Excerpt: I stood in front of camels and watched them chew grass: so ugly face, so long teeth, so quiet posture. When they chew, their upper and lower teeth grind alternately, their big nostrils are steaming, and their beards are covered with foam. I'm so surprised that my teeth are moving. Appreciation: This essay describes the expression and action of camel chewing forage in detail. I seem to really see a camel hunched, eating grass, grinding its teeth and making a "zi zi" sound. Grinding and grinding, some white bubbles come out and hang on the camel's mouth. Don't have fun. I learned it from "I was shocked and my teeth moved". Lin is very interested in camels and likes them very much. He is deeply attracted by them. Also let me see the small sea print with two braids, looking at the camel, eyes straight, teeth grinding rhythmically. Let's take a look at the sentence "steaming in the big nostrils", which also fully shows the author's love for camels. If she doesn't like camels, will she observe them so carefully? This is the genius of Lin-the whole paragraph does not use a "love", but shows his love through his own actions and the actions of the camel. -2008. 10. 12. Excerpt: I have seen the madman in Hui 'an Pavilion several times. Every time I stand at the door, or the horse will quickly squeeze my hand and gently say, "crazy!" " We walked over the wall, and if I turned around again, they pulled my arm to stop me. In fact, that madman is just a big girl of pine and cypress in big braid, like the big girl of the Li family in JiaHe Zhang! She always stands against the door wall and watches people pass by. Appreciation: This passage made me realize the kindness of the author. Her mother and old nanny Ma Song are very afraid and disgusted with the madman in Hui 'an Pavilion, which means that they look down on the madman. What about the author? From the short sentence "In fact, that madman is just a big girl from big braid, Pinus tabulaeformis", I read that the author did not regard her as a madman, but thought that the madman was a big sister of big braid, and her thoughts were very pure. We can see the beauty of the author's childhood thoughts from the second half of the sentence "Like the big girl of the Li family in JiaHe Zhang". She is not sorry for the madman, but treats the madman as a normal person ... I wonder if the author still has such childlike innocence? -2008. 10. 15. Excerpt: So I sang a eulogy for five years, and now it's the students' turn to sing farewell to us: "Outside the pavilion, beside the ancient road, the grass is blue. ..... When did you come here? Don't wander around when you come! Time flies, the ends of the earth, and close friends are scattered. Life is rarely a gathering, but there are many separations ... "I cried, and all our graduates cried. How much we like to grow taller and become adults, and how afraid we are! When we get back to primary school, no matter how high it is, teacher! You should always treat us like children! Appreciation: This passage describes Lin's feelings for teachers and students, and also describes the author's ambivalence of longing and fear for the future. From "I cried, our graduates cried", I felt the author and classmates' nostalgia for the school and their concern for the teachers. From the sentence "You should treat us as children forever", I realized that the author loves and appreciates the teacher too much. I hope the teacher will always educate her, and I hope I will always be the teacher's student. This passage has no flowery rhetoric and long speech, but it makes us feel the most affectionate and touching farewell described in simple language. -2008. 10.3 1. excerpt 4: mom and dad are in the yard, mom is holding her little sister, and dad is arranging flowers. He said that oleander has too many leaves, so there are few flowers, so some leaves should be removed. He tied the branch with a rope again, so that the oleander wouldn't be so scattered. He tied the string to the morning glory by the wall and nailed it to the height of the fence. The morning sun shines on this wall. All the morning glories are red, purple, yellow and blue, but it's not morning, and several morning glories have withered. Appreciation: From this passage, I realized "Dad's love for flowers". He likes flowers very much and knows a lot about gardening. Moreover, "Dad" loves flowers so much that he should have a particularly good temper and temperament. Thus, a picture of the sunset: "mother" holding "sister", staring at the flowers. What about "Dad"? He trimmed the flowers in the yard with scissors, ropes and nails. "Dad" will make a "click" sound from time to time when he is trimming flowers and plants. Hmm! It's really like a family painting with life as paper and fun as pen. At the same time, this is also a transitional period. At the end of the paragraph, it says "Morning glory has withered". We read a kind of sadness and sadness, which leads to the following article ... -2008 438+05438+0.22. Reading Notes of Old Stories in the South of the City-① Dongyang Childhood Camel Team-If life is unique, it is really a good thing. When you grow up, you can work, you can serve your country, you can ... The benefits of growing up are numerous, just as adults say. But I don't think so. Growing up does have its advantages, but it also has its disadvantages. For example, when we meet a person, we look at him with naive eyes and study him carefully when we are young. We don't care about anything else And grow up? The first reaction is: Is he a bad person? Is he a liar? This awareness of prevention is certainly good, but have you ever thought about how much we have lost? We can't see his goodness, his kindness, his everything. Because we have too many taboos and too many concerns. Since then, people have put on a mask of vigilance. Can't really communicate. From then on, we learned to be polite, to use certain words in some occasions, and to be grandiose. I saw a camel. He is loaded with goods. What would we think? Is it a camel or its cargo? In the first chapter, the hero wrote that when he saw a camel as a child, most of his thoughts were about its beauty and ugliness. And adults? It must be the goods. Isn't this a child? Isn't this childhood? The difference between children and adults is as simple as that. The first chapter of this book seems to tell us that we are looking at that spotless childhood. There are not many advantages and disadvantages. Notes on the Old Events in the South of the City ② Hui 'an Pavilion-a flower and a world? The second chapter of Old Things in the South of the City focuses on shaping two characters. One is crazy Xiuzhen, and the other is a girl beaten by her father. Let's not talk about girls now Because in my heart, it is that madman = = Xiuzhen. Oh, I'm not saying that madness is good. I just appreciate Xiuzhen's attitude towards life. Xiuzhen's husband, who didn't go through the door, left Xiuzhen and left himself in that war-torn era. Xiuzhen was pregnant with his child without knowing it. Everyone said that Xiuzhen went crazy after her husband left. Actually, it is not. Xiuzhen looks crazy. Actually, I'm just waiting for my husband who hasn't gone through the door to come back and fly with me. Normally, in fact, such a person who only remembers the past and doesn't know the future is very ignorant, or ignorant. But not in my eyes. At least, Soo-jung has the courage and confidence to live. Have the confidence to live every day. What others said didn't affect Xiuzhen. In this world, there are too many things that are not smooth. But it's not our own fault. One's own life path, five points is one's own, and five points is predestined. We just have to try our best to do everything well and live every day. Failed, crying, sad, think about it carefully, isn't life so full of five flavors? Seeing many young men and women commit suicide for a little setback in their lives, isn't it the old man who has experienced ups and downs who smiles and drinks poison to quench his thirst? Too many things have become the past, why are we still struggling to pursue them? Maybe everyone will ask such a question. Maybe everyone will answer. How many people can really understand in their own lives? It wasn't all after I got old that I remembered all those things carefully before I found out why I was so stupid. Yes The best explanation for this problem may be: life is only like this. Yes, don't let the changes in other people's small world affect your own life TV series. Every day is new, so we should make good use of it. Every flower has its own pink and colorful world, a grass and its own yearning Tathagata. Then we should have a colorful world of our own. It's themselves, not others. Come on, live every day and seize every day. To create a sunny world of your own. Notes on Old Events in the South of the City ③ Look at the sea —— Look at the resurgence of splendid china and see who is in charge of the ups and downs of Wan Li. In 2008, the year that China people have been waiting for has finally arrived. China, an ancient country with a history of 1000 years, has once again reached the peak of history. Because the Olympic Games will be held in China. Four seas masters, ten thousand friends gather in China. In this revived China, there is no shortage of teachers who have nurtured the flowers of the motherland, and there is no shortage of talented people. "Let's go to see the sea" seems to have nothing to do with what I said above. Then you are wrong. In this chapter, the protagonist began a colorful campus life, enjoying this sweet childhood, singing a slightly childish class song, thinking about his beautiful dreams and setting his own life coordinates. The achievement after growing up actually stems from the original childhood dream. Let's go to see the sea is a simple poem, but it is also the hero's little dream. This dream is really simple and not too difficult to realize. For us children born by the sea, this may just be something we have to do every day. How can you succeed without a dream? This dream is very simple. It can be a new dress for your birthday, a trip to an amusement park or a trip around the world ... as long as you have a dream, we will work hard towards it. The process is very hard, but when we get the reward, we will know that our efforts are worthwhile and not in vain. Reading Notes on Old Things in the South of the City ④ Aunt Lan-Happiness swayed with the wind and fell into a thousand stories. In the eyes of many people, Aunt Lan is just a simple woman. Run away from home with an ambitious young man you like. Aunt Lan always likes to talk about things and small things, but she always laughs last. This is a belief that an optimistic person will have, and it is also a trait that only people who will find happiness will have. Think about World War II, think about Jews, think about the China Anti-Japanese Red Army. Too many unpleasant things have happened in this world. But what needs to be emphasized is that we may feel happy because of something, but happiness is a feeling, a real feeling. It doesn't exist for anything. One thing may be the reason why you are happy, but happiness is always decided by yourself, just as feeling is decided by yourself. Simply put, it is. Happiness should at least have a heart that knows how to find happiness, not something that makes you happy. Why do some people always smile and some people always frown? Because people who laugh all day know how to look at everything optimistically, know how to find happiness and create things that make people happy. Everything always has a good side and a bad side, which is the essence of everything. Those who are optimistic and know how to find happiness will always try to look on the bright side and see the bad side as little as possible. And what about people who are sad all day? They only see the bad side, but they can't see the good side. This is the biggest difference between people who know how to find happiness and those who wait for others to bring him happiness. In fact, happiness is not a great or hard thing to have. It is as ubiquitous as air. You just didn't find out. Happiness can be eating a delicious dinner, getting parents' approval, or … too much. Don't wait for others to bring you happiness. Happiness should be created and found by yourself. From now on, if someone says thank you, someone will open their hands to help you, remember happiness and happiness. Notes on Old Events in the South of the City (5) Riding a donkey and rolling around-flying butterflies? If I can't fly out of the sea, I don't want to talk about any profound problems. I just want to talk about people's concerns, or universal problems. From millions of years ago, people knew how to help each other, which made human beings develop so fast and so well. Ma Song in this article is a person who loves her children very much, just like most people now. But Ma Song also loves the hero in the story, loves the hero's family and helps people in need. She's fine. This is beyond the reach of many people. We always like to recite poems and articles. Words and expressions of mutual help can be found everywhere. But why is what we do in reality so different from what is written in the article? The teacher taught us to help others when they were in danger. Our strength is small, but it is also a heart. But what about reality? When you meet a beggar in the street, will you do something for him? Will it? Maybe not. When I went out at the age of 4, my mother said to me, son, don't give money to beggars. They are all liars. I don't deny this, it is indeed possible. Because the TV is turned on, there are countless programs about such cases. Some college students even pretend to be beggars to cheat money. At that time, I didn't understand why my mother said that, but it was only one or two dollars. I'm not saying that you don't have much money. I just want to say that you really have the strength to help beggars, and this kind of help is only one or two dollars. Why don't we help them? Maybe there are swindlers who pretend to be beggars in the world, but let's assume that you meet a beggar who is standing on the street begging and needs it very much, but you don't give him money. This is just a small mistake. From a big perspective, if others really need money to treat diseases and help their families, and you don't give money, it will delay others' illness. One or two dollars is not much, but it is also a gift from myself. Let's not think that the world is too ugly and dark. We just need to know that although there are liars in this world, there are always more good people than liars. Ma Song in the article is so devoted to working for the hero's home that her children don't know where they are. Indeed, the gap between people is getting bigger and bigger, and the "drawing a sword to help each other" that was often said before is gone. I don't need everyone to do great things. When you see that others need help, open your heart to help them. It can be a smile or an encouragement ... "Notes on Old Things in the South of the City" 6 Dad's flowers have fallen-complacent and indifferent? The chapter of frustration and calm is neither long nor short. But a few words summed up the whole book. To be more accurate, it summarizes the growth of a child. Growth, perhaps from birth, has always been with us, and the word growth is everywhere in our lives. In the article, we always say that when the duckling grows up, the children grow up and serve the motherland. Then who knows they are growing. Growth is a long time, some people may be a day, others may be a month, or a year. In short, we grow up again and again unconsciously. So what makes us grow? The two-word answer is "gain" and "loss". When we get something, we are always in high spirits. We cry when we lose something. This is human nature. We also accept this law at a shallow level. But who can look down on gains and losses? Only when we win a total victory and get a lot of things will we realize that I won, I won. In some small failures, we always magnify these small failures infinitely, making us feel why there were so many failures and so few successes at that time. How many victories, how many victories, slipped away before we knew it. Look carefully, we actually have a lot of "gains", although there are also "losses". But maybe not so proud. When we are' proud', apart from being happy, we should probably remember more. Let's remember them when we are frustrated. In this way, we should be able to look down on our pride, be calm when we are frustrated, face it and forget it. Forgetting is not erasing your own memories, but being able to face and deal with those where you will go. The protagonist in the article is like this. I didn't shed a tear when my father died. This is growing up, being stronger and facing the loss calmly. Proud and indifferent, frustrated and calm.