Fan Wen:
xx Xingda Trading Co., Ltd.:
We have received your letter of 2xx. We apologize for the broken interface of 35 sets of Huanghua brand computer desks in the Contract for the Purchase of Computer Desks on XX, XX, XX, which was complained in the letter. This matter has attracted our great attention and has been investigated.
it has been verified by relevant shaomen that xxx computer desks produced by our factory are all high-quality products when they leave the factory. The interface of some computer desks mentioned in the letter is broken, which is caused by our workers' lack of regret in handling when they leave the warehouse.
We apologize again for your loss, and ask you to provide detailed figures and damage degree of the computer desk as soon as possible, as well as notarial certificate and inspection certificate. Our company will compensate unconditionally according to the actual loss as soon as possible.
We will take this as a warning, find out the problems and deficiencies in our work, and take corrective measures to prevent such incidents. I hope to get the understanding of the responsible company and continue to maintain good trade relations.
Waiting for reply:
xx Guangming Furniture Co., Ltd.:
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