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Teacher Xu Jun teaches children to write compositions.
1. The composition "teacher" who taught me to write a composition is an engineer of the human soul. They have cultivated seedlings one after another and trained groups of outstanding talents. Under their careful care, we grew up healthily and lively. Among so many teachers, what impressed me the most was her-the math teacher who taught me for half a semester-Miss Chen.

Teacher Chen is of medium height, with long black hair and bright eyes embedded in her white face, as if she could see the inner world of our classmates. However, what impressed me most was her good quality of loving life when she was a child.

I remember once, I had a high fever, reaching 39.5 degrees. Just as my father was on a business trip and my mother was on duty, I didn't go to school for leave. Teacher Chen came to visit me at home as soon as he knew. She held my hand and smiled and said to me, "Son, you have a fever, 39.5 degrees!" " ! What do you want to eat, the teacher will buy it for you ... "Although I had a high fever at that time, I was sober." Teacher Chen, you're here. "I said to Teacher Chen." Yes, son, the teacher is here. How are you feeling, son? "At this time, my eyes were moist ... The next day, I still didn't go to school, and Teacher Chen came to see me again. When she saw me holding a Chinese book, she said to me, "Don't be too tired, son. When you are ready, we will help you make up lessons. The most important thing for you now is to rest ... "My heart surges: Miss Chen, you are loyal to housework every day, and now I am ill, and you come to see me again ... Thinking of this, my tears welled up ... under the care of Teacher Chen. After returning to school, I took the mid-term exam. Because I didn't attend class these days, I only got more than 70 points. At this time, Teacher Chen comforted me: "Son, I don't blame you for not doing well in this exam. Come on, I'll help you catch up on the lessons you left behind! "This problem ..." With the help of Teacher Chen, I finally got a good score of 100 in the final exam. Teacher Chen wrote on the "message form": "Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. Congratulations on your excellent achievements, but your achievements can only represent the past, not the future. I wish you make persistent efforts and achieve better results! After reading this "message form", I want to say to Teacher Chen: "Teacher Chen, half of my 100 is yours, thank you! "

Now, I have come to Beijing. Although I left Teacher Chen, I still want to say to her: "Teacher Chen, you will always be my most respected and beloved person!" " "

The teacher taught me to write a composition of 700 words. The teacher taught me to read. I still remember that when I was in the third grade, picture books were very popular, and one after another came out. Wu Longyuan, Doraemon, Poké mon ... I was naturally involved in the "book tide" and looked at those exaggerated cartoons and funny words. Needless to say, two words: nice! Adults are against us, but we are extreme.

So we launched a protracted guerrilla war with the adults. I changed my mind after an incident. I was watching Wulongyuan that day when suddenly a pair of eyes appeared in front of me. I looked up, ah, teacher! I'm screwed! But the teacher actually said, "Isn't it beautiful? I have a book to lend you! " I paused and said, "Good."

After school, the teacher handed me a book. "Take a good look." I read the title of the book, How Steel was Tempered. I didn't understand it for a moment, so I took it home to see it.

I went home and looked at it, and I was immediately attracted. The hero Paul Chakokin's "steel" is so strong and unbreakable.

Paul and I cried together, laughed together, laughed together, and felt sad together ... When I closed the book, I couldn't help but think about it and whispered "steel". I also want to be steel. I made a promise.

In the later days, I broke up with vulgar and naive picture books. I fell in love with those heavy books. Reading a famous book is talking to the people in it. I read Robinson Crusoe and Robinson told me to learn to stand on my own feet. I read The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, and Tom told me that only exploration can have "treasure".

You can't read books casually, and it's useless to read too many cartoons. I thank my teacher for teaching me to read.

Every time I think of the text "A lilac in front of the window", I think of the teacher who taught me to write in kindergarten. As a third-grade primary school student, I don't know many teachers, but several teachers have taught me since kindergarten.

I remember when I was in kindergarten. At that time, I couldn't write. Every day, I lie on my desk and write down words that others can't understand in Tian Zige's notebook. Someone asked me what I wrote, and I was still mumbling. Of course, when I asked for the second time, the meaning of what I wrote changed again! Because what was written was not true at all! Later, Miss Li came to the kindergarten. She is very beautiful. I like her hands to teach me how to hold a pen and write. One day, I suddenly could write with the pen in my hand. After school, Miss Li showed her father a picture written by myself. Her happy appearance is often mentioned by her father now!

Teachers are the most selfless in the world. He will definitely teach his students what he knows without reservation. I never leave anything behind! Shining on you, but better than blue. This may be the voice of all teachers! At this point, we should respect teachers more.

My teacher taught me to write a 600-word composition. My teacher always shows me that familiar, kind and unforgettable face. She is my most impressive primary school teacher, Qi Li.

I was only in grade three at that time. At that time, I was self-willed, proud and fond of playing small temper. In a Chinese exam, I won the first place in my class. Hearing the news, I was happy to show off this test paper.

I'm glad the monitor asked me to run a blackboard newspaper. I asked my classmates to bring me chalk and a blackboard brush. If I don't like it, I will curse at random. Gradually, my classmates ignored me, and even my best "best friend" didn't want to play with me.

At this time, Teacher Qi came up to me and said to me, "The reason why the lake is broad is because it contains all the small water droplets, and it will not despise other small water droplets, so it is very happy and not lonely at all. People are the same, you can't live without friends, and friends need to be found by yourself. In fact, more than 70 students in the class are your friends, but you will be so lonely if you don't cherish them. "

Since the teacher talked to me, I have learned a lot, I have friends again, and I know the true friendship. In my study, Mr. Qi often supports me, encourages me and accompanies me across the bridge of life.

Now I have transferred to another school and met new classmates and teachers. In recent years, I have made great progress in my study. Whenever I make some achievements, I will think of her, her teachings and her encouraging eyes.

My teacher I have a very respected teacher. She always likes to wear a blue dress, and her quiet face often has a serious and lovely expression.

Every time I see the twinkling eyes behind her glasses, an unforgettable thing comes to my eyes. I was stumped by a question in an exam.

Seeing other students doing so well. So, I looked around and looked around, trying to find a bargain.

However, the teacher saw through my mind and there was no chance. When the teacher's eyes turned to the other side, I took the opportunity to peek at my deskmate's answer.

I feel much more comfortable after finishing the test. The teacher handed out papers, and as a result, I got 100. I was very happy.

The class was over, and I just walked out of the classroom when I heard someone calling me from behind. Looking back, it was the teacher.

She is usually very strict and will never leave me alone. I followed the teacher to the office in a panic. I dare not go near her or look up at her.

The teacher said, "I dare not look up when I do something wrong." I will forgive you as long as you correct your mistake. " After listening to the teacher's words, my heart relaxed a lot.

I sincerely said, "teacher, I was wrong!" " ""Although you peeked at other people's answers, you still don't understand. "The teacher paused and said," I'd better explain it to you. "

At this time, my face was red. Afterwards, the teacher told me carefully.

Before I left, the teacher told me not to ask more questions and correct my wrong homework. I was very moved and deeply realized the teacher's concern for me.

Teacher! You are really an amiable and respectable teacher. Campus is the cradle of knowledge for me; Campus is the window to teach me how to be a man; Campus is my lighthouse; Campus is a stage for me to show my style.

Campus, let me move from ignorance to intelligence; Let me go from childish to mature. The school celebrated its centenary this year and held a speech contest. I was lucky enough to take part in this activity.

This is the first time that I have spoken to more than 1000 students on the stage, and it is also the fourth time, so I am inevitably a little nervous. When contestant No.3 got off the stage, the host read, "Please welcome contestant No.4 to the stage. The topic of her speech is' Love my China'! " Oh, dear! How did you find me so quickly? I walked onto the stage sweating profusely.

Start the speech: "When I learn English …" Oh, no! What is the action that the teacher taught me? It's over! I totally forgot! Whatever! Say it first! Finally! I'm finished. After stepping down, my classmates told me that I was wrong! I nodded in dismay.

Feeling not rich, no action, wrong sentence! Alas! I can't count on ranking. I was thinking.

The game is over. The host announced that I only won the second place.

If I fail in the exam. I thought: Dad will be very disappointed when he knows.

When I got home, my father's words surprised me! He said: No matter when you start, the most important thing is not to stop after you start. On your way to the first, it is necessary to experience the second ... "Yes! The hope of tomorrow, let us forget the pain of today! Dad's words gave me confidence again.

Campus, my stage, I want to show my grace on this stage that belongs to me! Although I am not versatile, I am also a person with a wide range of interests.

Among them, I also like writing compositions. There are also many students who write well in our class. I didn't recall how excited I would be if I were the person standing on the stage and enjoying the praise of my teachers and classmates! Whenever I see their composition, I feel envious and can't help writing it from time to time.

Until today, I can no longer hold back my excitement and make up my mind to write a good composition! Because of this, I often regard it as a document. Finally, hard work pays off! After a little practice, I made progress.

In the composition class, I try my best to write the best composition! I shine on this stage! Later, my stage became the arena of the composition contest. I am so absorbed that I dare not be careless.

Finally, I won the third prize only by my own efforts. But I will work harder in future competitions! Make it more harmonious! My stage is like a fire. Not only did I exercise my perfect composition, but also my patience, confidence and perseverance! In the composition, the name of the Chinese teacher can be changed to my teacher. The good teacher in my mind is Miss Shen who teaches us Chinese.

Miss Shen is about forty years old. She is not tall and a little thin. She smiled kindly. Although Miss Shen's eyes are a little small, she is dignified in class. When his eyes stare, anyone who sees them will immediately sit down and listen carefully.

He smiled and narrowed into a line, like a robot cat to lose weight. Very interesting. Everyone likes to listen to Mr. Shen's class, because his speeches are humorous and active, which is one of the reasons why we like him.

I remember Shen Lao in the third grade.

The teacher taught me a semi-propositional composition of about 400 words. The teacher taught me to tolerate a trivial sentence, a small detail, a small kindness, which may make people move for a lifetime.

I remember that shortly after I entered junior high school, my math test score was only 67. I was stunned when I saw the score at the beginning of the word "6"-how to complete the task of signing the test paper? The bright red score is looking at me coldly, and I seem to feel my father's heavy slap on me. I cried and threw that terrible test paper aside, and the more I thought about it, the more scared I became. ...

Trembling feet moved into the house like lead. Everything in front of me is as calm as usual. Mom and dad are eating at the table. When they saw me coming back, they asked, "You're back." "Well," I replied hastily and nervously. Run into his room.

I have been silently asking myself, how can I complete the task of signing the test paper? Sign it! No, I did badly in the exam. Not signing? No, the teacher has to check in the afternoon ... As time went by, I hesitated, looked at the clock on the wall, and then looked at my father, who was watching TV on the sofa. What will happen if I sign my father's autograph? ..... I dare not think. Finally, I walked out of the house with a little anxiety.

After entering the classroom, the teacher came soon and checked the math papers for the students one by one. I sat in my seat in fear and trembling, and carefully took out the test paper that my parents had not written. My heart pounded when I saw the teacher approaching. Tantan Tantan teacher finally came to my side.

"Hui Mei, why don't you sign?" Because ... because there's nobody at home. I stammered back to the teacher. I know I lied, and I dare not look the teacher in the eye. But I can feel that the teacher knows that I am lying, so I can only wait for the teacher's criticism in panic; Suddenly, the teacher said, "I believe you ..." When I looked up, I saw the teacher's trusting and encouraging eyes. My heart finally calmed down, and I thought sweetly: Teacher, thank you for tolerating my timidity and maintaining a classmate's self-esteem in front of the whole class.

After the exam, the teacher walked briskly to the podium and said, "Students, it doesn't matter if some people did well and some didn't do well in this exam. Good grades make you more confident; Poor grades can still spur your progress. I just hope that parents can understand their children's learning situation and help them better. Signature is not for parents to reprimand and beat their children. You have to understand this. " Finally, she paused and said, "So, I believe any self-motivated classmate! No matter whether the results are good or not, I believe they will face the results honestly and continue to work hard! "

I heard the last sentence, and my whole body was full of strength. Yes, I can't face bad grades. It is shameful to escape because of poor grades. When I looked up and smiled at the teacher again, I thought to myself: I'm going back to register and apologize to the teacher. I looked up at the teacher and found that the teacher was smiling at me, feeling no blame.

It's been a while, but the impression in my mind is getting deeper and deeper. The teacher taught me to treat others equally with an inclusive heart, which made me understand what love is, which is more profound than any preaching.

6. The teacher taught me to write the composition "Ding Ling Ling ……" The bell rang. When the students were all seated, Mr. Xia smiled and said, "Students, do you know? Last night, I looked after the house alone. I'm not afraid of jokes when I say it. I've never been this big.

Not as scared as last night. That kind of fear can't be described in words, and it still feels terrible when I think about it. It's really scary. "The words sound just fell and the whole class immediately burst into laughter, especially Wang Lingling's laughter.

Lean back, especially exaggerated.

After the laughter stopped, Mr. Xia pointed to Wang Lingling who was still smiling and asked, "Lingling, aren't you afraid of what I said?" "No." Wang Lingling answered simply. "Hey, I saw it last night.

I feel really scared at home. "Teacher Xia asked doubtfully," Why don't you feel afraid after hearing it? Wang Lingling pondered for a while and said, "I don't think what you said is concrete and vivid enough, so we can't feel anything from it. "

Afraid. Teacher Xia looked very sad when she heard this: "Hi! Originally, the teacher wanted to write out the feelings of last night, but now it seems that it is not working. " Say, shook his head, very helpless. Haven't waited for our response.

When I came over, I heard Mr. Xia say, "I have an idea, classmate. Can you teach the teacher? How can I say that you can feel the fear in the teacher's heart last night? "

Let's "teach" the teacher. It's really interesting! But can we do it? In curiosity and doubt, the whole class began to discuss in groups. But how to teach teachers to write? Me and the rest of the team

I don't know where to start. Suddenly I saw the experience of looking at the house alone one night last summer: that night, I just finished my homework upstairs, and suddenly I saw the curtain cloth fluttering outside the window for no reason.

There seems to be a shadow flash across; Then there was a strange "squeak" sound downstairs ... it scared me at that time. Yes, I have an idea. I quickly said to the group members, "We can suggest the teacher to describe something."

What he saw and heard at that time frightened him. Only in this way can we feel immersive after reading it and feel the teacher's fear at that time. "Students are inspired by me, and you are a drag on me.

After the discussion, Chen Xiaoqing said, "You can also ask the teacher to talk about what he was thinking." ...... Finally, our group agreed that teachers should be taught to describe from five aspects: "seeing, listening, feeling, thinking and doing".

The group discussion was over, and each group began to express their own suggestions. Some groups suggest that teachers should pay attention to using more rhetorical devices when writing; Some groups suggest that teachers should write more about the environment at that time.

When speaking in our group, I stood up confidently as a representative: "Teacher, our group agreed that you can learn from what you saw, heard, felt, thought and did at that time."

Detailed description. "Listen to our speech, Xia Feng kept nodding. When we finished writing, he said happily, "Thank you for teaching me to write a composition. From the students' speeches just now, I have understood how to.

Make the composition concrete and vivid. Next, please write down your own housekeeping experience with me in the way you just said. "……

Just forty minutes passed. However, after class, the students still talked about this lesson with relish.

7. The teacher taught me that the composition that the teacher taught me to be a man is not less than 600 words, and there are concrete examples.

Chinese

Bananas are green and cherries are red, shuttling between the four seasons. The sun and the moon cycle, I look back on the road of growth. I went from a naughty little girl to a junior high school campus. On the road of growth, her figure wavered in front of my eyes, but behind the example of growth, her sweat flowed. She, my ordinary and amiable mother! When I was growing up, she taught me how to be a man. I remember when I walked around the door with my dissatisfied report card, I thought you would scold me. I was shocked when I opened the door. You are smiling at me, and that smile is so sweet. Seeing my tears, you quickly help me take down my schoolbag and dry the tears on my face. When I handed the report card to you. But give me the wrong question in detail, and I won't repeat it until I know it. The starry sky that day was so beautiful, and the memory of that day became the most beautiful memory on my growing up. Mom, you taught me that failure is not terrible. The terrible thing is that I can't correct my mistake at once. What is failing the exam? As long as I know my mistakes and correct them, that is the best. Mom, you taught me to be a child who can correct my mistakes. Mom, I wonder if you remember? That day, we walked on the road together. When you see an aunt struggling to hold a child and carrying a lot of vegetables in her hand, you take the initiative to go forward, take the vegetables from her hand and send her to the door. From then on, a seed of helping others was planted in the depths of my young heart and kept sprouting and growing under the watering of my mother. Mom, you taught me to be a useful child! Mom, you always save the bottles at home and sell them to your uncle who collects waste. You let me know that you should be frugal. When traveling, I always look around for trash cans and hold the garbage in my hand for a long time. You also taught me to protect the environment ... Mom, you taught me too much. Thank you very much for teaching me how to be a man! Be a capitalized "person", a battle-hardened "person", a "person" who is not afraid of failure, and a person who is confident to meet tomorrow!

8. The teacher taught me. The teacher taught me to do my homework.

Teachers are hard-working gardeners, cultivating our healthy growth. If we have problems that we can't solve, the teacher will patiently solve them for me. The teacher is like a friend of mine, a heart-to-heart confidant.

On Thursday morning, I went to school. When I got to the classroom, I sat in my seat and took out my homework. The teacher came into the classroom and said, "Put away your homework." A classmate in our class went to collect homework, and then started class. After 40 minutes, the class was over. The math teacher came to me and said, "Come to my office." I think it must be broken and my homework is not easy to do. The teacher must scold me. When I arrived at the office, what the teacher did surprised me. She didn't criticize me, but told me how to explain the problem. I still can't. Not only was the teacher not angry, but she continued to patiently explain it to me in another way. I finally learned the arithmetic of this problem, and the teacher asked me to do it again. Teacher, you feed us like a gardener.

Thank you, teacher, for patiently teaching me to do the problem.

9. The teacher taught me to write a composition of 300 words. Miss Li is my Chinese teacher. She is beautiful, with bright eyes and funny talk.

Teacher Xie is my math teacher. He usually wears glasses and has a loud voice. He is a kind teacher. Miss Li's reconciliation teacher is very strict with us, not only teaching us knowledge, but also educating us to develop good behavior habits.

Teachers often say, "We are like saplings. If you want to grow tall and strong, you must straighten him up from an early age. " Therefore, it is stipulated that we are not allowed to make small moves, talk nonsense, be late for school and eat snacks at school.

If you can't write, you can ask the teacher, and the teacher will explain the questions you can't do before letting us do them. After class, the teacher told us not to play dangerous games and to pay attention to safety. Students can ask teachers to solve problems.

Under this management, our class has performed well in all aspects, ranking first in the class every year. My classmate Fang Jingjing's family is very difficult. The teacher helped her fill out the form and reported it to the county. I hope the project will help her and solve her family difficulties. Fang Jingjing is very grateful to the teacher.

One day, my classmate Liu Yawen had a nosebleed in class. Miss Li wiped her nosebleed and went back to her seat to continue her class. The good teacher in my mind is Mr. Li's reconciliation teacher, because they have taught us a lot of knowledge, cared for us everywhere, cared for us and taught us a lot about being a man.

10. Chinese learning for primary school students: How to teach children to write a good composition is a matter of great concern to some primary school parents. Many parents are worried about helping their children write their compositions. In fact, parents' teaching is very helpful for children to write compositions. So, how should parents teach their children to write a good composition? Let's take a look at the guidance of some school teachers! 1~2 in the lower grades, as long as the children speak, they must be sure. "A good composition is definitely not just the accumulation of simple good words and sentences, but the transmission of thinking."

Li Jing, a teacher at Zhongshan Road Primary School, said. When children enter primary school, parents should guide them to talk about logic.

For example, parents take their children to the park to play, and the children say they have a good time. Parents can help him remember what he is most happy to play with, guide the child to find out the key points of his speech, and then communicate around the center. Due to the limited level of junior children, parents can help their children when they practice writing. It's a good idea to let them express their views orally first. Parents are advised to write what their children dictate on their blogs, so that children can feel their parents' attention and get encouragement and affirmation.

"It is best for children to write by themselves, even short sentences with pinyin and Chinese characters." Li Jing said that parents should stay with their children when they are writing, and study their children's "works" with them when they finish writing sentences, so as to help them clarify the central idea.

Li Jing said that parody is also a good way to exercise junior children's writing. Parents can buy small poems that are easy for younger children to imitate. "Even if the child only changes a few words in the poem, parents should give affirmation and encouragement in time."

"Junior children's writing level is limited. As long as he dares to speak, his parents will affirm him and encourage him. Learning is a long process, don't be too impatient. "

Li Jing said. There is no need to worry about reading in the third to fourth grades of middle school. "Reading can expose children to a world they never knew, and it can also give children more insight into life."

Li Jing said that when children enter the third grade, they will formally start writing compositions. At the beginning, parents can give their children some model essays to imitate, and then they will gradually abandon them and write their own things. When children imitate the model essay, parents should analyze the thinking of the model essay with their children to help them develop their thinking and find another way of thinking and angle.

Li Jing said: "Real education is a slow art. Parents should not worry and let their children learn to write compositions from reading." However, if parents put composition on their children as a "task", it will inevitably imprison their children's thoughts. In the process of parents guiding their children to write a composition, parents should not give their children too many "frames" and should let them write what they think and know.

Parents should guide their children to pay attention to real life, regard reading as a part of real life, integrate what they have learned and what they have learned into life, and re-recognize life before writing down their own life. As for the syntax and composition of the article, this is not the focus of the third grade starting composition. Parents in grades 5-6 of senior grade should be reduced to the same level as their children. Liu, an excellent head teacher of Youyi Street Primary School, said that by the senior grade of primary school, children had accumulated some basic words. At this time, parents must not put too much pressure on their children.

"If parents see that their children are anxious to write a composition, this emotion will be passed on to their children, which will make them feel afraid of difficulties. If parents can't control themselves, let the children write by themselves. " When parents accompany their children to write a composition, they must put down their airs, become their children's friends and lower their level to the same level as their children.

"Parents should learn to discover and affirm the advantages of their children and praise him in time." Liu said that when parents instruct their children to write a composition, they are instructing rather than asking. Children can't accept their parents' guidance, but it will have the expected opposite effect.

"From the perspective of children, parents will find that there are many bright spots in children." Liu Ye shared a short story. A father started a game of "passing notes" with his children in order to guide them to write a composition. He talked with his son by passing notes, guided the children to fall in love with reading and writing through their own methods, and helped them sort out their writing ideas. They also sorted out the father-son dialogue and recalled it with their children from time to time. Father and son are more like friends.

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