20 10 Hunan college entrance examination perfect score composition: Young people are the most ignorant age, and they also want to know how high the sky is and how thick the land is. —— Inscription Early to bed and early to rise The teacher said that early to bed and early to rise is good for health, and the early bird catches the worm. So every morning, the serious morning exercise bell rings on time, which makes people sleepy. At first, the girl's dormitory was "we called for a thousand times and urged her for a thousand times before she came to us, and she covered her face with a quilt." Lazy face, sleepy eyes, and two blushes on my face. The children are all lazy. So "Aunt Susan" raped our ears with a whistle every day. "Oh, it's so boring (_ AI 1A 1Fan2si3), and the beauty is sleeping outside. I don't want to get up ... "The girl who loves beauty wears slippers and wears long hair like weeds to brush her teeth. It was not until morning exercises really started that everyone realized the urgency of time. "Oh, dear. You stepped on my foot! Why are you wearing my socks? ..... "and then ran to the playground, this speed is one of the bolt in China. Occasionally naughty and eccentric gasket will be late for fear of being punished by the teacher. He blushed and explained, "I have an upset stomach. Today is not convenient for me ... "So I happily skipped one morning exercise after another. The old class scratched his watermelon skin hairstyle and could only sigh: times are unfavorable and fleeting. My dream never dies, but I can't live. What can I do without doing morning exercises? What if you are a teacher and a teacher? Puppy love teacher said that precocious fruit is not delicious. In order to warn students against puppy love. This sentence is very powerful. Hit the floor, like a weed, overflowing the heart, penetrating the chest and deeply rooted in the child's heart. And the teenager's heart is already ready to move. Proud as he is: I won't be a big brother for many years, I just want to have a good love. Bold words make us weak and boneless girls shy. Girls' days in the dormitory are very relaxed and comfortable. I shared countless little secrets together, including growing up. Recalling the one I like, my cheeks are not red. Attract all beings to sigh. This hazy feeling is a very beautiful cushion, because it is deeply hidden in my heart. So it's not a big problem for easy study and life. When I was standing in the dormitory, my head was fine, my clothes were hanging, and I was as busy as a squirrel. When I couldn't help myself, the river burst into reflection. Why can't I read a good book for a while, just for the love mountain that can't be turned over, for the love river at the ferry, I can't shout. With a sigh, he buried himself in the sea of books. Yuan Qiao Ming and Zhang Beiling said: It's still early to become famous. At the opening ceremony of the Olympic Games, my mother pointed to the milk grove being performed and said to me, "Look, people are famous at such a young age. It must be great to grow up." I am speechless. In fact, how lucky we are. Maybe we have nothing, but we have a pure and brilliant childhood; Maybe we have been poor all our lives, but we really feel the existence of life. If we blindly envy other people's patents, we will also lose our original innocent dreams. Sitting in the examination room at the moment, I am filled with emotion. Maybe I have finished reading all the books in my life, and I have matured since then. Looking back, the clouds blocked my way home, and then looking back, there were thorns, and only that endless long road accompanied me. I want to bid farewell to the ignorance of youth and walk out of my brilliant life calmly in the future. Beijing 20 10 college entrance examination perfect score composition: down-to-earth look at the stars, down-to-earth look at the stars-a letter to Mozi ◎ A candidate in Beijing Dear Mozi: This is a letter from a student two thousand years later. I don't know why I wrote to you, but because of you, I know a simple but profound truth: look up at the stars and be down to earth. I remember when I was a child, I accidentally touched an antique thread-bound book from the bottom of the bookshelf. It was my first "encounter" with you. But this first time doesn't seem wonderful, because I can't see any emotion from your dark face, only the harshness and ruthlessness of "keep it or die" at that time. I think you must not be a person with lofty ideals, and you must not be a person who will look up at the stars. But after all, I didn't put down this book, but I was more and more attracted by it. "Everyone in the world loves each other, so the strong don't hold the weak, and the public doesn't rob the widowed"-every word in the book exudes a strange fragrance. So every time I turn a page, I seem to have returned to the complicated troubled times where everyone "lost each other". In the middle, I saw the old man riding a green cow slowly out of the Great Wall, looking up at the sky and chanting "I will rest after my work, and the way of heaven is also"; I also saw the dashing gentleman talking about Kan Kan on the apricot altar and shouted, "What are you talking about? What does the sky say? " I saw the prosperity of a hundred schools of thought contending in Gong Xue, Xia Ji, Linzi, and I also saw the hermit on the Chu River who was intoxicated with "only communicating with the spirit of heaven and earth". Finally, I caught a glimpse of you. You didn't choose to retire, and you didn't want to argue with other scholars all day. You just run around the land of China, appear in front of the world as a walker, and run around from the mire to solve the worries and sufferings of all the people. "Be the best in the world, its stone is still right", you are so down-to-earth, and your steps are so solid and unyielding. I finally understand that it's not that I can't look up at the stars. Your star is "One World". It's just that compared with other philosophers who only look up at the starry sky and only make feeble slogans, you would rather practice your ideals in a down-to-earth way and make your starry sky more brilliant. So, you are always on the run. You once lobbied the king of Chu for thousands of miles to "reject the opportunity of Luban to attack the city" and save the Song people; You are running around again, "not attacking", "not being happy", "not robbing" and "not being Confucian" in order to put forward a real "salvation prescription" for this troubled times. You look up at the stars, but always keep your feet on the ground. Therefore, your footsteps never stop, and your footprints are all over China. And after this high-sounding lie still exists in the world for two thousand years, your steps are getting stronger and stronger. It turns out that your eyes have been looking up at the stars; So your feet have never left the earth! With dark hair, dark eyes and dark face, staring at the starry sky and stepping on the earth, you are like a black lightning, piercing the sky and lighting an eternal flame for the five mountains in Kyushu! Humans need to look up at the starry sky, because without the shining of the starry sky, our road will not have a front. However, while looking up at the starry sky, don't forget to be down-to-earth and do something for others and society. After all, the beauty of the starry sky never belongs to the earth. Only by keeping your feet on the ground can you reflect the splendor of the starry sky with your own footprints. Mozi, thank you for letting me understand this simple but profound truth, and for giving me the most lasting motivation in my life. Expert group rating: 20 points for content expression, 20 points for development, 20 points for total score and 60 points. Note: This is a traditional "old cultural composition", but it is also a "new cultural composition": from the concept of cultural composition of Teacher Tan Hengjun, it has the characteristics of elegant language, and it is a composition that can be expressed beautifully after being trained in elegant language. Second, no matter what materials it uses, whether ancient or contemporary, materials are just a carrier or means. The key is whether there is cultural spirit and feelings in the article. From the above two aspects, we confirm that this is also a new "cultural composition". As for the life-oriented expression of "new culture composition", we will launch 20 10 excellent works for everyone to know and discuss, and popularize the knowledge and understanding of "new culture composition". 20 10 Gansu college entrance examination perfect score composition: the stage of the heart Everyone has a stage in his heart, and the stage is as big as his heart. -Inscription Perhaps, you just take it for granted to enjoy the care of your parents, but you never pay attention to the graying hair on their temples; Perhaps, you just use your extraordinary wisdom to attack your opponent in the mall, or even lose your money. At this time, you will say "this is competition", but have you ever thought that this will attract more "eyeing"? Perhaps, you just derailed for your own petty profit, and eventually alienated from others, but you were ecstatic about the "trophy" you got. Maybe ... Maybe, on the stage of your mind, you have always been a soloist. The universe exploded because of a tiny particle, and a beautiful earth appeared in the vast sky. The emergence and reproduction of human beings gradually developed from the era of eating and drinking blood, forming a society and owning civilization. Man's "individual" nature determines that he can't just see others without pretending to be himself, and he will also have selfish desires. However, things often have a "degree" and people always live in groups. If they only see themselves and leave no room for others, they will live in their "self" forever until they die alone. Ancient emperors were all in power, but if he didn't have the spirit of "letting all rivers run into the sea" and didn't care about the people, he would probably be a ship of "water under the bridge". And we modern people are even more so. After all, we have no right to respond to everything. We always live among people and always want to be cared for by others. Then, don't do solo, you should see yourself and others. Looking back on the railing, it doesn't matter what you have paid, what you have paid and what you have gained. As long as there are others in your heart, you can have no regrets; It doesn't matter what you see in your eyes or what you hide in your heart. As long as you see yourself and others, you can be innocent. Everyone has a stage in his heart, and the dancers on it depend on how big the stage is; And how big the stage is depends on how big your heart is! Highlights Perspective Candidates used the inscription "Everyone has a stage in his heart, and how big the stage is, how big his heart is" to directly extract the connotation of the article, which is convenient for readers to grasp quickly. Throughout the text, if understood correctly, this "heart" is "heart". That is, "seeing yourself and seeing others". The author starts with how to treat his parents, enumerates the phenomena in life and the historical lessons of ancient emperors, and tells the truth that "if you only have yourself in your eyes and there is no place for others to stand, you will live in yourself forever until you die alone", which is undoubtedly consistent with the requirements of the topic. What is better written is the penultimate paragraph. The author uses two juxtaposed conditional complex sentences to form the main chord of the article: "... as long as there are others in my heart, there is no regret;" ..... As long as you see yourself and others, you are worth it. "Strong beam, meaning is exhausted. 20 10 Shanxi college entrance examination perfect score composition: The hard years forgotten by us are a tree. The past was the root of nutrition, but now it is a lush and fertile land on the surface of the earth. We laughed at our parents and said that they would catch mice if they had fish to eat. In today's well-off society, I still pick up a grain of rice on the dining table; When there are many dishes, I can't bear to dump a bowl of rotten vegetables. They burst into tears in our ridicule. We laugh at our parents, saying that they don't know how to rest when they are 60 years old; Under the scorching sun, I don't know how to enjoy the cool; The children have grown up, and I'm still unhappy. They giggled at our ridicule. We laughed at our parents and said that they were simple in old-fashioned clothes; Still eating every grain at the city table; Take crumpled money and ask for 20 points when buying food. They persisted in our ridicule. One day, when we were short of money, he silently took out the thrifty things we despised to help us out. They giggled and we cried. We remember the hardships we have forgotten and the time when we stroked the dead seedlings in the field and sighed. We finally understand the reason why our fathers were upset. They used to be farmers with their backs to the loess, but they told us the unforgettable hardships with their own bitterness. They forged the wisdom of our hardworking nation with hard work and watered a fruitful fertile soil with wisdom. We are the sun on the land rising in the east. Let this flower of wisdom bloom an invincible sun forever. //Parents who build nests with their heart are teaching us to grow up with their heart. We need to inherit and carry forward that round of glory. //Things change, things are unpredictable, and parents have won happiness through hard work. //As time goes by, happiness continues, and parents continue to be happy with sweetness and bitterness. //Jinjiang spring scenery, happiness spread, parents are using frugality to arouse the hardships of forgetting the new year. Simple parents' simple words only tell us: worry can rejuvenate the country, leisure can die; A nation forgetting history means betrayal, and forgetting suffering means decline. In that era when there were fish to eat, we never forgot that we were a group of rat catchers. Under the lush shade, we will become the root of nutrition. 20 10 Zhejiang college entrance examination perfect score composition: if young people and old people disagree on a certain issue, no matter which side the truth is, the old people will always say in a disdainful tone: what do you know! I have eaten more salt than you have eaten, and I have crossed more bridges than you have! However, in the modern society where technology, culture and ideas are changing rapidly, can empiricism such as "eating salt" and "crossing the bridge" really prevail? Who can guarantee that the new culture created by the younger generation is not richer than the traditional culture? Cultural feedback is not a vicious undercurrent, but an inevitable product of social development. The older generation don't have to panic and resist, as Han Yu said, "Nothing is expensive, nothing is cheap, nothing is long, nothing is short, the Tao is there, and the teacher is there." Therefore, between different "Tao", between teachers and students, role changes often occur. Most of the time, the older generation are teachers. As the inheritors of traditional culture, they tell enduring stories to the younger generation and describe what they have seen, heard and realized. Therefore, the unique customs or family spirit build the cultural foundation of the younger generation, so that they can absorb rich nutrition from the traditional cultural soil. Only in this way can young people stand on the shoulders of their predecessors and see further. When the younger generation absorbs enough nutrients to break through the ground, they often find that the description of the world is different from that of their elders. Young people bravely meet the impact of the world's colorful culture with exuberant vitality. Tradition and modernity, nation and the world, sunshine and obscure culture can always be accepted, analyzed and digested by young people at an extremely fast speed. Because of these extra nutrients, the younger generation may grow faster and one day surpass the older generation. Observing the progress of society, we will find that because of the gradual improvement of living conditions, the average height of the younger generation will generally exceed that of its predecessors. Similarly, because of the open concept, the younger generation's learning ability is stronger than their predecessors. As a result, young people have gained unprecedented ability to feed back. There is another reason why young people can change from being taught to being taught: they have distinct vitality of the times in creating culture and new culture, which the older generation lacks. Cultural feedback is a normal phenomenon in natural society, just like bird feedback. There may also be some conflicts in the process of role transformation. In the face of conflict, I think young people should give full respect to their elders even when they become teachers, just as a bird needs to listen to the experience of an old bird when it grows up; At the same time, even if the elders are no longer teachers, they don't have to think that their status has been shaken, and learning is endless, so that they can grow their cultural connotation for life. Only by constantly changing roles can culture remain alive and become an inexhaustible source of social progress.