Hope to adopt, thank you!
I wish you good health and academic progress!
2. Excerpts from scene descriptions and nostalgic comments. South of the Yangtze river
My sky is raining again, like a water town, wet and cold.
A girl without a paper umbrella, carefree rain lane, endless hesitation.
I looked down at the village. The fishing song was late and the boat was burnt yellow.
Occasionally, there were a few jingles, and the smoke drifted away with the river.
When you are half drunk, you can return to the piano, and your fingertips are flicked and melodious.
Misty rain is like fog on a ship, splashing ink on the south of the Yangtze River, and my thoughts are wandering.
Then pour a bottle of wine, sing and drink, sing and sing.
Send Greek far away, and forget it, the ink is full of rivers.
Appreciation: Poetry has established a realm and artistic conception from the beginning, which is sad and sad. In the melancholy and hesitation, there is no lack of admiration for natural scenery and shallow appreciation of scenery.
The whole poem is sometimes sad and sometimes soft; Sometimes low, sometimes high, the beautiful scenery of Jiangnan and the author's delicate and unrestrained feelings are vividly expressed.
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3. Write a composition praising Rinrin's scenes ... Whenever I hear this wonderful sound of class ending, I will think of the happy ten minutes between classes in a conditioned way.
After class, the teacher loudly announced today's homework. Only a dozen students listened to the full house, and the rest have already achieved great things. At that time, the classroom was panoramic, with 56 faces and 56 flowers ... half asked the teacher what homework he had left, and a quarter chatted with WC. Others are paying attention to the small concert given by my dear friend JJ Lin.
The so-called "there is no tiger in the mountain, and the monkey is the king". At this point, the classroom seemed to explode and boil. Oh, it's really classy. Ren Junjie, the king of idols, showed his talent, but the only fly in the ointment was that there was no equipment, and everything seemed simple. Ren Junjie took a broom as a guitar and a highlighter as a microphone, and began to perform. He cleared his throat to show that he was ready to meet his best friend. Look at that old man floating around like a ghost. "Fly freely in your heart ..." Oh, it's really full of pride. Lao Han is short and looks like a flea in the crowd. The more he sang, the more excited he became. He closed his eyes narcissistically and walked through the Arc de Triomphe like a victorious general. "Thank you ..." Narcissism made his voice loud. He tossed his head and assumed a cool posture. His "diehard fans" were very excited, and cheers and boos pushed the ten-minute break to * * *.
Ding Lingling ... When the class started, the noisy classroom immediately quieted down, just like the surging tide began to ebb. The students returned to their seats, because the ten minutes between classes effectively buffered everyone's nervous thinking, and the students were absorbed in welcoming the new class.
4. Works that combine Gulangyu scenery and comments.
I can't help feeling: Now that Taiwan Province Province has not returned to the embrace of the motherland, how eager compatriots on both sides of the strait are to reunite! At this time, a lush mountain caught my eye. There is an abrupt big stone at the top of the mountain, which is the sunshine rock.
It is said that in the early morning, you can see a magnificent sunrise. After a while, a strange stone appeared on the white beach, which is the famous Gulangyu Island.
There is a small hole in it. Whenever the tide rises, the sea water will flow through the cave and make a "rushing" sound, as if the waves are beating. This is the origin of Gulangyu Stone, hence the name Gulangyu Island. After the tour around the island, we boarded the long-awaited Gulangyu Island.
Maybe it's the Spring Festival. There are many people on the island. We chose some remote alleys for a walk, leisurely and quiet. Rows of European-style buildings, ancient and quaint, stand quietly in long alleys.
The puff flowers crawled along the fence and became orange flowers. Against the backdrop of green leaves, yellow flowers are particularly delicate and charming. Not to be outdone, bougainvillea is as red as fire and pink as chardonnay, sticking its head out of the fence and showing its elegant demeanor in large bundles.
Come to the seaside, facing the endless sea, the sea breeze blows, so comfortable! We children are happy to play with sand and build castles by the sea, while adults are enjoying tea leisurely by the sea. As night fell, we left Gulangyu by boat.
Looking at the distant island, I prayed silently in my heart: beautiful Gulangyu, I will come again.
5. Description of the scene Analysis of the article Today is a scorching sun, and it is also the annual parent-child sports meeting in our school. Everyone is very happy, because they can work hard with their parents and win glory for their respective collectives.
When we arrived at the sports center, the students entered the stadium in an orderly way under the guidance of the teacher. All the students in our class are full of energy and high morale. There is only one wish in their hearts: I hope that this sports meeting will win the first place in the whole year. The opening ceremony of the sports meeting began. The headmaster spoke on the radio and said, "Hello, classmates, teachers and parents. This year's annual parent-child sports meeting begins now! " All the students in the school are dressed in neat uniforms and lined up neatly. They formed a square on the playground and shouted the slogan of their class. The slogan of our class is particularly heroic: "1234, 1234! Four, five, four, five, first of all, you must be able to write and type! Not others, it is me! " After the parade ceremony, the tense sports meeting began!
Today's sports meeting can be rich, with parents jumping long ropes, parents and children jumping over obstacles in relay races, and long-distance running from 60 meters to 800 meters. .
The most exciting event is the obstacle relay race between parents and children. As soon as Mr. Tang's gunfire rang, I saw Wei Liangyu in our class clutching the baton, crossing the obstacle and passing it on to the next parent. The cheerleaders in our class also cheered, and the students shouted one after another. The game is going on nervously. Suddenly, a parent ran too fast, lost his center of gravity and fell to the ground. No, what can we do Can the game continue? The students on the side were shocked, only to see that the parent was not discouraged and was still fighting the pain. Come on! Come on! The students shouted louder, and the game was over! The students and parents of our class won the second place through hard work.
Sweat and smiles flow on their faces, and honor passes in everyone's heart. Although everyone is very tired in this sports meeting, everyone is very happy.
6. Works that combine Gulangyu scenery and comments.
I can't help feeling: Now that Taiwan Province Province has not returned to the embrace of the motherland, how eager compatriots on both sides of the strait are to reunite! At this time, a lush mountain caught my eye. There is an abrupt big stone at the top of the mountain, which is the sunshine rock.
It is said that in the early morning, you can see a magnificent sunrise. After a while, a strange stone appeared on the white beach, which is the famous Gulangyu Island.
There is a small hole in it. Whenever the tide rises, the sea water will flow through the cave and make a "rushing" sound, as if the waves are beating. This is the origin of Gulangyu Stone, hence the name Gulangyu Island. After the tour around the island, we boarded the long-awaited Gulangyu Island.
Maybe it's the Spring Festival. There are many people on the island. We chose some remote alleys for a walk, leisurely and quiet. Rows of European-style buildings, ancient and quaint, stand quietly in long alleys.
The puff flowers crawled along the fence and became orange flowers. Against the backdrop of green leaves, yellow flowers are particularly delicate and charming. Not to be outdone, bougainvillea is as red as fire and pink as chardonnay, sticking its head out of the fence and showing its elegant demeanor in large bundles.
Come to the seaside, facing the endless sea, the sea breeze blows, so comfortable! We children are happy to play with sand and build castles by the sea, while adults are enjoying tea leisurely by the sea. As night fell, we left Gulangyu by boat.
Looking at the distant island, I prayed silently in my heart: beautiful Gulangyu, I will come again.
7. Excellent comments on primary school students' compositions [Excellent comments on primary school students' compositions] Scenes and atmosphere descriptions add a lot of color to the article; ... a brief description of the wonderful place; The simple introduction of the combination of point and surface naturally transitions to the next paragraph; Situation description causes suspense; Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things concrete and visual. Briefly describe the cause and effect and pave the way. Dialogue or some psychological description can be added to this part. It is more appropriate to change … to …, which is a natural link between the preceding and the following. The detailed description highlights the quality of the characters and is touching. Narrative editing scenery, comparing people with each other, and comparing with each other. The personified language makes the article more vivid. The shape description is very interesting and touching. It's contagious. It is vivid by enumerating figures and giving examples. It's a natural transition, and every paragraph is clearly explained. This part refers to the examples in the article. The language is too flat and can be modified appropriately to make it more vivid. Using rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification, the beauty of … is vividly written. This part can also be written. See the big from the small, and accurately express figurative sentences. Supplement to ancient poems. The ending is implicit and points out the theme. The ending was a bit sudden and exaggerated. The ending is simple and touching. The ending is equally interesting. The echo at the end should be the beginning and the structure is complete. Very vivid, appropriate and wonderful. The ending seems to be the finishing touch. It should be able to take care of the beginning. Careful observation and vivid description. The end echoes the title and points out the center. 4. Very artistic. Miscellaneous but not chaotic, can be appropriately refined and focused. The ending is just right, the language is simple and profound, and it is thought-provoking. Begins with feelings and ends with feelings. This makes the article coherent from beginning to end, and at the same time makes the theme of the article cyclical and infectious. It describes that ... is full of * * *, and the beginning is concise, focused and detailed. The content is specific. This article fully and appropriately exaggerates the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article. This is sublime and impressive ... it is realistic, contains simple and profound philosophy, and is refreshing and exciting to read ... The close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence, and it is very kind to read. This article is full of * * *. Between the lines, I can feel the little author's love for …. The full text has clear levels and fluent sentences. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in the same strain as the previous metaphor … Finally, the author shows his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching. The language of the article is fresh and lively, and the description can grasp the main characteristics of things. Short and pithy, it is worth reading. The language of the article is easy to understand. It is very kind to read. The beginning of the article is novel, which has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body, so that readers will have the impression of … as soon as they meet. The article is well organized and forms a complete image. This article can be described in fresh and interesting language … between the lines, it is a masterpiece, full of childlike interest and endless laughter in childhood. The two characteristics of this article are proper details and the combination of reality and fiction. The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching. Paying attention to specific things and developing appropriate imagination is the success of this paper. The article blends feelings into the scenery, describes the scenery, expresses emotions, and is good at using metaphors to make the article vivid and concrete, which makes people involuntarily write. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers ... the details are appropriate. For the description of scenery, the language is concise and accurate, the association touches the scene, and the scene blends naturally. The full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and not vulgar, and it is worth learning. The full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting. The article expresses emotions while narrating. The ending focuses on expressing emotions, taking care of the beginning and summarizing the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go. The article is detailed and orderly, which is a masterpiece. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible. The details are quite clever and the foundation is rich. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile. The full text is easy to understand and interesting. The article has clear clues, prominent themes and is closely focused. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythm. I can't bear to let go. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and an indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article. The vivid description of the details reveals the inner world of the characters, which is the success of this paper. The selection of materials is novel ... It is full of rural life and children's interest. It makes people feel very happy and comfortable after reading it. This paper is based on real life, and the materials are exquisite. The paragraphs are clear, natural, interesting and readable. The full text is lively in rhythm, fresh in language and full of humor. Reading is interesting. A vivid and meticulous description of … is a major feature of this article, which also reflects the author's keen and meticulous observation. This is a major factor in the success of the article. This article is vivid and rich in content, novel and refreshing in language and unique and reasonable in structure. This article is a mature narrative work and article. Shows the whole process of the experiment, ups and downs, interesting. The little author observes carefully, describes the experimental phenomena in an orderly way, can get to the point, and is meticulous and comprehensive. The article embodies the interest and knowledge of natural science and is very interesting to read. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text. There are a few words at the end, which express the author's lofty ideal and firm confidence in exploring the mysteries of science. Inspiring. The three major successes of this article are: first, paying attention to choosing the most beautiful fragments to write; second, using accurate words; and third, the structure of the article is compact. This paper organizes materials around the center of …, which is accurate, vivid and rich in content, and is a successful work. Although the article is short, it is vivid, delicate, full of life and accurate in wording and sentence making. Finally, the article reveals the central sentence.
8. The beauty of writing the evaluation of the fourth grade composition.
Nature is beautiful, and the world is beautiful.
Maybe you will hate rainy and humid weather. But looking at them with your heart is different.
It's raining outside the window and the room is quiet. At this time, you just need to calm down. Sitting on a cane chair, with spiritual food on your legs, drinking steaming scented tea, the fragrance of scented tea and the freshness of the air outside the window blend into one, and slowly and slowly sneak into your heart. Soft violin music holds your hand and takes you into a beautiful dream. When you wake up, you can put on your coat, put on your umbrella and go for a walk outside. You see, the low houses in the small village are smoking, with lights on and hazy in the drizzle. Smoke, lights and drizzle, trees and grass. Did everything in nature make you friends with them? I think this is what Mr. Zhu Ziqing felt when he wrote Spring Rain!
Of course, it can't rain every day. The sky is clear in Wan Li.
Clear sky is the pride of summer, and the sky in all seasons belongs to it. But you must be worried about the scorching sun in summer. However, as long as you make friends with them.
There are no impurities in the blue sky in summer, only lovely white clouds are dotted. Cicada sings the beauty of summer in the shade.
You can sit quietly by the stream, the tall and lush trees stretch out their arms to shield you from the sun, and the green grass weaves a fluffy and soft blanket for you, as early as spring. Lying on the blanket, you look up at the blue sky, and the stream plays Adeline by the water rhythmically for you. When you are completely intoxicated in the beautiful world, a breeze caresses your face, raises your long hair and lets it go. At this moment, does the song of freedom ring in my ear > Do you feel that you are a member of this blue sky, dancing with the cloud babies in a cheerful and beautiful group dance? The sun has set. Let's get on our bikes and go home. In the distance, the sunset mother is waving to you with a sweet smile in the colorful, beautiful and elegant sunset!
Appreciate the world with your heart. God created them with his heart, how can he be worthy of his old man's kindness?
9. Comments on composition evaluation are as follows:
1 Briefly explain the time, place and result …
The language is concise, standardized and attractive at the beginning.
3 ... Starting from ... is more original. Explains the cause and effect.
4 The opening is concise, concise and orderly; Pay attention to description ... leave a deep impression.
5. I used a scene metaphor at the beginning, which is quite innovative; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.
Getting to the point at the beginning is also a way of writing.
The beginning is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively.
Start with a rhetorical question to attract readers.
Go straight to the point at the beginning, which makes people clear at a glance.
10 starts with a dot, and the word is very attractive.
1 1 The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot of color to the article;
12 … Briefly describe the highlights; Link local work with overall work.
13 briefly introduce the situation and naturally transition to the next paragraph;
14 situation description arouses suspense;
Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things concrete and visual.
16 Briefly describe the antecedents and pave the way.
17 this part can be added with dialogue or some psychological description.
18 It is more appropriate to change … to ….
19 naturally connects the preceding with the following, and the detailed description highlights the quality of the characters and is touching.
Describe the scenery in the narrative, measure others and compare with each other.
The personification language of 2 1 makes the article more vivid.
The description of appearance is interesting, which highlights the loveliness of …. The introduction is all my own ideas, which are very infectious.
The method of enumerating figures and giving examples is very vivid.
10. The scene of the composition review in class describes "Come on, come on!" The playground was filled with cheers. It is Class Four (1) and Class Four (2) who are having a tug-of-war nervously.
In the first two games, the two sides drew 1-1. At the beginning of the third game, Class 4 (1) took the lead. I saw them make full efforts like little tigers, holding the rope with both hands, leaning back and kicking their legs hard. The students in Class 4 (2) were unprepared, and the rope was dragged inch by inch. "Come on, Class 4 (2)! Four (2) classes come on! " Shouts broke out on the playground. Suddenly, I don't know where I came from. Class 4 (2) students, some gritted their teeth, some tightened their faces, some held their breath, all stared round and exhausted their strength. I saw the big rope moving in the direction of Class 4 (2) bit by bit. Suddenly, the rope stopped moving and the game came to a deadlock. At this time, there was a sound of refueling on the playground. The encouraged students waved small red flags and shouted rhythmically, "Four (2)! One, two, four (2)! One, two! " After about seven or eight seconds of stalemate between the two sides, Qi Xin and Xie Bi, students of Class 4 (2), produced a great force and suddenly pulled the rope, and the red sign suddenly crossed the river boundary. "Class two won! Class two won! " The students sang and danced, and they were very happy.
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