English letter writing model essay _ excellent letter writing

Have you ever written to your family or friends in English? Can you write it easily?

Excellent English writing model essay 1

Note: For this part, you have 30 minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, one of your classmates, who will come to see you during the one-week holiday. According to the suggestions given below, you should write at least 120 words in Chinese:

1. Welcome

2. Make suggestions on holiday arrangements

3. Remind what should be paid attention to.

A letter to the students

June 23, 2006 5438+0

Dear Xiao Wang:

__________________________________

__________________________________.

Yours,

Zhang ying

As can be seen from the above examples, the letter composition not only gives the outline of the main content, but also gives the framework of the structure of each part of the letter. In other words, we only need to consider how to express the content of the outline, not the structure of the letter.

When writing a letter composition, we should first extract the outline of the letter body and expand it into a finer English outline, and then express the extracted outline in concise, clear, polite, correct and appropriate language. For example, the previous letter can list the following outline:

Title: A letter to my classmates Question: What are the holiday arrangements and precautions?

Outline: First, expand my welcome circle. Holiday plan 1. 1 the first day? Campus 2. The next day? Art Gallery & Concert Hall. The third day? Climb the mountain. The next three days? Other scenic spots (Swan Cave, Jinhu) 5. Last day-department three. Precautions 1. Train number and train number. Arrival time 2. SunglassesIV。 Looking forward to meeting you. Introduction text 1 text 2 conclusion

Fan Wen:

A letter to the students

June 23, 2006 5438+0

Dear Xiao Wang:

Me? I'm glad to know that you? You will come to see me during the one-week holiday. My parents will be happy to see you again, too. I'm sure you'll enjoy every minute here.

I have arranged our holidays as follows. The first day you arrived, me? I will show you around our campus. The next day, we? I will visit art galleries and concert halls. The next day, we? I will climb a hill in the northeast of this city. On the top of the mountain, can we have a wonderful bird? A panoramic view of the city. In the next three days, we? I will take a short trip to some places of interest nearby, such as Swan Cave and Jinhu. Last day, me? I'll see you off at the railway station.

Please remember to call me and tell me your train number and arrival time so that I can meet you at the railway station. By the way, it? It's hot and sunny here, so don? Don't forget to put on your sunglasses.

Me? I look forward to seeing you soon.

You are sincere,

Zhang ying

The date of writing is called the first paragraph of the text: the second paragraph of the welcome text: the arrangement of the first day, the second day, the third day, the fourth day and the sixth day, and the seventh day: the third paragraph of the farewell text (remarks): the first remark, the second remark and the closing ceremony signature.

The purpose of the complaint letter is to make the recipient sympathize with your experience and solve your problems after reading the letter. Therefore, when writing a complaint letter, we should reflect the situation realistically, pay attention to the wording, don't use too much sarcastic or blaming language, and don't digress because of venting anger, so as not to cause distrust or disgust of the recipient.

Generally speaking, the complaint letter includes the following contents: making demands and reasons; Explain the details; Make a specific request and indicate the date you want the recipient to take action. For example:

September 2006 1

Dear sir or madam,

Me? I am writing to complain about a typewriter I bought seven months ago.

In February of 200 1 year, I bought a Jones portable special typewriter in ABC store. I only used it for a few days, and the space bar was broken.

I took it to a local shop, and they told me it was a factory defect and suggested that I take it back to ABC. ABC accepted the machine and sent the parts in. I waited for three months, but because your company didn't send me a substitute, they let me use the space bar of another typewriter.

Now, half a year later, it is broken again. I took it back to ABC. They no longer carry your typewriter, but they assured me that the guarantee was still valid and suggested that I write to you with further instructions on what steps to take.

I will appreciate anything you can do to help us in this matter.

Respectfully,

(signature)

James Bergen

The date of writing a letter is called the first paragraph of the text: indicating the purpose of writing a letter; The second paragraph: explain the time, place and problems of purchasing products; The third paragraph: explain the attempted solution; And the fourth paragraph: explain that the attempt is invalid, and ask the closing ceremony to sign and print the name.

This is a cool-headed, well-worded and restrained letter complaining about the poor after-sales service. As this kind of letter involves dealers (manufacturers) and sellers, the complaint letter states the following details:

1) Shopping time: February 2006 5438+0

2) Shopping location: ABC store

3) Product model: Jones typewriter, portable special model.

4) Time of use: I only used it for a few days; Six months later,

5) Main problem: the space bar is broken.

6) Cause of the problem: factory defect.

7) Why should I report to you:

They no longer deliver your typewriter, but they assured us that the guarantee is still valid and suggested that I write to you to further explain what steps should be taken. Your typewriter is no longer in the shop, but they convinced me that the warranty card is still valid and suggested that I write to your company and try to solve it. )

In addition, the author also used a polite conclusion:

I will appreciate anything you can do to help us in this matter.

Summary: 1) the structure of English letters; 2) the form of letter writing; 3) Writing essentials of letter composition.

Let's do some writing exercises. I'll give you a composition question, please finish it in 30 minutes according to the content of this lesson. In the process of writing, everyone should pay attention to the examination of questions, consider the structure of the article, the opening and closing remarks adopted, and so on.

Excellent English letter writing model II

Note: For this part, you have 30 minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Xiao Li. Write a letter to Xiao Zhang, an old smoker's roommate. According to the suggestions given below, you should write at least 120 words in Chinese:

1. Smoking has become a big problem in the dormitory.

2. The harm of smoking

Suggest quitting smoking

A letter to my roommate.

March 2002 16

Dear Xiao Zhang:

_______________________________________________________

______________________________________________________.

You are sincere,

Xiao Li

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A letter to my roommate.

March 2002 16

Dear Xiao Zhang:

I have noticed recently that you have been smoking heavily, which is becoming a serious problem. As long as you are here, our bedroom is filled with that terrible smell. The ashtray is always full of cigarette butts.

You are destroying your health and brain cells that can never be replaced, not to mention your lungs and trachea. Smoking, especially heavy smoking, is highly related to lung cancer. It is possible that you will catch up with it. I didn't scare you. Besides, smoking is also harmful to the health of our roommates and our friendship. Roommates avoid staying in the bedroom for fear of being polluted. As a result, the brotherhood between roommates is gradually disappearing.

If I were you, I would try to get rid of this bad habit. If you are really determined to quit, it is not difficult to get rid of it. Remember "where there is a will, there is a way". I'll always be there to help you if you need me.

You are sincere,

Xiao Li

Common sentence patterns in college English band 4 letter writing

It's great to hear from you again.

I am very happy

I am very happy to learn that.

I must apologize for not writing to you earlier.

Suggestion:

According to my experience, in your case, _ _ _ _ _ seems reasonable.

In my opinion, it is wise for you to take the following actions:

Thank you:

I really appreciate your kindness.