Description is an important part of character description and plays an important role in revealing the character characteristics of characters.
Important role.
Appearance description includes static appearance description and dynamic appearance description. How to put the characters outside
What is the description?
First, static appearance description: it is to describe like a painting or a photo.
The appearance of the whole character, including the description of the character's appearance (face appearance) and figure (height and figure),
Clothing (clothing), age, gender, etc. When describing the static appearance in detail, we should pay attention to
The following points:
(1) We should grasp the unique appearance characteristics of the characters and describe them in detail.
Different age, sex, personality, occupation, living environment and living conditions have different personalities.
The appearance will be different. Static appearance description, although including many aspects, is by no means equal to.
To cover all aspects, it is necessary to grasp the distinctive features of the characters' own appearance and make a specific description.
Be sure to write out who looks like who (that is, according to the text, you can find the corresponding person smoothly). So that we can read.
This writer left a deep and vivid impression on people. Specific methods:
(1) Pay attention to the facial features for specific description. In this respect, we should pay special attention to "painting"
Eyes-write the heart. "Mr. Lu Xun, a great writer, once said," Draw a picture with great economy. "
A person's characteristic is to draw eyes. I think this is absolutely correct if you draw all the heads.
Hair, even if painted realistically, is meaningless. "For example:
Teacher Mu's eyes are double eyelids, and his black eyes are round and big. At first glance, there is nothing.
Yao is special, but if you look closely, Mr. Mu's eyes can still talk!
This description of the appearance is only two sentences, which write out the understanding characteristics of Teacher Mu.
(2) Pay attention to the characteristics of clothing and describe it in detail. People with different customs, hobbies and temperaments.
Clothing is often different. Therefore, it is more economical to grasp the characteristics of clothing and describe it in detail.
Another important way to show a person's characteristics. For example:
He is in the kitchen, with a round purple face and a small felt hat.
The silver collar shows that my father loves him very much and is afraid of his death, so he made a promise before the Buddha.
May the heart trap him with a circle. ("Young Runner")
A few words not only describe the appearance of the characters, but also show a Shaoxing in Zhejiang at that time.
With local conditions and customs, I wrote my father's love for the leap soil at the same time.
Grasping the unique appearance characteristics of the characters and describing them truly and selectively can make the pen
The characters are lifelike, achieving the effect of seeing people as if they were alive; Can effectively avoid the appearance description of "thousands"
People's side "(all" high nose, big eyes, double eyelids, a smile and a dimple ") now.
Elephant.
(2) to describe in order.
Appearance description should also have a certain order, first think about what order to write before writing.
Then write one by one. For example, we should write about a person's appearance from two aspects: appearance and dress.
If the description of clothes is inserted into the description of appearance, it will confuse readers. Too messy
Appearance description can't leave a deep impression on readers. What should we do?
(1) in the order from the whole to the part. That is, first describe the whole picture of the characters, and then describe the characters.
Local "close-up". You can write the figure of the character first, whether it is tall, burly or thin.
Let's get started, and then selectively describe the head, body, limbs, etc. To write a character's face, you can first write what the face looks like as a whole, and then write the forehead, eyes, cheeks, nose, mouth,
The chin and other parts are selectively described. For example:
In the snowstorm, a veteran, sitting on the ice cliff, did not move, like a statue.
He was covered with snowflakes and looked very calm and natural. He was wearing a shabby single coat and cloth.
Fragments stick to the body like dead leaves. (Monument)
This kind of appearance description first describes the whole picture of the old soldier as "like a statue" as a whole, but
Then describe his expression, dress, clear and lifelike.
(2) According to the order from the part to the whole. That is, describe the obvious process of some parts first.
Characteristics, and then write the whole picture of the characters. For example:
The long prison life made my brother look pale and emaciated. He has a big head and a small body.
Friends love him very much and call him "radish head". ("My Brother" Radish Head ")
This appearance description first describes his face, head and body, and then describes his overall image.
A "radish head" is orderly, concise and vivid.
(3) In the order of different aspects. That is, from different aspects such as appearance, figure, clothing and age.
Surface, selective description. For example:
A pair of sparkling eyes on a bronzed face and white on a pointed chin.
Beard. He is tall, broad-shouldered, and speaks like Hong Zhong.
Loud and clear, when you walk, the earth shines. (Grandpa Buffalo)
The description of this appearance is in the order of "appearance → figure → sound → walking posture".
Specific descriptions and vivid characters are vividly displayed on the paper.
Second, dynamic appearance description: it depicts the expression of characters in a specific situation. mankind
The feelings of joy, anger, sadness and joy, and the lively, dull, impatient and quiet character will all be in God.
It's on your face. Therefore, dynamic appearance description can reveal the gender of the characters better than static description.
Lattice characteristics.
When describing the dynamic appearance of characters, it is best to combine the static appearance description and language of characters.
Match words with deeds. This writing is not only concrete, but also effective. For example:
Ironman zheng big eyes, "oh? ? Cough! " He shouted to the driver, "Turn around and go back!"
(Recalling Iron Man)
These two sentences combine descriptive expression ("eye-opening") with descriptive language, which is true.
In fact, it shows the scene that Iron Man was extremely surprised and eager to apologize to menstruation after learning the truth.
When writing character notes, we often describe the language of the characters. Because language is the "gateway" to the soul,
Language description is an important means to directly express the mental outlook of characters and make them "live". this is
We need to master the methods of writing and writing specific characters' languages.
How to write the characters' language well and concretely? The following passage will give us a lot.
Tip:
I cried, cried, and heard someone come in. Looking back, it turned out to be my stepfather, so I put
Turn your head to one side. He sat down beside me, stroked my head with his hand and said kindly, "CoCo Lee,
I understand how you feel. It's not your fault. If I do anything wrong in the future, just ask.
Don't keep it to yourself. However, I believe I will be a much better father than you think. "
After listening to these words, I opened my mouth to say something, but the words shrank back to my mouth.
(1) The description language should be true and accurate, and conform to the identity and characteristics of the characters.
Because of the age, gender, personality, experience, occupation, education level and ideological consciousness of the characters.
And so on, so the language style and characteristics must be different, just like everyone's.
Looks the same. The purpose of language description is to reveal characters and create vivid characters.
Elephant. Therefore, the description of language must be true and accurate, in line with the identity and characteristics of this character.
Point. This is an important prerequisite for writing characters' language. The little author in the example paragraph did a good job.
At this moment. The language she used to describe her stepfather was reasonable and suitable for the situation at that time.
Sincere and frank, unpretentious, very in line with the identity of working people; Understanding, full of caress
Love fully embodies the characteristics of working people as human beings.
When students describe the language of characters, their favorite mistake is "speaking with one voice", or not.
Look at the object of writing, take it for granted, use language to describe the little brother to describe the grandfather, and use language to describe the old milk.
The language of milk is used to describe little girls, the language of intellectuals is used to describe working people, and so on.
In fact, it's not the characters you described who are talking, but what you designed. this is
Wrong.
(2) To describe the language, we should not only write clearly what the characters have said, but also write how the characters are.
I did.
When describing the characters' language, we should not only pay attention to writing clearly what the characters have said, but also pay attention to writing concretely.
What do the characters say-voice, intonation, manners, movements, etc. When they talk. This pair of painters
Things, better performance of the character characteristics, is extremely useful. Paragraph, "he is by my side.
Sit down, touch my head with my hand and say kindly, "This is the time when the little author describes his stepfather."
Action, manner. These sentences, which are in harmony with the content, are truly and vividly expressed.
Stepfather's concern and sympathy for "I"
Action, including action and behavior. Action refers to the activities of a character's every move,
Such as: grasping, pulling, dragging, running, stepping, watching, listening, smelling, talking, etc. ; Behavior refers to a series of characters.
Action is a process, such as running, fishing and playing games.
Action is the concrete expression of character, emotion, quality and thought. Look at a person, no
It depends not only on what he says, but also on how he does it. So directly carve the action description.
Drawing characters, expressing their mental outlook and writing them "vividly" is another important means.
How to write the actions of the characters in detail? Read the following article and see if you can understand it.
Come up with some methods.
Xiao Lei, that's the famous "little confused" in the class. Once, he walked into school with his schoolbag on his back.
Seeing the representative of the writing class checking the students' writing tools at the door of the classroom, he couldn't help crying, "Oh, no!" "
Yes! "He patted his head with the palm of his hand and turned and ran home." Xiao Lei, why are you back?
Is it? "My mother asked. Without answering, he ran back to his room in three steps and two steps. room
The room was in a mess, and even the quilt was not folded. "Brush, brush!" He searched the cupboard and rummaged through the drawers.
Finally, I found a brush and ink under the bed. Where can I rinse the pen container? He suddenly remembered the last Chinese character class.
Come on, he fished the fish out of the bottle and put it on the windowsill. When he lifted the bottle, an unpleasant smell came to the nose.
It turns out that the fish in the bottle is dead and has been soaked for several days. Xiao Lei quickly emptied the smelly water and even a piece of fish.
Drop it, grab the pen and ink on the table, and run out of the house with the bottle. The cupboard in the room is open and the chairs are put away.
Cross your legs, stick out your tongue in the drawer, and scold Xiao Lei for not putting them away. Xiao Lei braved the sweat,
I have been blaming myself all the way. When he ran panting into the school gate, the campus was already crowded with people.
The birds are silent.
(1) Accurately describe the actions of the characters.
The "quasi" here includes two meanings: one is to reflect the personality characteristics of the characters, and the other is to conform to the students.
Be realistic. This is the first condition for writing specific actions.
People with different gender, personality, age and identity must have different action characteristics;
People in different situations and environments have different characteristics of action. Very simple example: boy
The action of eating watermelon must be different from that of female students; In the dog days, I haven't had a sip of water for a long time.
At this time, the action of eating watermelon must be different from that of peacetime. This reminds students that they are describing.
When people act, they should strive for "accuracy"-grasping the characteristics of people's actions, writing and grasping.
Write the action characteristics of characters in specific situations; Seek truth from facts, and do what the characters do.
Write, truly reflect the reality of life.