Example 1: After reading Shang, Zhong Yong's ending is thought-provoking. When Fang Zhongyong was five years old, he was able to "borrow things to make poems" and "both arts and sciences were considerable". However, his mercenary father did not provide conditions for him to continue his studies. By the time he was twenty, he was "out of touch with the crowd". From this, I realized that no matter how talented a person is, it is difficult to succeed without the efforts of the day after tomorrow. In other words, talent is the basic condition of success, and diligence is the decisive factor of success.
Second, the direct method. This method of beginning is the method of "coming straight to the point and expressing your mind", and writing out the general feelings after reading a certain work at the beginning.
Example 2: the seed of love, the germination of love-the first paragraph of the article "The Motherland is in My Heart": After reading the book "The Motherland is in My Heart", I was filled with emotion, and my love for the motherland came into being. This book has vivid language and touching content. After reading it, I was infected and edified, and planted the seeds of loving my China in my heart.
Third, the extended association method. This way of starting is caused by some phenomena in real life, which leads the author to read a work directionally and then talk about his true feelings.
Example 3: "Don't let people wear good colors, just be compassionate and full of enthusiasm"-read the first paragraph of the article "The Party is in My Heart";
People often sigh: "The folk customs are getting worse and worse, the party style is not correct, and the social atmosphere is in a mess." After listening to a lot, I even doubt the lyrics "Without the production party, there would be no new China". With a question mark, I opened this book-"The Party is in My Heart" and read it again and again devoutly. My thoughts gradually became clear and my doubts gradually disappeared. Finally, I once again affirmed the unpretentious lyrics: "Without the * * * production party, there would be no new China!"
Fourth, the method of bedding. This method of beginning is to talk about this first and then that, trying to lay out things related to feelings, and then lead to the feelings of reading works. This is similar to the metaphor in The Book of Songs.
Example 4: the beginning of "road"-reading Ode to China;
There are many roads on the earth, and no one can answer how many. There are roads on the vast plains, roads on the rolling mountains, roads on the vast Gobi, roads on the vast desert, roads in thorns and weeds, roads in the ice and snow ... roads are built by people. As long as people go, they leave their way.
The book Ode to China is only 66 pages, which shows people the difficult road that modern China has gone through with its unique style and majestic momentum.
Fifth, question the way of thinking. This method of opening is to carefully set questions after in-depth analysis of the original work, causing readers to think deeply, and then answer questions in combination with the work. This method can attract readers and has a strong appeal.
Example 5: "There is an oath in the depths of the sea, willing to be the Lu Chen of China —— Reading the beginning of" The Motherland is in My Heart ";
Why did Su Wu almost freeze to death in the heavy snow and still cling to the Han Festival, which represents national dignity? Why did the students of the May 4th Movement light a blazing flame and devour Cao Rulin's lair, Zhao Jialou? Why did Han Meilin, known as "China Picasso", refuse high-paying employment in the United States and resolutely return to China? Why are those Chinese descendants who are drifting overseas facing a cup of loess, facing the east, and crying?
Because-the motherland, in their hearts.
Sixth, the setting method. The way to start this way is to set up a typical environment related to the feelings expressed in the works you read, and then make clear your knowledge and understanding of the works you read. This method is suitable for the feeling after reading serious works.
Example 6: The first paragraph of the article "After reading Hongyan":
Late at night, there was silence all around. The breeze is blowing gently, blowing my hair and blowing my hot cheeks. I stared at this peaceful and quiet night, and a huge relief gradually appeared in front of my eyes: on a magnificent and bright red rock, tall and burly Xu Yunfeng stood beside Jiang Jie, and Jiang Jie was in the prime of life, who also held the post of "advance newspaper" ... Their firm eyes stared confidently into the distance, with a calm death smile unique to revolutionaries. They look forward to a bright future of productism, and they are convinced that their ideals will be realized. Look, they give off a splendid glow. In this beautiful luster, there are four golden characters-* * * producer.
"There is no definite method in writing", and the six methods introduced above are intended to play a role in attracting jade. I hope students can explore boldly in their writing practice and create more and better feelings after reading.
How to write a good discussion segment
In recent years, the writing of discussion fragments has appeared in college entrance examination papers in many cities. For example, there is such a question in the Yangzhou senior high school entrance examination paper of 1997: "Do middle school students do housework? Please talk about your opinion in about 200 words. " As a result, many candidates talk in Kan Kan outside the space of asking questions, and some say a lot but don't know what to say. In fact, the writing of this discussion fragment also has certain skills. As long as you master the method, you can write it out completely.
First of all, put forward your point of view, and show your point of view and clear attitude to the questions raised or some phenomena provided. You should not be vague or evasive.
Secondly, the positive and negative aspects are clarified. Explain the positive significance and negative consequences from both positive and negative aspects, so that readers tend to your point of view.
Third, the method of putting facts and reasoning is adopted to demonstrate. Because this is a fragment writing, the examples should be typical and widely known, and the explanation of the truth should be closely related to the problem or the given phenomenon, and should be linked with reality. Don't talk empty talk, don't let go of the "arrow" without "virtue".
Of course, the above is just a general method, not absolute. For example, opinions can sometimes be drawn at the end of the summary. To help you have a perceptual understanding, please refer to the following examples and notes:
Do middle school students need to do housework?
My answer to this question is yes: yes!
(Comment: Cut to the chase to show attitude and clear views)
Although learning is the main task of middle school students, it does not mean that middle school students should not do housework. Doing housework itself is also a kind of labor exercise, from which we can learn a lot that books can't, because all achievements are "the crystallization of labor creation." Wasn't Watt inspired to invent the steam engine when he was boiling water for his family? To say the least, parents have worked hard all day, and doing some housework within their power is also an understanding of their parents' performance.
(Comment: Positive statement, concise example)
Some students who think they should not do housework lack labor concept and are not considerate to their parents. In the long run, they will develop the inertia of living beyond their means, which is very unfavorable for personal growth. Such examples are not without in life, because all depravity begins with never working.
(Comment: Explain the negative consequences and point out the hazards)
Writing reference title
1, the ancients said, "Don't act on the small evil, don't act on the small good." Please write a paragraph and talk about your opinion.
After dinner on Sunday, Xiao Ming will clear the table and wash the dishes. Xiaoming's mother hurried forward to stop her. "It's none of your business. Go and study. " Please write a paragraph about this and talk about your opinion.