2. How to write a good composition at the end of the composition 1: Zhang Xianzhi's method 1 Family is a kind of motivation, which can let you enter the realm of "looking at the horizon alone"; Can let you have the persistence of "the belt is getting wider and wider, never regret it, haggard for Iraq"; Can let you taste the happiness of "reporting three spring scenery"
(At the end of the article, "Power comes from the family", an excellent composition for the Beijing senior high school entrance examination in 2007) The young author interprets the connotation of the family in poetic language, reveals the strength of the family, and shows the charm of the family with emotion. Zhang Xianzhi had a clear purpose.
No matter what difficulties you will encounter in life, don't give up and be a strong man in life! -That's my promise. At the end of the article, the author clearly expressed the content of My Commitment, which not only closely related to the theme, but also revealed the main idea of the article, which can be described as a masterpiece.
And this sentence is full of * * *, hitting the floor shows the young author's strong determination, heroism, loveliness and respect. Tip 2: hide without revealing 1 mom sat at the table and began to eat the bowl of noodles I cooked for her. I sat watching her, too.
Suddenly, I saw two crystal tears fall in the bowl. I asked, "Mom, what's wrong with you?" Mother looked up and cried.
(At the end of the composition "Mom's Birthday" for the senior high school entrance examination) The description at the end of the article is obscure, and the mother's tears of joy are revealed between the lines, because the child is sensible and "grown up". In the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Nantong City, Jiangsu Province, the author described the difficult-to-capture frog sound from the perspectives of "solo singing", "scattered singing" and "chorus singing", which made it poetic and personalized.
And in the "singing together", discussion, lyricism and perception of life are coordinated with each other, and the text aims to "sing a hymn of life". The most enjoyable thing is the end of the article: "Listen, listen.
Grateful, grateful. It uses homophonic pun to show the characteristics of the article "Listening"-the dialogue and communication between man and nature.
This concise and thought-provoking ending introduces readers into an infinite space for them to feel and daydream! Technique 3: Make the finishing point: 1 Spring is like a doll that just landed. It's new from head to toe and still growing. Spring is like a little girl, dressed up and walking with a smile.
Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms and legs, leading us forward. ("Spring" at the end of the article) Example 2 Marx's life is a glorious life and a life of hard study.
His spirit of diligent study is always worth learning. (At the end of the article, "Marx's studious spirit") My friend, don't forget that one should learn to say "no" and bravely say "no" to failure, frustration, insult and power.
In 2007, the author of the essay "Being a man starts with learning to say" No "+0 highlights three characteristics of spring with metaphors: novelty, beauty and strength, summarizes the full text from a brand-new perspective, and reveals the theme of the article with incisive language. At the end of Example 2, Marx's life is summarized and highly summarized, and the theme is pointed out.
The end of Example 3 not only summarizes the full text, but also points out the main idea of the article. Technique 4: Lyric Argument 1 I looked at this group of energetic Hani girls and the white pear blossoms, and I couldn't help thinking of a poem: "Pears are everywhere on the post road".
Dear friends, when you get on the first tram in the morning and run to the factory, when you … they are really our loveliest people! ("Who is the cutest person" at the end of the article) Example 3 Yes! A man should start by learning to give up. Giving up is an eternal poem in my heart; Giving up is a colorful song in my life; Give up and let the natural barrier in your heart become a thoroughfare.
At the end of the case 1, in 2007, the composition "Being a man begins with learning to give up" in Qingdao, Shandong Province, expressed the author's feeling that Lei Feng spirit has become everyone's conscious action. Example 2 not only fully expresses the author's love and praise for volunteer soldiers, but also has a strong infectious effect on readers.
The author expressed his profound understanding and feelings about "giving up" in poetic language. Tip 5: Warning and eye-catching method 1 Animals are our friends, but many people regard them as food.
Although they had a good time, they ate China's harmonious natural environment and ecological balance! Thought of here, I am at a loss: Are we eating China? We are eating China! (In 2007, Yangzhou City, Jiangsu Province, took the senior high school entrance examination composition "Eat in China? Eat China! However, it's too late, too late ... 1 At the end, the little author is far-sighted and tells the world that you are eating China! What a warning language this is. Through the self-report of the last monkey on the earth, the author boldly and truly fantasized about how human beings stepped onto the road of extinction step by step.
The shocking consequences of every word are fatalistic, and they all have shocking and shocking power. Tip 6: Questioning suspicious cases 1 People's ambitions are not as good as humble monks. (For learning at the end of the article) Example 2 "Can't a wise man see the truth from such a beginning and such an end?" (At the end of "The Financier") There is an excellent composition "Simple and Not Simple" in Example 3. After enumerating various phenomena of "simplicity and non-simplicity" and analyzing the dialectical relationship between "simplicity and non-simplicity", at the end of the article, the author writes: each of us has both simplicity and non-simplicity. The question is what kind of simplicity and non-simplicity we should pursue.
What do you say, my friend? Example 1 concludes with a question mark. The simple words contain strong feelings, which are thought-provoking and impressive. Example 2 adopts the form of rhetorical question, which makes the ending not only profound and powerful, but also intriguing.
The author skillfully put forward the serious proposition of "what to pursue is simple and not simple", which aroused readers' thinking and inspired people to make correct choices and pursue meaningful life. Although the author didn't say it clearly, it was thought-provoking and alarming.
Tip 7.
3. How to write a good ending to a composition? Please ask the teacher to choose some happy endings for me. A: If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "ringing a bell".
The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and sipping fragrant teas, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important.
It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.
Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, explain the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one, and pierce the meaning that could have been realized.
Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme.
3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions. 1, natural ending style No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it is a natural ending full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending style".
It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law".
As long as you are rich, you can play freely and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. The beginning and the end should echo the beginning, and the sentences written should echo the beginning, not simply repeating. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail.
For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool." Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once."
Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3. This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "the finishing touch". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous aphorisms end with famous aphorisms, famous cautionary sentences and poems, which are intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of a certain life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings".
At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere." 5. Lyric argument: Ending an article with lyrical argument can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers, and arouse the hearts of readers, which has a strong artistic appeal.
This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency.
For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the examinee's usual solid training, in the examinee's improvisation and in the examinee's "extra-poetic merit". There are five ways to start the song at the beginning and end of composition, all of which are effective.
Cut to the chase and you'll know the time and place. Render the atmosphere description style and set the style at the beginning of the scene.
The lyrical opening method is good, which inspires readers' high feelings. First describe the suspense of the ending, hold on to it and find the root.
Asking questions as the beginning is fascinating and adds atmosphere. There are also good ways to end, and each way is wonderful.
The ending is natural, simple and neat, and there is little nonsense. Summarize the end of the topic and make the finishing point.
Lyrical discussion is the end, highlighting the center to make people understand. The rhetorical question is used at the end, which is thought-provoking and enlightening.
A good manuscript that echoes from beginning to end and has a complete structure. As the saying goes, "Knitting clothes and trousers is at the beginning, and knitting baskets is at the end."
A good article should have both a fascinating beginning and a fascinating ending. So, how to write the end of the article? First, the natural ending method uses the result of things as the end of the article. The story is finished, and the article is over.
For example, at the end of Moonlight Song, "Brother and sister were intoxicated by the beautiful scenery. When they woke up, Beethoven had left the hut.
He flew back to the inn and spent the whole night recording the music he had just played-Moonlight Song. Another example: "Flying over the Luding Bridge": "The main force of the Red Army crossed the natural barrier Dadu River, and it was mighty.
4. How does the composition end? First, the most taboo at the beginning is to give people the feeling of digressing with a pen. It directly tells the marking teacher that the author will not judge the meaning of the question and the composition score will be greatly reduced.
Example 4 "Communication begins with language": "Language is a bridge, connecting this shore and the other shore; Language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; Language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth. Only when the language is expressed accurately can communication be successful.
If the language is wrong, it may have unpredictable consequences. So how can we express the language accurately and promote the success of communication? Therefore, whether the opening is well written or not, the core issue is still in the exam; When judging the meaning of a question, seek accuracy first, and then seek image.
Many methods are introduced at the beginning. 1, quote the famous saying (1) ask how the world is and teach people to commit themselves to life and death.
Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His question can be said to have been asked for a long time
Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But every family's words are as different as everyone's face.
Shi said, "Love is a tool. "(What is Love in the World) In a medieval church, a saint began his speech:" I became a saint because I saw through money, and what I have belongs to everyone. "
Long years, a snap of your fingers. In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine."
Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. "
Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success. ("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format 1 Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice.
(A Letter to Confucius) The hateful standard answer: I am really outraged to see you. Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you.
The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat. You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened.
The following are your three major crimes: ... ("A Letter to the Standard Answer") 3. Borrowing Zhang Hui's novel style (1) "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time." At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past.
And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world. (Heroes of the Three Kingdoms) Liang Shanbo's Juyi Hall is now brightly lit and full of people.
One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently.
It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin. That's why all the heroes gather here and argue endlessly.
Who is the hero who killed the tiger? 4. Clever use of rhetoric can easily express the author's feelings and arouse readers' interest in reading. For example, in 2002, the beginning of "Choice of Heart" wrote: "If you choose wings, you will embrace the whole blue sky; If you choose fins, you will kiss the vast blue sea; If you choose a quadruped, you will appreciate the vast green forest.
And my choices are one by one. "The sentence pattern at the beginning of the parallelism sentence is neat, and the language is sonorous, which forms a contrast before and after, which not only points out the topic but also sets suspense to promote people to enjoy reading.
In addition, the article "Honesty-Forever Green Card" written in 200 1 College Entrance Examination begins: "Honesty is like the first sunshine in spring, which is desirable; Such as a sweet watermelon in summer, contained in the mouth, sweet in the heart; For example, the autumn wind sent a fiery maple leaf from a distance, which attracted infinite attention; Such as snowflakes flying in winter, cover the wheat fields with thick quilts. " At first, metaphor and parallelism were used to describe the value and significance of honesty and express the desire for honesty.
5. Lyric method. That is to say, pour out your true feelings directly at the beginning of the article to point out the main idea of the article.
There are three common lyric ways: hypothetical lyric, comparative lyric and comparative lyric. For example, the 200 1 college entrance examination masterpiece "Carrying a Backpack of Honesty" wrote at the beginning: "If life is a Mercedes-Benz train, then honesty is an indispensable wheel; If life is a long-distance ship, then honesty is an indispensable backpack, which will accompany you all your life. "
The author uses metaphor and contrast to illustrate the importance of honesty from comparison. Another example is the beginning of the excellent composition "The Steps of Choice" in the 2002 college entrance examination: "What suddenly crossed my mind and left an instant glory? What is it, quietly watering the heart and cultivating sweet memories? What gently taps the soul and brings eternal beauty? What makes your heart, my heart and his heart play that magnificent movement together? One by one is a shocking choice, a difficult and beautiful choice again and again, a song of one's own choice ... "The four parallel questions at the beginning cause people to think deeply, expressing the value and significance of choice to life, thus expressing the author's feelings.
Step 6 cut to the chase. Because this kind of opening is straightforward, it can go straight to the subject, enter the scene described by the writer at once, or grasp the essence of the discussion at once, so it is suitable for many styles.
For example, the excellent composition "Choosing the Chinese Soul" in the 2002 college entrance examination begins with "Looking through the past history and looking for the choice of the soul without regrets", and the subtitle is: 1, the choice of heroes. 2. The king's choice.
3. Choice of scientists. In this way, a few words are directly introduced below.
Another example is the excellent composition "Wisdom and Thought-My Choice" in the 2002 college entrance examination.
5. How to write an article at the end of the composition If you can have a good beginning, it will often be fascinating and let readers understand the main content of the article at once.
From this point of view, it is very important to write the beginning of the article. There are three common beginnings in the article: (1) "Get to the point", get to the point.
At the beginning of the article, the person or thing to be described is directly set out, which is called "straight to the point", so that people can know who and what you want to write at a glance. The advantage of "straight to the point" is that it can catch the reader's attention at once and let the reader notice the events that directly express the central idea in the article.
(2) Explain the situation and introduce the background. Explain some necessary situations and backgrounds first, and then write the main characters or events, which can help readers better understand the main content and central idea of the article without being abrupt.
(3) Ask questions to attract people's attention. At the beginning, an interesting question is raised to attract readers to continue reading.
Answering questions through case narration is the central idea of the article. In addition to the above three methods, there are: flashback at the beginning, setting suspense and fascinating; The beginning of the scene description is to set off the atmosphere; The beginning of character description is to deepen the impression on readers; There are also the "four elements" of the article, which makes people clear at a glance; And use or quote the beginning of poems, legends, etc. To attract readers.
In short, a good beginning has the same advantages, that is, it can make readers better accept and understand the central idea of the article, lively and fascinating. How to write a good ending? The good article is at the end.
The ending should not only make the finishing point, point out the center of the article, but also be subtle. Only by hinting can we leave rich imagination space for readers, and there will be hints and implications.
How can I write the end of the article implicitly? (l) Never write too "straight" or too "exposed" at the end of an article. For example, "High Back" now ends with: "I did stay in the hospital.
During those few days in hospital, there was always a vague tall figure standing in front of my eyes; There is always a real loud voice that echoes in my ear. Until now, I still miss this uncle who has never met before and doesn't know his name and address. "
This ending is well written and intriguing: why does the tall figure of tricycle workers always appear in front of the author? What noble qualities does he have that will never be forgotten? If you add some explanations, it shows that this uncle is enthusiastic about helping others and does not ask for compensation. There is nothing wrong. But people who have read it will feel that the words are poor and tasteless.
(2) Leave blank at the end of the article. For example, the tall Gleditsia sinensis tree ends like this: "Gleditsia sinensis tree, how much happiness and expectation you have given us."
Thinking about it, my heart seems to be a seed that takes root and sprouts ... "What kind of seed is this? The article didn't say. When readers get wet from the Gleditsia sinensis tree on rainy days, they will shelter themselves from the wind and rain; "In summer, I bask in the sun and give you shade; In winter, burn yourself and give everyone warmth. "The answer to the question is that what takes root in the author's mind is the seed of a productive thought: when people are alive, they should do everything possible to make others live better, just like an acacia tree.
Isn't this more intriguing than saying it? (3) You can also write an accident at the end. "Little Hero Rain Comes" describes that people in Lu Hua village thought that the rain was killed by the devil after hearing a gunshot by the river.
When the reader also believed this plot and was immersed in grief, the article suddenly turned: "From the reeds, a small head appeared on the water. The rain is still shaking the water on its head like a duckling ... ""The rain is not dead! " This unexpected ending naturally aroused the reader's interest in recalling the whole plot, thus leaving a deep impression on Yu Lai's superb swimming skills and brave and witty qualities.
(4) Some articles also use symbolic endings. The text "In the Rain" always reveals its ideological significance at the end of such a story that can show the beauty of people's hearts, but the author only uses a symbolic sentence: "The basket full of big apples is back on the girl's truck, shining."
Compared with the direct discussion, the symbolic description is more profound: will the apple rolling in the mud shine with "sparkling light"? So, what does "sparkling" mean? Really far-reaching, people are thinking! From this point of view, if you want to write a good ending of an article, you must use the above methods well, so as to make the ending vivid, concrete and meaningful. Thinking before writing is a way of thinking about writing.
I suggest that it can be conceived as follows: summarize the characteristics: it means at the beginning of the article, summarize the characteristics of the characters first, and then describe the cases in detail. If you are in an exam, the characteristics summarized here must meet the requirements of the topic.
Specific examples: this is the key paragraph of the article and needs to be described in detail. Through a concrete example, we can show the characteristics of the characters.
In this case, we should carefully select materials around a certain characteristic of the characters, pay attention to the characteristics of the characters summarized at the beginning, and choose those novel and interesting materials. When describing a specific case, we should pay attention to the complete narrative of the incident, explain the ins and outs of the matter clearly, and grasp the interesting details in life to describe the characters.
We should describe the characteristics of characters from their language, manners, movements and psychological activities. After reading the story, people can understand the good thoughts and qualities of the characters at a glance.
Echoing the beginning: This is the end of the article, or summing up, or asking questions, or summarizing, or expressing feelings, to further clarify the characteristics of the characters, so as to achieve the role of echoing the beginning, summarizing the full text and revealing the center. This ending can give a complete impression.
To write quickly with this composition, we should pay attention to the following points: 1. First of all, we should determine the center of the article, that is, what ideological quality characteristics of the characters should be expressed. 2. Then carefully select materials around the center.
Pay attention to choose materials that can express the center to write. 3. When describing specific cases, we should pay attention to describing the process of things completely, that is, explaining the ins and outs of things clearly.
4. Describe the characters in detail. For example, the characteristics of characters' speech,
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