2.me parecía

3. Change 3. Mayor of Soybean to Mayor of estoy.

4. Change Esperando Alguien Quetiene Lalave to Esperando Alguien Quetenga Lave, because you are not sure who that person is, and you should use the virtual form. Remember, you should add an A to your signature.

5. So love is very important ... Add an article ... El Amor

6. If you want to listen to Esperanto, you can finish it for 3 minutes at 12 o'clock. Change it into what is love ... and then relieve the pressure. Enduce is changed to pordule...cambiarpor is used to exchange anything, cambiar en is used to exchange money and so on. For example, cambiar en dolares is exchanged for dollars.

7. all the medas have been changed to me dan because the subjects are ojos, manos and risas. ...

8. There are many difficulties. antes is changed to frente a, because Antes is before time; In addition, there is an article las in front of dificultades.

9.el sol que brille mi cielo, should be brilla, three people are displaced, no deficiency, only one grandson.

10.halivia, go to H, Alivia. I love you. You mean lost in pain? In the plural, add the article, en los dolores, or you can say I'm killing me.

Change 1 1.es tan perfecto to será better, future tense.

12. Intel is not Intel. Love is a noun. If you love someone here, you should use the verb amar.

13. What do you want to say here? If you don't agree completely, use noestoy acuerdo complement. I don't totally agree. Aprobar is an experiment.

14. Sentimientos Propios má s fuerte should be fuertes, and the singular and plural numbers should be consistent with the nouns.

Queel de Ninguno meno mayor is a smoother sentence, so you can say Queningo de los menore o mayores.

15. My love is the most important thing in the world. What does this sentence mean? Improper collocation, que in the wrong position. It can be said that our love is a part of the world. We really think that love is the best in the world.

16. If amar is not needed, there is no AMA; I love you, I love you. This sentence is a bit confusing. Necesitas and amas are singular in the second person, so the following imperative sentences should also be singular in the second person, and the first one is the negation of imperative sentences. Watch the displacement. If it is not necessary, there will be no Ames, and the last sentence is correct.

It is well written. Have you studied for a long time? Very good ~ very promising ~ make persistent efforts!