There is still a lack of writing a landscape travel itinerary. Climbing mountains and wading all the way, the pommel horse was tired, and the destination was only on the other side of Guan Yu. In the cold season, desolate places, camps under the vast vault, look like stars falling to the ground, bright and abnormal. Such a magnificent sight can only be realized from the poet's poem "A thousand lights in one night".
I took "Night Thousand Lights" and continued to write "Night", which was a natural transition. It's late at night, but the poet still can't sleep. It's snowing, and watch after watch is really annoying. After all, writing about scenery is lyrical. As a bodyguard, the poet worked hard on the pommel horse all his life. On the way out of the traffic jam, the long snow outside the account evokes endless thoughts about the warmth of "hometown" and home.
Another important feature of this word is the beauty of neatness and symmetry. First, on the last day, mountains and rivers overlap, one journey after another, mainly the continuation of writing space; The next day, there was a storm, and one after another, mainly the continuation of writing time. Second, the last time I emphasized "body", I was very tired during the journey. "The body is being transported to Guan Yu." Where is the body? The author walked through mountains, rivers, rivers, Shanhaiguan and many places. In short, he's on the road, in a barracks tent. How necessary it is! It is really "being in the Han Dynasty", leaving people with endless imagination and aftertaste space; Next, emphasize "heart", which is very bitter when insomnia occurs. In such a bad climate, I can't even dream of being homesick, and I can't be comfortable. Sadness is a reasonable continuation of physical fatigue. Third, the last one, whether it is scenery or lighting, focuses on what you see and writes about the future; The next day, whether it is wind or snow, we should focus on listening and listening. "There is no such voice in my hometown", so what is there? Of course it is warm, sweet and sweet. Fourth, go to the last place, focus on the big picture, and write this place on the journey. There are thousands of lights in this place from day to night. Focus on writing outside, expressing the external impression of time and space; Next, start small and restrain yourself to my account. Focus on writing, showing what I have seen and heard and how I feel in this account. Time and space are in my ears and heart.
Generally speaking, writing on the surface and outside is spectacular; Write a little, write in it and describe your mood. Ordinary things are chosen, such as mountains and rivers, snow scenes and lights. Short, concise and easy-to-understand sentences are also used, which are arranged neatly and neatly. Very handy, but not carved. Wang Guowei, a modern scholar, commented that "Rong Ruo's Ci is naturally true". The whole article is full of delicate emotions in the magnificent scenery, showing extraordinary. Touching but not decadent, tenderness reveals a man's bold ambition to guard the frontier fortress and serve the country.