First, the word order is improper

1, the attribute position is wrong. For example:

(1) It is impossible for China to be self-sufficient in cotton production for a long time.

Cotton produced in China cannot be self-sufficient for a long time. )

(2) The vast rural youth show great enthusiasm for socialism.

The attribute "incomparable" is misplaced in the adverbial position, which leads to a sick sentence. We should put "incomparable" before "enthusiasm". )

2. The adverbial position is improper. For example:

(3) In the cause of socialist construction, we should give full play to our extensive knowledge.

(The adverbial "enough" is misplaced in the attributive position and should be placed before "play". )

3. Improper position of function words

& lt 1 & gt； The adverb "bu" is in the wrong position. For example:

(4) If we don't do our own domestic affairs well, it will be difficult for us to have a say in the world. The negative adverb of the word "ba" should be placed before the word "ba".

(5) If we don't check the work of contract farming now, we can't hoe the land ahead. (The word "no" should be moved before the word "and")

& lt2> Improper placement of related words

When two clauses in a complex sentence use the same subject, the related words should be behind the subject; When the subject is different, the related words should be in front of the subject. If it is upside down, it is out of place. For example:

He not only studies hard, but also helps other students. ("He" should be moved before "Not only")

Second, improper collocation.

1, improper collocation of subject and predicate, such as:

(7) In the early morning, the students who participated in the long-distance running galloped on the expressway. Students should use "running" instead of "galloping". )

(8) the torrent of feelings is rolling, and the blood of the whole body is whistling. ("Hot blood" can only "boil", not "roar")

His lofty revolutionary qualities often appear in my mind. ("quality" can't be "budding", but it can be changed to "his great revolutionary image". )

2. Improper collocation of verbs and objects. For example:

(10) These articles are full of Marxist viewpoints. ("flicker" should be "light". )

(1 1) Before liberation, my father and brother didn't earn enough money to support their families. Only people can "feed" but not "live". )

(12) Shanghai Science and Technology Development Center has gathered a group of professional teams who are enthusiastic about science and technology development services and good at management. ("Gathering" should be "specialized talents". )

3. Improper collocation of subject and object. For example:

(13) The last day of work is the most tense, enjoyable and meaningful day for the students. ("labor" means "one day", so just delete "labor". )

(14) The political situation of stability and unity is the prerequisite for the establishment and perfection of China's socialist market economic system. ("situation" means "condition" is not suitable, so "situation" can be deleted. )

4. Improper collocation of modifiers and headwords. For example:

(15) He has made great efforts in cultivating improved varieties. (The word "big" should be changed to "many". )

(16) I have a pair of smart and capable hands and can do anything. ("Smart and capable" should be changed to "smart". )

(17) At this meeting, we had an extensive exchange of views on salary. (It should be changed to "extensive communication". )

5, one side and two sides are not properly matched. For example:

(18) The improvement of academic performance depends on whether students work hard or not. ("improving your grades" is one-sided, and "whether you work hard" is two-sided. It can be changed to: the improvement of academic performance depends on students' own efforts. Or changed to: whether the academic performance can be improved depends on whether the students work hard or not. )

(19) Artists have always been looked down upon by people, but now they are popular. Between this supercilious look and love, they appreciate the warmth of the world. "White eyes" and "favor" refer to two sides, while "tenderness" only corresponds to one side. )

6. Negation and affirmation are not properly matched. For example:

(20) Should we attach importance to Chinese learning? Is it okay to study only math and physics? Our answer isno. There are both positive and negative answers to the previous questions, and the latter answers only take care of the negative answers. )

(2 1) I think it is unnecessary to describe this, and no one can imagine it. ("No one can imagine" means "No one can imagine", which is just the opposite of the original sentence. )

When checking whether collocation is appropriate, we should pay special attention to checking coordinate phrases to prevent the phenomenon of paying attention to one thing and losing another. For example:

(22) Take various measures to cultivate and improve the level of teachers, especially middle-aged teachers. (Improper collocation of "cultivation" and "level")

Third, the results are incomplete or redundant.

1, the composition is incomplete

& lt 1 & gt； Missing theme. For example:

(23) From this small matter, it illustrates a big problem. What is the subject of "explanation"? The subject-object phrase cannot be the subject, so "from ……" can be deleted. )

(24) There are many comments about the TV movie Peking Man in new york. (Delete "about" to make the subject of the sentence appear. )

& lt2> is missing predicates. For example:

(25) These roles are of different types and have a considerable distance. If you don't have the skills to shape the role, you can't play well. ("These roles are different types" lacks a predicate, so it should be supplemented by "belonging". )

(26) recently, a comprehensive quality inspection activity was carried out, and a series of work such as establishing and strengthening the technical management system should be carried out in this activity. Which verb is the object of "a series of jobs"? If you can't find a suitable one in the original sentence, you should add the predicate "completed" before "established" to make it smooth. )

& lt3> is missing an object. For example:

In the past two years, they have promoted the scientific farming of horses and brigades throughout the county. ("promote" what? The object "experience of ..." is missing. )

We should make every effort to mechanize and collectivize our agriculture. It is appropriate to "take the road of …". )

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There are redundant elements such as subject, predicate and attribute. Here is just an example for a brief explanation.

(29) We sophomores, in class, generally speaking, we can listen carefully and observe classroom discipline. (The topic is redundant. )

The lecture notes borrowed from your college last time are being printed and can be distributed to students before class. (Predicate redundancy)

(3 1) Commemorating "Three? The arrival of the eighth festival. (There are redundant elements after the object. )

(32) What a rich subtext of "silence" is behind this sentence. (Attributive redundant)

Together with the old farmer, he repeatedly conducted high-yield wheat experiments. (pile up adverbials and delete one at will. )

Xiao Wang takes every job seriously. (The complement is redundant. )

Fourth, the structure is chaotic.

1, sentence combination. This means that two or more groups of sentence structures are mixed together, making the meaning unclear. For example:

(35) This method is sanitary and convenient, and is deeply loved by the masses. (or "deeply loved by the masses" or "deeply loved by the masses")

(36) People who have been bound by the planned economy for many years have also awakened. ("Once bound ..." and "bound by ..." can be mixed, and both can be used. )

2. Change the subject of the sentence. Sometimes the subject of a clause is changed in a complex sentence, which makes the original subject and predicate unable to match, and also causes structural confusion. For example:

The old worker's words deeply touched Xiaoqiu's heart, and he could not be calm for a long time. (The subject of the former clause is "words" and the subject of the latter clause is "Xiaoqiu's heart", which is a secret transformation and causes confusion. It can be changed to "... touched Xiaoqiu and kept his heart for a long time ..."

3. The level is not clear. For example:

(38) Xinhua News Agency found that after the successful completion of the synthetic yeast alanine transfer ribonucleic acid in Shanghai, readers attached great importance to it, and the scientific community also attached great importance to it and reacted strongly. ("Arouse a strong reaction" is an abstract sentence, which should be said first and then concrete; For scientific achievements, let's talk about the reaction of "scientific people" before the reaction of "readers".

4. Improper punctuation will cause confusion. For example:

The success of this film is attributed to the collective strength, the artistic leadership of the film bureau, the assistance of the original author of the stage play and the dedication of all the actors. These are all new experiences that I have never experienced. (When a comma is used after "collective strength", readers naturally regard the following words as the object of "thanks", but the author's original intention is to regard the following words as the subject of "everything is", and a period must be used after "strength")

Verb (abbreviation of verb) is ambiguous.

Ambiguity includes two situations: one is "inexplicable" and the other is "ambiguous". "Confusion" is expressed in one sentence, but it can't make people understand what it says; "Ambiguity" means that there are two understandings of a sentence. No matter "inexplicable" or "ambiguous", it is a manifestation of unclear expression. Here is an example:

1, puzzling. For example:

(40) Visiting the Firesaw Factory with Ridge and the Forest Light Rail is my way home from this trip. How can a "visit" be a "homecoming"? The author means, "... is what I plan to do on my way home from my trip." ”)

2. ambiguous. For example:

(4 1) The factory director adopted the rationalization suggestions of two workers, which greatly stimulated the enthusiasm of the employees in the factory to make suggestions. ("two workers" or "two suggestions"? Understanding leads to ambiguity. )

(42) The county informed Zhao Xiangchang to report before 15 this month. (it can be understood as "before 15") or "before 15")

When buying apples, no child wants them. (It can be understood as "a person's apple" and "a child". )

3. The reference is unknown. For example:

After thinking for a long time, she still can't make up her mind. Finally, she decided to go to Aunt Wang's house not far from home and let her go home with her. (Who will accompany who? Probably "two aunts accompanied her". )

(45) Boss Song reunited with Qi San after a long separation and talked about speculation. He lit a cigarette for him ... (Who lit a cigarette for whom? I can't guess. )

Sixth, illogical.

The "illogical" here means that the meaning of a sentence cannot be said in reason. Common types are:

1, which is contradictory. For example:

He is one of the survivors of many deaths. (The contradiction between "victim" and "survivor". )

Many people who have made achievements in scientific and intellectual research have achieved success through tenacious and hard work under very difficult objective material conditions. (The contradiction between "everything" and "many")

2. Improper juxtaposition of concepts. The concept of juxtaposition should also be divided according to the same standard. If the standards are confused, it will lead to the mistake of juxtaposing the concepts of size and different categories. For example:

This farm is determined to increase the output of grain, cotton and cash crops. ("Cotton" is a "cash crop", and the two cannot be juxtaposed. )

Swimming tickets are divided into ordinary tickets, visiting tickets, monthly tickets and season tickets. "Visiting ticket" is not a "game ticket" and cannot be juxtaposed with "ordinary ticket". )

3, strong pull cause and effect. For example:

Because he is partial to science, he is not interested in mathematics and physics. (The latter is the concrete manifestation of the former, not the result. )

(5 1) Because he is a northerner, his thoughts are basically the same. (There is no causal relationship before and after)

4. The subject and object are reversed. For example:

The name Edison is no stranger to us young students. Students' recognition of the name Edison. )

(53) The study mood last year was quite different from this year. (Comparing the first two with the last two, the latter is always the main body, so it should be said: "My study mood this year is the same as last year ...")

5. Improper denial. For example:

No one can deny that excellent academic performance is not achieved through hard work. There is a triple negation, and the whole sentence expresses the meaning of negation, which is just the opposite of the original intention. )

(55) Of course, the play also promoted feudal ideas such as karma, so who can deny that the play has no negative effects? The rhetorical question itself is also negative, so this sentence expresses a negative meaning, not intentionally. )

6, unreasonable. For example:

In the afternoon, after a thunderstorm, a beautiful rainbow appeared in the western sky. The rainbow appears in the opposite direction to the sun, and the rainbow in the afternoon can only appear in the east. )

As long as you study hard, you can get into a good university. "Study hard" is not a sufficient condition for "getting into a good university". )

1, Suzhou, Hangzhou, Dalian and Kunming are the tourist attractions in the south of China.

I went to plant trees last week.

Today, all the students in Class One, Grade Three are going to the movies.

My class work is the best, and Xiaohong is the best student.

There is a small pouch on my desk.

6. This is an interesting fairy tale book.

7. His view is correct.

8. My sister and I both participated.

9. The scenery of the West Lake is very beautiful.

10, various flowers are in full bloom.

1 1, I often recall the past.

12, the students are sitting in the spacious reading room reading.

It rained all morning this morning.

14, warm air blowing.

At the party, the students performed many wonderful programs.

16, the homework is finished.

Summer in Dalian is a beautiful place.

18, I watched a science fiction story at home all day this morning.

19, the soldiers hid in the dense forest.

We should expose the bad elements hidden among the people.

2 1 Premier Zhou lived a simple life.

22. My mother bought vegetables, pork, apples and cucumbers from the market.

23. After about a whole hour, Fanka fell asleep with sweet hope.

24. In spring, all our classmates and young pioneers are going to play in the wild.

After reading this article, I can't help thinking of something that happened to me.

26. Teacher Wang told us something that happened recently that is hard to forget.

27. I said to myself, "What did I do wrong again?" .

28. After class, the campus immediately boils.

29. Papermaking is one of the four great inventions in ancient China.

Although compressed air can bear huge weight, it has many wonderful uses.

3 1, in the construction, to prevent accidents.

Teacher Li won the title of "model worker" in the national education system.

33. Zhan Tianyou overcame various difficulties and tests and presided over the construction of the Beijing-Zhangjiakou Railway.

34. It is inevitable that a person has shortcomings and mistakes. Just improve.

After the teacher's explanation, the students understood the profound meaning of this fable.

We went shopping and bought many things, including pencils, notebooks, erasers, stationery and markers.

In recent years, our living standards and environment have been greatly improved.

38. The burning sun shines warmly on the earth.

We should learn from and carry forward Lai Ning's heroic deeds.

40. All the difficulties beat me.

4 1. There are almost no failures in our class this semester.

42. Uncle Lei Feng's helpful spirit.

43. Did you persuade him not to take the past to heart?

We should use and understand the common words we have learned.

45. I went for an autumn outing today. All the students are here except Li Ming.

46. Through the report of Lei Feng's story, I learned a lot about being a man.

I listen to the radio and TV every night.

48. Only by accepting others' opinions with an open mind can we correct our shortcomings.

49. Li Minghe Zeng Li took part in the composition contest held by the school.

50. Heavy rain and dark clouds are falling from the sky.

5 1, to get rid of bad habits.

52. In life, Engels enthusiastically helped Marx.

As soon as I entered the school, I saw a number of teaching buildings and a burst of reading.

54. Beijing in spring is a beautiful season.

55. Xiaohong volunteered to be a librarian.

After teacher Zhang's education, Xiaoming's classmates realized their mistakes.

57. Everyone is joyfully celebrating a happy program.

58. Two students from Class 6 (3) won the first prize in the math contest.

59. I conclude that this may be a good thing done by Xiaohong.

6 1. The author of this song is Max Zhang.

62. We should keep clean in public places.

He reviews his homework very carefully.

64. The old man's pointed chin was covered with a gray beard.

65. Do a good job in class work and give full play to the role of class cadres.

66. People expressed their opinions at the meeting.

Zhou Xiao accepted his classmates with an open mind.

We have a good habit of not eating snacks since childhood.

This is the largest ocean-going ship made in China.

Our school didn't pay enough attention to health work in the past.

7 1, be sure to correct it carefully and carefully check the mistakes in your homework.

We are watching a beautiful dance.

The level and language of this article are beautiful.

74. People who don't do what they say is a very bad style.

It is shameful to waste food without caring about it.

After the teacher's education, I finally realized my mistake.

77. Because of his excellent grades, Li Ming studies very hard.

78. She tries her best to help her classmates who have difficulties in academic performance.

79. The peach trees are covered with many big and red peaches.

80. I have carefully completed my homework and Chinese homework in all my strong subjects.

Her hometown is Beijing.

82. Xiaohong and Xiaojun told the teacher that he took half a day off in the afternoon.

83. The classroom is quiet. No one is there, only Xiaohua is doing his homework.

84. My classmates' criticism of me is basically completely correct.

Xiao Ming was the first to speak in the discussion.

86. The Palace Museum exhibited newly unearthed cultural relics more than 2,000 years ago.

My father used to tell me interesting stories about his childhood.

In the past, our class didn't pay enough attention to health work.

89. I must get rid of my bad shortcomings.

90. The National Day is coming, and slogans and slogans about learning how to do new things are posted everywhere in the streets.

9 1. The park is full of six colors of red flowers in May, which is very beautiful.

92. I was having breakfast when Xiaojun called me to school.

93. After hearing this story, I laughed in unison.

94. It's time in physical education class, and the students are happy on the playground.

95. I finished five of the six assignments, and I finished one without doing it.

96. I record and watch educational TV programs.

97. Pay attention to the stroke order and strokes when writing, and the typos have been greatly improved.

98. The buildings such as the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, the Palace Museum and the Asian Commercial Building are very modern.

99. The thunder was followed by a flash of lightning, and it was about to rain cats and dogs.

100, in order to have a good dialogue on the theme of "talking about dedication", competing to speak.

10 1, we should cultivate the love of cleanliness and hygiene from an early age.

102, my mother often rewards me for studying hard for the four modernizations.

103. The train runs along the railway on the Gobi Desert.

104, Grandpa Zhou loves our children, and we love Grandpa Zhou.

105, I am very interested in this book.

106, after the teacher's education, I finally realized my mistake.

107, Xiaohong participated in the third live composition competition for primary school students.

108, Xiaoming studies hard because of his excellent grades.

109, clouds and heavy rain fell from the sky together.

1 10, I can't help but blurt it out.

1 1 1. Every student should have the habit of listening carefully in class.

1 12. There are many places of interest in China, and the Great Wall is the only one.

1 13. Miss Wang and her classmates have deep feelings.

1 14, colorful scarlet letters are blooming in the flower bed.

The temperature today is very dry and uncomfortable.

1 16, Chinese is particularly interested in him. At the squadron meeting, the students criticized each other.

1 17, when I finished the exam, I quickly handed in my papers.

1 18, lin li answered the teacher's questions.

1 19, I must correct my bad shortcomings.

120, the street is quiet and pedestrians are in an endless stream.

12 1, computers have a wide range of functions.

122, Xiao Ming's good academic performance is the result of his serious study. There are many vegetables in the garden, including cucumbers, eggplants, greens and watermelons.

123, after the teacher's education, I finally realized my mistake.

124. In order to hold a squadron meeting with the theme of "stressing dedication", we scrambled to speak.

125, cultivate the love of cleanliness and hygiene from an early age.

126, my mother often rewards me for studying hard for the four modernizations.

127, the phenomenon of students spending pocket money indiscriminately has been obviously corrected.

128, under the vast plain, the guerrillas dug countless passages.

129. The typos in Xiao Fang's composition have been greatly improved.

In the school sports meeting, our class made gratifying achievements.

13 1. The children performed their own programs happily.

132. Today, Teacher Li told us many stories about Lei Feng.

133, Mr. Jin was awarded the honorary title of excellent head teacher by the school.

134. The levels and sentences of this composition are very smooth.

135 He always speaks first at any meeting.

136, Li Ming is wearing a red coat and a white hat. He looks very energetic.

137, the people's living standards have been continuously improved and improved.

138, he brought pens, rulers, erasers, references and other stationery.

China is the most populous country in the world.

140, Wang Ning was gloriously awarded the title of "Three Good Students".

14 1, because Xiaoming studies hard and makes rapid progress.

142. It was windy all night last night.

Xiaohong and Xiao Li are good friends. She often helps her review her lessons.

144, people who don't do what they say is a very bad style.

145. At the get-together, the students sang beautiful songs and danced happily.

146, I don't think he can do this problem.

147, we should not only attach importance to Chinese and mathematics, but also develop in an all-round way.

148, this semester, our school launched an upsurge of "learning from Lai Ning and loving the collective".

149, the bright moonlight filled the earth, and the stars in the sky blinked naughtily.

150, I guess he probably went out to see a movie.

15 1. With the help of teachers, typos have been greatly reduced.

152, if the weather is so cold, he will keep exercising.

153, China has the Great Wall of Wan Li, which is not found in the world.

154. As soon as the bell rang, the students flocked out in an orderly way.

There are many places of interest in China, and the Great Wall is the only one.

156, Teacher Zhang is in good health and has a fast pace.

157, Grandpa loves me so much.

158, in the football match, players put forward "winning without arrogance, losing with grace".

159, Beijing in spring is the most beautiful season of the year.

160, in the face of difficulties, we must stand the test.

16 1. Dong Hui in our class took the initiative to be a librarian.

162, young pioneers should give play to their fine traditions.

The students listened attentively to Grandpa Sun's story.

164, let's not read in dim light.

165, the story is wonderful.

166. After reading the works all night, I love the great Premier Zhou even more.

167, computers have a wide range of functions.

168, Xiao Ming's good academic performance is the result of his serious study.

169. There are many vegetables in the garden, including cucumber, eggplant, green vegetables and watermelon.

170, after the teacher's education, I finally realized my mistake.

17 1. In order to hold a squadron meeting with the theme of "stressing dedication", we tried our best to speak.

172, cultivate the love of cleanliness and hygiene from an early age.

173, my mother often rewards me for studying hard for the four modernizations.

174, the phenomenon of students spending pocket money indiscriminately has been obviously corrected.

175, Gu Jing is like a warm mother, feeding her children in her hometown with sweet milk.

176. The typos in Xiao Fang's composition have been greatly improved.

177, in the school sports meeting, our class made gratifying achievements.

178, the children happily performed their own programs.

179. Today, Teacher Li told us many stories about Lei Feng.

180, Mr. Jin was awarded the honorary title of excellent head teacher by the school.

18 1. The levels and sentences of this composition are very smooth.

182. No matter what meeting, he always speaks first.

183, Li Ming is wearing a red coat and a white hat. He looks very energetic.

184, the people's living standards have been continuously improved and improved.

185, he brought pens, rulers, erasers, reference objects and other stationery.

China is the most populous country in the world. With the help of the teacher, 193 gradually developed good study habits.

187, Wang Ning was gloriously awarded the title of "Three Good Students".

188, because Xiao Ming studies hard and makes rapid progress.

189, before school, my brother could write and write Tang poetry.

190, Xiaohong and Xiao Li are good friends. She often helps him review his lessons.

19 1. People who don't say what they say is a very bad style.

192, I was eating when Xiaohong asked me to go to the movies.

There are four errors:

Inhaling air polluted by sulfur dioxide and various metal dusts for many years has damaged respiratory organs, and many people suffer from respiratory diseases, such as bronchitis, asthma, emphysema and lung cancer. Because most patients with respiratory diseases in the four countries leave the air to pollute the environment, their symptoms will be solved, so people collectively call this disease "asthma in the four countries."

"Breathing air polluted by sulfur dioxide and various metal dusts" was changed to air polluted by sulfur dioxide and various metal dusts.

"Many people suffer from respiratory diseases, such as bronchitis, asthma, emphysema, lung cancer, etc ..." In short, remove the ellipsis.

"The disease will be solved" was changed to "the disease will be relieved".

It should be after the change.

Residents of Shikoku City have been inhaling this kind of air polluted by sulfur dioxide and various metal dusts for many years, and their respiratory organs have been damaged. Many people suffer from respiratory diseases, such as bronchitis, asthma, emphysema and lung cancer. Because most patients with respiratory diseases in the four countries leave the air polluted environment and their symptoms will be alleviated, this disease is collectively called "asthma in the four countries".

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