The wind is still.
Rain is peaceful.
The pen clenched in the hand shakes the sad and lonely line and conveys the heart.
Lost, sad, heartless pour out, leaving a frozen heart and scattered tears. I sobbed feebly, my life was opened and the cave was closed-it was the darkness in the blockade, leaving sad memories in the light.
It's dusk, the gray sky is dripping with tears, and it's raining in Mao Mao. The overjoyed "you" is reluctant to part with the sweetness of the spring rain, nourishing people's hearts. Countless rains never end in the sky, and they shed tears on the earth resolutely, tears like pinholes, which suddenly got into their hearts and turned into wonderful feelings.
Spring rain is affectionate and warm as sunshine.
When you enjoy this treatment with subtle steps, what awaits you is a bloody scene, twisted like a thorn, beating your heart and eyes, and the pain and roar of fear are hidden in the air.
A bloody corpse, a cat dismembered alive, was stuck to the ground by abundant rain, the intestines were pulled out by evil, the skin was mercilessly peeled off, and the limbs were cut off bloody. "You" were horrified to find that there was only one kind of hatred in those eyes, which transformed everything.
Tears, crazy occupied "you" cheeks.
There is a violent pervert in front of you, stepping on a cat that escaped from death ... With the heartbreaking cry of "Meow ...", a bloody sense of human powerlessness is established.
Long chills, long tears, ... unbridled rain. ...
In the picture, the sad girl holds the board in her hand, tightly covers her mouth with her left hand, carefully supports the dismembered body, and touches the pain again and again, becoming a beautiful structural diagram.
As night falls, the small tomb is blurred.
Lift your head and look out of the window.
The night is sad.
The wind is still.
Rain is peaceful.
It was you who saw the blood-stained sunset, so please offer a love.
In this same rainy season, I deeply bless cats and bring happiness to heaven.
Then take a deep breath:
Love, where does love come from-please allow me to tell you that it comes from human nature.
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Please present a love, love, where does love come from-please allow me to tell you that it comes from human nature. It is the main idea of the article, with profound thoughts, rich meanings and sincere feelings. At the end, the feelings are sublimated, and the pen is light and affectionate.
A transparent heart Everyone has a heart, a pure heart, an enterprising heart, a beautiful heart, a cunning heart and a terrible heart. What I want is a transparent heart.
In a big family, there are teachers and classmates. They are always United, so United. However, in such a good family, there are many incredible things.
There is such a pure girl and a transparent heart. Therefore, she has many friends. Among them, one is her best friend. She told her everything about this friend, but she always felt that there was a veil between her and her friend. Friends don't tell her anything, they keep using her. But there was nothing she could do. She is too pure and kind. Therefore, many people bully her.
Even if tens of thousands of people bully the girl, she doesn't want anyone to bully her friends. However, this friend of hers is never ungrateful and always says that he values his friends very much. Helpless, she could do nothing. She knows her friends too well. If a girl says something to a friend, the friend always says that she has no conscience, and she has paid so much for her, but what she gets is such a heartless sentence.
Once, it was very hot, and her friend suddenly had a nosebleed. She told her friend to put paper on the bleeding nostril, and not to put paper in the nostril, so the blood would flow more and more. However, his friend left him a message: "What do you want to keep your nose bleeding?" ! How can you be so heartless! ""that's not what I meant. I'm afraid your nosebleed will be more and more. This move is very good, really I don't lie to you. " The girl is a little anxious. But her friend said, "Don't think I haven't tried. I almost had a nosebleed. " Her friend said maliciously.
Later, it was over because the girl apologized to her friend. Nobody mentioned it again after that. They became good friends again.
I think she wants a heart as much as I do. It is a transparent heart. We should also use a heart, a transparent heart to impress others, and a friendship heart to dissolve friends.
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The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text. The article has clear clues and prominent themes, and is closely focused on "a transparent heart". The language is fluent and concise. The ending is just right, the center is clear, the language is concise and profound, and it is intriguing.
14: 28 Love in the afternoon On May 2, 2008, during the exam of the first class in primary school, while the children in kindergarten were sleeping, the table was shaking and the stationery fell to the ground-an earthquake happened.
It's raining cats and dogs in Beichuan County. A middle school is lifeless, with bodies everywhere and few survivors. A class finished the exam and found a test paper without writing a word. Perhaps, at the moment when the test paper was opened, he was at a loss. There is another picture that I will never forget. A schoolgirl was ready to run away, but at the last moment, she couldn't hold on and kept bending over. After all, who is the murderer? A child's head was bleeding, and the nurse frowned and tried to stop the bleeding. "Here it is!" A simple cry called out a lot of people and found a bunch of second and third grade pupils. One, two, three … There are eight students. What were they doing during the earthquake? Discuss? Still playing?
Sichuan is crying, China is crying, we are crying, they are crying, and the relatives of the deceased are extremely sad. The 7.8 magnitude earthquake caused such great damage!
Let me save one more person by the People's Liberation Army moved me. They tirelessly saved one person after another, hoping to increase it bit by bit. If you want to ask, who is the cutest person, I will say "uncle of the People's Liberation Army", because they have aroused the hope of life for the victims!
Today, our school held a donation activity. In the third grade, a student came up with a piggy bank and took out the pocket money he had saved for three years. This is his own savings. Maybe in the hot summer, when his friend was eating ice cream, he didn't eat it. Perhaps, when his classmates were eating snacks, he forbeared and put the money in the piggy bank ... Before, he might have looked a little stingy, but now he has put three. This is true love, and the world is beautiful and wonderful because of this love!
From Sichuan to other provinces, from China to foreign countries, love is spreading quietly. ...
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Love is priceless —— Thoughts after reading The Charity Sale —— The Story of Wang Hongxi. Today, I read an article-a charity sale-the story of Wang Hongxi, which benefited a lot. This article comes from a series of stories of the Virtue Youth Literature "Simulated Diplomats". The article mainly wrote about the charity sale in Wang Hongxi, and used the money earned to buy New Year gifts-gloves, scarves, etc. For the children in the welfare home. Only sold a third. An aunt bought four scarves, but none of them were sold out. Seeing that it was getting dark, they shouted: "Charity sale, Wang Hongxi personally held a charity sale." This fire was snapped up by adults and children in the street, and everything was robbed. * * * earned 260 yuan and bought gifts for children in welfare homes.
Seeing this, I can't help thinking of my alumnus nun, who was the favorite pupil of the last Taizhou "Virtue Boys" taught by Teacher Zhou. In 2008, "5. 12" Wenchuan earthquake shocked the world, and all directions extended a helping hand and offered love. Sister Zhu Yunqing is no exception. Not only did she donate all her pocket money, but she also took the whole class to my Jiangyan Pedestrian Street to mobilize the masses to raise money with the slogan "Give love to the disaster area and support a blue sky for life". In a short afternoon, * * * raised more than 3,000 yuan in cash and donated it to the disaster area, making a contribution to the reconstruction of the disaster area. This spirit is really worth learning.
Now Zhou Longfei, a classmate in our class, always fails every exam because of his poor foundation and unsatisfactory grades. Liu Jinghui, the deskmate, decided to help him. Every time the deskmate recites the text from each other, as long as Zhou Longfei doesn't recite it, even after class, Liu Jinghui will ask him to recite it to the end. Thanks to Liu Jinghui's enthusiastic help, Zhou Longfei's exam results have now risen from failing to passing. Parents thanked Liu Jinghui, classmates praised her, teachers praised her and asked us all to learn from her!
Yes, as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a beautiful world.
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The language is plain and the center is not prominent.
Love, but also love. Everyone has love. Everyone is eager to be loved. Love is human nature. However, love, sometimes pay attention to the way, love, sometimes grasp the scale.
Love, but also love. what is love ? That is a kind of sympathy and warmth. what is love ? This is a comfort. It's beautiful. However, overindulgence is not enough. Love is a kind of quality love and a virtue. People in love are pure and kind at heart. Love can help desperate people see the light again; Love can help people who have lost confidence regain their confidence.
A beggar living on the street, begging with eyes full, hoping to get help. Some people pass by him and turn a blind eye; Some people took out 1 and threw it on the ground. At this time, what about the dignity of beggars? Love is not charity. If someone gives money to a beggar every day, over time, he will rely on this charity, without dignity, status and self-esteem. He is no different from a pet. True love is not charity, but giving him confidence, making him stand up again, giving him spiritual help, and letting him achieve sweet success with his own labor, love, love and know how to love. Know how to love. ...
Everyone is compassionate and caring. Everyone should make good use of his love and compassion to help others, encourage others and comfort others. While loving, we should also grasp the scale of love. To love others is to love the world and the earth. Because, you saved a person's self-esteem, let him bravely get up from a big pit, finally stand up, boldly face others, be equal to others, let him lose his self-esteem, stand up and become a useful member of this world. It is because of your little love and help that he has achieved great success. At this time, he should still be smiling with relief. At this point, your love is right! Love, but also love. You did it.
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The details are inappropriate, the center is not prominent and the expression is inaccurate.
Love on the ice Recently, all kinds of media have focused on one thing, which has warmed our hearts for a long time like the warm sun in winter. ...
This happened on 2014,6543810.9: Three students from a university in Tangshan were playing in Nanhu Park. While playing on the ice, a boy accidentally fell into the ice hole, and his girlfriend subconsciously reached out to save him. Due to inertia, he was also dragged into the ice hole. Another boy instinctively jumped on the ice and approached them gradually. Because the ice was too slippery, he was dragged near the ice cave and was about to fall into the water. At this time, six good people came to the ice. They don't know each other. At first, they didn't know how to save people. Later, they lined up hand in hand. The first man holds a long wooden stick, so that the male students who fall into the water can grab one end of the stick. The others worked together to save two drowning people from drowning. It is difficult to save the boy. He has been trying to pull the girl up with him. After mediation, he released the girl's hand. Then everyone saved the girl. According to the rescuer, it only took 10 minutes before and after the college students fell into the water and were rescued ashore. ...
In this case, six well-intentioned people can risk their lives and resolutely rescue them. This spirit is really commendable. Especially in the past two years, we have learned from TV, newspapers and other channels that the old man fell to the ground and no one dared to help him; Seeing the thief stealing, but no one stopped him; There are also many phone fraud, telecom fraud, online fraud and so on. These things make us shudder. It seems that there is no honesty between people in this society, and a wall has been built between people in their hearts, as if love is gone and kindness is gone. Today, when we see these six Lei Feng-style Tangshan citizens, with their love and hands, they snatched three fresh lives from the hands of death. But they left silently after saving people.
The silent departure of the six heroes has brought us back our long-lost true feelings and feelings. There are still many good people in the world! The Six Heroes shine with a kind of human brilliance, just like the warm sun in winter, which warms our hearts for a long time. ...
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The language is dull, indescribable, the details are improper, and the center is not prominent.
Make way for love. In the early morning of summer, I walked from the path to the street. The sun is already in the sky, and it's already sweating after a few steps.
There is a path ahead, which is narrow enough for only one person. The land whitened by the sun looks clean. One side of the road is paddy field and the other side is private plot. Farmers grow some vegetables. Depend on your own production to meet your own needs. ]。 On both sides of the road, there is a clump of grass, which is itchy and a little uncomfortable.
Walking, in front came a big fellow, in his forties, with a full face of Houthi, a stocky northeast man. He is a standard "model husband", with a stick in his left hand and a bucket of clothes in his right. Obviously, I just got back from washing clothes by the pond.
However, this road can only be crossed by one person.
I calculated the distance, and three steps later, I slipped into the gap of the appointment and wanted him to go first. Unexpectedly, at the same time, Dahan also stepped into private plots.
"After you!" I am learning English. I am too excited to control my feelings. Emphasize that you are completely dominated by certain emotions. ] to pop up a sentence. I suddenly felt a slip of the tongue and quickly added, "You first!" An embarrassed smile floated on my face, although the big fellow might not feel it.
"You go first!" He smiled at me politely, which was like a warm spring breeze.
"After you!" I said with a polite smile. Because he still has a bucket full of clothes in his hand.
"You go first!" He still stood there without raising his feet.
I didn't refuse again, so I hurried over. At the moment when I passed him, I smiled and said to him, "Thank you!" " "That's the truth full of gratitude.
We walked in opposite directions. However, there is a human warmth in the turnover place.
Although it just gives way, it makes me understand that if everyone knows humility, there will be no distance between hearts and people will be full of warmth. I want to thank this big fellow, who made way for me and taught me to make way for others.
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Love speech: Help people in need and offer love. Dear teachers and students, I'm Lei Songtao from the Student Union. Today, the topic of my speech under the national flag is: "Helping the poor and giving love". The ancients said, "Old people are old, young people are old, young people are few, young people are few" and "giving to the people can help the people". The Chinese nation has always had a fine tradition of helping the poor and giving love.
We all know that there is no absolute fairness in the world. So we all complained that the queue in the dining hall was too long, the wooden bed board in the dormitory was too hard, and parents gave too little pocket money. But have we ever thought that some people can't even eat, some people live on the streets, and some people even lose their parents? By contrast, we seem to be the luckiest people in the world. These are all worthy of our gratitude. But while we are grateful, we should also try our best to lend a helping hand to those in need.
In some poor mountainous areas in northern Guangdong, the peers there are poorer than we thought. It is their greatest wish to have a dictionary. Their schoolbag is just a tattered plastic bag, and they even look forward to the opportunity to go to school. They are all peers who live under the same blue sky with us, but they are treated differently. Comparatively speaking, we get more, and we have the responsibility to pay more.
As the saying goes: "Give someone a rose, and your hand has a lingering fragrance". As students, we can't surpass ladygaga to become the star with the largest donation of 20 1 1, nor can we set up the One Foundation like Jet Li. But we just need to drink one less bottle of drinks to buy a new stationery, save pocket money and donate it to the students who need help the most, solve their urgent needs and let them study and live normally! Even 1, 1, 1 yuan ... can make sand into a pile. Your casual love and care may change the life track of a peer!
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Dull language