1, action action, saying that popular point is a series of actions when depicting characters' actions, which is generally composed of degree words and verbs. Such as: gently hitting, swinging hard, squatting carefully, etc.
2. Action objects, that is, human parts or objects. Such as: waving, kicking, glaring, striking the table, etc.
3. Action environment, that is, the specific scene where the characters produce actions. It can be scenery, scenes, etc.
4, the sense of action, simply put, is to use metaphors or exaggerated techniques when writing action descriptions, which can make action descriptions more vivid and highlight the personality of the characters.
Action description can be divided into single action description and combined action description.
A simple action:
The teacher walked into the classroom quickly.
Joint action:
The teacher gently pushed open the door, walked quickly to the classroom and put down the book.
Below, taking the running process of athletes as an example, we should pay attention to the following aspects if we want to write well the movements of characters:
1, select the specific scene of the character's action. Depicting characters in a specific background can often achieve better performance results. For example, the tense atmosphere on the sports field and the enthusiastic shouts of the students watching the game can set off the wonderful performance of the athletes. (that is, writing action scenes)
2. Show the characteristics of the characters with distinctive movements. Every athlete on the sports field will have great differences in movements because of their different personalities and attitudes: some are clumsy and some are clever; Some are ostentatious, some are implicit ... When describing, we should carefully ponder, accurately "refine words" and use the most appropriate verbs to express the characteristics of the characters. (Choose the correct verb)
3. Reasonable decomposition of actions and detailed description of the whole process. For example, when writing an athlete's preparation for the start, he should not simply write "He is ready to squat down", but "How to squat down" and how to coordinate his hands, legs and eyes, so as to be concrete and vivid. Analyze and decompose actions, describe combined actions, and try to choose appropriate degree words before verbs.
4. Using metaphor, exaggeration and other techniques can not only describe the action more vividly, but also highlight the personality characteristics of the characters, and make the article more interesting.
(Write down the feeling of action)
Decomposition of race process:
The preparatory action before the shot-the action after the shot-the action after the start-the sprint action.
The composition describing extracurricular activities includes action description and expression description. The quiet campus suddenly boiled up, and there was laughter everywhere.
The students rushed out of the classroom and played all kinds of games: skipping rope, kicking keys and jumping rubber bands. There are many children dancing and singing in the distance, some are playing basketball, some are reading books ... they are all having a good time! Look at skipping rope first: they are in groups of three, with two people holding the rope on each side. I saw colorful skipping ropes dancing in their hands, up and down, left and right, like a circle through the children's bodies.
Sometimes you trip, but you cooperate well and generally don't trip.
Look, how sweet they laugh! Look at the kick key again: I saw colorful chicken feather keys flying back and forth on children's toes, up and down, like colorful butterflies flying in groups in the air. I can't see who is kicking which key, it seems to be a key meeting! Finally, the rubber band jumpers: I saw them jumping from left to right and quickly escaped from the hands of the "enemy". Look how happy they are! Jingle bell, Jingle bell ... The bell rang and the campus suddenly became quiet. From time to time there was a loud sound of reading. ...
Wonderful action description composition [Wonderful action description composition] I often see the program "Who is a hero" hosted by soldiers, which makes me open my eyes and see more people with stunts. I was deeply impressed by the wonderful action description composition that there was such a person who took the "soft program". At the beginning of many performances, there is always a story about the performers on TV. They don't live very comfortably. But the "small family" they set up at any time makes them feel warm ... After watching this vcr, we are looking forward to their next performance. There is no doubt that they will be performers, watching the soft steel wire hanging in the air in front of them. They pushed me and made me. They tried, but you got it again. Finally, one waddled on the wire! Took a few steps, lost weight, and almost fell down again! Ah, that was close! The audience applauded, and the composition in the third grade of primary school was "Wonderful Action Description Composition". In the applause, the performer took a few steps forward and then stepped back. In this way, he walked firmly on the tightrope. Then, the performer got on the unicycle again. He sat on it carefully. His feet stared at him for the first time. All right! So, he completed his task of riding a single wheel on the wire rope. At this time, there was another round of applause from the audience. They have been fascinated. I am afraid that the actor will "jump" and fall off the unstable tightrope. After this tense link, the actor stood on the tightrope and shook wildly. Elementary school students' wonderful action description composition (/)
The composition is not less than 500 words, describing psychological activities such as action, language and expression. This semester, the school launched a vigorous and crazy activity of reciting ancient poems.
China teaches education! In the second class in the morning, Mr. Ding told us that the management class should check our situation of reciting ancient poems, and we had to leave without reciting them.
I panicked, alas, I didn't recite it! Who knows that I ate the ancient poem recited yesterday and still remember it today?
what can I do? After class, I was busy opening the book, and my back was going crazy, but my head seemed to be rusty and I couldn't remember it.
Watching my classmates having fun outside, I thought: I can't recite it anyway. It is better to have fun for a while and relax.
I looked up and saw several classmates carrying their backs. Don't! I must remember it.
Oh, why is this poem so awkward: "In the morning, I was busy cleaning up the waste and filth, and I took Yuelian home."
"How should I back? I don't believe in this evil. I read it several times and finally got it right.
In the management class, the teacher wanted to check, but I still didn't fully recite it.
I make full use of my time in management class, but I always recite this song and forget that one.
After school, the teacher will check. Unexpectedly, Mr. Ding didn't check it at all, so he asked: Have you recited it? Many students who didn't recite it lied to Mr. Ding that they did, and then they left.
I thought to myself: so many classmates and teachers didn't check. If you don't believe the teacher, check me out. Let's run away today! Why not just go home and carry it? But I thought, no, isn't this a lie? My mother often teaches me that children who lie are not good children.
I also want to be a good boy.
Be responsible for yourself and finish what you haven't finished today.
Finally, Shi Duomo and I can basically recite it at school.
During the holiday, I played in an open space of my grandmother's house.
Suddenly, a girl rushed in recklessly.
I looked at her carefully: her skin was dark, and I knew at a glance that she often worked in the fields; Eyes are big but narrow; Hair is messy, as if it has not been sorted for a long time; Wearing a red flowered skirt, the clothes are dirty; There are also some holes in my shoes.
I thought to myself: this man is so rustic. When he was still wearing flowery clothes, he must have never seen any big scenes. He is a real countryman.
He came over and stared at me and said, "Hello, my name is Xiaohua, and I want to be your friend, okay?" After listening to her name, I think she is rather rustic.
But somehow, I still want to make friends with her.
He nodded in agreement.
She became my holiday friend.
Xiaohua is a lively and naive girl. There are always many new things in his mind that I don't know.
She told me that I was her first friend because other children thought she was poor and ignored her.
Perhaps because of this incident, I deepened my friendship with Xiaohua and we became inseparable friends.
One day, Xiaohua and I went out to play and were ready to go home. I feel very thirsty.
Xiaohua pointed to a fruit tree three or four meters high and said, "Let's pick some fruits to eat.
"I listened, found a bamboo pole, and prepared to photograph the fruit.
Xiaohua stopped me: "In this way, the fruit will fall and break." .
"I put down the bamboo pole, simply put my hands on the tree, put my feet on it, and climbed with my hands and feet, but I only climbed more than a foot high and couldn't climb any more, so I was sweating.
Inadvertently, I didn't hold my hand tightly, so I fell heavily on the ground and made me cry.
Xiaohua looked at me in a mess and laughed while clutching her stomach.
I saw Xiaohua holding the trunk, stepping on the stump, leaning forward and kicking hard, and repeating these actions all the time.
All of a sudden, she climbed the tree easily with three or two strokes.
I blushed at her lithe movements.
She sat on the trunk and picked many fruits for me to eat.
We ate and went home.
The holiday is over. I should go back. I should say goodbye to Xiaohua.
When I left, Xiao Hua Ou made me feel sorry for a leaf.
We never met again, but I still remember her innocence and liveliness.
Composition of action description In English class the day before yesterday, Miswang assigned us a particularly interesting assignment: learn to do six actions on 24 pages, and whoever does more will get more points.
Learn to do actions? The students were curious and opened their English books in a hurry. Seeing these interesting moves, I breathed a sigh of relief and began to be complacent: it's too simple, a piece of cake! I will definitely get the highest score then.
Actually, it's not. It looks easy, but it's not as simple as you think! The first action is: move your eyebrows.
I compared it with the mirror. I either blink my eyes or shrug my nose, but no matter what I do, I just can't get away from those two naughty eyebrows like brothers.
Alas, they gave me a "duel" from the beginning, and they joined forces to boycott my "carrot and stick". They can get on if they want, and get off if they want. They can't be separated and they won't listen to me.
"Oh, my eyebrows little ancestors! Please, leave me alone! " "What did you say? Don't let go! " "Hum, don't be too happy.
Then I'll take care of you myself. "I" cheered up "again, racking my brains and frowning and thinking: Yes! I have one eye closed, one eye open, one eyebrow left, and the other eyebrow upturned. Isn't that enough? Haha, I succeeded! Let's look at the second action: move an ear.
This action depends entirely on your own feelings, and you can only understand it but not express it.
I think hard and do it with my heart. Who knows, my ears didn't move, but my nose, eyes, mouth and eyebrows moved.
I really can't do anything about them, so I have to ask the "master"-Gao Xiang to teach me to "move my ears".
It's the teacher. Nothing like me. His ears move, but he doesn't move elsewhere.
He asked me to touch his ear with my hand.
Ah, I suddenly had an inspiration. With my unremitting efforts, one ear miraculously moved.
The second action is also completed! The third action is the simplest: shrug your nose.
I pursed my mouth and raised my eyebrows. My eyes are round and my nose is wide open.
What a modern version of "Pig Eight Rings"! The fourth action is no problem: the right hand touches the left hand from behind.
I have studied dance, which is the basic movement in acrobatics. I usually practice in dance class, which is my best.
Not only that, I can touch my wrist! The fifth action is to eat with your left hand.
I picked up two pens to make chopsticks, ready to clip a chalk head, and I skillfully clipped it for a long time! Haha, this is my first time to enjoy it! Awesome! The sixth action is: left fork and right knife.
I have eaten western food several times and am familiar with this method. It can be done easily! Hehe ... I have learned all six movements, waiting for the teacher to add points!
The composition and action description of the sports meeting make me look forward to the autumn sports meeting. Early in the morning, I put on my beautiful school uniform and bright red scarf, and ran to school while walking. We lined up neatly and came to the playground to attend the opening ceremony. The blue sky was empty, and the sun father-in-law came to join in the fun, scattering Hui Jin. The whole playground is becoming more and more happy. The opening ceremony began. The students in our class walked up to the platform in high spirits. Everyone shouted slogans: "keep fit, study happily, be brave and confident, and work hard." The headmaster made a speech: "32 1". Two rockets were fired, which scared me. They flew into the sky as if wishing us good results in the sports meeting. The sports meeting has begun, athletes. Others are doing pre-match warm-up exercises in leg press. It's my turn The referee raised the starting grip, and the athletes and I stood at the starting line, holding our breath and waiting for the starting sound. I only heard a gunshot, and I ran at a fast speed, halfway through. A classmate in class 30/kloc-0 suddenly accelerated, and I and other athletes were not to be outdone, but I didn't notice that the athletes in class 303 surpassed me. I continued to rush forward with the mentality of fighting for a good job, but unfortunately I still couldn't catch up. I, the second person to cross the finish line, returned to our team with a frown and a pout. The 400-meter race has started again. Yuan Xiang of our class took part in the competition, and the referee shot "pa" and Yuan Xiang began to run slowly. We sweated for Yuan Xiang and ran halfway. Teacher Xiong said, "Come on, Yuanxiang". Yuan Xiang quickened his pace. When he was the first to rush to the finish line like a leopard, Yuan Xiang panted, "Mr. Xiong is coming." Teacher Xiong took a wonderful sprint shot of Yuan Xiang with his camera. The next day, I came to school to participate in interesting activities. There are many interesting activities and games: badminton and group circle ... I participated in group activities. At first, the students in our class changed from the first to the last, and then from the last to the first. Liu Shizhe fell down in the middle, but he stood up firmly and continued to finish the game seriously. His spirit is worth learning. ....
Character action description composition is urgent ~ ~ ~! ! My deskmate My deskmate's name is Ni Jianwei. He has black hair, about an inch long.
He has light eyebrows under his hair and big eyes under his eyebrows. His lips are slightly upturned and there are some wrinkles on his nose. When he laughed, he stared at his big eyes and looked as if he were laughing.
Ni Jianwei has many advantages and disadvantages.
Advantages are helpful and love physical exercise, especially running.
The disadvantage is that the action is too slow, and sometimes I like to hit people.
When Ni Jianwei was happy, his eyes narrowed into a crack. Originally, he was laughing instead of laughing, but now he smiles naturally and sometimes gives me something to eat.
Today is the mid-term exam. Of course, Ni Jianwei also has problems he can't do.
He buried himself in writing for a while, then frowned when he encountered problems that he couldn't do, smiled on his face, held his head in his hand, looked like a little doctor, and sometimes yawned.
He's angry again. His big eyes, which are usually full of smiles, now emit two cold lights, which are aggressive, his teeth are creaking and his nose is panting, as if he were short of oxygen.
Ni Jianwei also likes to meddle. I haven't bought "100 moved the father of middle school students" until now, so he will come to talk about me. It's really annoying
But he is very generous. Whenever I forget something, he always lends it to me.
Words that describe actions, language and learning attitude (1) Words that describe learning attitude include diligence, diligence, earnestness, diligence, modesty, eagerness to learn, diligence and sureness, shameless, perfectionism, questioning, forgetting to eat or sleep, hunger, perseverance and meticulousness (2) words that concentrate on learning, concentrate, hold your breath and concentrate on body fluid. Tianjin is full of meditation and concentration (3) Xiao Fei is sitting in his seat, writing and writing. There seems to be a steady stream of spring water flowing out of his works. Less than a class is actually writing a composition.
Xiaohong just sat facing the window, and the afternoon sun shone on her round face, making her cheeks more rosy; She holds her chin with a pen, her eyes are wide open, her bright eyes are swimming slowly, and her plump chin is slightly upturned-this is the expression that the math teacher is familiar with and loves whenever she thinks of a more ingenious way to solve a math problem.
Whenever I do my homework, the nib rustles, as if a bird is singing to me, and as if to encourage me: "If you are not afraid of difficulties, climb the peak bravely."
"She stood up and answered so accurately, so naturally, so smoothly, as if ready.
She recited in cadence, with beautiful tone, beautiful expression and moving seat.
He is a naughty boy. He reads too fast and crackles like a fried peanut.
Juanjuan read the text in Mandarin, and her voice was crisp and nice. Even the sunshine is fascinated. She sneaked into the classroom through the window and left it on her book, which she didn't want to leave for a long time.
I read this book greedily, like a hungry lamb rushing into the green grass.
She got into the sea of books, like a fish in the sea, and forgot the passage of time.
He managed to pull himself together and opened the book. From the beginning, he felt that lines of words were moving on it, like flying; Later, I thought it was just a blur, like a nest of ants crawling around on paper.
He buried himself in his homework again, and the room was quiet, except for the rustling of pens on the paper.
Students sit in the classroom, listening attentively to the teacher's lecture, just like dozens of flowers blooming quietly under the watering of hard gardeners.
Lang Lang's reading voice flew out from all the classrooms, like a touching children's chorus, with notes all over the sky.
Words and sentences describing labor (1) Words and phrases about labor actions are arranged, aired, mended, cleaned, wiped, rubbed, fried, washed, watered, washed, picked, neat, dexterous, clumsy, clumsy, clumsy (2) To describe the labor mood, I feel that the words are hard, hard, easy, hard. (4) Words describing labor are neat, clean, lively and orderly. She held a stack of wonton skins in her left hand, and picked a little stuffing with chopsticks in her right hand, wrapped it in the skin, and then pinched it left and right.
I picked up the dough, picked up the stuffing with chopsticks, carefully placed it on the dough and squeezed it with both hands.
I just feel sticky. Take a closer look and say, "Oh dear!" I couldn't help crying-it turned out that I pushed too hard, and the dough was broken and the stuffing came out.
I quickly "first aid" and came out from the other side.
I quickly wrapped each other with another piece of dough, which was considered as blocking the "loophole".
I finally wrapped a jiaozi with three pieces of dough.
When she washes her dirty clothes with soap, she rubs them together. Small soap bubbles emerged from the clothes and soon turned into many white bubbles.
She sighed at the window glass and rubbed her nails. A series of actions were clean and neat.
I first poured a small amount of oil into the pan. When the oil smoked, I quickly poured the egg into the pan, only to hear a "click". The egg quickly appeared in the oil pan, and its edge was like the lace on the little girl's skirt.
I rinsed the mop in the pool again and again, then wrung it dry, then bent down, arched my front legs, pulled back and pulled it up.
A very light needle seems heavy in my hand. Every stitch took me a lot of effort. I've just had a few stitches and I'm so tired that I'm starting to sweat.
It's our turn to hammer the nail.
I can't wait to soak the thread in saliva and then twist it.
But when I twist, I twist those hairs thin and long, so when I thread the needle, I just can't get through.
I had to pull my hair down before I put it on.
Then I tied a knot at the end of the line. Because there is spit on the thread, I always get stuck in my fingers when I tie the knot, and finally I get married.
Words describing characters (1) The words describing characters' appearance are dignified and vigorous, with fine features, red face and white face, tender face, red hair and silver hair, bright eyes, eyes like fire, golden eyes and big eyes, kind eyes, imposing manner, tall and burly, graceful and well-dressed. (2) The words describing characters' expressions make them cry with joy, smile with joy and smile with joy. Relaxed and radiant, angry and depressed, sad and listless, tears streaming down her face (3) The words describing the mood of the characters are full of joy. Anxious to return is relaxed and happy, but her heart is full of worries. She is worried, worried and in a state of grief. (4) Sentences describing the characters' anxiety and disheartening. She has a pair of beautiful eyes, with childish, long eyelashes hanging on her face, like two crystal grapes.
Hei Hu, the child, has a strong head and two big eyes, and is very energetic.
His brow wrinkled tightly from time to time, forming a question mark between the two; Sometimes I stretch happily, like an exclamation point.
His red face sparkled like an apple ripe in September.
His ears are white and red, his helix is distinct, and his outer ring and inner ring are very symmetrical, like a carved work of art.
Her small mouth contains rich expressions: when you are happy, tilt your lips and make a face; When you are angry, you can catch a small oil pan by pouting.
Words from this mouth sometimes make people angry and choke, but sometimes people can't help laughing.
Miss Li has beautiful hair, black and shiny. ...
When my friend was in the fourth grade in Guangdong, I had a picky little friend. Her clever and keen eyes are embedded in the melon face, and there is a small cherry mouth under her small and exquisite nose, which is very lively and lovely. A ponytail with a unique bow is tied high. She comes from Sichuan. She likes to eat Chili. Her greatest hobby is digging holes. She is a health worker in her class. She has to take care of anyone who wants to have their nails cut or their hair cut, and she also has to take care of any girl who wears a hairpin whose color doesn't match her skin color. Someone said, "You are too wide!" But she didn't manage it properly, so she became recognized as the "king of nitpicking" in her class. She is not only in my class, but also my deskmate and neighbor. So countless people find fault with me. In a Chinese class, the teacher gave out monthly examination papers. Wow! I got a score of 100, which made me ecstatic. Just after class, Kim took my test paper critically, only to find that she scanned it line by line. Then her keen little eyes stared at a place and said to the teacher, "You made a mistake in this question." The teacher looked at the test paper and said, "You're right, it's the teacher's negligence." In the afternoon, I set out with my family. One day soon after I arrived in Shanghai, I received a courier from Guangdong. When I opened the three striking Chinese characters at the bottom of the homepage, the first thing that caught my eye was. I thought, why did this "picky king" catch up with Shanghai? Let's look at this letter first. I read it carefully: "Po, congratulations! At the end of the semester, you got a double percentage. The teacher and everyone miss you very much. I picked the most faults for you before. Please don't hate me ... "After reading the letter, I couldn't help crying, thinking: I really should thank the" picky king ". If she hadn't helped me correct so many mistakes at ordinary times, I wouldn't have achieved good results today. Now, I still often think of this good partner.
There is a construction site near my home where many migrant workers work hard.
One day, I passed by the construction site and saw an old woman coming out with her little grandson. The children's parents took them to the door. Because of their busy work, they can't take their grandparents and grandchildren to the railway station.
Dad beckoned for a taxi and helped grandma to the other side first. Mother led the child, gently carried it to the car here and put it next to grandma. Just as the mother was about to close the car door, the child suddenly jumped out of the car, grabbed her thigh and spilled snacks all over the floor.
Mother couldn't bear it any longer, and tears rolled down her cheeks, leaving two obvious marks on her dusty face.
Dad looked at their mother and son silently, his shoulders slightly stirred up, and he was crying inside.
Let time stay at this moment, and let the left-behind children feel the love of their parents forever.
Expand yourself.
Describe the psychological activities of some characters.
Please indicate the source? How to describe this action?