Close? Keys? Words: 550 words in the sixth grade of primary school.

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This article applies to: the sixth grade of primary school.

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This composition is about 550 words in the sixth grade of primary school. The title is "Taobao Charity Sale". Everyone is welcome to contribute. This Thursday afternoon, the school held a unique "Taobao Fair" activity. You see, "Taobao House" has opened, and "Love Store" has posted promotional advertisements, especially the "Red Scarf Selling House" in Class 6, Grade 3, which is more like a caring small supermarket. Teacher Zhou, the head teacher, is the manager of this supermarket, and I am the cashier. The activity began, the students were in high spirits, and the campus suddenly became lively. The shelves of the desk are full of dazzling things? There are many kinds of goods, most of which are books, toys and other school supplies, which are really dazzling. Some students run around, look at goods and go shopping; Some are all smiles. Selling and selling; Others bargain together in twos and threes? Fortunately, the two books and other items I prepared became hot items for customers in this charity sale. In addition, I also bought a multifunctional toy car that I like very much in this Taobao bazaar. The activity is over, but I have been immersed in a cheerful situation for a long time. It is really "happy shopping, love a lot"!

Teacher's comment: In this short article, the author introduced the "Taobao bazaar" organized by the school. This paper describes the enthusiasm and excitement of the students when they participate in the activity, and also introduces the complete range and types of goods in this activity, so that readers can feel the excitement and happiness of the "Taobao Fair" and the students when they participate in the activity. The composition language is fluent and clear, and the little author has strong language expression ability. The composition lacks a detailed description of specific cases. If we can describe students' movements, expressions or language to prove the happiness of activities and students' love for participating in activities, then the expression center in the composition will be more prominent. (Xue Le China Special Teacher: Teacher Rodina) 2009-12-2916:17: 00.