When writing the end of the application, candidates often blindly extract the original text from the materials to make up the number of words, or shout slogans in vain, which makes the whole ending lack originality and the whole article lack coherence. Obviously, ending in order to make up the number of words can't help candidates get higher grades. So how to make the ending add color to the whole article and have the icing on the cake effect? I suggest you pay more attention to the overall structure while polishing your writing.

First, the language is exquisite and gorgeous, attracting the examiner's attention.

As one of the core parts of the article, the ending is incoherent. The so-called "eye-catching", if written beautifully, will naturally win the favor of examiners. The commonly used methods of color enhancement mainly include comparison, metaphor, parallelism, famous sayings and so on.

Famous sayings are a common way to cut into the end of an article. For example, when talking about down-to-earth topics, I quote Laozi, "A broken tree is a lifelong one; The words "nine-story platform, tired soil and set sail" add a touch of bright color to the usual conversation. Of course, if students usually don't accumulate enough and can't quote famous sayings in time, they can choose contrast to mark the key points.

As for the main body of the ending, we suggest using parallelism to increase the momentum of the ending. Multi-level parallelism can not only make the article summarize the full text well, but also add color to the rhythm of the article. If we can add metonymy skills on this basis, the ending will be more eye-catching. Let me show you a polished ending for your reference.

Human beings are floating in the universe, but they can create a career as bright as stars with their weak bodies and endless imagination. (Contrast) Therefore, only by continuing to ride the scientific ship, raising the sails of art and swinging the paddles of ancient culture can we continue to chop waves in the imaginary ocean and carry us to the boundless future! (Sublimation theme)

Second, take the overall situation into account in content and enhance the depth of the article.

An excellent practical essay lies in its content, depth and breadth. If it is only a superficial skill like language, it will inevitably become a cliche. So at the end, we should pay more attention to the richness of content, broaden the breadth of the article or deepen the depth of the article.

The overall logic of the composition is "what to do, why to do it, and how to do it", so if our composition focuses on solving problems and putting forward countermeasures as a whole, I believe that the explanation of "how to do it" is enough. At last, in order to broaden the breadth, we can reiterate the positive significance and purpose of doing this again, so as to strengthen the discussion of "why" and make the article full of levels.

In the same way, if our article focuses on the discussion of the overall importance of the problem, it focuses on the significance and urgency of explanation. And the coverage in the "how to do" environment is relatively small, then we can put forward corresponding countermeasures in time at the end to make the whole article logically complete and avoid verbosity to the greatest extent.