2. What are the ways to write a composition at the beginning? 1. Cut to the chase. The so-called "straight to the point" is a figurative statement, which refers to the straightforward writing method when writing an article. For example, the opening of Talking about Bones reveals this point: "We China people have backbone." "Praise of Poplar" touched on the theme at the beginning: "Poplar is really. This method should be the first choice at the beginning of composition in examination room. 2. The background is gradient. For example, Kong Ji Gigi began: "A big counter in the street ... can warm wine at any time. Start in the scorching sun and heavy rain: "June 15, the weather is crazy hot!" "These beginnings explain the time, place, season, climate, or the background and environment of the topic. 3. Ask questions and questions. First, flashback the result of things, set suspense, or ask questions first, causing explanation or discussion. For example, "Colorful Flowers" begins by asking, "Why do flowers have all kinds of beautiful and bright colors? "The purpose of this opening method is to set suspense, attract readers' attention, stimulate readers' interest, increase the faltering of the article at the same time, and show the beauty of the layout of the article. This opening technique appears frequently in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. 4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Quoting proverbs, famous sayings, poems or proverbs at the beginning can attract readers. Help highlight the role of the center. For example, Cheng Yi's words are quoted at the beginning of Doubt and Learning: "Scholars must doubt first". This way of opening is also easy for ordinary candidates to master and use. The opening of famous aphorisms can often enhance the momentum of the opening, making people feel abrupt, lofty and lofty. Of course, the quotation should be as accurate as possible to avoid intellectual mistakes. 5. In order to arouse readers' interest in the things or reasons to be explained, for example, the stone arch bridge in China begins: "The bridge opening of the stone arch bridge is curved, just like a rainbow." Ma Shuo begins: "There is Bole in the world, and then there is a swift horse." Take the story of Bole and Maxima as a metaphor to draw the central argument. Since it is a metaphor, we should pay attention to the similarity between "other things" and this topic.
3. What are the writing methods at the beginning of the composition? 1. Cut to the chase. The so-called "straight to the point" is a figurative statement, which refers to a straightforward way of writing articles. For example, "Talking about backbone" shows the point at the beginning: "We China people have backbone." "Praise of Poplar" touched on the theme at the beginning: "Poplar is really extraordinary, I praise Poplar!" This method should be the first choice for writing in the examination room.
2. The background is gradient. For example, "Kong Ji Ji Ji" begins: "The big square counter on the street ... can warm wine at any time". "Under the scorching sun and heavy rain" begins: "June 15, it's crazy!" These beginnings explain the time, place, festival, climate or the background and environment of the topic.
3. Ask questions. Flashback the result of things first, set suspense, or set questions to break the theme first and cause explanation or discussion. For example, Colorful Flowers begins with a question: "Why do flowers have all kinds of beautiful and bright colors?" The purpose of this opening method is to set suspense, attract readers' attention, stimulate readers' interest, increase the faltering of the article and show the beauty of the layout of the article. This opening technique appears frequently in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Quoting epigrams, famous sayings, poems or proverbs at the beginning can attract readers and help highlight the center. For example, Cheng Yi's words were quoted at the beginning of Doubt and Learning: "Scholars must doubt first". This opening method is also an easy method for general candidates to master and use. The well-known epigram opening can often enhance the momentum of the opening, making people feel abrupt, eventful and lofty. Of course, the quotation should be as accurate as possible to avoid intellectual errors.
5. Excellent metaphor. Metaphor is used at the beginning to arouse the reader's interest in the thing or truth to be explained. For example, "China Stone Arch Bridge" begins: "The bridge opening of the stone arch bridge bends like a rainbow." Ma Shuo begins: "There is Bole in the world, and then there is a swift horse." Taking the story of Bole and Maxima as a metaphor leads to the central argument. Since it is a metaphor, we should pay attention to the similarity between "other things" and this topic, and we can't force it.
4. How to write safe electricity at the beginning of the composition
Electricity has many uses. It is closely related to our life. We should form the good habit of using electricity safely.
When we use electricity at home, there are often many hidden dangers. At night, after going to the toilet, we often turn off the lights and go out in a hurry without drying our hands. It is easy to get an electric shock. After electric shock, cut off the power supply immediately.
On Saturday and Sunday, we often go out to fly kites. But you should also know how to choose a good place to fly kites. If you fly a kite near the high-voltage line, it will be very dangerous, which will not only destroy the high-voltage line and cause a large-scale power outage, but also cause serious problems.
Power failure will cause serious economic losses, electric shock and fire. So, before we enjoy ourselves, we must remember to find an empty place!
At home, it is very important to turn off the switch and unplug the electrical appliances we usually use, such as rice cookers, electric woks and induction cookers. If you don't do this, it will damage electrical appliances and cause fire because of long-term power supply.
In the above three situations, I think everyone will know that the slightest thing, once done wrong, will have serious consequences, so be sure to use electricity safely!
5. Eight ways to start writing. First, win with beautiful and concise language.
First, look at the beginning of two perfect compositions in the examination room: there is beauty everywhere in life: beautiful flowers, beautiful scenery, beautiful clothes, beautiful mind ... Beauty is all around us. On the way forward, I have experienced failures and successes. Failure makes me alert, and success makes me happy. ("Remember one of my success stories")
The language at the beginning of these two compositions is beautiful-the whole and scattered sentence patterns, the combination of the whole and the dispersed phase, and the patchwork. The first part is written in compound sentence, and the second part is written in antithetical sentences. These sentence patterns are symmetrical, harmonious, concise, crisp and neat, easy to read, and are appreciated for their beautiful feelings of form and sound.
Second, win with vivid rhetoric.
It can be compared metaphorically. That is, when writing an article, you don't directly describe people or things, but first describe the relevant content or people with concrete metaphors, and then write the content step by step. Generally speaking, there are three forms of metaphor, metaphor and metonymy. The metaphor strives to be vivid and appropriate. Such as: teacher, you are a never-tired gardener; You are the root of the tree that transports nutrients; You are burning your own candle to illuminate us; You are the greatest human soul engineer in the world. (Excerpted from < >) This opening is vivid and full of beauty.
Can skillfully use parallelism. That is, three or more sentences or phrases with the same or similar structure are put together to express a unified idea. This phenomenon is called "parallelism". The beginning of parallelism plays a special role in expressing characters' personalities, narrating events and experiences, expressing thoughts and feelings, and fully showing the truth. Its language is magnificent, the rhythm of words is neat, and the perfect combination of emotion and beauty gives readers a beautiful enjoyment. For example, I am about to bid farewell to my hometown where I was born and raised, to my close relatives, to my kind folks, and to the train to the south to pursue my ideals, my beliefs and my brilliant tomorrow! (from "Out of the House")
Can be compared and rendered. That is to say, from the beginning, the opposing people and things or the opposing two aspects of the same person and thing are juxtaposed to form a sharp contrast. The contrast at the beginning can highlight the center and deepen the reader's impression of people or things. For example, I have a mother who often gives me a thumbs-up and praises me as "great", and a father who often frowns and calls me "terrible". It is these two kinds of extreme love that make me often understand the direction of my efforts in self-confidence. (from Two Kinds of Love) ...
Starting with rhetoric, we can make the words beautiful and the emotions warm and rich, thus gripping people, stimulating reading desire and arousing the aesthetic feeling of re-creation in reading. There are many methods, so I won't list them one by one.
Third, win by starting with a quote.
Quoting ancient poems, famous sayings, proverbs and songs at the beginning can enrich the cultural connotation of the article, expand the tension and elasticity of the language, and point out the theme to achieve the effect of killing multiple birds with one stone. For example, "As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a beautiful world ..." On hearing this song "Dedication of Love", the moving scene I saw on the way after school the other day will come to my eyes. This paper uses quotation method, starting with beautiful lyrics, which not only points out the theme, but also leads to the following.
Fourth, win with delicate and touching descriptions.
For example, "in life, some unexpected little things always happen inadvertently, but they can ripple in each other's hearts." (What a surprise ...) The picture of the heart lake is intoxicating.
Fifth, cut to the chase and win.
Get into the subject quickly, and avoid verbosity and rambling. Fast is pleasant, slow is annoying. This is the reader's reading psychology. The marking teacher is no exception. For example, at the beginning of "That day, the sunshine was so warm": "The golden sunshine shone obliquely on the table from the window and on the envelope, so warm that day …" Just three sentences, and then I got to the point. Even like the beginning of "Wish", "This wish has been buried in my heart for a long time." Get to the point in one sentence.
Sixth, win with suspense that hangs people's appetite.
This way of opening is also called "flashback". For example, "in my short life journey, I have met many people and things." Many people and things have not left an impression on my mind, but there is one little thing that I will never forget. " An unforgettable little thing. Why a "little thing" can make me "unforgettable" and make people feel suspense in reading.
Seven, win at the beginning of passion.
This kind of beginning is also called "expressing one's mind directly". "What touches people's hearts first doesn't care about feelings." Starting with the way of expressing true feelings, readers can also be moved. For example, "after nine years of cold window, teachers have come one after another, gentle, earnest, kind and lovely, unsmiling, and the only thing that accompanies me from beginning to end is books." ("Tutor") directly expressed his love for the tutor-book.
Eight, with a philosophical "inscription" at the beginning to win.
This is a new way of opening in recent years. For example, a candidate in Shanghai wrote "I want to sing a song", so he said "I want to sing a song, a song of my own. The fountain will be her musician, and the crisp birdsong will be the beginning of her song "Inscription". The content of the inscription can be famous sayings, aphorisms, proverbs or your own words. Its function is mainly to point out the main idea and strengthen the center. This kind of opening is famous for its novelty and vigilance.
Of course, there are many methods at the beginning, and only our teachers need to pay attention to sorting out and serializing them, which can help us quickly improve students' writing level and theoretical literacy.
6. Several common methods to solve the beginning of the composition 2. Background Progressive natural science tells us that the universe is a big system, and social science tells us that human society is also a big system. A tree is in a forest system and a leaf belongs to this tree system. A person belongs to the social system and a finger belongs to this person's system. Therefore, any single thing and any phenomenon cannot be separated from the system to which it belongs. That is, the social background or natural background on which it lives. For example, at the beginning of Kong Ji Ji Ji, there is a big square counter on the street, which can warm wine at any time. The beginning of "under the scorching sun and heavy rain": June 15, it's crazy hot! These beginnings explain the time, place, season, climate or the background and environment of the topic. Writing in the examination room, some topics seem abrupt at first glance, which makes people unpredictable, but when you think about the background, you will suddenly be enlightened. For example, the topic of 1999' s college entrance examination composition is "If memory can be transplanted". In connection with the development of science and technology in recent years, cloning technology has come out and genes can be transplanted. Space technology is developing rapidly. In recent years, China's economy has developed continuously and made outstanding achievements in economic construction. Contact these backgrounds, the content of the article can be written, and association and imagination will have a foothold.
7. How to write the beginning and end of the composition is to be happy when you think about it. Start with a topic and summarize at the end. At the beginning, famous sayings and poems were used to attract the attention of the marking teacher. Write the beginning and end of the article. (1) Write the beginning. As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle". An appropriate and novel beginning can not only make you write flowers, but also increase your literary talent. Attract readers. ① Explain the four elements at the beginning. That is, simply explain the time, place, people and events at the beginning. ② Cut to the chase. That is to say, put the people, things or things to be described directly at the beginning of the article and introduce the text. Directly express the author's point of view, point out the center, and guide the full text. ③ Describe the scenery at the beginning. That is, describe the people and things at the beginning of the article. In order to set off the characters and touch the scene, we paved the way. ④ Open method of asking questions. That is, at the beginning of the article, asking questions makes people think, thus attracting readers' attention and interest. ⑤ flashback opening method. That is, write the result of things at the beginning of the article, and then write the reason and process of things to cause suspense. Enhance the attraction of the article. ⑤ Express the feeling at the beginning. That is, express the author's personal feelings and thoughts and feelings at the beginning of the article. ⑤ Reveal the central opening method. Some articles summarize the full text at the beginning and directly point out the center of the article. ⑧ Introduce the background opening method. According to the content of the article, in addition to introducing the time and place of the incident, it also introduces the shape and related situation before the incident. The outline shows frequent changes. Read more books, and you will naturally read and write more music. (2) How to write the ending of the article ① Natural ending method. That is, end the article with the result of the event. When the incident is over, the article is over. ② Point-to-point termination method. This is a common way to end. Attention: how to summarize the full text, how to refine the central idea of the article and avoid repeating the basic content of the article. Or repeat the beginning and so on. ③ problem ending method. In other words, at the end, ask questions in the form of questions (rhetorical questions or rhetorical questions). This way of ending is suitable for the writer-centered narrative. Students should pay attention to asking questions when writing. The purpose of asking questions is to express their true feelings, not to be far-fetched. 4 emotional ending method. That is, at the end, the author expressed his true feelings and praised the things described. Students should pay attention to their feelings when writing. Don't be sick. ⑤ Heuristic ending method. In other words, the ending gives people some education or inspiration, and the author can make readers think with appropriate words, giving people a feeling of "endless words and endless meanings". This way of ending is generally suitable for writing articles about people, taking notes and writing about scenery. When writing, students should pay attention to the fact that description should serve the prominent center and avoid aimless description or description for description's sake. ⑤ Looking forward to the future ending. Inspiring and inspiring. When writing, it should be noted that if an article begins with a clear point of view, it usually ends in a way that shows the future. At the same time, the content of the outlook must be related to the central idea of the article, and it is forbidden to copy it mechanically. No matter how it ends, it should be concise and clear. If it is lengthy, it will dilute the text, usurp the role of the host, give readers a feeling of "gilding the lily", and the appeal of the article will be greatly weakened.
8. How to write the beginning and end of a composition The ancients said that the beginning and end of a composition are "crested and leopard-tailed", that is, the beginning should be graceful and colorful. Just like the head of a phoenix, some people say that "a good beginning is half the battle", which shows the importance of a beginning.
Due to the limitation of time and space, the beginning of the composition in the examination room is concise, vivid and beautiful. The following methods can be considered. 1. Cut to the chase.
The so-called "straight to the point" is a figurative statement, which refers to a straightforward way of writing articles. For example, "Talking about backbone" shows the point at the beginning: "We China people have backbone."
"Praise of Poplar" touched on the theme at the beginning: "Poplar is really extraordinary, I praise Poplar!" This method should be the first choice for writing in the examination room. 2. The background is gradient.
For example, "Kong Ji Ji Ji" begins: "The big square counter on the street ... can warm wine at any time". "Under the scorching sun and heavy rain" begins: "June 15, it's crazy!" These beginnings explain the time, place, festival, climate or the background and environment of the topic.
3. Ask questions. Flashback the result of things first, set suspense, or set questions to break the theme first and cause explanation or discussion.
For example, Colorful Flowers begins with a question: "Why do flowers have all kinds of beautiful and bright colors?" The purpose of this opening method is to set suspense, attract readers' attention, stimulate readers' interest, increase the faltering of the article and show the beauty of the layout of the article. This opening technique appears frequently in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Quoting epigrams, famous sayings, poems or proverbs at the beginning can attract readers and help highlight the center.
For example, Cheng Yi's words were quoted at the beginning of Doubt and Learning: "Scholars must doubt first". This opening method is also an easy method for general candidates to master and use.
The well-known epigram opening can often enhance the momentum of the opening, making people feel abrupt, eventful and lofty. Of course, the quotation should be as accurate as possible to avoid intellectual errors.
5. Excellent metaphor. Metaphor is used at the beginning to arouse the reader's interest in the thing or truth to be explained.
For example, "China Stone Arch Bridge" begins: "The bridge opening of the stone arch bridge bends like a rainbow." Ma Shuo begins: "There is Bole in the world, and then there is a swift horse."
Taking the story of Bole and Maxima as a metaphor leads to the central argument. Since it is a metaphor, we should pay attention to the similarity between "other things" and this topic, and we can't force it. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily.
That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, explain the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one, and pierce the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans.
Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme. 3 sloppily.
The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.
1. Natural bunching. No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending".
For example, at the end of My Uncle Yule, "When we come back, we will take the St. Marlowe boat to avoid meeting him again." And Mr. Fujino's ending all adopt this method.
2. End-to-end echo. The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles.
This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, "Back" begins with "I haven't seen my father for more than two years, and what I can't forget most is his back".
At the end, it says, "I don't know when I will see him again." Another example is "Praise of Poplar", which begins with "Poplar is really extraordinary, I praise Poplar."
At the end, it said, "... I want to praise Bai Shu loudly. "3. Zhang Xianzhi's style chess pieces.
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly in concise language at the end of the article. For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings".
At the end of "Pear Blossoms on the Postal Road", I wrote: "I can't help but think of a sentence' Pears on the Postal Road are everywhere'." 5. Lyric argument.
Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal. For example, at the end of "Flower Market", I wrote: "I think: Hope doesn't matter, it doesn't matter, just like the road on the ground; In fact, there is no road on the ground. If there are more people walking, it will become a road. "
Leave a Beautiful Back —— Examples of Writing Ending Skills in Examination Room About the beginning and ending of writing, the ancients have long said that "the limelight is a leopard's tail". The writing time in the examination room is short and the grading requirements are high. It is necessary to impress the marking teacher in a limited time and get an ideal evaluation, especially at the beginning and end.
Some people say that the beginning of the composition in the examination room should be like "Erguotou", and you will burst into tears as soon as you enter, which shows that the beginning of the composition should leave a deep impression on people. In my opinion, the end of the composition should be like "Biluochun", with lingering fragrance and endless aftertaste.
Wonderful oral administration can certainly make people shine at the moment and yearn for it; The wonderful ending can also make people can't help but cover up and amaze. What are the common problems at the end of students' compositions in the examination room? First of all, it has a head and no tail.
Due to the lack of overall conception, the ending is like a "semi-finished" project, which is unclear, ambiguous and inadequate. But anticlimactic.
Some students often have a sense of accomplishment after completing the main part, so.
9. How to write 1 at the beginning of the composition? Cut to the chase, such as the beginning of Guilin's landscape: people say that "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world."
We enjoyed the scenery of Guilin on the Lijiang River by wooden boat. 2. Ask questions to guide ideas, such as the beginning of Underwater World: Do you know what the depths of the sea are like? 3. Describe the environment and render the atmosphere, such as the beginning of Snow Mountain: Snow Mountain is in the west of Sichuan Province.
No one, no flowers and trees, not even a mountain road. Throughout the year, the mountains are covered with thick snow.
In summer, the cattail leaf fans in other places are too hot, and the snow-capped mountains are still covered with snow, and the wind is biting. 4. Placing puzzles is fascinating, such as the beginning of "Hercules = Little Ant": Little ant, only as big as a line, how inconspicuous.
Isn't it strange that Hercules and little ants draw equal signs? 5. Exposing the contradiction leads to the story of "two squadron members": Li Ling and Xiao Min are both squadron members in the same class, but they don't say hello when they meet, and they talk like enemies. Alas, I only blame the incident in the afternoon of June 1 Sunday ... In fact, the beginning of the composition is determined by the content, genre, audience, conception skills and the author's writing skills, so it is difficult to have uniform requirements.