Beautiful paragraphs at the beginning and end of the composition 1
First of all, cut to the chase
(1) Narrative method to explain the basic elements of events
The beginning of "Langjian" explains the time and place where it happened: "1On the morning of August 28, 945, looking down from Liang Qingshan, I saw many people walking along the mountain road to the airport outside the east gate."
At the beginning of "Remember a Table Tennis Match", the person, cause and time of time are explained.
(2) Cut to the chase and reveal the theme.
At the beginning of the article "Come Back", I wrote: "I haven't seen my father for more than two years. What I will never forget is his back. "
The article "Praise of Poplar" begins with: "Poplar is really extraordinary, I praise it."
This method is also used at the beginning of Silhouette of a Good Life.
(3) Take the beginning of things as the natural writing method at the beginning of the article.
An essay entitled "Remember a biology lesson" begins like this: "The bell rings, and everyone walks into the biology lab."
Second, indirect method.
The "indirect method" mentioned here is not the absence of "doors", but the use of writing techniques (such as discussion, description, lyricism, quotation, etc.) to decorate the "doors" more beautifully. ), rhetorical methods (such as questions, metaphors, etc. ) or other methods (such as setting suspense, etc. ), make the article more literary, so as to express the theme more deeply and vividly and fascinating. For example:
(1) environment description and rendering atmosphere
"Pear Blossom Blossom in the Post Road" begins with a description of the natural environment: "Mountain, what a big mountain! The undulating blue mountains are one after another, extending into the distance and disappearing into the confused spring scenery. " It plays up the deep and confused atmosphere of Ailao Mountain, and plays a role in setting off the touching story of the frontier fortress soldiers and civilians helping others later.
This method is used at the beginning of "lost years" and "housing allocation".
(2) the lyric method of deepening the theme discussion
The text "Who is the cutest person" and the example "Unusual Examination" all adopt this way of opening.
(3) quoting famous sayings, epigrams and poems
"People's Public Servant" begins: "People's life is limited, but serving the people is infinite. I want to devote my limited life to serving the people indefinitely. " This is a famous passage in Lei Feng's diary. Beginning with this passage, it undoubtedly played a "literary eye" role in describing Lei Feng's deeds later.
Bing Xin quoted Wang Wei's poem "Thinking of Shandong Brothers on a Mountain Holiday" at the beginning of the article "Thinking of my relatives twice during the festive season": "Being in a foreign land, I miss my relatives twice during the festive season. I know from a distance where my brother climbed, and there is one person missing from the dogwood. " The topic is novel and sincere, pointing out the theme of missing overseas relatives.
(4) fascinating hints.
At the beginning of the second exam, a strange thing was put forward, which attracted the attention of readers and naturally made people think: "Why is this?" I am eager to find the answer from the following article, so as to enhance the appeal of the article.
(5) Ask questions to attract readers.
There is a composition entitled "My Hometown", which begins with: "Friend, have you been to my hometown? Have you climbed mountains, swam, and eaten fat carp in my hometown? "
There are many ways to write at the beginning of the article. The following are several common ones. In writing, sometimes we cannot use a single method, but several methods. With what method to start, we should consider the overall idea of the article, set out from the need to express the central idea, arrange the overall design throughout the article, and choose the most suitable starting method.
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Like the beginning, the end of the article is also very important. A successful ending can make readers understand the content of the article more thoroughly and further understand the central idea of the article; A wonderful ending can arouse readers' thinking and * * * sound, and enhance the appeal of the article. The ending should be like a bell, "there is more than a clear sound." The choice of ending method must also be considered from the overall situation, so as to make the narrative events complete and clear, and make the structure of the article echo from beginning to end, so as to better express the center and achieve the purpose of writing. Here are some common endings.
(1) Natural Smoothing Result Calculation Method
Nie Hualing's "Man, One Less" describes the different image and behavior of a beggar woman three years ago, and shows the profound theme of personality degeneration. The author did not add any comments and analysis, but simply described the course of the incident. At the end, it said, "Bang, the door was kicked open. The woman turned around, sneered and gave me a cold look. She doesn't even recognize me! " This unadorned natural ending leaves readers with infinite thinking space, which is memorable. The example "Remember a Table Tennis Match" also ends in this way.
(2) The head-tail echo method begins to quote.
The ending should echo the beginning, which is the general writing of narrative, and many articles reflect this feature. Mr. Guo Moruo said at the beginning of the article Egret: "Egret is an exquisite poem." Finally, he said, "Egret is really a poem, a prose poem with rhyme in its bones." "Egret is a poem", an unusual metaphor, especially the ending of which is embodied as "prose poem", highlights the characteristics of egrets' ordinary and beautiful, simple and noble, and praises their beauty.
(3) Full-text summary method makes the finishing point
This method generally summarizes the center of the full text or comments on the characters and events in the text in the form of discussion or lyric. The last paragraph of the article "Who is the cutest person" belongs to this type. This passage ends the whole article in a discussion and lyrical way. The title of the last sentence is: "You will deeply love our soldiers-they are indeed our loveliest people!" The examples of "The Color of Spring" and "Housing Distribution" also end like this.
Sometimes famous sayings, epigrams or poems can be used to summarize the whole text, so that the ending is concise and clear, which plays the role of making the finishing point. For example, in the last paragraph of "Pear Blossoms on the Post Road", "I look at these energetic Hani girls and the white pear blossoms, and I can't help but think of a sentence,' Pears are everywhere on the Post Road'."
(4) Implicit and profound heuristic association method
The end of Lu Xun's Hometown is the most typical example: "I think: hope is nothing, nothing." It's like a road on the ground; In fact, there is no road on the ground. If there are many people walking, it will become a road. "This passage is profound, pun intended. Encourage people to bravely open up the road to create a new life, sublimate the thoughts and feelings of the full text, and reflect Lu Xun's "tough" fighting spirit. The example "The Lost Years" made such an attempt at the end.
(5) exclamatory sentences inspire readers
The end of some articles is neither a summary center nor an inspiration, but the author speaks his mind and expresses strong love and hate. At the end of "Praise of Poplar", I shouted loudly: "Let those who look down on the people, despise the people and stubbornly retrogress praise the noble nanmu (also tall and graceful) and despise this extremely ordinary and easy-to-grow poplar. I want to praise the poplar loudly! "
At the end of the article, as at the beginning, the methods are flexible and diverse, and there is no fixed model. The methods provided above are for reference only, and should be used appropriately according to the needs of the content and center when writing, and cannot be copied mechanically.
The beautiful second paragraph at the beginning and end of the composition
Lessing once said: "Morality is eternal, and wealth changes its master every day." We can't guarantee that we will have money all our lives. Maybe one day we will get rich overnight, or we may change from rich to poor. Only the flower of morality in our hearts will always exist in our minds.
In this society, there are many codes of conduct that restrict our words and deeds, and that is morality. Being a moral person is actually very simple. As long as you think carefully about everything and think more about others, morality will accompany you.
Morality is a pair of hands, pushing open the window blocked in the heart; Morality is a window with a beautiful sky outside; Morality is a sky, which breeds countless pure hearts. If a person has no morality, even if he has some skills or talents, he can't be a useful person in society.
The poet Dante said: "A person with incomplete knowledge can make up for it with morality, but it is difficult for a person with incomplete morality to make up for it with knowledge."
People often say: morality is a stone, knocking out the fire of hope; Morality is fire, which lights the lamp of hope; Morality is a lamp that illuminates the road of life; Morality is the road, leading people to glory. From now on, start from yourself and consciously be a propagandist, practitioner and defender of moral construction, and be a moral person. Some lawless people took advantage of the crisis in Sichuan to launch a national disaster and sell a bucket of water to 50 yuan. Look, what makes people even more angry is that some people have come up with the idea of relief materials ... these people's actions are shameful, but after all, they are a minority. What I saw from the earthquake was a more touching picture for me. People all over the country donated money and materials to the disaster areas, and our school also held fund-raising activities. Teachers and students have extended a helping hand to the disaster area. Send someone a fragrant rose. Life is a mirror, learn morality, always smile at life, and life will smile at you.
Write a moral composition with a wonderful ending.
To be a moral person, we should pay attention to cultivating our own moral concepts and the unity of knowledge, emotion, will and action. We can't just talk about motivation regardless of the effect, and we can't just judge its good or evil according to the effect. We should pay attention to moral cognition, handle the relationship between knowledge and practice, pay attention to the exercise of actual behavior, and enhance moral emotion and willpower in practice.
Morality is the basic quality of being a man. We should defend morality, publicize morality, practice morality and be a moral person!
How can I be a moral and cultured person? First of all, when others misunderstand and insult you, you should smile and remind him that a truly moral person should not do so. When others laugh at you and belittle you, you should prove to him with actions that you are a strong man. Moral people help the weak, respect the elders, treat children well, love the country and tolerate human beings.
However, in our society, there are still a group of people who insist on their kind nature. It may be just a drop in the ocean, or it may be extremely small, but please don't ignore that there are so many people who are silently advancing with you and practicing the principle of kindness. I think "being a moral person" should not be just a simple slogan, but should be truly implemented in our lives. Show more love for strangers; How filial to parents; Pay more attention to your brothers and sisters.
The beautiful third paragraph at the beginning and end of the composition
As the saying goes: "knitting clothes and trousers is the beginning;" The most important thing in basket weaving is to close the mouth. "A good article should have a fascinating beginning and a fascinating ending. The so-called "leopard tail" means that at the end, the brushwork should be concise, bright and neat, just like the leopard tail sweeping vigorously, loud and powerful, giving readers room to chew and aftertaste.
The head-to-tail correspondence structure is rigorous.
1, at the end of the city, there were no bustling markets and flashing neon lights; At the end of the city, there are only weather-beaten dilapidated shanty towns; At the end of the city, there are a group of people like them.
(End) The sun rises from the horizon, illuminating the end of the city and their lives.
They will eventually become us. ("they")
2. (At first) Standing on the banks of the Seine, you can feel the pulse of fashion and elegance in Paris; Being on Fifth Avenue, you can feel the gorgeous and gorgeous atmosphere of new york. Strolling through the streets of Ginza, you can appreciate the ancient and modern culture of Tokyo; Stay by the Huangpu River, and you can appreciate the unique and inclusive Shanghai spirit. ...
(End) I am facing the city in infinite thinking, touching its shell and eager to touch its soul. I hope that one day its inner substance will be as beautiful as its outer shell. I hope those falsehoods and frivolities will become real and solid. The hope is that "the clouds sell rain and the clouds fall, and the color area is bright." I hope we can touch the beauty of the flowers in this city again from the inside out. (touching the city)
The wind outside the window is clear and birds are singing. The sunshine in the window is beating, and the dream is sweet. The boat of time quietly entered the dream and opened its sleepy eyes. The windmill of life turns and turns every day, but I don't think it is a faded sculpture, because what accompanies me every day is touching.
There are feelings everywhere in life, even if it is a grass, a tree, a flower and a stone. From the emotional point of view, I found that in the long river of life, every kind of water drop collision sound is so crisp and pleasant.
(End) From the beginning of emotion, we will enrich our bags every day, whether it is happiness or trouble. I think it's a sentence from my own experience. ("Starting with Emotion")
4. (At the beginning) The endless desire of human beings is the driving force to push the wheel of history forward.
Where does desire come from? The innate curiosity of human beings.
(End) Curiosity-it has promoted the progress of the world, and at the same time accumulated the power to destroy the world.
What should we do with this expanding curiosity? (curious)
5. (at the beginning) Why?
Two old people, only a few meters away from the house, what's the need to shout every few minutes?
Every time I go to grandma's house, it always arouses my curiosity.
(End) I think that the so-called love is like this. It's the people I love, the people I miss, and they must exist where I can see, where I can reach and where I can walk.
I am glad that I have curiosity to understand the care, warmth and love of grandma's generation. I see, that voice phone is saying, with you, the whole world is here. (curious)
Natural gathering is simple and unpretentious.
6. Life is a warp and weft interwoven with bitterness, beauty and ugliness. It travels through time and space, but the light is still there. We need to constantly explore and think about life. As long as we can constantly add sand, water and stones to our thinking, life will become full.
Let's create and enrich our cup of life together! (Life in a Glass)
7, life, in fact, is a process, a lot of things, a lot of people, failed, experienced will understand, will mature. When failure comes, don't be sad, but see it as an opportunity for growth and exercise. Rush over, you will have a better and brighter life waiting for you, and you will have a sense of accomplishment; If you back down, you will only have more failures and more regrets in your life.
When we are near the end of life, when we look back on this life, especially those difficulties and failures, we will feel that perhaps it is because of these that we have enriched our lives, overcome them and made our lives more perfect. (Don't say "no" easily)
8. I stood under the golden flower tree, carefully put that curiosity into the corner of my heart, and warmed myself with the love she gave me. (curious)
9. I only caught a glimpse of you, but I caught a glimpse of a dull and far-reaching attitude towards life. Relax, relax, I will never be dominated by everything. I am alone in the turbid waves, and I only want to die holding the bright moon. There is a withered tobacco and a white mustard on the river.
Teach me how to follow in your footsteps, beauty is the essence of being at a loss; Teach me how to touch your skirt, that kind of indifferent attitude.
This is you, as light as spring, your paranoid pursuit, a Bai Mudan fluttering beside spring, an ethereal song for you. ("A cigarette belongs to Ren Jiangping")
10, "The taste of people is pure joy." I can't catch the shadow of the bright moon, but I beg to keep an amber heart. In the busy life, drinking a cup of light mineral water, even for a moment, will bring you different feelings. ("Qing Huan")
Make the finishing point of Zhang Xianzhi
1 1, everything is like a leaden dream! Life is fleeting and things change. All those who have lost their hopes and dreams, we will cherish your dreams! We will plant flowers of love and unity on the land of our motherland. The world is with us! We have the same dream and learn to fly with the wings of our dreams.
Dream lives together, and it will never wither in the warm room of memory. Let's put wings on them with the flowers of love. (dreams)
12, tragedies have existed since ancient times. However, since ancient times, who has seen such inspiring and earth-shattering unity? "Historical Records" has a cloud: the people are in harmony with the people, then the family is safe, and the monarch is in harmony with the people, then the country is prosperous. Today, this is the joint efforts of people and people, people and countries, and countries and the world. Why are you worried about family unrest and national prosperity?
Castle peak together, we go through the storm together and get together. The bond that unites people all over the world may be such an expectation: to stand for the world, to stand for the people, to continue to learn from saints, and to create peace for all generations! ("Castle Peak with Storm")
13, there is no trace of birds in the sky, but it has already flown. Flying is not to leave traces, but to enjoy freedom and happiness in flying!
The flowers fell without trace, but they were beautiful. Although there was no result, I enjoyed sweat and youth. Although I can't embrace the first choice, I will create the most beautiful surge in the second choice, so that I can fly over my dreams and step into the palace of art!
I need sand in my cup! ("I need sand in my cup")
14 However, things are always changing, buildings are built in a unified style that is no longer consistent with wheat fields, and the curves of field paths become stiff. People look at the present countryside with a disappointed expression. Those pictures that disappeared in memory became eternal pains in the heart, and thus became places that people could never reach.
In order to reach the countryside, now we not only have to pass through countless cities. ("as far as")
15, nature has its own laws, and human beings are also a part of world life, so we should abide by this law. Perhaps, the wave of pity has brought more disasters; Perhaps, watching all this happen quietly is not indifference, but a person's respect for life and adherence to this natural law. Rules)
Look back, smile and wink at people.
16, a moment of love in life has brought us a lifetime of dedication, and great sadness makes us so happy. Whether it is bitter or sweet, I can taste this life without regrets!
I don't know when a kite flew in the sky and lonely birds circled around it. I reached out to block the dazzling light of the sunset, just like an illusion of light and shade. I can't help crying at the thought of stumbling all the way. Look up and drink the last sip of coffee, and the fragrance of life stays between your teeth.
Woolf said with a smile, let's remember the years, love and time. ("I saw it in coffee")
17, the wind blew over the windowsill, and there were traces of falling flowers. I hope there will be no more signs of falling flowers. Because I have entrusted the bright moon to tell the flowers gently: don't say "no" easily. (Don't say "no" easily)
18, my eyes are often wet, perhaps because, after a long time of noise, I finally touched a string that I haven't plucked for a long time. I always try to convey something between gestures. Is it admiration for love or gratitude for love? ("between gestures")
19, I walked through the south of the Yangtze River/in the season, just like the opening and falling of lotus flowers. While enjoying the spring water and the south of the Yangtze River, the brilliance of human feelings also draws a blue picture on the blueprint of the soul.
As the flavor of the water town continues, the dirty dust in that city seems unable to invade the heart washed away by the misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River.
In the temple of the soul, I pray devoutly, just to be a person who keeps the taste of Jiangnan in the mud of troubled times. (Pin Jiangnan)
20. Find a quiet room, make a cup of coffee, and pay homage to those lost souls with the fragrance of the room. From then on, take a pot of coffee on the road ... ("Take a pot of coffee on the road")
What does Dreadwind Lone Star mean?
Folklore: Dreadwind means very fierce, cruel and unlucky; Lone star, lone star.