Introduction: As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle." Everything is difficult at the beginning, so is doing things, and so is writing articles. The ancient writers in China were very particular about the beginning of the article, so there was a saying that "the head of a phoenix is like a pig's belly and the tail of a leopard". The "phoenix head" is the head of the legendary phoenix. No one has ever seen it, but in the painter's pen, we can see the feathers on the head of a small phoenix.

Skill analysis:

Tip 1: Use rhetoric skillfully.

Function: Clever use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor, parallelism, personification and questioning can make the beginning of the article vivid, imposing and picturesque.

Example:

(1). Years of study and life are like clouds and smoke, which cannot be redeemed. Looking back, we always take struggle as the rudder. Now, it's the third day, and we should set sail with struggle.

Life in grade three begins with hard work. I think you will build a steel-like character and make you and me indomitable.

Life in grade three begins with hard work. I think you will make new achievements and meet new joy.

Life in grade three begins with hard work. I think you will spread your wings and fly to the blue sky of victory.

(2) The morning light in March opened the window and the first ray of sunshine shone on people. In this way, spring comes to us from the window. Spring, the beginning of the four seasons, brings us new hope.

3, "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. question mark cleared his throat and said, "The seminar on time and space is now officially started. Today, our theme is "What is beauty". Please let scholars from different times and countries speak actively? What is beauty?

(4) How to describe the dance of Indian Karama sisters?

If I were a poet, I would write a long poem to describe their various dances.

If I were a painter, I would touch them with various colors and dye their bright brow and gorgeous clothes.

-(Bing Xin's Watching Dance)

Secret 2: quoting classics and literary talent flying.

Function: Ingeniously quoting ancient poems, famous sayings, lyrics, proverbs, two-part allegorical sayings or predecessors' profound and incisive expositions can save a lot of pen and ink, make literary talent fly, and get twice the result with half the effort.

Example:

(1) "Like the strong wind in spring, it blows at night and blows away the petals of ten thousand pear trees". In front of me is a world made up of powder and jade. I can see the beautiful scenery written by the poet Cen Can before my eyes. Winter morning

(2) We will experience many difficulties and setbacks in our life. Face it with a calm mind, meet it with high emotions, and overcome it with positive actions. You will succeed, just as the lyrics say, "How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain?" No one can succeed casually! " ("Laughing at Frustration")

(3) As the saying goes, "Everything is difficult at the beginning". When you start doing something, you will feel strange and at a loss. If we don't grasp every beginning, we will lose not only an opportunity, but also a success.

Tip 3: Set up suspense skillfully and lead the topic.

Function: Everyone is curious, especially those who love reading literary works. When you set a lot of suspense at the beginning of the article that can arouse people's curiosity, your article has undoubtedly succeeded more than half, that is, it has aroused readers' curiosity from the beginning.

Example:

(1), there was a bitten apple on the stage, and I sat at the bottom of the podium with a blank face-"Incomplete Beauty"

(2) "Where is the antelope?" My mother suddenly asked me. -antelope woodcarving

(3) I often think that everyone has his own secret garden, which is full of secret flowers and plants, and there is a pink door outside. Who can open it but himself? -"Love, Open My Heart"

High intensity training

In your growing journey, you will always leave your footprints everywhere, with happy memories, beautiful yearning, unremitting pursuit, the joy of success and the trouble of failure; There are also parents' nagging, friends' concern and classmates' trust; There are happiness, worry, gratitude, anger, embarrassment, misunderstanding and so on, but you must correctly treat the bitterness, gain and loss, success and failure in your growth, face life bravely and face challenges, and your front must be bright.

Please write a composition of more than 600 words on the topic of "the taste of _ _ _ _ _".

Requirements: 1. Use one or more of the above opening techniques to make a good start for your composition.

Standardized writing, neat surface and fluent language.

Wonderful opening demonstration?

1. Quote?

1. Ask what the world is like and teach people to commit themselves to life and death. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His problems are eternal. Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But each family's words are as different as everyone's face.

Shi said, "Love is a tool ..."? ("Ask what the world is")?

In a medieval church, a saint began his speech: "I became a saint because I saw through money. My things are for everyone." In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through money, which is mine for everyone." ? A saint and a thief?

Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of angle. " Many times, we are confused by problems or wander at the intersection of many solutions, and how to get there has become a mystery in our hearts. (spinning this kaleidoscope)?

2. Clever use of letter format

(1) Dear Grandpa Confucius:

Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. I dare to write to disturb you after a thousand years, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to wait for your guidance with several difficult problems. Letter to Confucius?

② Damn standard answer:?

When I saw you, I was really angry. Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you. The answers are colorful, but you just put on a "standard" hat. You know, countless tragedies are caused by the word "mark". Here are your three major crimes: a letter with a standard answer?

3. Borrow Zhang Hui's novel style?

(1) "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time." At the beginning, the era when Wei Shuwu was torn apart no longer existed, and Gone for Never and Waves wiped out all the heroes of the past. Adou, the former successor of Shu, has also become "happy", and the world has become Sima's world. ("Three Heroes")?

Juyitang in the water margin is now brightly lit and full of people. One hundred men and eight men gathered here, and everyone argued endlessly. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to judge the hero who killed the tiger recently. This honorary title is so great that whoever wins can sit in the second place of Liang Shanbo. So many heroes gathered here and argued endlessly. Who is the hero who fights tigers?

4. Use rhetoric skillfully?

① "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. question mark cleared his throat and said, "The seminar on time and space is now officially started. Today, our theme is "What is beauty". Please let scholars from different times and countries speak actively? What is beauty?

5. Clever use of fables?

Gong Yu's family has lived here for generations, and Wangwu Mountain and Taihang Mountain at the entrance stand in the way. Life is pathetic! It seems isolated from the world. What is new in the city has long been old news, and this life really needs to change. The foolish old man thought: We must find a way to move Taihang Mountain and the King of Wu. (The Story of New Gong Yu and Zhizuo)?

② Magpie posted a large advertisement: "In order to meet the needs of the times, our school will carry out all-round quality education to ensure that your children become omnipotent generalists and remain invincible in the competition. Tuition fee is 3000 yuan per semester; Training fee, 2000 yuan; Sponsorship fee, 15000 yuan? (all-round school)?

6. Clever use of inscriptions that reveal the theme?

(1) there is no tree, but there can be grass green; Without the beauty of peony, you can have the freedom of small wild chrysanthemum ... life is not necessarily brilliant, but it must be great! ? -Inscription?

Butterfly was once a beautiful and excellent dancer. Her long shawl hair and gentle and elegant dance brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was hailed by others as China's future Duncan ... but it was all over, and fate left her in a wheelchair forever. Life is bleak and silent, and the "white swan" has become an ugly duckling that nobody cares about. How many times? (starry night talk)?

If you lose money, you only lose a small part; ? If you lose your health, you only lose a small part; If you lose your integrity, you are almost bankrupt. -Inscription?

What is "sincerity", honesty and trustworthiness. Throughout history, how many people's blood and tears have been soaked by the word "sincerity"? Who is praising the emperor's new clothes?

7. Clever use of problem-solving forms?

A friend once gave me such a question with ingenuity:?

Which of the following beautiful scenery do you like best?

A. A piece of pure white feather falls leisurely in the shining golden sunshine.

B. A petal falls red and floats in the quiet and deep pool water.

C. a meteor, in the deep blue sky, is fleeting.

Ending skills of composition in examination room

If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "ringing a bell". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and sipping fragrant teas, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an unfavorable ending. In addition to serving the content and center of the article, the ending is also restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". From the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although it is not necessarily required that the end of the article is "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, students are prone to make mistakes at the end of their compositions. However, the author was still uneasy, insisted on shaking a few words, and told the whereabouts of people who didn't need to confess one by one, debunking the meaning that could have been realized. 2 empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted slogans irrelevant to the content of the article. This ending is a great evil. The meaning at the end is clear, but he refuses to finish it, which conflicts with the theme of the article.

From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the closing techniques commonly used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.

1, natural bunching type

No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, the full text will naturally be closed, and there is no need to design profound philosophical sentences or carve rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the problem of the end of the article, is concise, lively and unremarkable, and is widely used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. The composition in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so it is impossible to care too much. What is "law"? As long as you have passion, write freely and fully express your feelings, it is a good article. But paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development. For example, at the end of Yunnan Song Club, "When I was a child, I often listened to the old woman's oral words," Once in ten years, it comes once in a blue moon ",which means that the grand event is rare.

2. End to end echo

The ending and the beginning should echo each other, and write sentences that echo the beginning and are not simply repeated. This way of ending is a common way of closing the beam in various articles. This method of closing the beam can arouse the psychological beauty of readers and produce a feeling of ending and ending. For example, "The Back" ends with "Alas! I don't know when I can see him again. " That is, echoing the beginning of the article, "I haven't seen my father for more than two years, and what I can't forget most is his back."

3, pawn Zhang Xianzhi style

This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of The Pearl Bird, "My pen moved, and my feelings flowed down later: trust often creates a beautiful realm."

4. Famous aphorisms

Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of a certain life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' minds and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings" For example, at the end of Talking about Life, "Happiness is of course". I once read an adage, "May there be enough clouds in your life to make a beautiful evening". The life of the world, the country and the individual is nothing more cloudy than today. "

5, lyrical argument

Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings in the author's heart, arouse the emotional waves of readers, and arouse the hearts of readers, which has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used to write narratives that people can remember, and it can also be used to write expository and argumentative essays. There are various forms of lyric discussion ending, which is relatively free and a good style of "lyric discussion". (A Chang and Shan Hai Jing) Another example is the ending of Snow: "Yes, it is lonely snow, dead rain and the soul of rain."

The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should conform to the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of the composition is the same as the beginning, and each article is different, but it also has its own rules to follow. The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically.

A collection of excellent compositions by students at the beginning or end.

Being cared for by teachers is a kind of happiness, being helped by others is also a kind of happiness, and helping others is a kind of happiness.

Listen to the night.

Charming, graceful, some lingering, some melancholy, lingering, lingering melancholy and lingering.

Close your eyes, savor carefully and listen quietly, just like a slow stream, slowly coming along the winding mountain road, lingering and spreading over and over again. ...

In the boundless darkness, listening to such sounds of nature, like crying and complaining, like resentment and anger, is quiet all around. Listen carefully, and the smell is infiltrating into your heart. ...

In the dark sky, occasionally a few stars twinkle.

A person, standing in front of the window for a long time.

Don't need anything, just like this, in silence, listen to such music and enjoy such peace. ...

Say goodbye to the hustle and bustle of the day, get rid of the troubles of the day, and when the night comes, hide yourself in the dark and quiet. The tenderness of the night glides gently across the cheeks, and then sneaks into the heart. At this moment, the heart is undefended, lonely and fragile.

I don't know why, every time I hear this piece of music, there is always inexplicable sadness, which always touches the softest place in my heart. That kind of gentle infiltration is captured leisurely, and the loneliness in the bones slowly diffuses, diffuses, and the whole is lost and immersed. ...

The years have gone by like this, taking away a lot, petals falling in the running water, passing away a little, and the sight below is becoming more and more blurred. ...

Years are like songs, playing one movement after another, either colorful or dull. Life is like a play, with one story after another, wonderful or ordinary. At the end of the song, people are scattered and prosperous. Looking back, there are many aftertaste and regrets. ...

The voice of nature came from the quiet night and swept into my heart. On such a night, such a state of mind, it flows slowly in my heart, like running water, like complaining, as unreal as real ... In silence, listening to such faint and charming music, I am moved to spread slowly. ...

Who will listen with me on the same night?

● Youth is the blood drop of will and the nectar of hard work-Mika; Youth is a rainbow woven with eternal hope and eternal yearning-gorgeous and brilliant; Youth is an iron wall built with eternal persistence and tenacious toughness-as solid as gold.

Faith is the pillar of towering buildings. Without it, it's just a pile of scattered bricks. Faith is the bed of a surging river. Without it, there is only a tidal wave. Faith is the beacon of blazing fire. Without it, there is only a cold firewood. Faith is the main engine of ocean-going ships. Without it, there is only a paralyzed giant frame.

Standing on the coast of history, tracing back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on both sides of the Zehe River and died without regret; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor all day, you are willing to take pleasure in yourself and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles.

● Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap. Only by pursuing can you taste a man of integrity.

● If friendship is an evergreen tree, it must be watered by a clear spring from the heart; If friendship is an unbeaten flower, it must be the rising sun in my heart.

How much laughter friendship evokes and how many tears friendship wipes away. The harbor of friendship is warm and gentle, and the breeze of friendship sails. Friendship is not an emotional investment, nor does it need dividends and dividends.

Yingying moonlight, I scooped up the clearest glass; After sunset, I hold a wisp of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I picked up the hottest one; I picked a bunch of the most colorful herbs; Long life, I want to pick the most important thing in the world-perseverance.

If life is a solemn castle, if life is a lush tree, if life is a flying seabird.

Then, faith is the pillar of the dome, the deeply rooted root and the fluttering wings. Without faith, there is no motivation for life; Without faith, the beauty of life will suddenly die.

Perseverance is the condensation of a sand and a stone on a thousand-mile levee. Only by accumulating bit by bit can there be a grandeur that has never been seen before; Perseverance is that spring silkworms spin silk one by one, and only by persisting one by one can they break out of the cocoon and see the brilliance again; Perseverance is the sail of a long-distance ship. With it, a ship can reach the other side of success.

Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes poor and sick people feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which brings comfort to lonely people.

● The true nature of the heart should be like this. Success, such as the moonlight shining on the flowers, the deep pool is slightly blue, no matter good or bad, no matter the detachment of success or failure, it is a post station that raises the whip and steers the horse, climbing high and looking far; Failure, still dripping water wears away the stone and flows into the sea. There is a proud bank that is poor and strong, and does not fall into the sky. There is a kind of stubbornness that "family is the mainstay and men are strong". Rong, Jiangshan is still the same, and the painting style is still the same, just like the sea and mountains, mature years, flashy and arrogant; Practice, Han Xin, snow pine, like a fairy with feathers, knows how to take a step back and broaden the horizon, and refuses to give up eating because of choking.

● Happiness = material/desire. This is the happiness equation put forward by American economist Samuelson. From an economic point of view, the greater the material consumption, the smaller the desire and the greater the happiness, which is an old saying of China people, "contentment is always a pleasure". On the contrary, what happens if a person's material consumption is limited and his desire is infinite? Mrs Loizai has so many "dreams" and so many "intoxications". How can she not be miserable and sad?

Russian writer Chekhov said: "there are big dogs and puppies, and puppies should not be disturbed because of the existence of big dogs." All dogs should bark and let them use the voice God gave them.

● Maturity is a bright but not dazzling brilliance, a mellow but not greasy voice, a calmness that does not need to look at others, an atmosphere that eventually no longer appeals to the surrounding, a smile that ignores the hustle and bustle, and an extreme indifference that washes away. A thickness that does not need to be revealed,

Not steep height.

Low love, sometimes don't need a vow of eternal love, but she must need meticulous care and greetings; Love, sometimes does not need Liang Zhu to become a butterfly's tragic, but she must need tacit understanding and congenial; Love sometimes doesn't need a man and a woman to follow, but she must need mutual care, support and understanding.

● Smile and sing the song of life. Don't complain that life has given too much hardship, and don't complain that life has too many twists and turns. The sea has lost its grandeur without the rolling of huge waves; The desert has lost its splendor without the wild dance of flying sand. If life only wants two points and one line of smooth sailing, life will lose its meaning of existence.

Even though youth is a delicate and charming flower, I understand that a solitary flower is never spring, and spring should be a colorful world.

Even if youth is a tree with a mighty land, I understand that a unique tree is never tall and straight, and rows of trees are the green Great Wall. Even if youth is a lone sail in the sea, I also understand that it is difficult for a lone sail to sail, and Qian Fan's competitor is the magnificent sea.

● Life is not a "digest", it does not accept dullness, but only collects wonderful things. It is a complete process and a "chain". Whether you succeed or fail, you will not leave a blank behind you; Life is not a rehearsal. If you don't walk well, you can start all over again. She will never give you a second chance. If you walk past it, you can't turn back.

Give it a try-instead of standing quietly by the sea like a penguin, waiting for an opportunity, you are constantly hovering like a goshawk, looking for it persistently.

Give it a try-in the face of twists and turns and overgrown weeds, you don't sigh in vain, but you cut through thorns and keep exploring.

Try it-don't be bound by fate, but try your best to knock on its mysterious door and open a new world. Smile and sing the song of life.

Those who can be broken must have really come back to life. Lin Daiyu's broken lies in her unforgettable love; San Mao's breaking stems from her understanding and detachment at that moment of vicissitudes; Van Gogh's "Break" is the constant pain of the sun with a golden knife in the light, and Beethoven's "Break" is a tragic movement with black and white keys, whose spirit is extremely strong. If the breaking of ordinary people reveals the purest and most beautiful light of human nature, then the breaking of these excellent souls, like a silver pear flower, permeates the sky above us.

● Spring silkworms died, but they left behind luxurious silk; The butterfly died, but left beautiful clothes; Thrushcross flew away, but left a wonderful song; Flowers withered, but left a wisp of fragrance; The candle burned out, but it left a bright light; The thunderstorm passed, but colorful neon lights were left behind.

"The sun rises tirelessly every day," Balzac said. "Unfortunately, it is the ladder of genius, the baptism water of believers, and the bottomless abyss of the weak." After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim; Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; Climb to the top of the mountain, and the sky is like a cloud under your feet.

In this world, a fallen star will not dim the starry sky, and a withered flower will not make the whole spring barren.

Try your best to get through every level of life, and don't give up easily no matter what difficulties you encounter.

Tolerance is a kind of generosity, which can be selfless, fearless, dust-free and pollution-free.

Tolerance is an open-mindedness, wider than the ocean and the sky, and it is the superposition, continuation and sublimation of broadness and generosity. Tolerance is moderate and priceless, and it is the basic law of life to tolerate others.