Rationalization suggestions:

1, combined with the actual work to find problems, problems can not be limited to this position, but related to all aspects of the company;

2. Analyze the cause of the problem;

3. Assess the impact of the problem;

4. Put forward valuable solutions or other suggestions.

My suggestion is to follow the above logic, which is clearer and clearer.

In addition: find more data to prove your argument; The logical relationship should be clear; The problem should be able to find the root cause; Suggestions should be reasonable and practical.

I hope the above will help you.

Further reading: How to buy insurance, which is good, and teach you how to avoid these "pits" of insurance.