1. Use the sudden change method to write an 800-word essay

Revenge

Xiong Gang from Qinglong Vocational School

"Don't run, Don't run..." he shouted desperately.

I didn’t care. In the faint moonlight, I ran as fast as I could, as if I was stepping on hot wheels. I ran a thousand or two kilometers at a stretch, and finally got rid of the person behind me. I'm so happy that I finally got my revenge on him!

I get very angry when I mention him. That day, a few of us were playing in the field, and he came and roared like crazy for a while, ruining a good game. But it's just because we stepped on a few wheat trees, it doesn't belong to his family. Not bad, he told my father about it and called me a "waste boss", so I got a beating. At that time, I thought, I must take revenge on him! His land is next to mine. Isn't it easy to take revenge on him? No, tonight, I succeeded!

As I ran, I secretly rejoiced, haha, "Fei Touzi", let you taste the power of "Fei Touzi"! I dug up your sweet potato into a mess. I would be weird if I didn’t make you half mad! Even if the red potatoes in your field are not dead, they will take half a month to grow up. Haha, let’s see if you still dare to yell at me...

There is a bamboo forest in front of me. I quickly ran over and hid in the dark. , quietly watching the movement outside.

After a while, he ran there, naturally out of breath from exhaustion. The strange thing is that he didn't get angry. Maybe he was too tired to curse, maybe he didn't want to curse in the wilderness...

He stopped here for a while, and when he saw no movement, he turned around and went to the wilderness. Went back. An idea suddenly came to my mind: follow him and see where he goes.

He turned back to the field, took advantage of the moonlight, and picked up the red sweet potatoes that I dug out and threw on the ground. As he picked them up, he sighed: "Alas, alas, what a pity!" Hearing his sigh, I almost laughed out loud.

He walked back home, and I followed him from a distance. Hey, that's strange, why did he walk towards my house? Did he find me? impossible. I must have gone to complain to my father. Go ahead and complain to me, as you wish...

The next morning, as soon as I got up, my mother came back from outside, holding a large bunch of red sweet potatoes in her hand. planting, and said: "Last night, I don't know which 'big guy' planed all our red potato seeds..." 2. A 600-word essay using the plot change method

Title: Father's love

When it comes to love, the first thing that often pops into people's minds is maternal love. Mother's kind smile, caring nagging and careful care always move us and make us unforgettable. Silent fatherly love is easy to ignore. Because it is not like maternal love, what the father often leaves behind is the back of hard work and a serious face. Underneath what we can see on the surface, there are hidden things in the darkness that are easy for us to ignore and are refreshing - -like.

One day, a middle-aged man helped his elderly father to go for a walk in the park. Birds were dancing in the park. The father pointed to a bird and asked: "What is this?" The middle-aged man replied: "It's a thrush." ??The father asked again: "What is this?" The middle-aged man replied: "Thrush." ??This is It was the father who asked again: "What is this?" The middle-aged man thought that maybe his father was old and his ears were not working well, so he said, "It's the thrush." ??But before he finished, his father asked the same question again... and so on. Repeatedly, for the 10th time, the middle-aged man lost his patience and shouted, "It's Huamei. Stop asking!" But the father seemed particularly calm and didn't mean to be angry with his son at all. He spoke in a loving tone. He said in a tone of voice: "More than thirty years ago, when you were four years old, I led you here, who was naughty. You were very excited because of your curiosity and kept asking, 'What is this?' a full 25 times. Every time I answered patiently: "It's Huamei." Because you are still young and curious!" At this time, the son suddenly fell on his father and burst into tears, like a child.

We often see farewell scenes on TV when children leave home to make a living.

The mother cried softly and gave instructions one after another, but the father always only said "Okay, it's time to go" in the end. So plain, who knows how much pain is contained in just a few words in this short sentence. And love? He wanted to cry, but he didn't. His love blossomed in silence, and only a faint fragrance could be smelled.

┏ (^ω^) = 3. Late High School Composition There is a sudden plot twist

How many chances do two people have to meet in their lives? Just like two parallel lines in a geometric figure, no matter how many reincarnations we wait, they will eventually be destined to each other; like a crossroads, at the moment when the crowds and vehicles pass through each other, they recognize each other, and there will be no regrets in this life; like a human bridge, each other We meet but don't know each other, but we walk towards different places and different lives with our backs facing each other.

I once read an article - "Late". They have been childhood sweethearts, supporting each other all the way until they grow up.

He said, one day I will wear an aqua blue wedding dress on you, because you are the most beautiful bride in the world. She waited for a promise, a promise that was a joke when she was young. She watched with tears as different women came in and out of his life. She always believed that she would wait, even if he was always late.

How long is a lifetime? When he finally bought the aqua blue wedding dress and rushed to the hospital, he was still late after all, but she waited a lifetime to no avail, and the tears in the corners of her eyes were not yet dry. This is a sad story, so I shed tears for her.

If you want to ask how strong is love? I think this is the best answer. Many people don't believe in fate, but many things are destined.

The happiness caught in the hands is often never seen. The eyes never give to the happiness in front of you, but always raise your head to grasp the happiness along the way. A person's life is a one-way journey, and tickets cannot be refunded or transferred.

No matter what attracts you along the way, if you cannot catch it, you will lose it forever in the next second. But like some wild flowers, if you miss them here, they may still be waiting for you at the next stop.

When the cigarette rolled up the flowers in my hands, I went to pick roses and lilies, but when I finished, I found that my hands were full of scarlet blood, and I realized that what I missed was the faint wildness. Floral. But after all, it’s the end and it’s time to get off.

If you are running late, pick up the pace! If you have it, cherish it! Remember, cherish and grasp. 4. How to write a good narrative essay (about 200 words)

How to write a good narrative essay

"The article seems to look at the mountains but not the flatness", which means that the article should be written with waves. , the writing has ups and downs, some are high and some are low, some are tight and some are slow, and it is full of changes like waves. No matter how long or short this article is, it can make readers read it for a long time and receive a strong artistic effect. How can we make the article interesting? Techniques such as circumlocution, elaboration, discontinuity, relaxation, and clutching can be used according to the content. In this way, it helps to break the dullness of the chapter and enhance the vividness of the narrative.

The application of circumflex techniques includes the method of suppressing before promoting and the method of suppressing before promoting. Lu Xun's "Fan Ainong" adopts the method of suppressing before promoting. At the beginning of the article, through telegrams and pseudo-telegrams, Fan Ainong is simply like an unhumane, cowardly, non-revolutionary coward. To such a person, the author even writes: "This Fan Ainong... is abominable. ... Wants revolution , Fan Ainong must be removed first. "This is "inhibition". However, as written below, through many interactions, I learned that Fan Ainong was not that kind of person. Like Lu Xun, he was extremely resentful of the reactionaries' brutal killing of revolutionaries, but he only had opinions on the role of sending telegrams at the time. This is "Yang". Through this upheaval, the image of an upright, patriotic, and cynical intellectual emerges on the page. Due to the use of circumflex, the article appears to be ups and downs, avoiding the mediocrity and dullness of the writing.

The sudden transition method can be used. At the end of the narrative event, there is an unexpected and sudden turn to the foreshadowing of the article, setting off narrative waves.

For example, "Problems Concerning Slippers", it is written that Section Chief Wang solved the problem of slippers being lost in the county bathhouse through reforms (distributing shoes to individuals). Unexpectedly, someone filed a complaint against him to the municipal party secretary - taking advantage of his authority to send his hair indiscriminately. real thing. The "sudden turn" at the end turns joy into sorrow, making the article ups and downs.

You can use the misunderstanding method. It is to use the suspicion or misunderstanding between the characters in the work to intensify conflicts, stir up waves, and continuously promote the plot. Development and change, and finally the doubts are solved. For example, "Lihua on the Yi Road" repeatedly uses the misunderstanding method to construct the text: the first time "we "think" the Yao old man is the "owner" of the small hut, it is a misunderstanding; the second time "we" "The elders of the Heyao people thought that the little girl Hani was the "master" Lihua, but they were mistaken for Lihua. The pear blossom has been married to the other side of the mountain. Due to the clever placement of misunderstandings and layered suspense, the article is full of twists and turns, ups and downs, and fascinating.

Can set up suspense. "Suspense" is to raise unresolved contradictions, arouse strong attention and excitement in readers, and eager to resolve their concerns. "Chameleon" not only portrays the "Chameleon" in a profound way through the repeated changes of "Whose dog is this? - It seems to be the general's dog - This is the general's brother's dog", it not only portrays the "Chameleon" who adapts to the situation, flatters and bullies others. The character of the slave below is revealed, and the readers can't help but appreciate the infinite charm and endless charm of suspense...

In addition, the method of combining virtuality and reality (combination of frontal description and side description) can also be used, such as "Ventriloquy" "; there are separations and legalities (written out and then taken back), such as "Lychee Honey", "Praise to Poplar"; coincidence method, etc. According to the needs of the content, the description should be detailed and brief, so that the article has waves. Appropriately insert a description, discussion, lyricism, etc. into the narrative process to make the narrative intermittent and stir up waves of narrative (such as "Who is the cutest person"). 5. Urgently looking for 5 essays

Suspense method

I am an eagle

I am an eagle.

From the time I was born, I knew I was an eagle. My mother stood by the nest, looking at me with sharp eyes, as if saying: "You should be proud of your identity. You will become an eagle! And you must be worthy of yourself!"

Parents When we went out, my brother and I stayed quietly in the nest. How tall we were! Five-colored clouds drifted past, and the river in the distance was sparkling, like a beautiful belt. Standing on a cliff thousands of feet high, with the cool breeze and bright moon as my companion, I feel filled with pride.

I long to spread my wings and fly, have blue sky and white clouds, just like my parents. Because I am an eagle!

Our eyesight is getting sharper, our feathers are getting fuller, and our muscles and bones are getting stronger. We are eager to try in the nest.

One day, I was in my reverie, and suddenly I was awakened by a cry of fear. I saw that my mother was pushing my brother out of the nest. I know that the first test in my life has come. I looked at my mother. There was reluctance and worry in her eyes, but more importantly, determination. I know she wants her children to be eagles, not sparrows seeking comfort. She knew that there was an abyss below, but because of this, she wanted to push us out even more. As an eagle, the first thing you must learn is to save yourself. Those who cannot even save themselves are not worthy of becoming an eagle.

The father was hovering in the air, watching his brother fly unsteadily to the ground, but he said nothing and had no intention of reaching out to help.

I gritted my teeth, flapped my wings, kicked my feet, and threw myself into the air. I told myself: I am an eagle! I want to be the strongest! I searched hard in my mind for the secrets of flying that my parents had taught me. I flapped my wings vigorously, and my body gradually stabilized. The wind makes my wings hurt, but I'm not afraid, I know this is just the beginning.

I finally landed smoothly on the ground, my heart pounding. My brother stood there and looked at me silently, with a hint of maturity in his eyes.

It seemed that in an instant, I knew that I was already an eagle. "I will become a real eagle!" I said to myself.

My parents flew down. Their eyes were filled with pleasure.

Now, they have become our loving parents again.

I am grateful for my success, but I dare not relax at all. I know that there are many things waiting for me to learn.

I asked my father: If we forget how to fly and fall down, will you save us? The father answered without hesitation; No! You may think this is cruel, but this is why our family survives. A real eagle is not afraid of any difficulties!

We followed our parents and flew over the snow-capped mountains, forests and rivers. I fight against the wind and rain, and I meet the challenges. I soar in the distant and deep sky, light and proud, calm and firm; my figure moves silently across the vast land, making all rats daunted.

My eyesight is getting sharper, my feathers are getting fuller, and my muscles and bones are getting stronger. I know that my future will be windy, rainy and foggy, but I believe that I will have a blue sky. Because, I am a real eagle! 6. Home visit incident composition

In the fourth class on Friday afternoon - the care class tutoring class, Teacher Shen told us: "School is on holiday tomorrow, and I may come to your home to visit." I heard it. I was thinking: It’s best that Teacher Shen doesn’t come to my house. Otherwise, I'll be doomed. My parents knew that I was noisy in school, ran around outside after class and went crazy, and often got into fights with my classmates. My heart tightened, and I silently wished Teacher Shen, Teacher Shen, please don’t come to my house for a home visit tomorrow.

After school, we all lined up to go home. When I got home, I thought about not telling my parents that the teacher was coming to visit tomorrow. Then even if the teacher came, he wouldn't be able to say anything to the parents, especially since the parents wouldn't know about what happened at school. However, I also thought that paper can't cover the fire. If the teacher comes, the parents will be punished even more if the father knows about it. That would be even more overwhelming. I thought about it for a while and decided that it would be better to tell my parents. So, I said to my parents: "Mom, Dad, the teacher said she might come for a home visit tomorrow."

When the next day arrived, I was very nervous. It's nine o'clock and the teacher hasn't come yet. I guess it looks like the teacher won't be coming to my house today, that's good. However, not long after, the teacher walked in. I asked the teacher to sit down at home, and then I ran out and called my mother back. Mom and the teacher started talking. I immediately walked inside and poured a cup of tea and brought it out to the teacher. And I took out fruits and candies for the teacher to eat. Then, I sat down next to my mother and listened to the teacher talking to my mother. They talked for about ten minutes, and the teacher was leaving. I stood up and followed my mother to send the teacher out of the house. My mother came back to the room and said to me: "The teacher said that you have some shortcomings that need to be corrected. He said that you still have many advantages that should continue to be carried forward." I told my mother, "I understand. I will continue to carry forward the advantages and correct the shortcomings." "

At this time, I put down a big stone in my heart. 7. Tips on writing techniques: How to make sudden plot changes convincing

It may be influenced by micro-novels. , or maybe they are "influenced" by the popular "brain teasers". Students often like to play "sudden twists" in the design of storylines, "I'm not afraid that (the protagonist) can't do it, but I'm afraid that (the reader) can't think of it." , making so much nonsense that you just hate yourself for being "stupid as hell".

The common clichés used by these students are: ① Suddenly one day... ② *** All of a sudden... ③ *** Sudden enlightenment... ④ *** Enlightenment... All these things, "unexpected" There is more than enough "externally", but not enough "within reason". You can't help but be amazed: the plot changes suddenly, making it difficult to be convinced! So how can a sudden plot twist be convincing? The author might as well dissect a "sparrow" for you and give you three tips.

Example of distance from Pan Jiaxin When I came to my stepfather's house, I knew that my eyes when looking at this family were hostile, and there was a distance between me and this family. Crystal ice ridges hung under the eaves, and melted ice water dripped down the bricks and onto the walls from time to time.

The wall was newly painted with lime, and the golden straw was still vaguely exposed.

In order not to affect my study, my stepfather placed me in the west wing with the best conditions, while he and my mother lived in the dank east wing.

He also went to the supply and marketing cooperative to buy a lamp and put it on my desk. Every night, he would sit opposite me with a new book bought from the bookstore and study with me.

He just sat quietly, never making a sound, and only occasionally flipping through the book. The high school entrance examination is just a few months away, and I have to read until very late every night. However, no matter how late it is, he will always stay with me until he turns off the light for me.

I knew that it was very tiring after a whole day of farm work, and I was not used to him sitting across from me, so I said to my mother: "Tell him not to come to my room again at night." Come here." My mother's lips moved but she didn't speak. I remember her eyes were red at that time.

That night, I overheard him saying to his mother: "It's hard to study at night, so stay energetic when you have someone to accompany you!" From then on, I didn't mind him reading with me, but he let me go again. There is a table in my room, and the distance from my desk is exactly the edge where the light from the desk lamp reaches. Every night, he still reads with me, but he becomes quieter and the sound of turning the book becomes quieter.

Occasionally when the voice gets a little louder, he will look up at me in horror like a child who has done something wrong. When he sees that I don't care, he will continue to read with peace of mind. In this way, until before the high school entrance examination, he accompanied me to read more than a dozen thick books.

On the day I received the notice, I was playing at someone else’s house. A child in the village told me. When I dashed to the door, he was standing face to face with the postman.

The postman asked him to sign for it. He looked at me and then at the postman, took the pen, put a check mark where the postman pointed, and said, "I can't read and I can't sign!" "Then he couldn't help his joy and smiled at the surrounding villagers. At this time, my mind went blank, "What, he can't read, but he, but..." An endless feeling of gratitude came to my heart, and I knelt in front of him with tears streaming down my face, and shouted out loud: "Dad - —" He still just smiled, but with a bit of sadness and a bit of relief.

When I looked at this home again, I felt that there was no distance between me and this home. Analysis: The stepfather in the above article sat quietly and read every night. He read a dozen books in a few months, but he was "illiterate".

This sudden change in the plot is not only convincing, but also awe-inspiring. Why? It is due to the following three "combinations": 1. Harmony. The so-called "harmony" means that the character's behavior should be in line with the character's personality, mood, interest, etc. Wherever I feel my feelings are, not expressing them is not enough to express my feelings. This is human nature.

"Father's love" has its own unique connotation and quality in family affection. It is "rigid" and exudes "masculine beauty", just like a tall tree that towers above the sky and covers the wife, children and family from all wind and rain.

The stepfather in the article sat quietly reading but was "illiterate", which fits the following qualities of "fatherly love": ① Perseverance - In order for his daughter to enter high school, he was "illiterate", but he picked up the book, and It was after "a long day of farm work." ②Perseverance - This is not a day or two, but a few months; not one or two books, but a dozen books.

③Calm - he just "sits quietly and never makes a sound". ④ Dare to take responsibility - "Study hard at night, have someone to accompany you, be energetic!" ⑤ Take all the difficulties by yourself - "He put another table in my room, the distance between my desk and my desk is just enough for the light of the desk lamp "The edge"... 2. Reasonable The so-called "reasonable" means that the development of the situation must conform to the truth and the logic of life.

It is common sense to not go with the trend of reason. Under normal circumstances, a stepfather should pay attention to his methods in caring for his daughter.

Because of hostility and careless words, my daughter is unwilling to accept it, and is even disgusted - you are not my biological father, what does it have to do with you! The stepfather in this article is an "illiterate" person, and his education level is not high, so he cannot use words to care. He may be self-defeating, and his daughter will choke on a few words and freeze there. For this reason, it is best for the stepfather in the article to use silent actions to influence and influence him subtly.

So what is the best course of action when your daughter studies at night? There is nothing better than "reading books to accompany you". Why? Because: ① No sound - it will not affect children's learning.

② Lasting time - as late as the child can learn, you can stay with him as late as possible. ③ Harmonious atmosphere - children study and parents read, enjoying themselves.

3. The so-called "joint purpose" means that the sudden turning point of the plot can hit the main theme of the article and bring it to a steep height. The movement of thoughts, if not turned, is not enough to realize its purpose, but the true meaning of turning.

How many kilograms of explosives are needed to blast an object. If the amount of explosive is insufficient, the explosion will not be possible or the explosion will not be complete.

Ordinary actions can shorten the distance between stepfather and daughter, but to achieve "zero distance" or even "negative distance", it is not enough to have enough "quantity". The unexpected plot of "illiteracy" was like a catalyst, causing a sharp "fission" reaction in the amount of "reading books to accompany", and finally raised a "mushroom cloud" of gratitude in "my" heart, completely destroying it. It broke the ice in "my" heart.

This "Dad" was shouted out "without a voice" and it came from the heart. "Illiterate". 8. Write another essay of 200 words divided into four paragraphs on small production methods

My small production

In the past two days, I always want to make some small inventions and creations. Every time I do something I have tried several times to make everything, and when I finally succeeded, I couldn't put it down and would show it to everyone every day when I had free time.

Let’s talk about the water dispenser. First find a bottle, tie it with an elastic band at the mouth of the bottle, then find a pulley, pass a curved iron wire through the axis of the pulley, and insert a piece of wire into one end of the pulley. Tie the other end of the waste pen cover with the other end of the elastic band. Hold the waste pen cover with your hand. The waste pen cover drives the wire to rotate along the axis of the pulley, and also drives the vial tied with the elastic band up and down, just like digging a well. Crank the handle while watering and carry the keg up and down. When using it, you put the small bottle into the pool, hold the "handle" with your hand and rotate it along the pulley, and the elastic band will follow the wire like listening to the command, and bring the small bottle up, and the bottle of water will be filled up. .

My water dispenser is ready like this. I used my brain and tried it many times and finally succeeded. I am very happy and proud. This is really a hard work and a harvest!