After watching the green slug 1 unconsciously, the "green slug" came into my world. ...
The words "night hunter", "night artist" and "singer" all reveal the characteristics of slugs. When people read this article, they understand the fruit, and they love the fruit. But how many people can see Fabres's efforts behind this article?
Fabres studied insects all his life. He likes insects so much that he has been with them all his life. Fabres spent his whole life writing Insects, which made countless readers know, contact and love insects, made countless people interested in the cause of insects, and showed a brand-new insect world to mankind.
Back to the text, Fabres's ability to create such a masterpiece does not depend on his spirit of exploration, which can be reflected in his description of why Guo likes to eat cicadas' bellies. Fables was able to stick to his dream and do his best for it, so he succeeded.
Should we also strive to have the spirit and quality of Fabres for our dreams?
Take the running test as an example. At the teacher's command, I flew out like an arrow-all because of my competitiveness. In a short time, all the students rushed to their journey of 1000 meters.
I don't know if it's lack of exercise or poor breathing during running. I was out of breath just after running a quarter of the distance. The classmates who followed me immediately seized this opportunity and surpassed me in one fell swoop. There is nothing I can do to see myself being mercilessly left behind by others.
I trudged to three quarters of the place and I felt exhausted. My body collapsed when it was dark in front of me.
In the dark world, I feel like I'm lying in a warm and comfortable big bed, and I feel like I'm in a racing track. Several wild horses roared past me. After a while, there was another cheer, and it was not sure which team won the game.
Then, the cheers grew louder and louder, and I was shocked to find myself still on the runway. It turns out that some students crossed the line before, and then more and more students came later. I gritted my teeth and returned to the game.
At this time, a classmate followed closely. I can't let him pass me anyway. I didn't think much of anything. I pedal hard, and victory is just around the corner. I tried my best and crossed the finish line in one step.
This time, the cheers belong to me. In the applause, I remembered that dreams need to be persisted.
The article "Green Fruit" was written by French entomologist Fabers.
Through careful observation, the author vividly described the sound and living habits of the green Guo Guo, among which the part that impressed me the most was the one where Guo Guo caught cicadas: the battle took place in a buttonwood tree in the early morning, and a Guo Guo killed the cicada alive, although the cicada was bigger than Guo Guo. The author compares the eagle with the slug. "The eagle is a weaker attack than it; On the other hand, it attacks behemoths much bigger and stronger than itself, and the result of this body-to-body melee is beyond doubt. "
I can't help thinking: this cicada is like a huge barrier on the road of life. Isn't it ourselves? People's life will certainly not be smooth sailing, and they will always experience storms. In the face of ups and downs, we need to have the courage to face it and treat it bravely! Beethoven, the music giant, was deaf in his later years, which was a great blow to the composer! Isn't this the great bumpy road in his life? Facing the bad luck of fate, Beethoven did not give up the pursuit of music, but put the audition tube in his mouth and felt the beauty of music with his own touch. Through my unremitting efforts, I finally created these immortal works, the Symphony of Destiny and the Pastoral Symphony. It is a testimony that Beethoven overcame difficulties with tenacious perseverance. We have reason to believe that when God closes a window for you, he will definitely open a door for you. As long as you have perseverance and perseverance, you will certainly be able to defeat enemies stronger than yourself!
Fabers, a French entomologist, is also an example for us to learn. In the face of difficulties, he never gave up his ideal. Rain or shine, he still insists on studying insects. He devoted his life to the study of insects. Finally, through long-term unremitting efforts, he finally finished the world famous book Insect.
Difficulties are everywhere, some are brave and some are timid. I have seen such a cartoon called "chop and change", which is about a person who practices basketball in order to become like basketball star Jordan, but drops out of school because he is not tall enough; He envied those kung fu stars, but he dropped out of school for fear of hardship and fatigue, and finally got nothing. Although this is just a cartoon, it profoundly expresses a truth: in the face of powerful enemies and insurmountable difficulties, you will give up halfway. In the end, you will be frightened by difficulties and accomplish nothing.
Yes! Face an enemy stronger than yourself, even if there is no greater risk ahead, face it bravely.
The essay "Green Fruit" is the work of Fabres, a famous French writer, and the full text revolves around the green fruit. The article not only has accurate and detailed objective records, but also pours its infinite warmth into the lovely life of green slugs.
The full text explains the voice, appearance, eating habits and residence of slugs in detail; A lively and lovely image of a slug jumps from the paper. Although the author likes insects, he did not tamper with the characteristics of slugs according to his own ideas, but portrayed the real green slugs vividly according to reality.
The author's spirit of seeking truth from facts is worth learning. In order to understand the habits of insects, he spent decades of his youth. This is not only because of his love for insects, but also because he wants to portray every kind of insects realistically. Imagine, if Fabres spent several years observing the fruit, can the article "Green Fruit" still show the spirituality of green fruit? If Fabres didn't observe all kinds of insects carefully, would the book Insect Tales become a masterpiece in the field of natural science? The answer is obviously no.
In learning, we should also have the spirit of seeking truth from facts. One thing is right or wrong, true or false, true or false; This is not something that we can easily conclude. Just like Aristotle, a scientist in ancient Greece, although he promoted the development of world science, it was also because after he became famous, he was carried away by flowers and honors and told the fallacy that the earth was the center of the universe without careful verification. Even because of his wrong views, several young scientists who defended the truth were killed. A mistake almost stopped European astronomy for hundreds of years. This shows the importance of seeking truth from facts.
In life, seeking truth from facts is more important. For example, it is not uncommon to believe that others will gain a lot in the market and think that they will make money and lose everything. However, there are still many people in society who spread rumors and eventually hurt others.
As long as you do everything realistically, you will succeed one day. Even if it will consume your youth, it is also to leave a good memory for yourself who will eventually grow old.
After reading "Green Slug 4", the training class of "Green Slug 4" was separated by a week, but after class, the principal said with surprise that "it is a pleasure to listen to this class" and it was fixed in my memory. On the other hand, over the years, I have unified the formula for teachers to explain the object, characteristics, order, structure, methods and language in classroom teaching, and thought of my own exploration of prose teaching. Compared with Dai Lili, I am far from Shengyuan. From the collision between teachers and students' bilateral activities and wisdom, I realize that Chinese knowledge is important in Chinese teaching, but Chinese literacy is more important to students' growth.
Habit is more important than knowledge. The lesson "Green Stubble" was introduced from Xia Chan, which subtly made students pay attention to nature, life and human friends-biology; Read the article, mark new words, sketch emotional sentences, and guide students to learn Chinese characters and learn emotions.
Literacy is more important than knowledge. The course "Green Fruit Fruit" designs "Fruit Fruit Business Card" to understand the nickname of Fruit Fruit from different angles such as singer, prisoner, artist, butcher and gourmet. Interest shows that literary language is silent, so students' favorite activities are loved, which weakens the monotonous language. "Job Resume" reminds students to pay attention to their names, reputations, specialties, major deeds, self-evaluation, and desired occupations. Simple but not complicated, let students fully understand the introduction of green slugs in the text, mobilize their own life experience, pay attention to society and life, and realize the great Chinese view that language is life. Student reports: singers, bodyguards, models, gourmets.
I think the key to a lively Chinese class lies in our Chinese teacher's teaching philosophy, but also in our interpretation and value orientation of the teaching materials, rather than blindly caring about how much Chinese knowledge students have learned and whether they can cope with our exams. Moreover, the current trend of independent enrollment is a stepping stone to the success of students' comprehensive literacy.
This is an interesting article. The author writes the slug vividly with vivid brushwork, which is very readable. This is also the feature of Fabres's whole book Insects. Mr. Lu Xun once called "Insect Story" a model of "telling insect stories" and "telling insect life". Zhou Zuoren said: "It is more interesting and meaningful than reading those boring novels and plays." Indeed, Fabres's fruits are vivid, and the author's respect and love for life are permeated between the lines. Let the students read the text carefully first and draw the words of birth. Then read it again and draw the most wonderful paragraphs or sentences you think. The purpose of doing this is to make students feel the content of the text effectively. How did the author draw the slug out? 1 paragraph, I didn't write slug, I wrote it on someone else's National Day, and I haven't forgotten to observe insects. "I'm Alone" shows how persistent the author is about the cause he loves! Scientific research needs such a spirit. The second paragraph says that cicadas stop chirping at night and have a rest. Suddenly, a cicada chirp leads to Guo Guo, the "hero" of this article.
What an ingenious way of writing! Introduce the jokes in the third paragraph. The author uses personification to write the fruit. Write its song first. The sound of the fruit is "whispering", "like the sound of a pulley" and "like the faint sound of a shriveled film", and the sound is dumb, sharp, short and crisp. When frogs and other insects around are silent, the voice of slugs is "very soft". These descriptions all show the author's love for fruit.
Especially "Qingguoguo", if you play the piano any louder, you are a better singer than cicada. In northern China, people let cicadas usurp your reputation! "What a strong and warm emotion! In the fourth paragraph, I began to write about the feeding habits of slugs until the last paragraph, which is the main body of the article. This part is to observe the slugs in the metal net cover. In order to understand the living habits of insects, the author not only went to the wild to observe, but also caught a lot of them and kept them at home. This is his laboratory. What does the fruit look like? The author made a description: "very beautiful, green all over, with two pale white ribbons on the side, beautiful figure, slim and symmetrical, and two big wings as light as yarn." Beautiful language depicts Guo Guo's lovely appearance. Next, the author wrote about the food of slugs. The author compares grasshoppers with owls, and neither of them likes lettuce leaves very much. This made the author encounter "trouble".
The word "trouble" shows the author's loving attitude towards slugs. The author speculates that the fruit may eat fresh meat. This kind of introduction is different from the general explanation. With obvious emotional color, cordial and natural, rich in literary brushwork, this is the characteristics of Fables' insect story. This kind of brushwork is very popular with teenagers. How does the author know what kind of food Guoguo likes best? In short, through observation. In the early morning, the scene I watched while walking revealed the food mystery of slugs-catching cicadas for food. So why does Guoguo like to eat cicada's belly best? "Is the belly more popular than other parts?" The author continues the experimental observation with this question. The seventh paragraph reveals the secret of eating cicada's belly first, because there is both meat and sugar in the belly. Paragraphs 8, 9 and 10 are supplementary explanations on the feeding habits of slugs. 1 1 paragraph, Guoguo gets along well and never quarrels.
This article is interesting from beginning to end without any mechanical introduction. The spirit of exploration and innovation shown by the author in this paper is very valuable and can have a good influence on students. The writing features of this article are outstanding:
1, literary style. This article is not as straightforward as general expositions, but flexible, vivid and eclectic. There are not only descriptions of insects, but also personal feelings.
2. Vivid language. The author is full of affection for the fruit, so the use of language is as vivid and touching as possible. For example, "they ate the dish with relish" and "it accepted it without hesitation". "When the crops are full, it scratches the soles of its feet with the tip of its beak, wipes its face and eyes with its claws stained with saliva, and then closes its eyes or lies on the beach to digest the food". These languages are very vivid.
3. The application of personification. For example, Guo Guo is talking to himself, Guo Guo loves sweets, and Guo Guo is in harmony with each other. The use of personification makes the article natural and friendly, and enhances readability.
4. Write the slugs by comparison. For example, when writing the voice of slugs, compare the voice of cicadas; When writing that it likes to eat meat, compare it with owls; When writing about it chasing cicadas, compare it with eagles; When writing about cannibalism, it is more mantis. These comparisons not only highlight the habits of slugs, but also show that the author knows the habits of various insects like the back of his hand.
Fabres, the author of The Green Goose, is first of all a great scientist who pursues, loves and devotes himself to science. I sold my house and bought a deserted garden. I observed all kinds of insects in the deserted garden for the rest of my life. Doesn't that explain the above situation? However, if the author describes the green slug as an insidious, vicious and gloomy little insect in the article "Green slug", the readability will be greatly reduced. In other words, Fabres's description of the green slug from the aspects of sound, color, taste, dynamics and personality is the main reason why we like reading this article.
Writing sound is to write a green grasshopper whispering, making a very sharp and urgent crisp sound, almost like a metal collision. It's called singing, and literature is pleasing to the ear. Writing colors means writing the green of slugs, not the gray and brown of slugs. This kind of green is both real and casual, readable and pleasing to the eye. Writing about taste means writing that fruit likes sweets. Eating cicadas means eating cicada's sweet belly, and eating plants means eating some pears, grapes, watermelons and so on. It has a unique and pleasant taste. Writing about dynamics means writing about Guo singing and playing the piano, throwing cicadas from trees, and sometimes even seeing Guo bravely chasing cicadas, unable to gut its prisoners with powerful jaws and sharp pliers. This is a sophisticated style of writing, interesting, imaginative and pleasing to the eye. To write about personality is to write about the alertness, courage, leisure and violence of green slugs. Among them, vigilance is like catching cicadas without knowing it, courage is like attacking a monster much bigger and stronger than yourself, leisure is like singing and playing the piano, and violence is like cicadas eating people to death. Reading the personality of a small insect from a short passage is wonderful and pleasing to the eye. It should be said that the article "Qingguoguo" is more literary, so it is durable to read.
From a literary point of view. If we compare it with Lu Xun's "From a Hundred Herbs Garden to a Three-Pond Moon", Zhu Ziqing's "Spring in Jinan" and Lao She's "Winter in Jinan", we always feel that Fabres's "Green Stubble" is not as good as theirs. It is said that Boer's literary talent is not inferior to the above articles, but where are the main problems? Further research shows that Fabres is a scientist, and he is rational and calm. The key to the problem lies in his even exertion, plain description and improper details. Luwen and others are full of passion and relaxation, and can always lead readers to read while walking. In other words, purely from the perspective of literary talent, Fabres's articles can't compare with Ruben.
From a scientific point of view. The scientific nature of French only introduces the predation situation, so it is better to introduce the predation habits, body structure, skills and uses of green slugs from many aspects. This is also an indisputable fact. It is not difficult to interpret from the text. Then I read Fabres's article, and we thought it was really good. What is the reason? Literary genius is not as good as a pure writer, and scientific genius is not as good as an ordinary outstanding scientist. But Fabres's success lies in combining literary talent and science in one article. This is my deepest feeling.
Look at it in connection with real life. On the basketball court, the most wonderful thing is to get a three-point hollow ball, which really depends on strength and does not rule out luck; The winning team mainly relies on those countless edge balls. Another example is a teacher who used to teach mathematics, but later changed to teach Chinese and became a class teacher. He is better than a teacher who can only teach one math class in balancing all subjects. On the other hand, Chinese and math teachers from Dallas to Hong Kong and Macao in the auditorium must also teach history or geography. This is of course the need of education for teachers' comprehensive quality, but it is also a factor for teachers to know that liberal arts learning has its own characteristics. For us students, any form of liberal arts is not suitable for improving people's comprehensive quality. Unless one aspect of arts and sciences is particularly excellent and needs to be strengthened, it seems that paying equal attention to arts and sciences is more suitable for the development of the whole person.
Can't compare with others in literature, and can't compare with others in science; The combination of these two results or outstanding achievements is the source of inspiration for Fabres's Green Stubble. This is also the true meaning of innovation. There is no innovation without foundation in the world. The so-called innovation is nothing more than the re-integration of several old things, so as to play its greatest value. The perfect combination of literary talent and science in Fabres's article "Green Stubble" has given us great inspiration on how to play a good role in life and give full play to its maximum value. To be closer is to study well in this way and measure, which should be affirmed most.
Did you notice the singers hiding in the grass after watching Green Grass, Summer 7? Their voices are so small that a vivid article about green grasshoppers introduces them in detail for us.
Fabers, a famous entomologist in China, is the author of this article. He told us the story of those singing insects.
The design of the article is very clever and intriguing. This sentence "This is the desperate cry of cicada caught by wild hunter Qingguoguo in a quiet rest at night" leads to the protagonist of this article-Qingguoguo, and introduces the hunting of Qingguoguo. He let the protagonist enter the stage through a cry.
"Enthusiastic hunter", "artist" and "singer" are all nicknames given to the fruit by the author, which are anthropomorphic and make people more convenient to understand the characteristics of this insect. In the article, we also compare the monster who dares to challenge with the eagle who preys on larks, from which we can see its character of daring to challenge.
"Vaguely.
After reading Green Slug 8, this is an article about imitating green slugs and writing ants. Because of this, people later made up the story of "ants moving", which was widely circulated in life. The purpose is to learn the spirit of "ants moving", which is also the spirit. When we encounter difficulties and setbacks in our study and life, more and more essays imitating "Qingguoguo" are all giants.
Among all the small animals, ants are familiar to us. Not only familiar with its shape, but also admire their spirit of unity and cooperation, overcoming difficulties, going forward bravely and not giving up until the goal is reached!
Ant, in appearance, is a small animal, which is divided into three parts: head, chest and abdomen, and has six legs. They communicate with each other through smell, sound and touch. They feed on insects, nectar and plant pulp. They have strong vitality and can live in almost every corner of the world.
The most prominent character of ants is the spirit of unity and cooperation, not afraid of difficulties and working hard. Outstanding performance in ant moving. The most common thing is that every cloudy day before rain, ants begin to go in and out in front of their homes. I saw that every ant had something in its mouth, some acted alone, some two ants acted together, and there were more ants with the same thing in their mouths, lined up in neat teams and moving in the same direction. Look carefully, oh, it turns out to be a very big object, which can't be completed by one or two ants. Therefore, when they see a big object that needs to be moved, just like a soldier hearing an order, they rush to this big object at the same time, accumulate strength and move forward at the same time. As if shouting slogans together and marching at a unified pace. No matter how long and difficult the journey is, they will unify their thoughts and actions until they complete their scheduled tasks and reach their destinations smoothly, and they will never back down.
Because of this, people later made up the story of "ants moving", which was widely circulated in life. The purpose is to learn the spirit of "ants moving". It is this spirit that makes us undoubtedly take the story of ants moving as the driving force to overcome difficulties, strive for progress and strive for ultimate success when we encounter difficulties and setbacks in our study and life!
It can be said that from beginning to end, I have always had a soft spot for such small animals as ants!