1. How to write the ending of Metamorphosis
Metamorphosis If one day I am unable to move forward, will you be willing to accompany me for a warm afternoon? If I ask you something, do you think of your mother's awakening in her dream? If it was a home you were unfamiliar with, would you regard kindness as a street sign? If this is the future of a country, will you let it sleep soundly and no longer hesitate? ——"Transformation Plan": A power coming from the depths of the distant mountains! ——Introduction: Transfiguration, does it mean changing an appearance, changing an image? No, what it changes is a heart and a feeling. It has been said since ancient times: "It is easy to change a country, but it is hard to change one's nature."
I don't think so. Maybe some people are like this, but there are also some They melt a cold heart through the sincerity of others. Such a magical journey, such a mysterious transformation, let us enter this transformation together! I experienced two transformation journeys in one go, which deeply affected me.
City girl, Li Naiyue, she is 14 years old. Her father is a department leader of a state-owned enterprise. Li Naiyue loves beauty very much, and does not take teachers seriously. She often conflicts with teachers, intimidates them, and does not obey the rules. Due to school discipline and rules, he has been expelled from school many times. As for Luo Zhen, a country girl, her father died when she was young and she has an older brother. Although her family is poor, her academic performance is also very good.
The seven-day exchange between two girls with completely different identities and personalities resulted in an earth-shaking transformation. When Li Naiyue first arrived in the countryside, she seemed at a loss when facing life in the mountainous area. The monotonous rural life left her unable to find any fun. Li Naiyue re-examined herself and began to integrate into the kindness and enthusiasm of this place. Finally, Li Naiyue regretted and thanked her parents.
Luo Zhen’s transformation journey also gave everyone a lot of surprises. A country girl who always considers others is quite touching. I was shocked that a girl who was extremely disrespectful to her parents before could have such a dramatic change.
And I also experienced the enthusiasm of country people and the innocence and happiness of country children despite poverty. The "holy" place in the countryside seems spotless, purifying everyone's soul and melting every cold heart.
No wonder the ancients would go to the countryside to live in seclusion when they were old. It is really a pure place. Perhaps the second thing that moved me the most was the city boy "Two-faced Boy" Zhou Yunfeng, a combination of an angel and a little devil, a cheerful and cute sunny boy who had fights with drag racing, was the boss of the school, and was expelled several times.
Chen Yulin, a left-behind child, is sensible and capable. He has shouldered the burden of the whole family at a young age, and has undergone completely different changes after his transformation. When Zhou Yunfeng first arrived in the countryside, he was used to big fish and meat, but he couldn't get used to eating local vegetables, so he threw away the noodles and fed them to the dogs.
After knowing the reason why my brother did not go to school, and seeing my father’s discipline, my heart gradually changed. This rural father has done a lot for his "son", buying second-hand TVs, putting up wallpapers, and Spring Festival couplets, which are things that the family cannot enjoy. Zhou Yunfeng has also integrated in and is thinking about the family.
At this time, bad luck has struck. The family owes a lot of debt because of my sister-in-law's college education and my grandfather's illness. The creditors took away many things.
He wanted to pay off the family's debt and go to town to carry coal. In order to let Yunfeng have a good meal, grandpa borrowed eggs but broke his leg. Zhou Yunfeng cried. He was moved, and so was I.
Scenes of this incident appeared in my mind, and tears unknowingly stained my face. What changed this once unruly boy? I think it was love or true love.
True love can touch everyone and every heart. Zhou Yunfeng also allowed me to see his beautiful side during this transformation. The touching things that happened in the countryside moved the boy and made Zhou Yunfeng reveal his kind side.
He was in adolescence, so this incident should be an indelible event in his life. The moment his sister-in-law returned the money to him, the boy's final psychological defense collapsed. He burst into tears. He was truly moved by this love.
Seven days, like a century of change, each youthful and rebellious child transformed into a child who should be innocent and happy at this age. The program "Metamorphosis" has given me too many miracles and too many surprises.
Let us spread our wings and fly, don’t be defeated by these setbacks on the road; let us fly, don’t forget whose shoulders we are flying up on; let us fly, let’s fly toward our dreams.
2. How to write the ending of Metamorphosis
Metamorphosis
If one day I am unable to move forward, will you be willing to accompany me for a warm afternoon?
If I ask you something, do you think of your mother's startle in her dream?
If it was a home you were unfamiliar with, would you regard kindness as a street sign?
If this is the future of a country, will you let it sleep soundly and no longer hesitate? ——"Transformation Plan": A power coming from the depths of the distant mountains!
——Introduction
Transformation, does it mean changing an appearance or image? No, what it changes is a heart and a feeling. It has been said since ancient times: "It is easy to change a country, but it is hard to change one's nature." I don't think so. Maybe some people are like this, but there are also some people who have experienced the sincerity of others. Thus melting a cold heart. Such a magical journey, such a mysterious transformation, let us enter this transformation together!
I experienced two transformation journeys in one ***, which deeply affected me. City girl, Li Naiyue, she is 14 years old. Her father is a department leader of a state-owned enterprise. Li Naiyue loves beauty and does not take teachers seriously. She often conflicts with and intimidates teachers. She does not abide by school disciplines and rules. She has dropped out of school many times. Second-rate. As for Luo Zhen, a country girl, her father died when she was young and she has an older brother. Although her family is poor, her academic performance is also very good. The seven-day exchange between two girls with completely different identities and personalities resulted in an earth-shaking transformation.
When Li Naiyue first arrived in the countryside, she seemed at a loss when facing life in the mountainous areas. The monotonous rural life left her unable to find any fun. Li Naiyue re-examined herself and began to integrate into the kindness and enthusiasm of this place. Finally, Li Naiyue repented and thanked his parents. Luo Zhen's transformation journey also gave everyone a lot of surprises. A country girl who always considers others is quite touching.
I was shocked that a girl who was extremely disrespectful to her parents before had such a dramatic change. And I also experienced the enthusiasm of rural people and the innocence and happiness of rural children despite poverty. The "holy" place in the countryside seems to be spotless, purifying everyone's soul and melting every cold heart. No wonder the ancients would go to the countryside to live in seclusion when they were old. It was indeed a pure place.
Perhaps the second thing is what moved me the most, the city boy "two-faced boy" Zhou Yunfeng, the combination of angel and little devil, the cheerful and lovely sunshine boy and the car fight, the school boss, several times Get fired. Chen Yulin, a left-behind child, is sensible and capable. He shouldered the burden of the whole family at a young age, and has undergone completely different changes after his transformation.
When Zhou Yunfeng first arrived in the countryside, he was used to big fish and meat. He couldn't get used to eating local vegetables, so he threw away the noodles and fed them to the dogs. Knowing the reason why my brother didn't go to school, and seeing my father's discipline, my heart gradually changed. This rural father has done a lot for his "son", buying second-hand TVs, putting up wallpapers, and Spring Festival couplets, which are things that the family cannot enjoy. Zhou Yunfeng has also integrated in and is thinking about the family. At this time, bad luck struck. The family owed a lot of debt because of my sister-in-law's college education and my grandfather's illness. The creditors took away many things. He wanted to pay off the family's debts and go to town to carry coal himself. In order to let Yunfeng have a good meal, grandpa borrowed eggs but broke his leg. Zhou Yunfeng cried. He was moved, and so was I.
Scenes of this incident appeared in my mind, and tears unknowingly stained my face. What changed this once unruly boy? I think it was love or true love. True love can touch everyone and every heart. Zhou Yunfeng also allowed me to see his beautiful side during this transformation. The touching things that happened in the countryside moved the boy and made Zhou Yunfeng reveal his kind side. He was in adolescence, so this incident should be an indelible event in his life. The moment his sister-in-law returned the money to him, the boy's final psychological defense collapsed. He burst into tears. He was truly moved by this love.
Seven days, like a century of change, each youthful and rebellious child transformed into a child who should be innocent and happy at this age. The program "Metamorphosis" has given me too many miracles and too many surprises.
Let us spread our wings and fly, don’t be defeated by these setbacks on the road; let us fly, don’t forget whose shoulders we are flying up on; let us fly, let’s fly toward our dreams! 3. How to write the beginning and end of an essay
Demonstration of a perfect beginning for a full-scoring essay 1. Quoting famous quotes ① Asking what love is in the world can teach you how to make love between life and death.
Yuan Haowen is indeed easy to ask and very good at asking questions. This question of his can be said to be a question for the ages.
Over the years, how many people have been lingering on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But each family's words are as different as each person's face.
Xi Shi said: "Love is a tool..." ("Asking What Love Is in the World") ②In a church in the Middle Ages, a saint began his speech: "The reason why I became Saint, because I have seen through money, and what is mine belongs to everyone."
Time passes with a snap of a finger.
In a prison across the century, a thief began his life monologue: "The reason why I became a thief is because I have seen through money, and what belongs to everyone is mine."
(" "The Saint and the Thief") ③ Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery." Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective."
Many times, we are confused by the incomprehension of the problem or wandering between multiple solutions. At an intersection, how to go becomes a mystery in your mind, and you are often indecisive and leaning left and right. At this time, it is necessary to change your perspective and consider it, which will give you more chances of success. ("Spinning the Kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format ①Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am an ordinary descendant of yours, and I have the courage to write to you after thousands of years, not only to send you my respectful greetings, but also to urgently await your advice on several difficult questions.
("A Letter to Confucius") ②Hateful standard answer: When I see you, I am really filled with righteous indignation. So, driven by the flames of anger, I write this letter to denounce you.
The answers are rich and colorful, but you have to wear the "standard" hat. You know, just because of the word "standard", countless tragedies have happened.
The following are your three major crimes ("A Letter to the "Standard Answer"") 3. Borrow the writing style of the Zhanghui novel ① "It is said that the general trend of the world must be united if it is divided for a long time, and it must be divided if it is united for a long time." At the beginning, Wei, The era of the three kingdoms of Shu and Wu no longer exists. The great river flows eastward, and the waves wash away all the heroes of the past.
And Adou, the former heir to the Kingdom of Shu, has also become "lucky about Shu", and the world has become the world of the "Sima clan". ("Meeting of Heroes of the Three Kingdoms") ②The Juyi Hall in Liangshanbo is now brightly lit and full of people.
A hundred and eight heroes gathered here, and everyone was quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo will be selecting tiger fighting heroes recently.
This honorary title is a big deal, and whoever wins it can take the second spot in Liangshanbo. So all the heroes gathered here and argued endlessly.
("Who is the Tiger Fighting Hero") 4. Clever use of rhetoric ① "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. Question Mark cleared his throat and said, "The space-time discussion will now officially begin. Our theme today is 'What is Beauty', and we invite scholars from different eras and countries to speak actively." ("What is Beauty") 5. Use fables skillfully ① The Yugong family has lived in the country for generations. Here, two big mountains, Wangwu and Taihang, block the way. Life is hard! This place seems to be isolated from the rest of the world. Whatever new things happen in the city have become old news here. This kind of life really needs to change.
Yu Gong thought: He must find a way to move Taihang and Wangwu mountains. ("The Story of New Yu Gong and Zhi Sou") ② Magpie posted a large advertisement: "In order to adapt to the needs of the times, our school will promote all-round quality education, learn everything and teach everything, ensuring that your children become everything The incompetent generalists remain invincible in the competition.
Tuition fee is 3,000 yuan per semester; training fee is 5,000 yuan; sponsorship fee is 15,000 yuan. "("All-round School") ④What is it? It comes quietly and leaves no trace, but it stirs up all the colors to dance lightly? What is it that leaves no trace and comes quietly, but can leave behind a passionate song that lasts for a season? What is it that comes quietly and leaves quietly again, leaving behind the hanging golden color in the harvest season? What is it that quietly leaves and comes again, spinning white dreams for the silent earth? The philosopher smiled at the blue sky: "It's time."
The child held the kite and clapped his hands: "It's the wind." The wanderer said: "It's nothing, just a dream."
("Happiness with Answers" 6. Clever use of inscriptions to reveal the theme ① There is no majesty of trees, but you can have the greenness of grass; there is no beauty of peonies, but you can have the freedom and ease of small wild chrysanthemums... Life does not have to be brilliant, But it must be great! ——Ti Jidie was once a beautiful girl who was good at dancing. Her long hair and graceful dancing brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was once praised as China. Duncan in the future... However, everything ended, and the God of fate pressed her into a wheelchair forever.
Life became dim and silent, and the "white swan" became an ugly duckling that no one cared about. This time, she dreamed that she put on glass slippers and continued her pursuit, but when she woke up, she only heard the "miserable" cold autumn wind
("Star Night Talk") ②If. If you lose your money, you only lose a small part; if you lose your health, you only lose a small part; if you lose your integrity, you are almost penniless - What is "integrity", honesty, and poverty? Keeping one's word is also true.
Looking at history, the word "integrity" has been soaked in the blood and tears of many people.
("Who is Praising the Emperor's New Clothes") 7. Cleverly use problem-solving methods. A friend once asked me this question in a creative way: Among the following beautiful scenery, which one do you like best? A. A pure white feather falls leisurely in the shining golden sunlight.
B. A falling red petal floats in the quiet and deep water. C. A shooting star disappeared in an instant in the dark blue sky.
D. A drop of crystal clear dew slipped quietly from the tip of the tender green grass blade. After reading this question, I was stunned. The ever-changing nature, the rising and setting of the sun, the rising and falling of the tides, so many beautiful scenery are heart-pounding and leisurely.
...("Infinite Possibilities and Infinite Beauty") 8. Cleverly use celebrities to answer questions ① Someone asked: What is happiness? The answer is Feng. 4. How to write the beginning and end
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How to write the beginning and end of an essay well. Grab the reader's attention and let the reader follow your thoughts involuntarily. Generally speaking, there are many ways to start, but one is the most important, that is: be concise and clear and get to the topic quickly. Tip 1: Design suspense to attract readers. I am about to die - I am lying on the hospital bed, surrounded by darkness and silence. In the huge room, I can only hear my weak breathing. The nurse would only come in when it was time to take medicine or give an injection, and she rarely talked to me. I'm used to it and I don't complain too much because I know I'm going to die. I stared out the window and told myself to face death calmly. (Shaanxi Provincial High School Entrance Exam Full Score Essay "Feeling the Beauty of Life") Tip 2: Get straight to the point and make your point of view clear? When you are in pain, you will go home and vent your tears with tears; when you are upset, you will go home and let the warmth of home dissipate your heart. The dark clouds; home--sadness is melted in, happiness is resolved; home--sadness is accepted, and happiness is released. What a nice home! (Selected from Yunnan Provincial High School Entrance Examination Essay "Home Is So Nice") Skill three: associate memories and cleverly describe the independent courtyard. The moonlight is like water, flowing quietly around me. I feel the coolness of my heart sinking to the bottom of the water, which arouses I miss you endlessly! I remember that it was also such a moonlit night when I put you on the train bound for a foreign land... At a young age, you were struggling alone in a foreign land. Is everything okay? (Selected from the Henan High School Entrance Examination full-score essay "When I Faced the Melting Moonlight") Tip 4: Highlight the contradiction and exaggerate the atmosphere. "It's too hot this summer, so I might as well buy an air conditioner tomorrow!" Mom said while eating. ?"Buy an air conditioner, buy an air conditioner, you only know how to enjoy it! You should save some money for your children. 5. How to write the beginning and end of an essay
Students who usually practice very little composition always feel at a loss to write every essay. Compositions have their central meaning, which is a frequently mentioned theme. The most commonly used way to start a composition is to "get straight to the point", going straight to the topic without beating around the bush. For example, "The Character of Xiaocao" can start like this:
Every spring, when the branches begin to sprout, the wild grass on the roadside also begins to show a faint green color. This is the grass that is often not noticed by people.
This is how to write directly to the topic, in a few or two sentences. It is relatively simple to introduce the main topic. As long as you practice writing regularly or keep a diary every day, it is usually not difficult to write.
The concluding paragraph is generally a summary of the central meaning of the composition, and the language should be as concise as possible. , responding to the theme is what we often call "echoing from beginning to end", leaving a deep impression on the reader and stimulating the reader's imagination.
Attached is "Xiaocao's Character"
"Xiaocao." "Character"
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Every spring, after several strong winds, the south wind blows slowly. Inadvertently, I found that the branches gradually became softer. With new buds, the grass gradually became greener. The weeds on the roadside suddenly caught my attention. How could the grass stubbornly grow out of the solid land?
What is incredible is that throughout the summer, no matter how much wind, rain or heat, the grass grows tenaciously, no matter what hardships and hardships they face, it does not matter, they are fearless. . Just like the growth of a tree, as long as spring comes, it will take root and sprout. This makes me feel that the grass is so cute, so lovable, so tenacious and indomitable.
Look carefully at them. It turns out that there are only one or two emerging at first, and then they form a group. After a few days, they are the ones decorating the green grass in spring. Soon, all kinds of wild flowers also appear. It’s blooming. I suddenly realized that without grass, flowers look boring, and without flowers, grass looks monotonous. Only the grass and flowers are the most beautiful.
Unknowingly, I have formed a habit. Every spring, I like to see the sprouts of branches and the green grass on the ground. It tells me this truth: life and the earth are natural, and life is at the same time. In the struggle of nature, one's own greatness is revealed. This is the original meaning of life. .
Tips for ending a composition If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "ringing a bell". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruits and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people think about it again and again."
Just like the beginning, the ending is also very important. Wouldn't it be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was disappointed by an unfavorable ending at the end? In addition to serving the content and center of the article, the ending must also be restricted by the "beginning", which makes the ending even more difficult to write.
People call the ending of a good article "leopard's tail". From the perspective of high school entrance examination composition, although it is not necessarily required that every article ends with "leopard's tail", the ending is also required to be concise, vivid, and Just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes students make at the end of their compositions are: ① Superfluous.
Even though the full text has come to an end, it could have been thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and insists on telling the whereabouts of the characters that do not need to be explained one by one in a few trembling sentences, and revealing the meaning that could have been understood. ② Shouting slogans in vain.
At the end, in order to express one's position and attitude, one shouts something irrelevant to the content of the article. This kind of ending ruins the theme. ③ Sloppy.
The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is still reluctant to end, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the composition for the high school entrance examination is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of the composition in the examination room? The following ending techniques are commonly used in high school entrance examination essays.
1. Natural bandana. No matter what kind of literary style, after expressing the content, the article naturally concludes the whole text without designing profound philosophical sentences or carving out rich symbolic shapes. This kind of ending is called a "natural ending".
It completely avoids the superfluous and innocent ending problems of the article. It appears simple, bright, and unpretentious, and is widely used in high school entrance examination compositions. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce. It is impossible to pay too much attention to what "style" and what "method".
As long as you are full of passion and express yourself freely, you can write wherever you want, and you can fully express your feelings, which is a good article. However, being "natural" does not mean doing whatever you want, being sloppy, but Follow the natural trend of literary development to end the overall situation. There are many such examples in the texts I have studied, so I won’t go into details here.
2. Echoing from beginning to end. The ending should echo the beginning, and write sentences that echo the beginning but are not simply repeated. This ending method is a very common way to end all kinds of articles.
This binding method can arouse the reader's psychological sense of beauty and create a sense of harmony from beginning to end. For example, "A Precious Shirt" begins with "In my home, I keep a cool white shirt."
It ends with: "For four years, I have kept this precious shirt. Collect it carefully and never wear it once. "The ending of "Praise to the Poplar" echoes the beginning: "I want to praise the poplar tree loudly!" 3. The style of the death chapter.
This ending method is to rely on the content of the full text at the end of the article to use concise language to clearly express the theme idea, or to explain the writing intention when the full text is about to come to an end. It is clear, so this ending method is also called "the finishing touch". For example, at the end of "Jujube Core" it is written: "Changing nationality does not mean changing national sentiments, and no nation is as attached to the homeland as we are."
"Remembering a Spinning Wheel" is written at the end : "Fighting against difficulties brings endless joy. - Remember a spinning wheel."
4. Famous aphorisms. End with famous quotes, police names, and poems, aiming to extend the article and reveal some kind of true meaning of life.
It often appears at the end of essays, narratives, and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, making it deeply imprinted in the hearts of readers and serving as a "word of speech". It has the effect of "finished, infinite meaning". "The Pear Blossoms on the Post Road" ends with: "The Pear Blossoms on the Post Road are blooming everywhere."
5. Lyrical argumentative style. Concluding the article with lyrical discussion can express the author's feelings, arouse readers' emotions, and arouse readers' cries, which has a strong artistic appeal.
This ending method is mainly used in narrative essays about people and events, and can also be used in expository essays and argumentative essays. There are many forms of lyrical argumentative endings, so it is more free to end in this way. A good "lyrical argumentative" ending will inevitably give rise to true feelings, giving readers a sense of reality and adequacy.
For example, the ending of "Flower Market" reads: "She stood smiling among the flowers, just like a flower, like a tall and elegant orchid." Another example is the ending of "Remembering My Mother" The two natural paragraphs are a very typical lyrical argumentative ending.
The composition should be completed in one go, and the ending should be in line with the previous text and should not be missing. The ending of the composition is the same as the beginning. It is different from chapter to chapter, but there are also rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some commonly used ending methods. Do not copy them mechanically. Really good endings exist in the candidates' daily solid training, in the candidates' on-the-spot performance, and in the candidates' "Outside of Poetry".
Please read the end of one candidate's essay: If life no longer has green, we are still searching for it, why don't we take action to protect green and protect the environment, so that we will always have green.
Only then will green sing: "I come quietly, just as you (the desert) walk quietly..." (Anonymous "If Life No longer Has Green") Comments: Author Natural He thought of green due to the environment, and then started a topic around "what if life no longer has green". The article begins by comparing "past", "today" and "tomorrow" to highlight that the environment is deteriorating and green is decreasing, which naturally leads to worries. Then, he skillfully used the best lines from Xu Zhimo's "Farewell Cambridge" to elicit thoughts about the lack of green in life, leaving room for imagination.
Dear middle school students, there is no set method for writing. Which ending method to use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences. You cannot copy dogma. For example, some can be used in argumentative style, some can be used in descriptive style, some can be used in suspense style, some can be used in quotation style, and so on.
We also need middle school students to practice more and experience more, and work hard to explore, so as to achieve the effect of drawing inferences from one example. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "It's like ringing a bell, and the lingering sound lingers on the beams".
Transfer training The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing.