Some of the full score essays in 2008. Full score masterpieces 1 For Faith If I were a mountain, I would stand with dignity, let the mountain flowers bloom, the mountain breeze blow on my face, and let every corner be permeated with the language of dreams. Let my faith show itself in the sun. If I were water, I would flow into a majestic flow, allowing boats to sail far away and fish to be happy, letting every stream move forward indomitably, and letting my faith sing with the wind. Faith guides ideals. Facing the solid iron window, I know your inner pain. Facing the empty cell, I know you are lonely and unbearable. Facing the iron chains over your head, shackles and feet, ferocious sharpening of knives, and jackals stroking your sleeves, you cry out in agony, making ghosts and gods cry. , heaven and earth are angry. However, these days, you care about the people and the country. In your sleep, you are still groping in the long history of the motherland. From the descendants of Yan and Huang who dominated the land of China to the domination of the world by Qin Shihuang, you have never left behind. Accompanying the solitary lamp, you wrote and wrote vigorously, in order to let China's thousands of years of history leave its mark on the wheel of time. What power makes you persevere so much? It is faith, sir. It is faith that gives you strength, faith that allows you to persevere, so you can be slandered, ridiculed by the township party, criticized with words and written, the "Historical Records" is created, and history is famous. Sir, you succeeded! The world will always remember your name: Sima Qian. Where can we find the beauty of "the moss marks are green on the steps, and the grass is green on the curtains"? Where can we find the elegance of "there are great scholars when talking and laughing, but there are no idle people when going around"? In this simple and lonely hut, Mr. Cao Xueqin, are you okay? I don't know what makes you still persist. My mind is tired and my body is dull. I thought you would kill yourself with a knife. My tears are gone and my heart is broken. I thought you would kill yourself with a knife. My friends abandoned me and my relatives left. I thought you would go to hell, but you survived and are strong. Like iron, your will is like a mountain. Sir, can you tell me: What makes you so unwilling to give up? What made you create the miracle of "A Dream of Red Mansions"? It is faith, yes, it is faith. Because of your faith, we have the dignity of Baochai, the elegance of Daiyu, the cheerfulness of Xiangyun, the nobility of Miaoyu, the fierceness of Xifeng, the intelligence of Zijuan, and the intelligence of Ping'er. Meticulous; because of your belief, the Grand View Garden can be overflowing with color, and "A Dream of Red Mansions" can shine. It is faith that makes you persevere and gives you success, until the lamp goes out and the soul is gone, until the pen falls and the person dies! The wind blows the petals like bursts of broken years, and the ancient music of Juhuan interprets the gap of the soul, hiding in the depths of dreams and memories. Here, listen to the flowers and darkness singing all the nightmares and all the prosperity. Zhongnier wrote "Spring and Autumn", which is faith; Zuo Qiu, who was blind, wrote "Guoyu", which is faith; Sun Tzu's crux of the art of war is faith. The heart is belief, and the stage is success. The heart leads the stage to the future, and faith guides success and runs into the distance. Build faith, embrace dreams, and move towards success. Brief comment 1. A variety of rhetorical talents. The candidates used a variety of rhetorical techniques in their articles, such as metaphors, parallelism, antithesis, etc. The metaphors were used vividly, the parallels were used vigorously, and the antitheses were ingenious. All these made the language of the article read as if it were flowing on the water. The charm is smooth and the literary talent is high. 2. Learn from side stories and gain a solid foundation. In the article, candidates used examples from ancient cultural celebrities such as Sima Qian, Liu Yuxi, Cao Xueqin, and Confucius to illustrate the role of faith in dreams and success, showing the candidates' broad reading range and rich ideological heritage. 1 Full mark masterpiece 2 For the grateful heart The sound of wind, rain, and exam bells are all in my ears; I write calmly, calmly, and steadily, and keep them in my heart. ——Inscription: "Remember, when answering, you must be calm, calm, and write steadily; don't be impetuous, start with easy things and then difficult ones, and slowly recall the knowledge you have learned in daily life; in addition, don't forget to fill in your name and admission ticket number. If anything happens, just raise your hand and ask the invigilator..." "Oh, mom, don't worry! I know all this, you'd better go back, I'm about to enter the examination room..." "Dang-dang-dang-dang-dang. ——” The bell for the exam resounded over the campus. With the hopes of my parents, the expectations of my teachers, and the blessings of my friends, I entered the high school entrance examination room. The examination room was quiet as thirty people calmly faced the first important test in their life journey and made their first major life decision. Facing the solemn five-star red flag above the blackboard, I seemed to feel that I was about to create a new world, and I would use gratifying results to repay my parents who had raised me up. A feeling of pride emerged in my heart. born. For the sake of that grateful heart, I will also perform well today. At this time, I was very excited, and the scenes from the past clearly appeared before my eyes one by one. When we were young children, because of our weak constitution and poor immunity, our twins each walked the most often to the Maternal and Child Health Hospital, often once a day, sometimes even twice or three times a day. After I entered elementary school, my health got better, but we always didn't let our parents worry. During this period, the road that parents took the most was to the teacher's house. After entering middle school, daily pick-up and drop-off became a must-do for parents. As the high school entrance examination approaches, what my parents do the most is review with my sister and me every day, reminding us how to review the knowledge we have learned, sorting out scattered knowledge points, and encouraging us to relieve our stress. At this moment, they were waiting anxiously outside the examination room, waiting for the triumph of their two precious daughters. All of this strengthens my belief in working hard for that grateful heart.

"Mom, Dad, I love you!" This sentence has been deeply hidden in my heart for a long time. Today finally gave me the opportunity to express it. I want to express my love for you over the past ten years. Our love! Sometimes, I also ask myself: Could it be that God has arranged all this and used this rope of care to tightly connect us to each other? I also asked my parents the same question, "The green leaves are dedicated to the earth, and the sunshine is dedicated to all things." As my parents said, they touched our heads and said, "Mom and dad are dedicated to you, little fool!" It reminds me of a poem by Meng Jiao: "Whoever speaks from the heart of an inch of grass will be rewarded with three rays of spring light"! For this grateful heart, the pen in my hand keeps running - for that grateful heart, I want to hand in a satisfactory answer sheet... Brief comment 1. Fengtou Zhancai. At the beginning of the article, a famous couplet by Gu Xiancheng is cleverly used as the title. The language is very exquisite and condenses the main idea of ??the whole article. 2. Rigorous structure. The inscription comes from my mother's sincere advice before "I" took the exam. It was this advice that made the young author feel the preciousness of her mother's love, so the candidates naturally recalled how their parents treated "me" in their lives in the past. The various caring scenes gave a concrete explanation of the "grateful heart". The article was written from the examination room to the past, and from the past back to the examination room. "For that grateful heart" "I" must behave well, and with a Satisfactory answers will be rewarded, and the ideas will be clear, interlocking, and integrated. (Recommendation teacher Qin Jingshi) Full score composition "When I face the book" When I face the book, I enjoy the fun of reading which page the wind blows. It is really an endless pleasure. Shakespeare once vividly said: "Life without books is like the earth losing its sunshine; wisdom without books is like a bird losing its wings." In Shakespeare's eyes, reading has become such a process that it makes the earth With sunlight, it gives the bird wings. When I face a book, I feel that what I face is not just a book, but the rolling Yangtze River, the vast sea, and the impressive building. Occasionally, I turn a page, and the charming words take me into... The boundless ocean of knowledge, that knowledge has no end. With books as friends, stay away from the sensual and sensual dogs and horses. Indifferentness reflects a person's beautiful qualities, and tranquility reveals a person's beautiful pursuits; using books as friends, invisibly makes people profound, and tangibly makes people behave solemnly. It can be said that after reading for a few days at first, it is easy to regard yourself as a saint; only after reading for a few more days will you realize how shallow you are. When I face a book, my heart will calm down, and I will appreciate the elegant language and rich knowledge in the book. Although I know: "I may not be able to read even a drop in the ocean." But I am not discouraged and will work hard towards my goal. As the saying goes: there are so many books. Yes, when I faced 3 books, I felt how insignificant I was! After experiencing the articles written by literati and poets, I realized how superficial my own compositions were! Books are the eternal fruit of human beings, and books are the eternal treasure in people's hearts. The extinguished torch, the book is a portrayal of the unanimous voice of mankind. When you turn to a good book, you will understand that celebrities also have joys and sorrows, and experience Cao Cao's ambition, Du Fu's unappreciated talent, Li Bai's bohemianness and Tao Yuanming's Taoyuan wonderland, and the joy of reading will arise spontaneously. When I face a book, I will be moved by the aspiration in the book and inspired by the poems written by the literati and poets. I will determined to set sail and reach the other side of success. Turn around, shake your head to failure, and wave to success. When I face books, I feel infinite happiness. Comments by famous teachers are well-conceived and unique, and their expressions are lively and smart. First of all, it is well conceived. The whole article adopts the method of parallelism at the beginning of paragraphs to put forward the author's unique feelings about his reading life. This writing not only plays a role in bringing up the following for each paragraph, but also makes the paragraphs echo each other, with clear levels and rigorous structure. Secondly, the language is beautiful, the writing is elegant, and the literary talent is high. The wording in the article is vivid and accurate, and the literary talent is high-spirited, which shows that the author has rich reading experience and rich language accumulation. The writing style of the article is proficient, description and lyricism are combined, and rhetorical techniques such as metaphor, personification, and parallelism are used flexibly and successfully, making the article full of passion and appeal. Full score composition "When the wings gradually become fuller" The bright sunshine is projected on the boundless sea. In the distance, on a dangerous cliff, a goshawk shakes off the dust all over its body, spreads its wings, and flies like the wind. Facing the sun, it disappeared into a golden glow. The reason why the eagle can fly high is because its feathers are plump and its wings are hard. It is because it has accumulated enough self-confidence after countless attempts. It can be seen from this that when the wings gradually become fuller, they have to withstand tempering. Chen Jingrun, a famous contemporary young mathematician, showed extraordinary mathematical talent in middle school. When proving "Goldbach's" conjecture about the world's mathematical problems, he often locked himself in a room and studied with concentration. Whether it's cold winter or hot summer. He used his success to tell us: as your wings gradually become fuller, don’t forget to do down-to-earth calculations. The Qing Dynasty novelist Pu Songling started collecting novel materials when he was young. He often came to a big tree near the market and laid out a piece of cloth with a cigarette rod and a cup of tea on it.

Whenever pedestrians passed by, 4 he would respectfully invite them to have a rest, have a sip of tea, smoke a bag of cigarettes, and then ask them to tell some folk myths and stories, and record them himself. This happens day after day, year after year. It was not until he was in his forties that he finally completed the creation of "Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio". He told us with practical actions: when your wings gradually become fuller, you must have the spirit of diligence and humbly asking for advice. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. When our wings gradually become fuller, we must guard against arrogance. Zhao Kuo was the son of the Chu general Zhao She. He had been familiar with the art of war since he was a child and talked about military theories. Even his father, the famous general Zhao She, could not stop him. The arrogant Zhao Kuo thought he was proficient in the art of war and invincible, so after Zhao She's death, he boldly asked for military service to replace Lian Po, a general who was as famous as his father. However, Zhao Kuo, who was only good at talking about the art of war but had no actual combat ability, ruined Zhao's 400,000 living young soldiers. The lesson of "talking on paper" warns us: when one's wings gradually become fuller, a person is most likely to be arrogant. Pay attention to hard work, and when our wings gradually become fuller, we will enjoy the fun of soaring in the sky. Strengthen the foundation, and when our wings gradually become fuller, we will appreciate the majesty of the mountains and the breadth of the sea. Be confident, and when your wings gradually become fuller, learn from the older generation with an open mind. Success is just ahead of you in life. Under the sun, in the mountains and forests, and on the road of life, I see my wings gradually becoming fuller, and a spirit of fighting against the storms of life gradually arises in the high end of my heart... The comments of famous teachers contain the principles of life and convey the way of being a human being. This article has an extraordinary momentum, showing readers a touching picture at the beginning. After reading it, we feel that the author is not writing about the laws of nature, but showing people a kind of natural principle and a kind of revelation of life. This is not the case for humans, from the lower beings in nature to the primates of all things: when the wings gradually become fuller, it is also the time when it is easy to lose oneself. Life must rely on persistence to achieve perfection. There are positive and negative examples, which are indeed enlightening. People think deeply. The overall feeling of the article is relatively good, and the language expression, rhetoric and expression methods and the use of writing techniques are relatively successful. This shows that the author is diligent in writing practice, has good writing habits and the basic skills of conceiving and writing. The expression of emotions is also natural and true. The topic is clearly pointed out at the end of the article, which is powerful and expresses the full meaning. Full score essay "When Disaster Strikes" May 12, 2008 at 2:28 pm was an extremely sad moment for China. A magnitude 8.0 earthquake occurred in Wenchuan, Sichuan. The shock spread to most parts of the country and also touched the hearts of hundreds of millions of Chinese people. When the disaster strikes, the shocking scenes make us cry, and the affectionate words of comfort move us! Among them, there are Prime Ministers of the Republic of China and Japan who went to the scene of the severe disaster for the first time to direct the disaster relief, and others who worked hard without caring about their own lives. There are people's soldiers who save lives under dangerous walls, there are medical personnel who save lives and heal the wounded and sacrifice their homes for everyone, there are ordinary people who care about us thousands of times, and there are people from all walks of life who generously donate money and materials...the most touching thing. , is when disaster strikes, regardless of one's own comfort, one has to rescue other victims. And our teachers, when disaster strikes, they transform from engineers of the human soul into the loveliest people in the new era. They fulfilled their vow of "everything for the students" with their actual actions. In this moment of separation, in the moment when their souls shined, and in the silent mourning of hundreds of millions of people, they showed us the most beautiful things in human nature. one side. Tan Qianqiu, Lian Rong, Zhang Mia, Gou Xiaochao, Du Zhengxiang, Wu Zhonghong... Let us remember these names, and at the same time we should learn a great spirit from them. When disaster strikes, I also realize the truth that "human nature is inherently good." Our country has a population of 1.3 billion. On weekdays, there may be some disputes or contradictions, but in the face of the Wenchuan earthquake, all Chinese people involuntarily turned their attention there. At that moment, "Wenchuan" was no longer just a county town, it had become a place that the whole Chinese people cared about. Feelings that were not there on weekdays were awakened again, and some things that seemed to have been gradually forgotten were gradually restored. The Chinese people have allowed the world to see our unity and our strength this time, and they all say that "a nation thrives through adversity." When disaster strikes, we prove this truth with our actions. We are not afraid of natural disasters, and hundreds of millions of people Let’s work together to defeat it! We have a good government that is dedicated to the people, we have soldiers who are dedicated to the people, and we have a backbone that cannot be crushed by any difficulties. What else do we have to fear? In this disaster, the most victims were our students of the same age. While we feel sorry for them, we also see hope from the survivors and those of the same age who were killed. Having said this, I suddenly remembered that someone once said that people born in the 1980s and 1990s are no longer good. When disaster strikes, we use our actions to prove that this statement is unfounded. Although we have not experienced as much as our predecessors, we have a sincere heart. This heart has great appeal and appeal, and it can unite many equally kind hearts together! Therefore, let’s leave our motherland’s future to those born in the 1980s and 1990s with confidence! We will never let our motherland down! Comments from Famous Teachers: The material is informative and touching, and the writing methods combine narration and discussion in various ways.

The author obviously knows a lot about the story of the Wenchuan earthquake and has abundant materials at hand. Typical and touching examples are freely connected in the author's writing, with appropriate wording, accurate expression, specific examples, and touching scenes. It is not an easy task to be able to accurately list so many stories in the examination room, and the characters, deeds and names are accurate. It reflects the author's strong ability to control language and process materials. The expression method is a combination of narrative and argumentation, the arrangement of materials is detailed and comprehensive, the paragraph setting is flexible and changeable, and the writing techniques are proficient and reasonable. Either express one's feelings directly, or indirectly express one's emotions through events, all of which are used appropriately; the words between the lines reveal more heartfelt praise for heroic figures and heroic feats, as well as an irrepressible sense of pride and historical responsibility. 6 Full Score Essay "When Learning to Accept and Change" In the face of failure, pessimists will only sigh, while optimists will accept it with a smile; in the face of failure, stupid people will only choose to escape, while wise people will take the initiative to change their destiny. Xiang Yu did not accept failure, so he left to future generations the tragedy of a dying hero; Cui Jiufeng failed to face reality, so he left people only the despair of a pessimist; Beethoven accepted the reality of deafness, so he left behind People's brilliant and immortal masterpiece; Zhang Haidi accepted the challenge of fate and fought against fate with courage unimaginable by ordinary people, so her body shines with dazzling brilliance. Facts tell us that the past is a foregone conclusion and cannot be changed. We can only firmly grasp the present and bravely create the future. Therefore, instead of staying in the sighs of yesterday, it is better to take one more wonderful walk, listen to more touching things, see one more beautiful scene, and think more about happiness while you can still walk, listen, see, and think... …If you can’t walk, you can’t look, you can’t think, how can there be hope? How can the status quo change? Science tells us that truth has its own atmosphere. Lincoln once said: "Many of the 'impossibles' in this world only exist in our imagination." Is the necessity of the present necessarily the necessity of the future? Everything is in your own hands. How many painful failures has China experienced in modern history? These failures brought down many people, but also brought up many people, and even made the success of the Chinese revolution possible. When we learn and accept change, we know that failure is not terrible. The reality does not have many opportunities for us to lament, because if you dare not face the reality, if you change the reality, you will lose the cornerstone; without change, you will lose hope for the future; without hope, the road will disappear under your feet. Some people say that 80% of life is always spent doing 20% ??of the things, and they are secondary. But when we learn to accept these small, insignificant moments, we will have more time to change the path of life and create the glory of life. When we learn and accept change, all we leave behind are the solid footprints we have stepped on. Comments by famous teachers: Typical arguments are rigorously discussed, and the language is vivid and touching. The importance of argumentative prose is to combine it with reality. In particular, it must be based on the actual facts of people around you, so that you can make a correct argument and make readers resonate. This article begins with a summary of the facts, making a lofty argument, and then follows up with typical people and typical events, which is highly persuasive. Judging from the uniqueness of the argumentative essay, the arguments of this article are correct, the arguments are typical and representative, and the argumentation process is rigorous and accurate. The paragraphs are arranged in a way that the first three paragraphs are factual arguments and the last three paragraphs are theoretical arguments, which conforms to the requirements of general argumentative essays. Although the article is an argumentative article, the language is prose, lively, flexible in expression, and full of appeal. The author said, "Instead of staying in the sighs of yesterday, it is better to take one more wonderful walk, listen to more touching things, see one more beautiful scene, and think more while you can still walk, hear, see, and think." Happiness...if you don’t move, you don’t think about it, how can there be hope? How can there be any change in the status quo?” This left a deep impression on the marking teacher. 7 Full Score Essay "When Saying Goodbye to Junior High School Life" The day after tomorrow I will leave this building that I have been with for three years and leave my junior high school life. On the last day before the high school entrance examination, everyone was feeling down and no one was interested in studying. Some students moved their books home early, and we exchanged words of affection. I remember leaving messages to each other like this three years ago, saying goodbye to six years of primary school. Although everyone just wrote a few words and did not say "goodbye", so everyone really never met again. Today, three years later, when everything happened again as before, everyone invariably speculated that it would be like the farewell three years ago, and that we would really never see each other again? In the first grade of junior high school, he was stubborn and simple, and he worked diligently to be the good boy in the teacher's eyes every day, holding textbooks and pretending to study within the sight of the teacher; in the second grade of junior high school, he was crazy and confident, and began to secretly like some celebrities, and began to pay attention to those who were handsome. Some boys; in the third grade of junior high school, they were preoccupied and sentimental. They started to write diaries, and started to study really hard. They secretly planned what kind of university they would go to in the future, and calmly said that they would definitely go here or there in the future. Such a fulfilling and wonderful three years, such a stubborn and stubborn three years, such a warm and unforgettable three years, have just passed.

We can't go back to those precious innocence and simplicity - those days when we lay on the grass and looked up at the sky and talked about our ideals, those days when we looked for the sun to warm ourselves, those days when we were so cold that we hid in bed and shivered, those days when we were The days when we are in the classroom and our hearts are filled with helplessness outside the school, the days when we stay together even if the sky falls, we have to go crazy for a while before talking, the days when we look at the square sky outlined by the frame of the window and have endless fantasies, we can never go back. Coming. They are all things that have passed away that I cannot protect in any way. They are all the memories that have been left in my heart for the past three years and the topics that I want to say when I am about to say goodbye but don’t know where to start. They appear in my mind one after another. The scene will soon fade away. Now, I am no longer that little girl with an extreme personality and a weird temper that is inhumane; now, I am no longer a little girl who knows that she has rebelled but never admits her fault; I have long grown into a person who understands right from wrong and knows right from wrong. An ideal middle school student. In the past three years, all the love, all the hate, all the wet diaries, all the tears and laughter, all the unforgettable scorching years, disappeared together in this prosperous and separated day. Goodbye, my junior high school career! Comments from famous teachers affectionately recall the past, childish and sophisticated. The two-in-one article is titled "When Farewell to Junior High School Life", but it does not stop at the farewell "ceremony", but affectionately recalls with readers the past three years. Every bit of what happened, and focus on the summary memories in the third paragraph. In fact, this is one of the commonly used methods of realistic recall prose, and more importantly, it is lyrical, expressing the nostalgia and unforgettable life of three years in junior high school. The article shows readers the true thoughts of a childish girl. Her growth process is clearly displayed in front of people, making us feel valuable and worthy of cherishing. The article seems mature. From the last three paragraphs, it is easy to see that the author is very experienced in using language and has basic skills. So this is also a good first-class examination essay. 8 2008 Wenzhou City High School Entrance Examination Chinese Composition "It's Nice to Rain" Full Score Essay Example: It's a rainy day, it's so nice. Early in the morning, I opened the curtains and saw that the windows were covered with water drops; ah, great, it's a rainy day again. . It rained continuously for ten days, half a month, or even a month. The house was filled with wet clothes like tens of thousands of national flags, and the walls and floors were steamy. I didn't complain. Rainy days always take me to another place, where I can enjoy my happy childhood again. At that time, in my hometown in Yongjia, Zhejiang, I was only six years old, sleeping in the warm arms of my mother. At dawn, I felt relieved when I heard the patter of rain on the back of the tiles. Because the long-term workers don’t go to the fields on rainy days, my mother doesn’t have to get up early to cook. She can lie in the hot bed for a while longer. I couldn't bear to sleep anymore, and I wouldn't let my mother sleep either. I kept asking her to tell me stories. My mother closed her eyes and told me a story about a rainy day: There was a blind man who had no umbrella on a rainy day. A passerby saw that he was pitiful and sent him home with an umbrella. When the blind man got home, he said that the umbrella was his. He said that his umbrella had two ribs tied with twine and a hole in the handle. That's quite true. It turned out that he had touched it with his hands as he walked. The umbrella owner smiled and gave the umbrella to him. I said this blind man is so bad! My mother said it wasn't bad, it was because he was too poor. The umbrella owner thought that he really should have an umbrella, so he gave it to him. In the dim morning light, I looked at my mother's face. Her forehead was square, her eyebrows were thin and long, and her eyes were formed into a straight line. My first teacher said that the Bodhisattva has kind eyebrows and kind eyes, and my mother must look like the Bodhisattva. The rain is getting heavier. As soon as my mother got up, I got up too. Without bothering to eat breakfast, I put on my uncle's old leather boots and played in the yard in the rain. I floated the small wooden boat carved for me by Uncle Arong in the ditch. In the middle sat the red "cloth girl" that my mother had sewn for me. The hydrangea petals swirled around the small wooden boat and flowed forward together. It was raining, so the long-term workers were squatting behind the big barn and pushing Pai Gow instead of going to the fields. I held the little cat in my arms and sat in Uncle Arong's arms, waiting for Uncle Arong to peel off the fragrant and crispy fried beans and put them in my mouth. Eat sesame candy when you’ve had enough beans, and tangerines when your mouth is dry. A lot of coppers were pushed to the east for a while, and to the west for a while. It’s just as fun whoever wins the round, I just want it to rain hard. The teacher comes late on rainy days. He has beriberi and it is inconvenient to wear spiked shoes to walk along the field path. When the teacher asked me to learn Chinese calligraphy, Arongbo would go and tell him: "Xiaochun has a stomachache and is going to bed." The teacher would not come to me with an umbrella. Mother is fine as long as I don't pester her. It was a yellow plum day in May, and everything was sticky. My mother walked in and out complaining, but my father sat on the porch with a Yixing teapot and watched the rain. There are various flowers and trees in the yard. After the rain, the new green branches spread their wings playfully, holding the delicate flowers. My father lit them with a dry pipe and told me that these were lilacs and that one was a foot red. Dahlias and gladioli are competing to bloom, and mignonette exudes a faint fragrance. The tall magnolia tree next to the wall was in full bloom. It faded quickly on rainy days, so I had to climb up quickly to pick them. I picked full baskets and sent them to my neighbors. The water drops on the magnolia leaves are fragrant. The drum singer would always find his way in through the back door of my house on rainy days, sit on a bench in the kitchen, and sing a section of Qin Xuemei's tribute to mourning, and Zheng Yuanhe's imitation of a beggar. Mother was cooking and listening. I sing in the hall at night and invite all the neighbors to listen. A bright gas lamp was lit in the center of the spacious hall, making a hissing sound.

As soon as the gaslight 9 turned on, I felt like I was doing something happy, and I felt indescribably happy. The rain was falling harder and harder, and Mr. Blind Man's drum was beating harder and harder. Singing Meng Lijun and Qin Xuemei, my mother and my fifth uncle cried with tears in their eyes. I just ate fried rice cakes and peanut candies. But my father quietly slipped into the study to compose his "Tang Poems". The typhoon season in August and September brings the most rain. There were no weather reports at that time, and forecasting the weather depended on experienced long-term workers and my mother looking up at the sky. When the clouds grow fur on their feet and fly northwest, they know that a typhoon is coming. The millet piled up like a mountain under the corridor will become moldy if it is not exposed to sunlight for a few days. The mold on the millet is like grains of green koji. My mother asked me and the helper to pick out the koji one by one, otherwise there would be more and more. This job is really fun, so I hope that the weather will never get clearer, and there will be more and more koji, so I can pick koji from the millet every day. No need to study anymore. If I never grow up, I can always be immersed in the joy of rain. But who can help but grow up? I went to Hangzhou to study in middle school. On rainy days, I felt a sense of desolation and loneliness. Once I was wandering by the West Lake in the rain. I stopped and stared at the blue jade-like lake water and the sloping plum blossoms, but I heard the melodious flute sound in the Crane Fang Pavilion. The flute player walked towards me slowly and whispered to me: "My best friends in life are plum blossoms." I also smiled and pointed to the lake and said: "Look at the plum blossoms waiting for their best friends." As our clothes got wet, we supported each other. The umbrella returns. That was many years ago. The sound of the flute was low and distant, but I could still vaguely hear it, in the rain... (2) The full-score Chinese essay "The Stage of the Heart" in the 2008 Jinhua City, Zhejiang Province High School Entrance Examination There is a stage in everyone's heart. As big as the heart is, the stage is as big as it is. ——Inscription Maybe you just enjoy the love of your parents as a matter of course, and never pay attention to the increasingly gray hair on their temples; maybe you just use your extraordinary wisdom to defeat your opponents in the mall. , or even bankrupt. At this time, you will say, "This is competition", but have you ever thought that this will attract more "eyes on you". Maybe you cheated and deceived just for your own petty profits. In the end, everyone betrayed you, but you happily indulged in the "trophies" you worked so hard to get. Maybe... maybe, you have always been a solo dancer on the stage in your heart. The universe exploded from a tiny particle. From then on, a beautiful earth appeared in the vast sky. Human beings appeared and multiplied. They gradually developed from the primitive era of eating hair and drinking blood, forming society and having civilization. However, the "individual" nature of a person determines that he cannot only see others and not pretend to be himself in his heart. 10 He will also have selfish desires. However, things often have a "degree". If people always live in a group and always only have eyes for themselves and do not leave a place for others to stand, then they will always live in "self" until they are alone. Die. The ancient emperors and emperors had exclusive power in one body. However, if he did not have the courage to "accommodate all rivers and be tolerant, he is great" and if he did not keep the people in his heart, then he would probably be "a boat that capsizes the water". And we modern people should be even more like this. After all, we don’t have the exclusive power to respond to everything. We always have to live among the crowd. We always hope to be cared for by others. So, don’t be that solo dancer, see yourself and see others. Leaning on the railing and looking back, we get what we paid for, and it doesn’t matter what we give or gain. As long as we have others in our hearts, we will have no regrets; leaning on the railing and looking out, we will get what we will do, and what we see in our eyes will be in our hearts. It doesn't matter what you hide, as long as you see yourself and see others, you will feel no regrets.

There is a stage in everyone's heart, and for dancers on it, it depends on how big the stage is, and how big the stage is, depends on how big your heart is!