the text is fluent, whether the theme is clear, whether the structure is compact and whether the language is beautiful. In short, "the article has changed." Generally speaking, the article is always getting better and better, so we should work hard on "revision".
4. How to write my future pen about the future?
I am already a famous scientist in the future, and I have invented many things. However, among these things, the most popular is the "sleep controller". Next, let me introduce you.
The human brain has a biological clock, which controls the law of human activities, especially sleep. This biological clock allows us to sleep for one-fifth of our lives. If the average life expectancy is 70 years, we will sleep for 25 years, but how much can we do in these 25 years! So, I invented a "sleep controller" to adjust the biological clock. By adjusting the biological clock of the human brain, I reduced the sleep time to only five minutes a day. In this way, humans have enough time to do what they like. The "sleep controller" I invented is made of the latest high-tech materials. It is shaped like a pen with a button on it. As long as you press the button, it will take effect immediately and go to sleep. After five minutes, it will naturally wake up, drive away drowsiness, work, study, play, read books and listen to music efficiently-doing everything planned by people.
Anyway, this invention is a classic. It has made human civilization take a big step forward and become a good helper for people to live, study and work.
The future me
It's 203 1, and here in China, the successful landing of Shenzhou 3 1 is being held in Beijing, the capital, to present an award ceremony for the first female college student in China to board Pluto. Thousands of people have designed the scheme of Shenzhou 3 1 and were selected by the captain to join the space team and become a member of the space team.
She wears two braids, and only those big watery eyes and wide forehead show the intelligence of "Oriental Jade Girl". She doesn't have a bracelet or ring. She only wears a national emblem ribbon around her neck and an elegant cheongsam. Standing on the podium, she couldn't forget her journey.
It was a summer night in 2003. 1 1 years old, she sat by the TV and watched this uncle Yang Liwei go into space. She is proud of him. She is determined to go into space and make contributions to China like Uncle Yang Liwei.
Later, she graduated from Peking University with honors, and he chose aviation. College students, graduate students, master students ... with the increase of degree, their physique is also constantly strengthening. This is because she runs on the playground every day, often goes out early and comes back late, and doesn't care about eating or sleeping at all. Just when he was admitted to the topic of the space team, he chose the worldwide topic "How to land on Pluto". By chance, she was chosen to design Shenzhou 3 1, and she made great efforts to design with contract science. However, she never forgets to strengthen her physique. In 2023, its plan was accepted, and the captain saw her excellent performance and chose her to join the team. In August of 20031year, she successfully landed on the moon. She finally succeeded. ...
People cheered, she looked at all the cheering people, not intoxicated, secretly determined to continue to do something for China.
She is me! She is the future me! Maybe ... but I will fight, fight as I imagined. I firmly believe that I will succeed because my future is not a dream.
The future me
I have just walked through the youth and come to the world of adults. I graduated from Beijing Tsinghua University Literature Department and became an excellent young writer. I have written many science fiction stories and fairy tales. What makes me most proud is that I have become a good friend of the children and won everyone's admiration. At this time, technology can be developed. Helicopters have become common means of transportation. As for the pen, amazing changes have taken place. After the transformation of technology, if you have a word that you can't write, as long as you read it, it will appear on the miniature screen on the pen. I wrote a book, which is more famous than Compendium of Materia Medica written by Li Shizhen. People all over the country are scrambling to read my book. Sometimes, people come to my home to visit me, and many people ask me for autographs. Many publishers offered a lot of gold bars to buy my manuscript, but I couldn't get it. One day, I saw a group of children in the mountains on TV, dressed in shabby clothes, sitting in a mud classroom. At that time, I was moved to tears, and those eyes eager for knowledge pierced my heart. I think: they are all flowers of the motherland, why can't they get a bright classroom? I have so much money, why not help them? I think of a sentence from Lu You: "I dare not forget my country." . I immediately took out a lot of money, brought a lot of books and learning tools, and presented a gold watch that I liked very much. In the future, my heart is beautiful, and in the future, my heart is lovely. Let me do a good thing, let me take a good bath in the beautiful time of my youth.
5. Touching composition (preferably taught) From your question "Touching composition (preferably taught)", I see that you want to know how to write a "touching" composition. Therefore, I will grasp how to be "moved" to talk about my views!
Let me show you a short article first:
touch control
I have to go to school by bus. One day, I got on the bus as usual. There were so many passengers that I finally got a seat. When I arrived at a station, an old man came and stood beside me. I want to give her my seat, but I think, why don't adults let me? That's it. I didn't let. After a while, a girl stood up and offered her seat to the old man. She stood beside the old man, holding the handle of the chair with one hand, because her hand could not reach the handle above. It's hard to stand there.
The bus has arrived at the station. I should get off. The girl got off the bus with me. Just as I was about to leave, I happened to find the girl who gave way limping. Oh, it turns out that she is disabled and younger than me. A disabled child can make way for the elderly, but I am a healthy person. . . . . . In addition to self-blame, more is moved!
Looking at her fading back, my eyes blurred. . .
What do you think of this composition? ! Writing a touching composition mainly focuses on observation and accumulates touching materials. Touching materials generally come from: what you see, what you hear from others, what you see on TV, what you see in books, all of which can be accumulated as materials. In this way, you can use touching materials when writing your composition.
In addition, the writing is not big and can be lowercase. The composition above says give up your seat, which can be said to be a trivial matter. But we can see the big picture from the small picture: everyone has love, and the disabled also have love, so we normal people should have love more.
And in the process of writing, you should write your true feelings. "My eyes blurred. . . . . . "
I believe reading my example, in my opinion, will be enlightening. Can also write touching compositions!
6. How to write a good article? Example: Write a composition to guide students to know many people in life, especially those they are familiar with.
Some of them are hardworking and some are lazy; Some are considerate of others everywhere; Some are always for themselves; Some people are extravagant, others are thrifty ... writing down different types of people around them in words is writing a composition. When writing a personal composition, we should pay attention to the following four aspects.
First, through specific examples, it reflects the ideological quality and personality characteristics of typical characters. Therefore, writers must grasp the typical characters that can best express the quality of characters to write, so as to be convincing and vivid. What can best explain the ideological quality of characters and show the truth of the world belongs to the typical category.
The "vigorous" events are typical examples, and so are the trivial things that seem ordinary but actually contain the unusual qualities of the characters. As the saying goes, "a drop of water can reflect the brilliance of the sun."
Writing typical things is one of the basic elements of writing characters. There is no typicality, the article is unremarkable, and "writing people" promotes true meaning.
The purpose of modeling is to illustrate something. Therefore, students must combine the reality of life when shaping the model, and can't make it out of nothing. Second, look at the character in words and deeds.
A person's language expression is a mirror to show his personality characteristics. As Mr. Lu Xun said, a person's language "enables readers to see people with words." Therefore, a writer must attach importance to language description, choose representative sentences to describe his inner world and express his personality and thoughts.
Language should conform to people's identity. The real language of the characters in the composition is particularly important, and you must never "speak it out" by imagination.
In addition to language, human behavior is also dominated by people's thoughts and feelings. Action description plays a very important role in portraying characters and expressing their qualities. To describe people's behavior, we must carefully observe the movements of the characters and carefully choose the most accurate and appropriate phrases.
Third, it is true to write people with true feelings and true words, and the first thing is "truth". To make people * * *, it is necessary to observe and analyze the characters written.
How to observe and analyze? In addition to judging the language, behavior and appearance of the object, sometimes it is necessary to scrutinize his inner activities. Only in this way can we consistently portray the character.
In the articles we have read, we often see such words: "I think …" "He is thinking in his head …" "The teacher's words have come back to my ears" and "My heart is like knocking over a five-flavor bottle, and the ups and downs are coming together …". These are all descriptions of the inner world of the characters.
With psychological description, the composition appears alive. Fourth, never write about people at the same time, but always describe people's looks.
The content of appearance is very wide, including posture, appearance, clothing, expression and so on. Only by grasping the characteristics of the characters and writing their appearance well can the characters be vividly displayed to readers.
When describing the appearance of characters, we should grasp the most prominent and impressive features. Some students lack true feelings when writing people, so they recite what others have written and use it.
Describe a person's appearance, often thousands of people. What "round face, watery eyes, black hair"
Men, women and children are the same. If students carefully "capture" the appearance of the characters they write, they will find that there are no two people with exactly the same appearance in the world.
The description varies from person to person, and "one thousand people" is boring. People look different, composition must not be like a running account, one must have a lot, from beginning to end.
In fact, the difference between "this" and "that" is often only reflected in one or several main features. Grateful to the teacher: six years of primary school life, as if. Naive laughter and chasing figures are still clearly visible.
However, six years of life will soon pass, and the students are reluctant to part, crying and feeling sad. This is very touching.
The teacher's bright smile reminds me of the scene of practicing calligraphy, that kind of joy, that kind of intimate feeling, just like a ray of sunshine in Gan Chun, touched my heart. Now you want to fire me quietly.
I can't help crying when I feel it. This is very touching.
Teachers are diligent and conscientious, working hard day and night, but after separation, it is difficult to get together again. An accidental meeting, I met her again-the teacher who once nurtured me and taught me knowledge and truth.
Perhaps just a greeting, a greeting, will also make me excited and difficult to calm down. This is also touching.
Touching is a refreshing mountain spring. Drinking the mountain spring washes away the filth in people's hearts. Touching is the rain in the heat, welcoming the rain and understanding the philosophy of life; Touching is white and flawless flying snow, understanding flying snow and entering a perceptual world ... just like a breeze blowing across the sea, just like kissing the blue waves on the beach, that kind of touch, a lingering feeling, always quietly fills life with comfort and enthusiasm! Touched, what a profound word. How beautiful, life flows almost everywhere; How generous, it awakens the fallen and makes the heartless emotional.
Touched, with you, yes, life will be more exciting and colorful ... Thanks to my uncle's purple spot, my aunt's face began to fade day by day. Several hospitals unanimously recognized my uncle as "aplastic anemia".
The doctor's scrawled handwriting on the diagnosis book shocked the whole family. My uncle and aunt are both good-natured people.
My uncle is happy all day. I have never seen him unhappy. I heard that he captured my aunt's heart with his optimistic personality. Living with a happy person is really happy.
I once went to my uncle's house to play. Menstruation took a bath in the bathroom, turned off the light and didn't turn on the shower, so he took a bucket of water. Seeing that she washed silently, my uncle said with a smile, "Wife, you are glad that the washing factory hasn't closed my mouth for a long time."
We say that Auntie is really lucky to greet people with a smile every day. My aunt said half ashamed and half annoyed, "Your uncle is a garrulous talker. I have never seen him write me a word, not even a love letter, wait until he is old! " How could such a good uncle and aunt suffer such misfortune?
7. Writing People's Composition My father (a first-year student writes people's composition) is not big, but he can protect my weak seedlings; He, not gentle, gave me the most intimate care; He, without knowledge, taught me a truth, I am the most human; He is not careful, but he can reveal his love for his children in his brow.
He is just an ordinary man. But for me, it is the most special-dad.
I have little respect for my father since I was a child, and I have always ignored his importance. Perhaps because my father's education is not high, I have never discussed many things with my father, and I have never revealed my feelings to my father.
Only when the light bulb is broken and things are too heavy to move, will I think of my father. At that time, I always hoped that my father could be on call, whether he was busy at work or not, but he always worked hard. But at that time, I didn't understand the caring look in my father's eyes, just took it for granted.
Now that I'm grown up, I finally know how busy my father is at work, and I won't let him pick me up any more. When I walk in the hot sun, I miss the soft sofa and cool air conditioner in my father's car.
I didn't know how happy I was when I was a child, and I knew I couldn't be willful anymore. When I was a child, my father never reached out and picked me up, but stood in the distance, holding my favorite lollipop in his hand and loudly said to me, "Baby, as long as you stand up and walk in front of my father, you can eat lollipops!" " I don't know whether it is the attraction of lollipops or the expectant eyes in my father's eyes that give me the courage to stand up and give me the motivation to move forward. When I finally came to my father's side, my father hugged me excitedly, and I saw a gratified smile on my father's face.
I finally know that what I want is not a lollipop, but a smile from my father. Whenever my father comes home late from work, in the twilight, I can feel my father stroking my hair and tucking me in.
A warm feeling arises spontaneously. It turns out that my father has been protecting me and my mother.
Dad is a man who sticks to his hobbies and never gives in. He insists on taking a cold bath every day, and he insists on going swimming every day.
No matter how cold the weather is all year round, it always persists and never changes. I have never heard my father shout "pain" or "tired". He always wears this strong face, and he smiles at everything that goes wrong.
He once told me: "People must stick to their ideals, no matter how hard or tired they are." From then on, I was no longer afraid of wind and rain, and I learned to stick to everything.
These days, my father is on a business trip again. In these days, I learned to miss.
I am a girl who loves to laugh. Whenever I laugh, I always laugh. What a hearty laugh, happy smile, inexplicable smile … all follow me closely. I will laugh at all ridiculous things, and this kind of laughter will often drag my classmates into the water, attract teachers' criticism, and then attract everyone to blame me for seducing them.
Once in an English class, the teacher taught two words: bus and must, and then let everyone read them. My deskmate couldn't pronounce correctly, so I couldn't help laughing because my tone was blunt and I heard "Dad is dead" and "Mom is dead".
The whole class also burst into laughter under my "leadership". The teacher repeatedly banned it, but he couldn't control it, so that he couldn't lecture. Finally, the whole class was scolded and punished.
The teacher took special care of me when I entered the office, but I was still immersed in what happened just now, and my thoughts suddenly fell to the ground. The teacher kept saying there, I was still thinking "Mom and Dad are dead". As a result, I snorted and laughed, and the English teacher almost didn't go crazy.
Back in class, everyone came to blame me for this culprit. Naturally, I did my duty and retorted confidently, "I love to laugh, and my mouth is on me. I laugh happily." .
Besides, did I make you laugh? I can't help myself. Why do you blame me? "Under this, the students were speechless, I laughed again, also calculate to celebrate what I just said. Come to think of it carefully, I like to laugh like death for two reasons: one is the inheritance of my parents.
Mom and dad are both people who love to laugh. As long as I can remember, I haven't seen them frown and unhappy. Their faces are always sunny, as if all the good things in the world happened to them, so I was born an authentic descendant. The second is the warmth and harmony of the family.
My parents never quarrel. They care about me. The smiles of three people build a happy and warm home, surrounded by laughter. I have no reason to be unhappy! Wherever I go, laughter follows me. I often don't see anyone. Smell me laugh first. Does everyone like to laugh, too? Then let's laugh until the end, because: smile, ten years old; In a good mood, troubles run.
My teacher is not tall, with a pair of kind eyes on his chubby face, and his short gray hair shows his loyalty. He has a strong right leg, but his left leg is completely cut off from below the knee and supported by a polished round stick.
We don't know when and why this leg was amputated. I only remember one time, when he was talking about the legend that The goddess patching the sky made man, he smiled and said to us, "Nuwa's clay figurine was so tired that he picked up the mud with branches and threw it on the ground, and the mud thrown on the ground became a man.
It's just that some people lost their legs and arms because Nu Wa threw too hard. When she dumped my leg. "
There was a burst of laughter in the classroom, but after laughing, every student felt a sour feeling in his heart, and at the same time he increased his respect for Mr. Liu. He stands for hours every day and gives us lectures, relying only on his strong right leg and a wooden stick.
Speaking of writing on the blackboard, he supported the ground with a wooden stick, left his right leg off the ground, turned his body quickly and turned to the blackboard. After writing thick chalk words, I turned to the podium with crutches as the center.
A teacher who is over half a hundred years old doesn't know how many times he has to jump and spin like this a day. And every time he turned around, it caused the students' excited heartbeat.
His lecture was wonderful. The history of the motherland made him proud.
Speaking of national heroes of past dynasties, he.