First of all, the most important thing is to write a good composition on this topic.
Topic composition is the mainstream of senior high school entrance examination composition, which allows students to describe their life experiences, express their views and express their feelings under the same topic. It allows students to imagine boldly, play freely and have a lot of writing space.
To write a topic composition well, we should pay attention to the following points.
(a) a thorough understanding of materials, determine the content.
There is a passage before the topic composition, which is the reference of the topic and the prompt of writing. When reviewing the topic, we should first read the intention of the proposer in the topic material, and then determine the style and theme of our article. For example, writing on the topic of "persistence". First of all, we should analyze the content of the materials given by the proposer and determine the scope. Then infer layer by layer: What are you clinging to? How persistent is it? What is the result of persistence? You can also write about the consequences of not insisting.
(2) Stick to the topic and choose the topic skillfully.
A good topic is like a person's eyes, through which people can grasp the meaning of the article. First of all, we should closely follow the "topic" and propose the topic, which can be considered from the original meaning, figurative meaning and extended meaning of the topic. Secondly, the topic should be small, concise, novel and literary. You can use transposition to raise the topic, and you can also use metaphor, personification, duality, quotation, old saying and other means to raise the topic. If the topic is "sincerity", it can be drafted as "sincerity is gold", "sigh of sincerity" and "sincerity! Honesty? " And so on.
(3) Choose a small point and think deeply.
Because the extension of the topic is very wide, the writing scope of some topics is very large, so it is not easy to write directly on the topic. So the main points of writing can be made clear. If you write "dedication", you can ask: Who contributed to whom? What kind of dedication? What kind of words and deeds, the way of contribution? Can also ask questions; What is true dedication? How to treat dedication? In this way, it is not difficult to find the starting point of your own writing.
Deep meaning means that the composition should reflect the true meaning of life, the essence and significance of life, and reflect the characteristics and style of the times. It is also necessary to have the spirit of innovation and be good at discovering ideas that others have not put forward or rarely put forward, so that the composition can have depth. If we take the "starting point" as the topic, ideas can spread from many angles and directions: starting from the "starting point" is the characteristic of starting, and we can extract "constantly moving towards a new journey"; The process from "starting point" to "end point" is tortuous, and it can be extracted that "only by overcoming twists and turns can progress be made"; From the relationship between "starting point" and "end point", we can extract that "starting from scratch can achieve something" and so on.
Chen Duxiu and Hu Shi were friends, who ran New Youth on the same front, and later parted ways politically. Even so, Hu Shi strongly recommended the publication of Chen Duxiu's academic works. Zhang opposed the New Culture Movement, but when Chen Duxiu was in trouble, it was the famous representative of this national study who stood up to defend Chen Duxiu.
Dr Xu Jinru, who teaches at Shenzhen University, is honest, strong and talented. He is a famous poet with profound Confucian attainments and sings Peking Opera well. But he likes to get into trouble. When I was a Ph.D. student at Sun Yat-sen University, ten doctors protested against Christmas, which caused an uproar in the whole country. I also published an article that severely criticized that kind of cultural intolerance. Later, he initiated the "Ten Medical Approval in Dane". However, we respect each other and get along well. Last June, 5438+065438+ 10, this handsome guy from an independent bank invited me to the press conference of his new book, Noble Destiny-Fear and Love for a Cultural Heritage (Beijing Edition, Hualing Publishing House, August 20 10), and I was very happy to attend. I never take part in such activities. I made an exception to attend to show my respect for Mr. Xu Jinru.
I disagree with Jin Ru in many places, but I respect him very much. There are two reasons to respect him: first, he is a very honest and frank intellectual, which is very rare. He inherited the righteous spirit of China scholar-officials, which I think is needed at any time and is a very valuable asset. The second is his talent. In the contemporary intellectual class, it is rare to see people who have achieved in so many aspects. He is a poet. He is very familiar with the ancient culture of China, and he is also accomplished in Quyi.
I am very willing to participate in this activity, mainly because I am thinking about what kind of ideological, cultural and academic environment we should have in this era. Although Jin and I have different views, for example, the book talks about the reactiveness of vernacular Chinese, but I think vernacular Chinese is a great progress in history. At the same time, he resolutely opposed the new culture movement, and I, my whole academic career, have been defending the value of the new culture movement. In May 2009, the 90th anniversary of the New Culture Movement, I wrote a 20,000-word article, expounding the inevitability, origin, connotation and historical role of the New Culture Movement from nine aspects, refuting the argument of denying the New Culture Movement, and pointing out that the New Culture Movement is around us and will not be interrupted until the social transformation is successful. This article has been published in the fourth issue of Social Science Frontier 20 10.
How to deal with different viewpoints is a very important issue. We have long been accustomed to the unity of ideas, but this is absolutely impossible, which is the destruction of academics, concepts and culture. Looking back at the history of China, it is not far-reaching. For the Republic of China, the most brilliant period of ideology and culture was around the New Culture Movement. In other words, the period of Beiyang government was a cultural peak in China's modern history. The reason why there was such a cultural peak was mainly because the main aspects of the environment at that time were very free and diverse, and schools respected each other. For example, Liang Shuming is famous for his cultural conservatism, but he has a good relationship with Li Dazhao, Hu Shi and others, and sometimes even signs some declarations together. Chen Duxiu and Hu Shi are friends. They run New Youth on the same front. Later, they parted ways politically. Even so, Hu Shi strongly recommended the publication of Chen Duxiu's academic works, which is very rare. Another famous thing is that Zhang opposed the New Culture Movement, but when he was tried in Chen Duxiu, it was the famous representative of this national study who stood up to defend Chen Duxiu.
Our predecessors respected different opinions so much. Every intellectual here has the responsibility to think, and at the same time do what he should do in his post, and create an environment where different opinions can be tolerated and an inclusive environment can be formed. But Mr. Jin Ru said in this book: "The essence of forbearance is homesickness", and I don't agree with this view.
I think it is particularly important to say this sentence in Guangzhou. The so-called revolutionary base areas established by the Kuomintang in Guangzhou, especially after 1923, Chen Jiongming failed. They set up a government here and Sun Yat-sen became a marshal. What did the Kuomintang do when he was a marshal? To be a party-oriented education, a party-oriented judicature and a party-oriented society as a whole should be unified. With the advance of the Northern Expeditionary Army, the influence of this system became greater and greater, which led to the murder of Ye Dehui, a famous cultural figure, in Hunan. Wang Guowei committed suicide because Ye Dehui was suppressed by the Northern Expeditionary Army. So I think it will be more meaningful to advocate the coexistence of pluralism, academic freedom and ideological freedom in such a place and environment.
I believe everyone will agree that we must work together to create a free environment that is most conducive to the development of academic culture, including Jin Ru.
King hates autocracy; However, people may not have noticed: "Freedom of thought not only needs to lift the imprisonment of law, but also needs the coexistence of different ideas ... Feeling or value endowment can't give a person freedom, but ideas and rational thinking can." (Alan Bloom: The American Spirit Towards Closure, p. 269, Beijing Edition, China Social Sciences Press, 1994) Silly, don't forget the main goal! Understand, tolerate and respect other different views.
An essay entitled "Freedom". Every day, I dream of freedom. I fantasize that I am running on the endless grassland, and no one will bother me. Only animals are my good companions. When I am bored, I lie on my back on the grassland, looking at the endless blue sky, and I feel very comfortable. But these are just fantasies.
When I got up in the morning, I saw some marshmallows in front of me. Looking intently, there are several clouds. My eyes followed them, trying to drift away with them, wondering where their destination was. But they walked sideways and soon disappeared in front of my eyes. I jumped out of bed and looked for it in a hurry, but what I saw was rows of residential buildings. Those clouds have long since disappeared, without shadow or brown. "Oh, I wish I were a cloud and free. Look at the ups and downs of the world. " I said to myself.
I long for freedom, just like an eagle has the sky in Wan Li but can't soar; Like a frog falling into a well, it wants to jump out, but it can never jump; Like a bird in a cage, it can't fly out.
Everyday busyness replaces comfort, which makes me forget comfort gradually. Maybe I often look at landscape pictures. Every Saturday morning, I open my eyes and see the sky. I naturally think of the continuous mountains, and I feel a little comfortable and comfortable in my heart. But the space of the window is limited, and my eyes swept to the windowsill, and that kind of comfort and coziness suddenly disappeared. Then, I dressed in a hurry and went to extracurricular classes.
I remembered a sentence from Uncle Cao Wenxuan: "People of every age have their pains, and this kind of pain is by no means unique to today's teenagers. When I was a teenager, I had a painful look. I may become a strong man when I grow up. "
Yes, what is pain? Only when you have pain can you long for freedom, and then you will have a free day.
Let's start with "freedom of choice". Hello,
Freedom of choice
All mothers in the world are very kind and love their children. However, there is a kind of thrush who will kill her children when necessary, and their mothers will do the same when they are locked in cages.
Children are always curious. They always like to catch some small animals to raise. Once, a child caught a little thrush and put it in a cage.
Little thrush was very scared at first. It flew around in the cage, then quieted down and admitted his empty new home. Little thrush sings in the cage every day, and the children are very happy. You know, the thrush sings beautifully.
A few days later, the little thrush's mother found her own child. She came to feed the little thrush herself, with food in her mouth. Thrushcross's mother knows that it is much better than human feeding little thrush, and the child thinks it is a happy thing.
But the next day, when the child wanted to see what his "little prisoner" was doing, he found the little thrush lying quietly in the cage, dead.
The child's father told him, "This female thrush in America is very special. When they found their children in cages, they had to feed the little thrush to death with poisonous berries. She seems to believe that being dead is much better than being a prisoner alive. "
This is an article I read not long ago.
A Hungarian poet wrote: "Life is precious, but love is more expensive." The child really loves the little thrush, but the result is that the mother's sadness leads to the death of the little painting. People's selfish love can also kill living things. Moreover, children's love is limited to using little thrush as a toy, otherwise they are not called "little prisoners". He killed a life in this ignorance.
I wonder if you shed tears because of the death of your pet. I do, and so do many people in the world. Just because of their death and even seeing the buildings in this city, I feel like crying. What do you think when those animals are kept in exquisite cages? Love animals or cages?
Every living thing has the right to choose freedom, and no one has the right to deprive it. No matter how exquisite and beautiful cages are, they can't be changed. They are just lifeless decorations. They cannot imprison any life and deprive them of their freedom.
If you are an animal and you are locked in a cage, do you choose to live or be free?
I choose freedom.
If it helps, please adopt it.
Is the freedom of composition with the theme of "freedom" a free bird in the sky? Freedom, a carefree fish in the water? Freedom, is it dandelion floating in the wind?
Before, I didn't understand But what I saw finally made me understand that I may never be free.
Every night, there is always a lamp in a house, there is always a student under the lamp, and there is always a desk of homework and exercise books in front of the student. Of course, students are always writing. After a while, the students looked at the bright moon in a daze, reminding her of Chang 'e, Yutu and Guishu.
She is a middle school student, with thin shoulders bearing heavy studies, tired eyes bearing tomorrow's exam, and slender fingers bearing a mountain of homework tonight. She can't remember how many nights were like this, and how many nights were lit by lonely lights.
This makes me understand that if I am a bird, I am just a caged bird; If I were a fish, I would just be a fish in a fish tank. If I were a dandelion, it would only be a misfortune to be blown to a mountain covered with snow all year round.
Freedom, for me, is an unattainable and impossible thing.
This essay entitled "I yearn for a life called freedom" may seem like a quiet girl to others, but I don't want to be a girl myself because I yearn for a free life.
You see, the sunshine outside is really good, and the boys are playing on the green grass. Some are catching bugs, some are rolling around, and some are enjoying a "bath" in the sun with their eyes closed ... Happy laughter is emitted from time to time on the grass. I really want to roll on it with envy. But with my mother around, I have to behave myself. Because, I am a girl.
I am a lively and cheerful nine-year-old girl. I long to fly freely like a bird. I want to get rid of the bondage, fly to the forest and live a carefree life. But things will not develop according to people's wishes. My parents don't want me to be a crazy girl. They really want me to be a girl.
I used to be lucky. I think my parents are my bosom friends. They know my personality, and of course they will get used to my manners! However, as time went on, I found that this was wrong. My parents are not as tolerant as I thought. They always remind me of my image.
What I remember vividly is that once my stomach growled with hunger. My mouth watered when I saw the delicious food carefully prepared by my mother on the table, so I wolfed it down. At this time, my father said sternly, "Look at you, you don't look like a girl! Pay attention to your image! " Hearing this, I lost my appetite, threw down my chopsticks and went back to my home to take a nap.
After a while, the same unhappiness happened again. That night, I watched the circus performance on TV intently. When I saw the highlights, I couldn't help jumping up and shouting with excitement. At this time, my father fell from the sky again and was furious: "Girls don't jump around like you!" " You have to restrain yourself! "
How I hope all girls can enjoy nature, happiness and freedom like boys. Because, we girls don't want to be bound by so much anymore! We long for a free life.
Forgetting is freedom, an essay entitled "Forgetting is freedom"
If I can choose, I will still let you appear in my life. If you can choose, you still won't choose to come back to my world.
When two people who love each other come together at first, and the other person does a little thing for himself, we will also be very moved. Later, he had to do a lot of things before we were moved. Later, he had to pay more and more, and we were moved. In love, we must learn to be content, because it is not easy to meet the right person. If he can treat you well, he should cherish it even more. Love is not greedy!
I looked at the meteor on the horizon, so beautiful, beautiful only at that moment, but still gorgeous.
One way in life: go your own way; There are two treasures in life: a healthy body and a young mind; There are three kinds of friends in life: willing to lend you money, attend your wedding and attend your funeral; There are four pains in life: I can't see through it, I can't bear it, I can't afford to lose it, and I can't let it go. Five words in life: no matter how hard it is to persist, no matter how indifferent it is, no matter how confident it is, no matter how frugal it is, no matter how cold and enthusiastic it is. Six treasures of life: body, knowledge, dreams, faith, self-confidence and backbone!
I like and am used to keeping a distance from changing things, so that I can know what is the law that will not be abandoned by time. For example, if loving someone is full of variables, I will take a step back and watch it quietly until I see sincere feelings.
Be kind to yourself and you will become better and more valuable in the eyes of others. And if you give too much to others, you will become weak and your use value will be finished. So, don't always try to please others. The more you care about others, the more humble you are. Only by pleasing yourself and letting others please you will you be more valuable. Life is not long, be nice to yourself.
Some things, when they happen, can only be accepted. Some people, if they lose it, let go. Some roads, if you choose, there is no turning back. Life is so helpless.
For example, if you are happy and you are unhappy, who will sympathize with your sadness; For example, strong, you are not strong, who will pity your cowardice; For example, if you work hard, who will accompany you if you don't work hard; For example, cherish, if you don't cherish, who will accompany you to squander your youth; For example, if you insist, who will advance and retreat with you if you don't insist?
Memory is a form of meeting, and forgetting is a form of freedom.
Living is a state of mind. If you feel happy, happiness is everywhere. If you lament for yourself, the world will be gloomy. Very, don't listen; Misfortunes depend on each other and let nature take its course. Do more good deeds, and happiness is near; Most of them are evil, but disasters are far away. Not extravagant, the heart is easy to settle down; If you don't flush it, it's all over. A small heart can't hold ants, but a wide chest can hold hundreds of rivers. Prosperity is indifferent, adversity is calm. Those who do not respect themselves are humiliated, those who are not self-sufficient are knowledgeable, and those who are not complacent benefit.
Happiness is managed. The fruit picked by others can only be sweet once for you. Only when you have the ability to pick fruit can you be sweet for a lifetime. The happiness that befalls you won't last long. Maybe it's the wrong door Real long-term happiness depends on your own management. Where you operate, you reap. Management and financial management are not bad, and management ideas are not bad. Lasting happiness depends on managing a quiet, steady, patient, indifferent and peaceful heart.
Not everyone is suitable for a lifetime with you. Some people are used to grow up; Some people are used to living together; Some people will be remembered for life.
Never is not far away, it only represents a certain time, an oath you have said, and a small thing you have done. When the years become cloudy and windy, everything will become a distant landscape. Only that person and those things are still stubbornly clinging to memories, making us homesick and resentful. There is no eternal commitment in fate, but all that can be untied is the knot in my heart; What can't be solved is an instant hit.
The greatest happiness in life is to find that the person you love just loves you.
Only from the fear of eating alone and running around alone to the habit of facing all kinds of twists and turns alone can we understand what loneliness is. It is a part of you. It is an angel and a devil. It can make you better and make you forever. You have to face the fact that loneliness is ultimately a very real sense of existence. People who can stand on the earth with their own strength are brave people, and I want to be such a person.
Disappointment is sometimes a kind of happiness, because we have expectations, so we will be disappointed. Because there is love, there will be expectations, so even disappointment is a kind of happiness, although this happiness is a bit painful.
Do you know that?/You know what? Do you know that?/You know what? In this world, there are indeed people who have heartfelt and tenacious happiness. And this kind of happiness is mostly based on the intersection of happiness and misfortune-climbing the peak of happiness and then falling into the trough of misfortune, we can suddenly realize that there is nothing in this world that lasts longer than losing. So, when you can still have happiness, every minute counts.
Calm women know what to forget and what not to forget, and they can always live easily; A calm woman knows when to be sober and when to be confused, so she can enjoy life happily. It's simple to calm down a woman's happiness. A glass of water poured by her mother, a reminder from her father and a greeting from a distant friend can make her feel happy.
The more people with stories, the more calm and simple, the more superficial and thin, and the more impetuous. The real strong man is not a man without tears, but a man who still runs with tears in his eyes. We should dare to bear the burden beyond our expectations. After hard work, you will find yourself much better than you think.
I am like a sad container, constantly accepting all kinds of injuries from you.
After different degrees of exercise, a person can obtain different degrees of self-cultivation and different degrees of benefits. Just like spices, the finer they are, the stronger the fragrance. We were so eager for the waves of fate, and finally found that the most beautiful scenery in life is actually inner peace and calmness; We used to look forward to the recognition of the outside world so much that we finally knew that the world was our own and had nothing to do with others.
Do you know the happiness of the Ferris wheel? Sitting at the top, looking up, I reached out and thought I had touched happiness, but there was no you on the other side of the Ferris wheel. When the Ferris wheel collapsed, happiness floated in the wind.
The more critical you are about a person, the shallower your love will be. Even if you are separated, there is nothing to regret. Because a true lover can't be taken away, what can be taken away is either not enough love or not love to change your mind. Some things can't be seen through, and some people can't let go. It's not that you are stupid, but that you are too kind. Because of kindness, don't wait for people who shouldn't wait, and don't hurt your heart. Thanks to the ungrateful people, let you see through a person's heart early.
The best life is like this: sensitive soul and rough nerves, warm blood and calm eyes, deep thoughts and secular interests, poetry looking up at the stars and down-to-earth firmness. The long night, I stayed until dawn, walked through the darkness, believed in the sunshine, set out with a strong heart, with a humble smile on my face, and watched the mountains and water all the way, stop and go.
The word forever seems to have never appeared.
Flying in the sky is a bird's dream. It can succeed because it has wings. If people want to realize their dreams, they must plug in the wings of self-confidence, diligence and persistence.
We should give our dreams wings of confidence. Self-confidence means believing in yourself. These are five kinds of courage and courage. It is the foundation for us to realize our dreams, and it is also the source for us to forge ahead despite repeated setbacks. "Confident life for 200 years, you will hit the water for 3,000 miles" shows the mind and heroism of a generation of beautiful women Mao Zedong. It is with this confidence that he can lead the country, turn the tide, turn decay into magic and create the next great new China. On the other hand, if we are not confident or even inferior, we can't awaken the great potential in life. At both ends of the mouse, we can't finally realize our dreams.
We should put diligent wings on our dreams. Dreams are beautiful and charming. It takes time to accumulate. Without diligent wings, dreams are like meteors in life, just crossing a beautiful and painful arc. With these wings, we can start laying bricks and tiles on the foundation. The ancients said: Heaven rewards diligence. Only by plugging in diligent wings can we spread the thorns and fly to the other side of our dreams. In order to extract pure radium, Madame Curie stirred the slag in the pot in the laboratory all day and rested for no more than 6 hours every day. After 10632 crystallization, 0. 1 g radium was extracted, which opened a new era of physics. Madame Curie's diligence is admirable, and it is her diligence beyond ordinary people that makes her reach the point that others can't reach. Therefore, if we want to succeed, we should put diligent wings on our dreams.
Besides, we should put wings on our dreams and stick to them. Persistence in the end is five kinds of persistence, and it is a determination not to give up until you reach your goal. Success building will be built soon. We should bite the bullet and add more bricks or tiles, otherwise it would be a pity. When British Prime Minister Winston Churchill gave a successful speech to students at Cambridge University, he only said three words: never give up and never promise. Never give up. Yes, "a hundred miles is half of ninety". The closer you get to success, the more sloppy you are, and the more determined you are to forge ahead. When we are about to give up, look back at the second sentence, and we will go all out to stick to it. When our school really can't go on, look at the third sentence, we will gain great enthusiasm, cook the duck that is about to be boiled, and finally taste our sweet lunch.
Well, we have inserted the wings of self-confidence, diligence and persistence into the dream of life. With these three pairs of wings, we will definitely think of ourselves and fly freely in the sky.
Comments: The article begins with analogy, which makes the truth easy to understand. The first paragraph also plays a leading role in the whole article. This can directly cut into the key points, make the article smooth and natural, and avoid dullness.
The whole-sub-whole structure of the article is also very successful. In this way, the article will be clear and clear at a glance. It is convenient for the marking teacher to master the full text quickly in a short time, thus leaving a good reading experience for the teacher.
Detailed and profound authentication is another feature of this paper. Taking the first example as an example, this paper first gives a simple explanation of self-confidence, and then illustrates the important value and significance of self-confidence with two metaphors. It's fitting to quote Mao Zedong's famous sentence next. Then use concise and clear language combined with self-confidence to demonstrate in detail, and finally demonstrate from the opposite side. This writing is rigorous and convincing.
I am a free bird, and I can fly in the vast blue sky. Freedom is a huge blue whale, which can swim around in the endless sea.
I yearn for freedom, and I hope to have my own world and life. I have been living under the care of my parents, who have no idea how I feel.
Let's talk about weekends instead of Monday to Friday. I wanted to sleep late in the morning, so my mother immediately pulled my bed off. After I got up, she asked me to do my homework and stayed up until noon. They all stayed outside. I can finally be like a bird, but I still have to be on my guard everywhere.
In fact, in retrospect, they did it for my own good. They are also afraid that the bad guys will take me away, because the bad guys are like a shotgun, shooting at birds that are not with their parents. The bad guys are also like a very big harpoon, killing the separated whales.
Of course, we also need freedom, but when we are looking for freedom, we should not forget to look for it under the premise of safety and parental protection.
There is a pearl and a wheat in front of the rooster. What will it choose? What will we choose? It will choose wheat, and we will definitely choose pearls. You will definitely ask: Why? Pearls are so precious, why would a rooster choose wheat? It can't be that stupid! Pearl is a kind of treasure, dazzling, and can be used for decoration and dressing up. In a sense, it is also a kind of virtual and an accessory, which can represent the honor and status in the world. And wheat is really beneficial to human beings. The rooster chooses wheat because he needs wheat to fill his stomach, and pearls are useless to him.
Roosters need grains of wheat to fill their stomachs; Birds crossing the ocean need a branch, not a sunken nest and food; What fish need is freedom, not food on the hook bought with life. So do we humans. What we need is affection such as affection and friendship, and food that is really useful to us, can fill our stomachs and bring us happiness. We don't need excessive fame, money and status. These are all things outside the body, nihilistic things, and you can't take them with you, whether you are alive or dead. What do we need something like this for? This is completely meaningless.
As the saying goes, "money is not everything, but you can't do anything without money." Although there is some truth in this statement, it will also tempt many people to go astray and lose everything for it. Be sure to refuse the temptation, and don't lose yourself and lose your way because of the scenery along the way.
Vanity is just a false consciousness consciously fabricated by human beings. It can only give us that moment of happiness, and when it is lost from our hands, it will bring us more sadness, sadness and loss. Please calculate, do we want eternal unhappiness, or are we willing to reap fleeting happiness? I think we should choose the latter, and learn to abandon vanity in order to achieve the desired goal.
"Choice" is what we often face. We will choose the right one, but the probability is very small, because we will not choose. On the road of choice, too many temptations will tempt us to the wrong direction. We must keep a clear head and a wise eye in order to climb the peak of success and have a truly chic life.
Bing Xin said: "The crown is a temporary glory and a permanent bondage." You should know: the best talents are suitable for you, don't be a toddler in Handan, stick to the selected goals, and do every multiple-choice question for yourself in life.