What are the conditions for a good start? This is simplicity, elegance and novelty.
To sum up, it includes: ① cut to the chase, start with the topic and prompt the center; Take the lead (no one heard his voice first); _ ③ Use flashbacks or stimulate readers' * * motives; (4) put attractive plots, related scenery descriptions or contradictions of things at the beginning; ⑤ Memories, associations or explanations cause the writing motivation of the text; ⑤ Quote famous sentences (famous sayings, aphorisms, epigrams, etc.).
"Grandpa and grandma quarreled. I just stood by and looked at my grandfather's face flushed with anger and the veins stood out from time to time. " This is the beginning of a classmate's composition, entitled "Something happened in my family". This sentence is very novel. I put contradictions in front of readers from the beginning, attracting readers to be anxious to know why they quarreled and what the result was. So I have to keep reading.
There is an essay entitled "My Hometown", which begins with the following words: "Friend, have you been to my hometown? Have you climbed mountains, swam, and eaten fat carp in my hometown? "
This method of asking questions to attract readers has also received good results.
As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle." Everything is difficult at the beginning, so is doing things, and so is writing articles. The ancient writers in China were very particular about the beginning of the article, so they had the saying of "phoenix head, streaky belly and leopard tail". The "phoenix head" is the legendary phoenix head, which is colorful, eye-catching and gives people a beautiful feeling. It is said that the beginning of the article should be like "Phoenix Head".
Looking back, smiling, charming at the age of 100.
-how to write at the end of the article?
A good beginning and a successful ending are the minimum requirements for us to do a good job. You should also write well, with a good beginning and a good ending. The ancients called it "leopard tail", which means it is as powerful as a leopard's tail. The ending of an article is natural, vivid and powerful, which can not only highlight the theme of the article, but also deepen the theme and inspire and inspire readers.
A wonderful ending can arouse readers' thinking and enhance the appeal of the article. The ending should be like a bell, "there is more than a clear sound."
Some students do not pay attention to the end of the article, so there are three main "common problems" in middle school students' compositions:
First, the ending ended with an empty slogan or an expression of determination, which seemed impassioned, but in fact it was pale and powerless.
Second, it is thankless to say something irrelevant at last.
Third, there is no ending or anticlimactic, and the retreat at the end affects the expression effect of the whole article.
Writing a good ending can leave a complete and vivid impression on the article and give readers a feeling that the ending of the article is round and structured.
Let readers understand life more broadly and deeply through analogy on the basis of feeling the works.
The forms of this method include the following:
The ending is full of emotion, even philosophy, euphemistic and implicit, which makes people think deeply and has endless aftertaste;
(2) state the author's feelings and attitudes at the end, or express the author's hopes and calls, so as to deepen the infection of readers;
(3) The ending is from point to surface, from small to large, which makes readers' understanding not stay on the things mentioned in the article, but further improve;
(4) _ Take care of the beginning, deduct the topic (_ skillfully use ellipsis _, naturally close the beam _, quote and elaborate, quote famous sayings and aphorisms, slightly elaborate, increase literary talent, lyrical comments _)
First of all, an inspiring ending.
Write down your own voice at the end, or passionate appeal or philosophical enlightenment. This kind of ending is usually concise and forceful, with few words, hit the floor.
1, I won't cry today and I won't cry tomorrow. There is only one voice in my heart: "If you think you can do it, you can do it!" -"Overcoming vulnerability"
Guo Xiaochuan said that "memory belongs to death", and the future destiny really lies in our hands. We have our own memory wealth. We should go our own way with our own feet. Don't transplant memories!
-"Don't transplant memories"
Second, the natural and smooth performance reimbursement method.
Nie Hualing's "Man, One Less" has written an image and way different from that of a beggar woman three years ago, which shows the profound theme of personality degeneration. The author did not add any comments and analysis, but only gave a rough description of the incident. Finally, he wrote: "Bang, the door was kicked open. The woman turned around, sneered, and then looked at me coldly. " This unadorned natural ending leaves readers with infinite thinking space, which is memorable. The example "Remember a Table Tennis Match" also ends in this way.
Third, the poetic ending.
An excellent composition starts from the imagination at the end, shows a beautiful picture to readers by means of description, or expresses one's feelings by famous sayings. Such an ending is generally required to be basically consistent with the style of the article, and it should be written naturally and vividly, and it should not be artificial.
1, the language takes us to experience the magic in the fairy cave of Tianmu Mountain and the thrill on the bluestone of Jingyanggang; It makes us appreciate the feelings of "the deceased is like a husband", the sadness of "frowning only, but walking away", the helplessness of "drinking wine, the geometry of life", and the desolation of "autumn leaves flying late, leaving lotus leaves to listen to the rain" ...
-"Leng Xiang flies to China"
Fourth, notice the beginning of the first and last echo methods.
The ending should echo the beginning, which is the general writing of narrative, and many articles reflect this feature. Mr. Guo Moruo said at the beginning of his article Egret: "Egret is an exquisite poem." Finally, he said, "Egret is really a poem, a prose poem with rhythm in its bones." "Egret is a poem", which is an unusual metaphor, especially the ending is embodied in "prose"
Fifth, the method of summing up the full text is the finishing touch.
This method generally summarizes the center of the full text or comments on the characters and events in the text in the form of discussion or lyric. The last paragraph of Who is the cutest person belongs to this type. This passage ends in two ways: discussion and lyricism. The title of the last sentence is: "You will love our soldiers deeply-they are indeed our loveliest people!" For example, the color of spring and the ending of housing distribution are all the same.
Sometimes famous sayings, epigrams or poems can be used to summarize the full text, and the ending is even more concise, which plays the role of making the finishing point. For example, in the last paragraph of "Pear Flowers on the Post Road", "I look at this group of energetic Hani girls and the white pear flowers, and I can't help but think of the sentence' Pear flowers are everywhere on the Post Road'."
Sixth, implicit and profound heuristic association method.
The end of Lu Xun's Hometown is the most typical example: "I think: Hope is nothing, nothing. Just like the road on the ground; In fact, there is no road on the ground. If there are more people walking, it will become a road. " This passage is implicit and profound, punning, inspiring people to bravely open the way for creating a new life, subliming the thoughts and feelings of the whole article and embodying Lu Xun's "tenacious" fighting spirit.
Seven, inspire readers to sigh
The end of some articles is neither a summary center nor an inspiration, but the author speaks his mind and expresses strong love and hate.
At the end of "Praise of Poplar", I shouted loudly: "Let those who look down on the people, despise the people and stubbornly regress praise the noble nanmu (also tall and graceful) and despise this extremely ordinary and easy-to-grow poplar. I want to praise the poplar loudly! "
The end of the article is colorful. There is still a lot to be innovated. What kind of ending should be adopted depends on the content and style of the article. The general principle is that a good ending can make the theme of the article more vivid, the structure more rigorous, the content more literary and innovative, so it also makes the article more attractive and appealing.
In the college entrance examination, don't ignore this kind of "looking back and smiling"!