One is to learn to observe things around you. On the one hand, we should learn to observe people or things around us from different angles in order to grasp the characteristics of things in all aspects. For example, when we observe the rain, we should observe the weather changes, air characteristics, changes in flowers and trees and changes in people before, during and after the rain. By observing these things in this way, we will have a deeper impression on them, and then we can reflect their characteristics in our composition. On the other hand, we should observe from reading why other people's articles are well written and what advantages they have compared with their own compositions. For example, in the article "Five Strong Men of Langya Mountain", the ninth volume of the primary school Chinese textbook, the author wrote: "Ma Baoyu, the squad leader, calmly commanded the battle, and only ordered a hard fight when the enemy approached. Ge Zhenlin, the vice monitor, shouted at the top of his lungs, as if the miniature gun could not finish spraying his anger. Soldier Song Xueyi threw a grenade and put his arms in a circle, so that he could get all his strength. The two little soldiers, Hu Delin and Hu Fucai, kept their faces tight and focused on the enemy. " It's like writing: "The squad leader Ma Baoyu ordered the battle, and the soldiers aimed at the enemy." More concrete and vivid. Other people's articles are like appearances. Through careful reading and observation, you can follow the pattern when writing.
Second, the composition should speak with facts. Facts speak louder than words, and vague comments and slogans are a burden to composition. For example, if you want to write about a person you admire, you should write about his/her words, actions, behaviors and qualities. Using concrete examples to show that he (she) deserves your admiration is more convincing than saying that he (she) is better and that he (she) is better.
Thirdly, association is also an indispensable part of concrete, vivid and touching composition. To tell the truth is to write about people or things, what you think from what you see and what you think from what you hear. For example, if you write about the bamboo in Jinggangshan, you can write: "The most unforgettable thing is the bamboo in Jinggangshan, with a forest of 500 miles." You can also write: "The most unforgettable thing about the 500-mile forest in Jinggangshan is bamboo. From a distance, some of them are handsome and tall, like the hilltop sentry in those days, some are dense, like the Jones lurking in the deep depression, and some seem to be born soon, but they are also slim and graceful, with a unique look. " It is also about Phyllostachys pubescens, and the last sentence is appropriately associated, which enhances the appeal of the article. It is kind and natural to read, which is impressive and makes people feel the extraordinary bamboo in Jinggang.
Therefore, to write a good composition, we must read more, practice more and ponder more. See how others communicate, and often spread the wings of communication. Over time, students' compositions will reach the ideal level, and students' imagination will be enriched.
2. What is a vivid composition? In composition teaching, teachers often ask students to write more specific and vivid compositions.
In order to write a good composition, students spend a lot of time, but the teacher's comments after the composition are still not specific and vivid, and the language is not convincing, and they can't leave a deep impression after reading it. Years of teaching experience have led me to conclude that students should work hard in the following aspects, so that their compositions will be concrete, vivid and interesting.
One is to learn to observe things around you. On the one hand, we should learn to observe people or things around us from different angles in order to grasp the characteristics of things in all aspects.
For example, when we observe the rain, we should observe the weather changes, air characteristics, changes in flowers and trees and changes in people before, during and after the rain. By observing these things in this way, we will have a deeper impression on them, and then we can reflect their characteristics in our composition.
On the other hand, we should observe from reading why other people's articles are well written and what advantages they have compared with their own compositions. For example, in the article "Five Strong Men of Langya Mountain", the ninth volume of the primary school Chinese textbook, the author wrote: "Ma Baoyu, the squad leader, calmly commanded the battle, and only ordered a hard fight when the enemy approached.
Ge Zhenlin, the vice monitor, shouted at the top of his lungs, as if the miniature gun could not finish spraying his anger. Soldier Song Xueyi threw a grenade and put his arms in a circle, so that he could get all his strength.
Hu Delin and Hu Fucai, the two little soldiers, were sullen and absorbed in aiming at the enemy. "It's like writing:" Monitor Ma Baoyu ordered the battle, and the soldiers aimed at the enemy. "
More concrete and vivid. Other people's articles are like appearances. Through careful reading and observation, you can follow the pattern when writing.
Second, the composition should speak with facts. Facts speak louder than words, and vague comments and slogans are a burden to composition.
For example, if you want to write about a person you admire, you should write about his/her words, actions, behaviors and qualities. Using concrete examples to show that he (she) deserves your admiration is more convincing than saying that he (she) is better and that he (she) is better.
Thirdly, association is also an indispensable part of concrete, vivid and touching composition. To tell the truth is to write about people or things, what you think from what you see and what you think from what you hear.
For example, if you write about the bamboo in Jinggangshan, you can write: "The most unforgettable thing is the bamboo in Jinggangshan, with a forest of 500 miles." You can also write: "The most unforgettable thing about the 500-mile forest in Jinggangshan is bamboo. From a distance, some of them are handsome and tall, like the hilltop sentry in those days, some are dense, like the Jones lurking in the deep depression, and some seem to be born soon, but they are also slim and graceful, with a unique look. "
It is also about Phyllostachys pubescens, and the last sentence is appropriately associated, which enhances the appeal of the article. It is kind and natural to read, which is impressive and makes people feel the extraordinary bamboo in Jinggang. Therefore, to write a good composition, we must read more, practice more and ponder more.
See how others communicate, and often spread the wings of communication. Over time, students' compositions will reach the ideal level, and students' imagination will be enriched.
3. Describe the idioms with vivid composition. What are the spring breeze to describe vivid paintings and poems, such as "Spring Breeze Comes to the Pen"?
The snake under the pen is still the snake under the pen. Describe calligraphy as vivid and magnificent.
The metaphor of fireworks at the bottom of the pen is vivid and excellent.
A long snake described calligraphy with a brush as vivid and magnificent.
Vivid and vivid: refers to the vivid characters portrayed in good literary works; Adu: The spoken languages of the Six Dynasties are "this" and "this". Describe people with pictures or words, and you can get their spirit.
Vivid portrayal: refers to the vivid characters depicted in beautiful literary works; Portrait: Portrait. Describing people with pictures or words can be vividly portrayed.
Metaphor produces words: words; Metaphor: metaphor. Vivid metaphors appear in words.
When writing an article or speech, point out the essence in a few words at key points to make the content vivid and powerful.
The finishing touch was originally a description of the wonders of Zhang Sengyou, a painter in the Liang Dynasty. Later, it was used to describe that when writing an article or a speech, you should point out the essence in a few words at key points to make the content vivid and powerful.
A lively cat is lively: make it full of vitality; Secret: refers to human spirituality, which makes spirituality vivid and natural.
The voices, faces and smiles of the characters are vividly described. To describe or describe vividly.
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How to make the composition concrete and vivid As the saying goes, "A clever woman can't cook without rice", this is the importance of "rice". However, once you find the rice in the pot, you should naturally consider cooking. Writing is not like this. If you have "rice"-an ordinary material, you must try to "cook" it into a delicious "rice"-article. A close reading of Wang Ya's article "I shed tears for chess" may give us enlightenment. The use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor, personification and exaggeration can make plain materials vivid. For example, "I" and "chess" won, "I am beaming"; In the deciding game, the author wrote that the opponent "ate Xiong Xin's leopard gall and dared to send a gun to provoke my horse". These metaphors are very vivid and highlight the characteristics of "arrogant generals". Look at the following passage: "I will send a car to the front to disturb the enemy camp, then send a gun to the left to ambush, and then rush." Humorous speeches can also make plain materials vivid. For example, at the beginning of the article, after explaining the origin of the nickname "Pride General", the author wrote that the chess master "I" staged a tragedy of "Guan Yunchang defeated Maicheng" last week, which is much more vivid than writing "I lost this game". Another example is when a cannon "eats" an elephant of the other side. It is much more vivid to "report to the terrifying in a blink of an eye" than to say "my gun was eaten by his car". Use idioms commonly used in life (including two-part allegorical sayings, proverbs, idioms and aphorisms, etc.). ) can also make plain material vivid. For example, when writing "... I'm proud", the young writer turned to quote his opponent.
5. How to make the composition more vivid, how to make the article vivid and touching, and how to make the article more vivid.
Some students are poor in using words when writing, and often use the same words in an article or even a short paragraph. Repeated repetition of the same word will inevitably give people a monotonous feeling, which is an example of suffering from the word "anemia":
Finally, a group of birds saw the rice and jumped over. When they entered the net, they seemed to find something. They looked around, but refused to go in. We held our breath, curled up in the straw shed, and looked greedily at these fast-arriving prey through the gap in the rice pile. At this time, Xiao Wang was a little impatient. He glanced at me, then at the lively bird that refused to enter the net, and sighed slightly. I gave him a hard look for fear that he would lose his temper.
In this short passage "Bird Hunting", "Look" appears many times in a row. In fact, Chinese vocabulary is very rich. The same action often has several or even dozens of synonyms. Words used to express "look" include "look", "see", "see", "look", "stare", "glance", "bird's eye view", "look", "stare" and so on. To say that they are synonyms means that they all mean "look". On closer inspection, they are slightly different. Under the guidance of the teacher, the little author made a revision. According to the different contexts, feelings and nuances of the above-mentioned "seeing", he used synonyms of "seeing" respectively: the first "seeing" remained unchanged; The second "look"-"look east and look west" is changed to "look east and look west"; The third "look" is changed to "stare"; The fourth "look" is changed to "glance"; The fifth "looked" was changed to "glanced"; The sixth "look" was changed to "stare". You might as well enjoy it. Is this change much more vivid and accurate than the original?
To prevent the word "anemia" in writing, it is important to be diligent in accumulation and constantly enrich your vocabulary.
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6. How can I make my composition vivid? First, the composition should learn to accumulate "reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice", which explains the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects.
"Usually rely on accumulation, the examination room depends on play", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room. (A) language to establish a "vocabulary".
Vocabulary is the cell of an article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups.
There are two ways to establish "vocabulary": the first is reading. Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, take reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs from a specific notebook, or make reading cards.
The second is life. At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the popular spoken language and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us. Over time, we can say it chapter by chapter and write it beautifully.
(2) Strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article.
Because many students usually don't pay attention to accumulating materials, they are worried every time they write a composition, or edit or copy it. The solution to this problem is to accumulate material F, which can be used to cover punishment, gauze school, home, home and porcelain.
Opinion is the soul of an article. The center of the article is not clear, or the thought is not profound, which often shows that the author's thought is superficial.
Therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank". There are two ways: first, be thoughtful.
"One more miss, one more gain." Think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when something happens.
So you can see the essence through the phenomenon. It is also necessary to record the "sparks" of thinking and the conclusions of thinking at any time.
The second is compilation, that is, extracting famous sayings and aphorisms. In short, the composition should be accumulated, and the three writing warehouses of vocabulary, material and thought should be regularly counted, sorted and classified to continuously enrich and expand.
Second, to write a good composition, first learn to observe that Mr. Lu Xun emphasized two points when answering the question of "how to write a good article" for literary youth: one is to read more books, and the other is to practice more. Here, "seeing more" means observing more.
This shows that in order to write a good article and master skillful writing skills, it is necessary to observe more and learn to observe, and observation is the necessary premise and foundation of writing. Russian novelist Chekhov earnestly warned beginners: "A writer must train himself to be a keen observer and never give up! -It is a habit to exercise your own observation, as if it were second nature. "
It takes time to hone observation into habit and second nature, which is very useful and remarkable. Pay attention to the people, events, sights and things around you, and hunt for the materials needed in the composition: be interested in some seemingly insignificant but meaningful things, and pay attention to the cause, process and result of things; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, and learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out, enter the society, meet more people, observe their words and deeds, think about some things, and integrate into your own thoughts at any time.
This is the process of observation. In the process of observation, we should pay attention to the following points: (1) Observation should never be limited to "seeing with eyes". Broadly speaking, more practical observation refers to mobilizing all the five senses of people: listening with ears, feeling with the body and, more importantly, thinking with the mind, so that the observation will be more delicate and profound.
(2) Pay attention to the use of "bad writing" in the observation process. As the saying goes, a good memory is better than bad writing.
Many students see a lot and think a lot every day, but they are not good at writing it down at any time, which will waste the observed materials and a lot of valuable things. (3) Pay special attention to perseverance in observation.
Don't make "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not conducive to writing a good composition. You should observe life and think about every day in your life, so that you can write wonderful articles. Learning to observe plays a great role in laying the foundation and promoting a good composition. Without observation, you often find it difficult to write.
May you learn to observe, constantly cultivate and improve your ability to observe, and make great progress in your writing practice. Third, if the meaning is high, the meaning will be better, that is, to establish the center and intention of the article.
So what problems should the article pay attention to when expounding ideas? (1) Correct conception is the first meaning of the article. The so-called correctness is to ensure that the feelings and thoughts of the article are correct, in line with the nature and laws of objective things, in line with China's basic political principles, in line with people's basic moral requirements, and can give people positive inspiration. (2) Intentional singleness "The thing of composition is singleness, specialization is success, and dispersion is stupidity."
No matter how complicated things are, the main idea cannot be dispersed. An article should explain both this problem and that point of view, and it is ambiguous to ramble.
In fact, if you want to cover everything, it is definitely not in place. Moreover, an article can only have one center. Instead of "biting off more than one can chew", it is better to concentrate on expressing a center with pen and ink. Even if we express the center through several things, we should stick to the center, keep the same goal, pay attention to the combination of materials and centers, and let all the forces contained in materials point to the center. (3) The idea should be novel. Don't follow the crowd, the novel angle is the core of composition innovation.
The novelty of the idea requires jumping out of the old box and not following the advanced thinking, habitual thinking or the original psychological formula, but examining the alternative content contained in the topic from a unique perspective to avoid what others often write and what others have not written. Even if the same writing object can always be cut in from multiple angles, as long as we break the mindset, stand at the height of the times, avoid "vulgarity" and seek "difference", think from multiple angles and sides, or associate, expand, analogize or reverse, and build your most beautiful rainbow in the colorful sky.
(4) be profound. Deep conception means that the established theme is not * * * by people.
7. How to make your composition more vivid? The best way to make your composition vivid and concrete is to revise it repeatedly, but revision is not blind revision. There must be some way. After reading this, it may inspire you a little! 1. Famous words about article revision: 1. Articles are never tired of revision, and good sentences are repeatedly scrutinized. It is better to do good than to do good. 3. He Qifang: Throughout the ages, people who write well have probably worked hard on revision. 4. Ye Shengtao: It's a good habit to read things several times, revise them and count them again. It's not a pity. Second, the story about the revision of the article: 1. Bai Juyi's poems are easy to understand, even an illiterate old woman can understand them. One day, Bai Juyi read a well-written poem to her neighbor's old woman, who didn't understand it at first. Bai Juyi went back and carefully revised it, and then read it to her, but the old woman still didn't understand. 2. It is said that Wang Anshi, a famous litterateur in the Northern Song Dynasty in China and one of the "Eight Masters in Tang and Song Dynasties", repeatedly revised the word "green" when writing a sentence in Spring Breeze and Green Jiang Nanan, and changed "Yao", "Feng", "Yao", "Yao" and "Yao" to "green" until he was satisfied. There is a change of more than 160. Hamming 4. According to records, the great Russian writers Lev and Tolstoy revised their masterpiece War and Peace seven times. Anna karenin has been written for five years, and its opening part has been revised 20 times. Wei revised the end of A Farewell to Arms, that is, the last page, and was satisfied only after 39 revisions. Meticulousness: This is what we need to check the inner beauty. 2. Ask for advice with an open mind and listen to more opinions: "The authorities are fascinated, and the onlookers are clear." Students always have some preferences for their own works, but they don't want to delete them, and they always feel reluctant to give up. At this time, give them to your classmates, listen to their opinions with an open mind, let them find their own shortcomings and improve their writing level. 3. Back by yourself, not smooth. Delete if you don't like it. Students should revise their compositions. In addition to the above methods, they should also do the following: First, learn to refine words and sentences. I'll start with refining words and sentences. When writing a composition, words must be accurate and appropriate. When writing and revising a composition, we must scrutinize every word repeatedly. This is called refining words. Let's analyze a short sample to see which words need to be scrutinized. Practice: There is a small cupboard on the left, a small writing desk by the window and a small bookshelf next to the writing desk. There is nothing wrong with this passage. The room decoration is clearly written. But when I think about it, it takes four words in a paragraph, which makes the text monotonous and poor. If all three words except the first one are changed to (""). It is necessary to be concise in wording and sentence making. You can't write a beautiful article if you don't pass the mark. In fact, there is no famous writer at all times and all over the world who has not struggled in the face of difficulties in writing. In ancient China, there were legends such as "chanting a word, breaking a few hairs" and "fighting for a word, enduring the cold at night". Lao She, a modern writer, said, "We should try our best to tap the potential of language." All this tells us that if you want to write a good article, you have to work hard to temper your words. Second, learn to write vividly, which mainly means to write vividly and naturally, without being blunt or dry. There are many vivid ways of writing, such as metaphor, personification, parallelism and so on. Let's analyze an example and see how to make it more vivid. Example: Grass grows on the earth. Sunshine warms people and birds are singing. The poplar trees have green leaves, which indicates that spring has come. Modify 1, and change "grass grows on the earth" to "the earth is covered with a green coat". 2. Change "flowers in full bloom in the grass" to "flowers in the grass smile", and use anthropomorphic techniques to make the article more vivid. 3. "Birds Singing" uses anthropomorphic techniques, which makes people feel more vivid and vivid. Students, you can try it according to the above modification method. Exercise: Change the following sentences into anthropomorphic sentences or figurative sentences. 1 We came to the suburbs with laughter, and spring scenery appeared in front of us. We awakened spring. The wind blows the branches of the willow tree. The wind combed her soft hair. ) flow quickly to fields and villages. As soon as the floodgate is opened, water comes out of the ground, singing, flowing to fields, villages and people's hearts. When I grow up, I am determined to explore the mystery of the ocean. When I grow up, I am determined to unveil the mystery of the sea! The verbs such as "noisy", "combing", "flowing in" and "uncovering" here make the whole sentence and even the whole article shine at the moment, as if giving people a vivid feeling of seeing, hearing and seeing people and scenery. Spring has come, so has Miss Chun. She scattered green on the ground, and she scattered green on the ground. The grass straightened up and accepted the spring breeze. Xiaohua held her head high and accepted the baptism of the sun. This passage is just a poem sung to us by a young author. It is catchy and delicious to read, and it really gives people a certain sense of beauty. Recite the passage, snowflakes fall from the sky like thousands of flying white butterflies. We have fun on the playground. After a while, everyone became a snowman. Having played enough, the snowman stood in the snow and listened quietly. It turned out that the naughty little snowflake fell on my ear, as if whispering to me. These naughty boys hid in my hair for a while and kissed again for a while.
8. How to write a vivid and concrete composition?