(2) The walnut with a promising harvest gives people a sense of sureness in life and pleasure in seeing the fruits of labor.
Scoring standard: 2 points for each correct sentence.
Points. ***4
Points. 2.
In content, the word "you" is used together, which shows that the density of walnuts in Shangluo can always bring farmers the joy of bumper harvest; Structurally, the opening topic leads to the full text and the following description of Shangluo walnut and its economic development.
Scoring standard: if you answer one question correctly, you will get 2 points.
Points. ***4
Points. When I first came to work in Shangluo, I saw the beauty of mountains and rivers and felt that it was economically backward. Now I come to Shangluo and see the dense walnuts, lamenting that walnuts have brought a bumper harvest to Shangluo farmers; Leaving Shangluo, I look forward to Shangluo's bright future. Scoring standard: for each correct answer, you get 1.
Points. ***3
Points. 4. Using figurative figures of speech, the "green waves" are used to describe the layers of green trees swaying in the wind, vividly writing out the number and rich colors of trees; Personification rhetoric is used to endow "tree" and "stream", and the dynamic smiles of trees and streams are vividly written in human modality. Using double figures of speech, the sentence pattern is neat and the rhyme is harmonious, which shows the beautiful scenery and cultural connotation of Qinling Mountain.
Scoring standard: for each rhetorical device and sentence analysis, you get 1.
Points. ***3
Points. 5.
Beautiful appearance: tall and straight, with many trees and fruits; Practical beauty: good economic benefits and high nutritional value of fruits; Beauty of character: courage to take responsibility and be willing to contribute.
This writing not only shows the unique characteristics of peach tree itself, but also highlights the beautiful character of walnut tree; Walnut tree also embodies the spiritual quality of Shangluo people's diligence, simplicity, courage and dedication.
Scoring standard: question 1, 2
Points, answer a little L.
Points, answer two points and get two.
Points; The second question, 2
Points, answer one layer, get 1.
Points, answer two layers, get 2.
Points. ***4
Points. As long as it has the right meaning.
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