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Which of the following two advertising slogans promoting the same product is poorly written and why?
It should be:

1, put on two-star shoes and walk the world smartly.

2. Wear double-star shoes, and good luck will come naturally.

Of course, the second one is clumsy. Do you think wearing a pair of XX shoes can bring you good luck again and again? Then why are we still struggling?

However, what is certain is that you will walk through the world in XX shoes, and no matter whether you are lucky or not, anyone can hold his head high and move forward smartly.