The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and sipping fragrant teas, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important.
It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.
Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, explain the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one, and pierce the meaning that could have been realized.
Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme.
3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions. 1, natural ending style No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it is a natural ending full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending style".
It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law".
As long as you are rich, you can write freely, and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. The beginning and the end should echo the beginning, and the sentences written should echo the beginning, not simply repeating. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail.
For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool." Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once."
Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3. This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "the finishing touch". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous aphorisms end with famous aphorisms, famous cautionary sentences and poems, which are intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of a certain life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings".
At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere." 5. Lyric argument: Ending an article with lyrical argument can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers, and arouse the hearts of readers, which has a strong artistic appeal.
This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency.
For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the examinee's usual solid training, in the examinee's improvisation and in the examinee's "extra-poetic merit". There are five ways to start the song at the beginning and end of composition, all of which are effective.
Cut to the chase and you'll know the time and place. Render the atmosphere description style and set the style at the beginning of the scene.
The lyrical opening method is good, which inspires readers' high feelings. First describe the suspense of the ending, hold on to it and find the root.
Asking questions as the beginning is fascinating and adds atmosphere. There are also good ways to end, and each way is wonderful.
The ending is natural, simple and neat, and there is little nonsense. Summarize the end of the topic and make the finishing point.
Lyrical discussion is the end, highlighting the center to make people understand. The rhetorical question is used at the end, which is thought-provoking and enlightening.
A good manuscript that echoes from beginning to end and has a complete structure. As the saying goes, "Knitting clothes and trousers is at the beginning, and knitting baskets is at the end."
A good article should have both a fascinating beginning and a fascinating ending. So, how to write the end of the article? First, the natural ending method uses the result of things as the end of the article. The story is finished, and the article is over.
For example, at the end of Moonlight Song, "Brother and sister were intoxicated by the beautiful scenery. When they woke up, Beethoven had left the hut.
He flew back to the inn and spent the whole night recording the music he had just played-Moonlight Song. Another example: "Flying over the Luding Bridge": "The main force of the Red Army crossed the natural barrier Dadu River, and it was mighty.
2. How to write the beginning and end of the composition. Students who rarely practice writing at ordinary times always feel that they can't write it at first. Every composition has its central meaning, which is often the theme. At the beginning of the composition, the writing method of "straight to the point" is often used, which goes straight to the subject and does not beat around the bush, such as "The Character of Grass". At first, it can be like this:
Every spring, when the branches begin to sprout, the weeds on the roadside also begin to show a touch of light green, which is often overlooked by people.
This is the way to write directly to the topic. A few words will get to the point relatively simply. As long as you often do composition exercises or keep a diary every day, it is often not difficult to write.
The ending paragraph is generally a summary of the central meaning of the article. Try to be concise and respond to the theme, which is what we often say, "echo from beginning to end", leaving a deep impression on readers and stimulating imagination.
Attached "The Character of Grass"
Characteristics of grass
20 1 1-7-7
Every spring, after several strong winds, the south wind blows slowly. Inadvertently, I found that the branches gradually had new buds and the grass gradually added new green. The weeds by the roadside suddenly caught my attention. How does the grass tenaciously drill out solid land? Where there is soil, there are weeds.
Incredibly, the grass is growing tenaciously all summer, no matter how stormy it is or how hot it is. What difficulties and hardships, in front of them, have become indifferent, they are fearless. Just like the growth of a tree, as long as spring comes, it will take root and sprout. This makes me suddenly feel that the grass is so lovely, so lovable and so tenacious.
Looking at them carefully, it turns out that at first it was just one or two spikes, then a ball, and in a few days, even a piece. It's them, decorating the green of spring. Soon after the grassland turned green, all kinds of wild flowers bloomed. I suddenly realized: without grass, flowers look boring, without flowers, grass looks monotonous. It is the most beautiful only when grass and flowers are everywhere. They set each other off and become interesting, which is really a masterpiece of nature.
Unconsciously, I formed a habit. Every spring, I like to watch the germination of branches and the green of weeds. It is the grass on the ground that tells me this truth: life and the earth are both natural, and life shows its greatness in its struggle with nature. Perseverance through storms is the original meaning of life.
3. How to write a composition at the beginning, middle paragraph and end? There are generally two kinds, or straight to the point, which can give readers a concise and lively feeling. The requirement is that when writing a composition, you can't be distracted, only the theme; Or use rhetorical devices such as parallelism more!
Examples are as follows:
1
The rain poured down and moistened the earth. Quietly, the rain stopped and the earth was full of vitality.
A rainbow spans the sky like a colorful bridge. The clouds floated slowly and leisurely. The sun opened the white barrier and suddenly jumped out. The warm sunshine shines on the earth.
Birds dust the water drops from their feathers and fly into the air, or fly to the wire to sing, just like the notes in the staff. The song is crisp and melodious.
There are sparkling pearls on the leaves, reflecting the sun and dazzling. When it falls, it will make a "tick-tock" sound, as if playing a cheerful music.
final result
This will be the crystal spray in my heart.
2 Start.
The night sky in summer is starry, and the music fountain in the community square is particularly charming. At 20 o'clock sharp, the performance began, the music sounded, and the water splashed with beautiful melody: sometimes like a blooming flower, the petals stretched around; Sometimes it is like a crystal clear and lifelike water butterfly, flapping its wings and flying around the pool; Sometimes it is like a glittering and translucent barrier, which makes people intoxicated in the hazy. A piece of music is coming to an end, accompanied by colorful lights, full of poetry and painting.
final result
Everyone was immersed in a happy atmosphere, and laughter echoed throughout the square. This beautiful midsummer night, this charming music fountain!
4. Show me my first topic.
As the saying goes, "a good title is half the story", a good title is the beginning of a good composition, and the title must be novel and unique to attract attention!
Second, the beginning and the end
The article begins with a dragon head and ends with a phoenix tail. There are many kinds of beginnings, and once you come up with a good beginning, the written thoughts will flow out. The common beginning is as follows: 1, get to the point. 2. Ask questions to attract people's attention. 3. Summarize and reveal. 4. Describe the environment. 5. Flashback and create suspense. Only in this way can we have a good start, which is the beginning of a good article.
"Weaving baskets, weaving baskets, all in your mouth." The end of the article is also the essence of this chapter. Some endings are thought-provoking, some endings are natural, some endings are intriguing, some endings should be written in a more appropriate way, and the pen is also beautiful and generous.
5. How to write the beginning and end of the composition? Say the end first, then the beginning.
If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable."
Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending.
People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily.
That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans.
Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme. 3 sloppily.
The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.
1, natural beam. No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending".
It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law".
As long as you are rich, you can write freely, and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. Echo from beginning to end. The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles.
This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool."
Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once." Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style.
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life.
It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings". At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."
5. Lyric discussion. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal.
This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency.
For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits". Please look at the end of a candidate's composition: If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it. Why can't we take actions to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green?
At that time, green would sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life is no longer green") Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then launches a topic around "If life is no longer green". The article starts with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow", and then skillfully uses Xu Zhimo.
Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma. If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on.
Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam".
Migration training The ancients said, "A good end is like chewing.
6. Original Publisher: How to write the beginning and end of quality education?
How to write the beginning and end of a composition How to write the beginning when writing in the examination room, you must write the opening paragraph, firmly grasp the reader's eyes, and let the reader follow your thoughts involuntarily. Generally speaking, there are many ways to start, and one of them is the most important, that is: concise and clear, and quickly get to the topic. Tip 1: Design suspense to attract readers. I'm dying-I'm lying in a hospital bed, surrounded by darkness, very quiet, and I can only hear my weak breathing in a big room. Nurses only come in when taking medicine or giving injections, and seldom talk to me. I'm used to it. I won't complain too much, because I know I'm dying. I stared out of the window and told myself to face death calmly. (Feel the beauty of life, the perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Shaanxi Province) Skill 2: Cut to the chase and make your point clear? When you are in pain, you will go home and vent in tears; When you are upset, you will go home and let the warmth of home dispel the dark clouds in your heart; Home-what melts in is sadness, and what melts out is happiness; Home-accept sadness and release happiness. What a nice home! (selected from the composition "Home, It's Good" in the senior high school entrance examination in Yunnan Province)? Tip 3: Associating memories, cleverly describing the independent small courtyard, the moonlight is like water, flowing quietly around me, feeling the coolness of my heart sinking into the bottom of the water, causing endless thoughts about you! I remember it was a moonlit night. I put you on the train to a foreign land ... at an early age, you struggled alone in a foreign land. Is everything all right? (Selected from the perfect composition of Henan senior high school entrance examination "When I Face" Dissolved Moonlight ") Tip 4: Highlight the contradictory atmosphere" It's too hot this summer, just buy an air conditioner tomorrow! " Mom said while eating. ? "Buy air conditioning, buy air conditioning, you only know to enjoy! Some money should be saved for children.